i want to point out that there are alot of inconsistencies within this difficulty. for starters, there are barely any doubles within the vocal part, which makes it quite contrastless and tame imo. you can refer to #4852913 if you wanna add some doubles in here aswell, but when you do use doubles, they are pretty inconsistent without a clear reason.
generally alot of the ideas are pretty unclear when it comes to the long notes aswell like at 00:09:487 (9487|1) - not having a vocal but still being a long note or when you make these 00:14:921 (14921|0,15030|1,15139|2) - there are only drums to these tripples at 00:07:965 (7965|2,8073|1,8182|0) - so stuff like 00:15:030 (15030|1) - 00:28:943 (28943|2) - should be omitted
I updated the map and opted to use chords to emphasize the drum hit sound. I also deleted the LN and extend the one before it and add a note in the middle as depicted here: 00:09:269 (9269|0,9487|3) - I think this better follows the rhythm in this section and serves better purpose and also applied it for 00:16:226 (16226|3,16443|2) -
00:23:182 (23182|0,23400|1) - and 00:30:139 (30139|1,30356|2) - since its the exact same vocal pattern. Also omitted the triples where they were unnecessary as you mentioned.