imo 00:18:564 (18564|2,18714|2,18864|3,18914|2,19014|3,19014|2,19164|2,19164|3,19314|3,19414|3) - this feels to dense on the right hand I would suggest rearranging them Ex:
00:00:264 - 00:08:664 - how you represent the snares in this section feels a bit inconsistent. For example you have a hand for this snare 00:00:564 - but only a single for this one 00:01:164 -, If its apart of your concept I would at least make these snares 00:01:164 - doubles, since those snares are the same.