1. Easy (1.86 stars, 180 notes)
2. Hard (3.22 stars, 461 notes)
3. Insane (4.22 stars, 638 notes)
4. Normal (2.2 stars, 269 notes)

LittlePigRMX wrote:

Hello from Queue!

Normal
00:19:241 (3) - Shorten this slider to 00:19:879 - . (keep the repeat and everything in it, just shorten it) then add a note to 00:20:198 - or whatever you want to do here.
00:53:230 (2) - Move this slider a pixel to the left so it lines up with 00:52:113 (1) -

Hard
HP Drain rate must be at least 6
Approach Rate must be at least 6
Overall Difficulty must be at least 6


that's it

Electoz wrote:

Hi, a very quick mod here. Just to return a favor.
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Normal
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Be sure to use distance snap in Normal, the distance between notes should be the same
Try to use AiMod to check things out.

Also, [Letterbox in breaks conflicts with Hard diff.]
Curve sliders can make the map become more natural instead of elbow ones. << it's optional though, just my opinion.
Yeah, this is probably much I can do, I'm a newbie mapper after all.
Goodluck.

Ars Novaa wrote:

Yeah for normal I know that I have to use distance snap but I found it to be very restrictive sometimes, I will go over it again and see where I can improve it though. As for the letterbox problem, I have tried lots of things but I have no idea how to get rid of that problem XD . I tried shifting the letterbox but it didn't work either. Do you know a fix? Thanks and don't worry I'm a newbie mapper too XD

Electoz wrote:

Ars Novaa wrote:

Yeah for normal I know that I have to use distance snap but I found it to be very restrictive sometimes, I will go over it again and see where I can improve it though. As for the letterbox problem, I have tried lots of things but I have no idea how to get rid of that problem XD . I tried shifting the letterbox but it didn't work either. Do you know a fix? Thanks and don't worry I'm a newbie mapper too XD

Be sure to check this box in every difficulties, so they don't conflict with each other, that's it.

Normal

Open

Hard

Dono027 wrote:

Normal

I think too many sliders are straight. Change that please.

01:04:879 (2,3,4) - 3 sliders

01:40:624 (4) - This slider need to be more long/big.

Open

02:27:858 (2,3,4,5) - 2 sliders

02:39:347 (7) - Make a littlest slider but with a reverse

02:40:305 - Begin a slider, erase the 8, and end the slider here → 02:40:464 -

02:42:220 (1) - Change this slider

Hard

00:22:752 (5) - Change this slider.

00:26:901 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - You can make sliders here

01:02:326 (1,2,3) - /!\ Spacing

01:04:879 (4,5,6) - Same

01:55:464 (6,7) - Slider

02:02:964 (1,2) - Slider

Ars Novaa wrote:

Dono027 wrote:

Normal

I think too many sliders are straight. Change that please.

01:04:879 (2,3,4) - 3 sliders I removed 2 hitcircles and replaced them with a slider

01:40:624 (4) - This slider need to be more long/big. Fixed

Open

02:27:858 (2,3,4,5) - 2 sliders Fixed

02:39:347 (7) - Make a littlest slider but with a reverse Fixed

02:40:305 - Begin a slider, erase the 8, and end the slider here → 02:40:464 - Fixed

02:42:220 (1) - Change this slider Fixed

Hard

00:22:752 (5) - Change this slider. Fixed

00:26:901 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - You can make sliders here Fixed

01:02:326 (1,2,3) - /!\ Spacing I didn't change this one because I wanted that part to accompany the fast paced part of the song

01:04:879 (4,5,6) - Same As above ^

01:55:464 (6,7) - Slider Fixed

02:02:964 (1,2) - Slider Fixed

Thank you very much for your help ! I'll implement these changes the next chance I get !

MondoKuma wrote:

Hey thanks for modding my map so now im gonna mod your

First Thing is that i went over the normal difficulty several times but i couldnt find anything to correct Good Job! Thanks


Hard Difficult: i could only find two things first off some combos are only 4 or 5 like
01:33:603 (4) - Fixed

Also some sliders seemed like they ended too early like 01:55:464 (6) - I ended this one early to match the rhythm of the song

Other than that the others covered it Good job and Great map

gameuse wrote:

Hi there I will try to cover as much stuff as I can, thnx for doing m4m!

