Sorry for the late check (1/1)
=+ GENERAL CHECKING +=
=+ GENERAL CHECKING +=
[🔴] Metadata
>> SONG TAGS <<
吉田穣 Yoshida Minoru Island Memories
(Arranger and Album Name)高橋李依 takahashi rie 西片 西片くん nishikata-kun nishikatakun nishikata kun 梶裕貴 kaji yuki
(Takagi and Nishikata tags and their CVs are not relevant here, they didn't sing.)Oohara
(From its reading おおはら but their site styling seems to prefer it as Ohara)anime j-pop jpop pop japanese opening op karakai jouzu no takagi-san takagisan takagi san master good at teasing 3 third 3rd season oohara 吉田穣 Yoshida Minoru Island Memories
Artist is kept as Ohara Yuiko
instead of Yuiko Ohara
because of ranked consistency. Artist name seems to be Ohara Yuiko
before but changed some day.
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[🟢] HP/OD
[🟢] Timing
[🟢] HS Samples
[🟢] Files
[🟢] BG JPG 2560x1440 1.11mb
[🟢] Audio OGG ~166kbps 2.3mb
++ REFERENCES ++:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=v8gAfylTw-w
https://yuiko-ohara.com/discography/Island-Memories/
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hlH22hjkkcw
https://takagi3.me/3rd/music/
https://nex-tone.link/A00093807
https://vgmdb.net/album/119226
+= DIFFICULTY CHECKING +=
== Love Story ==
== Hard ==
00:45:445 (45445|0,45445|2,45639|3,45639|1) - this pattern - double on piano, is probably too much representation for hard diff and it has a double action on vastly different sound (and loudness too).
My suggestion is to reduce 00:45:639 - to a single note to provide contrast between the loud guitar sound at 00:45:445 - and the weaker piano sound at 00:45:639.
01:20:091 (80091|3,80187|0) - i think this is a bit hard to read because its too disconnected from each other. how about rearrange like this:
== Normal ==
== HS ==
Good
gm (1/2)
i have some quality concerns about set. i have sent a discord ping in mania hub about it but i will also send it here in this review mod. i will also attach some mods i did before the headache comes up
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@nlxus im a bit concerned about the quality of easy diff gd. there's a lot of unrankables namely:
1. unsnaps (bit nitpicky yeah) => 00:30:923 (30923|2) - 00:42:527 (42527|1,44862|2) -
2. unrankable LNs due to length => 00:22:999 (22999|3) - *Long notes should be held for at least ~~one beat~~ 1/2* => the LN here is 1/4 therefore unrankable
3. unrankable patterns regarding LNs => 00:28:376 (28376|3,28518|1) - 01:06:159 (66159|0,66301|3) - *Objects should not be placed during a ~~1/1~~ 1/2 long note's hold duration* => there's a 1/4 note during a 1/2 LN
4. stream limit (again, a bit nitpicky) => 00:37:150 (37150|2,37291|3,37433|0,37574|1,37716|3,37857|2) - *Avoid using more than 5 consecutive ~~1/2~~ 1/4 notes.*
not necessary unrankable but highly affects quality
if we assume that this is a normal diff, thats a differnt story but that could work too since netzoid's normal is a bit hard too
i will hold this map right now from continuing the checks since i feel like the quality is not there yet but close ~~i just dont want to be the one to fix everything, shocking statement from a bn yeah~~ so for now please with begging gather some mods including other diffs
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== Mintu's Easy <3 ==
00:22:999 (22999|3) - 1/4 LN is unrankable according to Easy RC: Long notes should be held for at least one beat
1/2 in this case for bpm scaling.
suggest to change to single note instead
00:24:697 (24697|2) - 00:30:923 (30923|2) etc - move to col4 for column balance. col4 is getting unused often in this diff overall and is somewhat concerning
00:36:725 (36725|2) - subjective but i suggest to move this to col4 to make contrast with 00:36:301 (36301|2) -
00:37:291 (37291|3) - remove this to follow Easy RC: Avoid using more than 5 consecutive 1/2 notes.
