02:43:622 (163622|3,163622|1,163622|0,163712|0,163743|1,163758|3,163803|2,163840|0,163876|3,163917|1,163940|2,163962|3,163985|0,164011|1,164037|2,164063|3,164089|0,164115|2,164141|1,164167|3,164212|1,164258|0,164281|2,164349|1,164349|3,164349|0,164364|2,164411|1,164427|0,164442|2) - consider lowering the density here this is like impossible to hit without manip
01:57:600 - 02:19:200 - kill the bursts??? what are these trills
02:05:175 (125175|2,125200|1,125250|2,125300|3,125325|1,125450|2,125500|1,125550|2) -
02:09:450 (129450|0,129487|3,129487|2,129525|0,129525|1,129562|3,129600|2,129600|1) -
01:57:900 (117900|0,117950|1,118050|1,118125|0,118200|1,118237|0,118312|1,118350|0) - too much load on the left hand
01:45:300 (105300|1,105350|3,105375|2,105450|0,105450|1) - seems a little too basic, could turn into a roll for better continuity
a set of notes here counts as a single representation of a synth and kick :
00:40:018 (40018|0,40018|3) - + 00:40:080 (40080|1) -
00:40:178 (40178|1,40205|3,40232|2) - + 00:40:299 (40299|3) -
this is the most comfortable and interesting way i could have executed the jacks, no change