By Personal Preference put the preview point here 01:37:113
I personally will not put in beatsnap divisor over 1/2 unless I was making a 3.5 star plus beatmap

Click me for Normal

Just to let you know that people usually increase volume in inheritance timings in kiai mode
Check your distance snaps by opening ai mod using (Ctrl + Shift + A) or (Command + Shift + A)
00:13:018 (2) - This note is unnecessary but end the slider here
00:41:901 Kiai time should start here
00:56:901-00:57:698 remove spinner and replace with something like this
00:58:177 - 00:59:454 ^
00:59:773-01:01:050 try something like this
01:01:528 (1) - end at 01:02:007
add spinner at 01:02:326 and end at 01:04:241
01:14:693 Inheritance timing here and also decrease volume to about 40%
01:38:071 Kiai start here and increase volume to about 70-80%
01:48:284 replace with a returning slider here
02:02:964 (1,2) - replace with a slider
02:20:198 another inheritance time should be added here with a lower volume
02:42:220 Inheritance timing right here and also decrease volume to about 30%
03:03:523 Kiai start here and increase volume to about 70-80%
03:21:475 add a double repeating slider here (first repeat on the next red tick and the next on the following white tick)
03:23:071 add slider here which ends at 03:23:550
03:23:869 should start slider here
03:26:581 bad place to end, if you are looking to end early consider 03:21:475 however i encourage you to show your love and finish the song

Click me for Hard

HP Drain rate 5?
Just to let you know that people usually increase volume in inheritance timings in kiai mode
Check your distance snaps by opening ai mod using (Ctrl + Shift + A) or (Command + Shift + A)
00:00:730 (2,3) - inconsistent spacing check distance snap
00:44:454 (5,6,7) - ^
00:47:007 (2,3) - add a slider here instead of 2 separate notes
00:52:592 (3,4) - consider replacing these two notes with a slider
00:52:911 (4,5) - these two notes are unnecessary
00:54:188 (4,5) - ^
00:58:975 add a note here?
01:07:432 add a new inheritance timing here with a soft volume
01:07:432 I should barely hear the notes until the next inheritance timing
01:15:252 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Unstack everything and spacing is inconsistant (distance snap problem)
01:44:773 delete the note here
01:39:028 (2,3) - ^
01:56:262 (8,9) - for a 3 star map this is way to far apart
01:55:943 Inheritance should be here
01:57:698 - 01:58:496 could use some more notes
01:58:496 start spinner here and end at the same place
02:02:964 (1,2) - replace this with a long slider
02:20:837 slider velocity here should be reduced to around 0.7-0.8 from the original which is 1.30
02:23:230 slow down the inheritance timing and replace 02:23:230 (9) - with a slider that ends 02:23:709 at slider velocity at the very minimum
02:42:220 inheritance timing should be here
02:50:198 (1,2) - slider here
03:01:209 returning slider here
03:01:369 (6) - delete this, sounds weird
03:21:954 (9) - replace this with a spinner which ends at 03:22:752
03:23:230 - 03:23:709 slider
03:24:028 spinner start here and end at the same place
03:26:581 bad place to end, if you are looking to end early consider 03:21:475 however i encourage you to show your love and finish the song

Click for General

KEEP IN MIND
[*]Distance Snapping for both maps needs to be perfect in order for a shot to get it ranked
[*]Inheritance timing needs to be on the note to make the note snap
[*]Need some volume adjustments at kiai times
[*]This is a fast song and the ending of the map is too sudden for this fast paced song
[*]This song could be mapped in 1/4 for 3.5 star plus difficulties only adjust your maps to 1/2
[*]Some of your inheritance timings before and after kiais are way too loud, these timings should not be louder or as loud as kiai
[*]The kiai is like the chorus, make it stand out
[*]Stack leniency at 5
[*]By Personal Preference put the preview point here 01:37:113

I feel like there is no need to post all the distance snap problems because someone already mentioned in a previous mod that you have a lot of them that are easily fixable.
I hope this will help you and good luck!
DONE

hanyuu_nanodesu wrote:

Hi, from my modding Q
Thank you for waiting -w-

Red : unrankable issue
Blue : highly suggested to fix
Black : normal suggestion
Green : random comment
Bold : slightly more important than others

[General]

1. I'm pretty sure you can make Insane with 188 BPM... Or even Extra .-. the absence of those diffs kinda surprised me .-.
2. Use this for title: 約束の空へ ～私のいた場所～ and for the romanized one: Yakusoku no Sora he ~Watashi no Ita Basho~ (pay attention to the capitalized word)
3. The source should be "Strike Witches Movie" (add movie since it from the movie, not the series) or you can replace it with this instead: 劇場版 ストライクウィッチーズ (the Japanese name) and move" Strike Witches Movie to the tags. Oh yeah, you don't need comma to separate tags so remove it and you don't need "Yakusoku No Sora" either since it's already mentioned in the title, remove it.
4. And for the tags, you can add the English version of the title (you can do your own research, I'm to lazy to do this xD), or the anime studio, or anything else that haven't mentioned above.
5. You can set combo colors to support the background more (song setup -> colours) I suggest to use grey, dark blue, dark purple, and anything else you feel appropriate
6. Oh yeah, go to song setup -> design, uncheck "Widescreen Support", it's only used if you have storyboard and you don't have any so it's unnecessary. Furthermore, at your folder, why do you have two OSB file? it's only used if you have storyboard, hence it's unnecessary, just delete it. Just in case: http://puu.sh/kVyMn/c8b6358b53.jpg