1/4 in this case for bpm scaling
btw suggestion, since 00:36:867 (36867|1) - is a LN for vocal, how about 00:37:150 (37150|2) - should be changed to be an LN too
00:37:999 (37999|1,40334|3), 00:42:527 (42527|1,44862|2) - - suggest to re-snap the LN release/LN start back at 1/1. [netzoid's Normal <3]
and [I love you <3]
are not snapped in 1/8.
00:22:999 (22999|3) - 1/4 LN is unrankable according to Easy RC: Long notes should be held for at least one beat
1/2 in this case for bpm scaling.
suggest to change to single note instead
00:24:697 (24697|2) - 00:30:923 (30923|2) etc - move to col4 for column balance. col4 is getting unused often in this diff overall and is somewhat concerning
00:36:725 (36725|2) - subjective but i suggest to move this to col4 to make contrast with 00:36:301 (36301|2) -
00:37:291 (37291|3) - remove this to follow Easy RC: Avoid using more than 5 consecutive 1/2 notes.
1/4 in this case for bpm scaling
btw suggestion, since 00:36:867 (36867|1) - is a LN for vocal, how about 00:37:150 (37150|2) - should be changed to be an LN too
00:37:999 (37999|1,40334|3), 00:42:527 (42527|1,44862|2) - - suggest to re-snap the LN release/LN start back at 1/1. [netzoid's Normal <3]
and [I love you <3]
are not snapped in 1/8.
=+ GENERAL CHECKING +=
[🔴] Metadata
>> SONG TAGS <<
吉田穣 Yoshida Minoru Island Memories
(Arranger and Album Name)高橋李依 takahashi rie 西片 西片くん nishikata-kun nishikatakun nishikata kun 梶裕貴 kaji yuki
(Takagi and Nishikata tags and their CVs are not relevant here, they didn't sing.)Oohara
(From its reading おおはら but their site styling seems to prefer it as Ohara)anime j-pop jpop pop japanese opening op karakai jouzu no takagi-san takagisan takagi san master good at teasing 3 third 3rd season oohara 吉田穣 Yoshida Minoru Island Memories
Artist is kept as Ohara Yuiko
instead of Yuiko Ohara
because of ranked consistency. Artist name seems to be Ohara Yuiko
before but changed some day.
===
[🟢] HP/OD
[🟢] Timing
[🟢] HS Samples
[🟢] Files
[🟢] BG JPG 2560x1440 1.11mb
[🟢] Audio OGG ~166kbps 2.3mb
++ REFERENCES ++:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=v8gAfylTw-w
https://yuiko-ohara.com/discography/Island-Memories/
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hlH22hjkkcw
https://takagi3.me/3rd/music/
https://nex-tone.link/A00093807
https://vgmdb.net/album/119226
00:45:445 (45445|0,45445|2,45639|3,45639|1) - this pattern - double on piano, is probably too much representation for hard diff and it has a double action on vastly different sound (and loudness too).
My suggestion is to reduce 00:45:639 - to a single note to provide contrast between the loud guitar sound at 00:45:445 - and the weaker piano sound at 00:45:639.
01:20:091 (80091|3,80187|0) - i think this is a bit hard to read because its too disconnected from each other. how about rearrange like this:
for context: anime size
marker should be standardized to tv size
https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/en/Ranking_criteria/Metadata#markers
additional info on why cut ver
:
in youtube gameplays such as this one by 夢隠れの里 and this one by gHana店長, we can assume that the short ver goes verse 1 -> start of chorus 1 then fade cut to start of chorus 2 -> verse 3 + guitar solo -> chorus 3 -> outro.
this type of cut is a bit unusual to what we know as 'short vers' and thats why this one and the other ranked sets have cut ver marker on them
this one goes verse 1 -> chorus -> outro
additional read: https://osu.ppy.sh/beatmapsets/918591/discussion/-/generalAll/total