I'm just gonna mod Normal

1. This Normal could (if not should) be much harder. Like between 1.8 till 2.2 stars. I'll help you to make this harder
2. First of all, I think the SV is too slow. Normal SV is usually between 1.00 - 1.20, but 0.80 is still acceptable somehow. If you want to remap, you can increase the SV; but if you are too lazy (like me xD) you can keep it. You can try increasing the star diff with anything else like increasing the density.
3. I suggest using 3 - 3.5 CS for Normal
4. Oh yeah, and check your AiMod (ctrl+shift+A) and check the "Check Distance Snap" option. You have pretty much DS problems and for Normal, it should be clear so be sure to fix all of them. http://puu.sh/kVyYK/1ab0b256c9.png
5. 00:01:050 (1,2) - This is called a "polarity problem" Polarity problem is a problem that appeared when a mapper change rhythm from white and red tick to blue tick like http://puu.sh/kVz1R/a8ee31f481.jpg usually it's only between white-red to blue (like the example) but for Normal and Easy, sudden change from white pattern to red pattern (like your current problem) can also be classified as polarity problem (since red tick could be assumed as blue tick at Easy and Normal). There are several way to fix this, watch https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=53PkFLrK8Ws For this case, I suggest to use reverse slider like http://puu.sh/kVz7P/60a25e1ff8.jpg or since it Normal (the harder pattern) http://puu.sh/kVz9A/ef2b95da9a.jpg or anything else appropriate. This would be the same as the other case. Your map have pretty much of this problem so pay more attention to it next time ^^ I will not tell you about this problem after this assuming you will fix them yourself~
6. 00:08:709 (7) - End this here 00:09:826 the big sound is there http://puu.sh/kVze3/d3134f8512.jpg
7. 00:31:528 (1) - Umm, maybe do it like this http://puu.sh/kVzjZ/a77ceb44cf.jpg
8. 00:38:390 (1) - Just end this at big white tick
9. 00:41:901 (1,2) - Actually the vocal end at red tick, so just end the slider there. I suggest to add reverse to both of them to increase density and for better polarity -w-
10. 00:44:454 (3) - End this here 00:45:571 and then add a note here 00:45:890 that should fit much better. http://puu.sh/kVzrs/4cbf8f4a75.jpg
11. 00:47:645 (2) - End this at big white tick. Add a note at the white tick after that if you want, to increase density http://puu.sh/kVzts/cd970894cd.jpg
12. 00:48:922 (4,5) - Actually, the whole rhythm from here 00:48:922 to here 00:52:113 try to do it like this http://puu.sh/kVzwH/b6ff937a3b.jpg (sorry I have to shrink the timeline so much to fit the entire rhythm to one screenshot x-x)
13. 00:55:464 (4) - maybe like this http://puu.sh/kVzA8/fd8760abba.jpg the sound here 00:55:784 is just to big to ignore
14. 00:56:901 (1) - Unnecessary spinner, just delete it an map this part.
15. 01:04:879 (2,3) - I suggest to just delete this and add a short break from 01:02:326 to 01:07:432
16. Okay I'll end it here for now. Your main problem here is you stick to vocal to much so there are would be too many unnecessary break between notes, usually it's old map that uses that style. Second, you roughly follow the vocal without really paying attention to big sounds so they are often got ignored or less emphasized (a big sound would be emphasized better if it's clickable (supported with circle or slider head) and would be less emphasized if unclickable (supported with slider end or slider reverse), pay more attention to it. And your slider looks like slider from old maps xD the update of the slider formula is a grace, be sure to take benefit from it. You can read this for that t/37194 t/208596 these are pretty old so you can make more modification yourself. I have to say that actually almost everything at this mod would be blue colored but I'm just to lazy to color it xD. But overall, it's pretty neat for first map -w- it can be ranked, but it will need pretty much work to fit with current pro-beatmapper quality.

Good luck for this :3

rs_fadeaway wrote:

hi~ from my queue :3

[Nornal]
this Normal actually is an Easy
Normal diff should use 1/2 snap most time
00:41:901 (1,2,3) - u can not make sliders, like these , sometimes end on red tick, sometimes end on blue tick
..well i think first u should try to put notes on the right rhythm.for example:
01:38:071 (1,2,3) - here, remake like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3868421
01:40:624 (4) - and from here, the vocal is 0...0.0...0...0...0...0 (0= a note, . =no note; 1/4 snap),the vocal is on the red tick,but in normal or easy diff, u sometime have to give up the vocal, so just do some slider from white tick to red or white
try to follow the drum

[Hard]
change CS to 4
00:41:901 (6) - NC here
02:26:901 (5) - remake like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3868475
02:39:427 (1) - remove this spinner, and map this part, until 02:40:624 - after here can put a spinner and end as it was
02:52:592 (8,1) - too close
this diff much better than Normal !

well, keep working on it, and check others' map will help a lot
GL

Battle wrote:

From my queue:

[Normal]
Kinda one of the biggest issues in this diff is lack of flow and overlaps
00:02:805 (4,1) - DS break here Fixed
00:04:081 (2,3) - Blanket? Fixed
00:07:432 (2,3,4,5) - I feel like this could be confusing to the group of people that you're trying to make this diff for, The 5 being so close to 3 may make them want to click that instead of 4, you can always try a small DS to make things look neater Fixed
00:08:709 (5) - Maybe make this end at 00:09:826 - to follow music better Fixed
00:13:496 (3,4) - Moving 3 to 00:13:337 - will follow the song better Fixed
00:27:858 (2,3,4) - Flow makes it seem that the next to to be clicked is 4, not 3, so fix the flow here Fixed
00:50:198 (5,1) - Overlapping doesn't make things look neat Fixed
00:52:113 (1,2,3) - Confusing, since this is your lowest diff that Easy players SHOULD be able to play, stacking and making 1/2 rhythms maybe really hard in 188 bpm Removed all stacks
00:54:188 (4,5) - In general you should avoid stacking, I know it's called "Normal" but like, still Fixed
01:16:369 (2,3,4) - This is one of those situations where I highly recommend that you should remake the map with a lower SV and DS, because you really can't map such a large pause as this with the current SV and DS you have, and overall there is no indication for when the player is supposed to click the note, since the ds makes it seem like it's right after 2 but it isn't Uhhh I was told to put a 1 SV for Normal maps. I've changed it a little to hopefully maatch the flow
01:51:635 (12,1) - Flow doesn't really, well, flow, since the slider end is pointing towards the left and you're going the exact opposite direction
I just noticed, but you should probably redo your NCs Fixed
01:53:071 (1,3) - Bad flow, players will want to click well these two notes instead of 01:54:347 (2) - Fixed
01:54:667 (3,4,5) - Don't overlap, fix blanket for curved sliders, 3 point slider are best Fixed
02:02:964 (1,2) - Since this is still the lowest difficulty we're talking about, you might want to make it a 1/2 slider since single tapping in 188 bpm for lower players probably is really hard Fixed
02:59:374 (2) - Don't put sliders on blue ticks Missed that one , thanks! XD
03:13:815 (1,2) - Flow makes it seem like the repeat thing is where the next note will be Fixed

That's all I'm gonna mod so like, GL~

1. There are so many spacing issues, especially on Hard diff. It can be really annoying and confusing for players. It will take some time to fix, but it is worth it.
2. Slider shapes are monotonus. There are sooo many possibilities and slidershapes you can use to make a diff neat and fun.
3. I noticed that you often ignore downbeats, which are the most important thing in a beat. I will tell you what I mean below.

1. 00:02:805 (4) - Move it to (x:251 y:176) and curve it around 00:01:528 (2)
   Reference:

   
2. If you did the above, move 00:03:603 (1) around (x:266 y:82) and move 00:04:081 (2) around (x:408 y:127)
3. 00:04:879 (3) - You can make the slider shape more fancy.
   Something like:

   
4. Then you just have to space the rest of the notes 00:06:156 (1,2,3,4,5) to what I suggested above.
5. 00:11:262 - Here is the downbeat thing I said. It would be better to put a note here and shorten 00:11:581 (1) till 00:12:220. This way you will make the next downbeat clickable, by adding a circle at 00:12:539
6. 00:13:018 (2,3,4) - This is tricky for new players. Replace 00:13:018 (2,3) with a slider and replace 00:13:656 (4,5) with a slider that ends at 00:14:135.Then, add one more slider at 00:14:454, which ends at 00:14:773
7. 00:23:071 (3) - Extend it till 00:23:869
8. 00:31:688 (1) - Shorten it for one tick. Sounds better.
9. 00:38:390 (1) - Move the spinner to 00:38:071 and extend it till 00:40:624. Makes more sense to me.
10. 00:50:198 (5) - Extend till 00:51:315 with maybe a differend shape? Rythm.
11. 00:53:230 (2) - The downbeat thing again. Move the slider at 00:53:390 and add a circle at 00:53:071? Don't foget to change spacing if you do.
12. Same again. Add a circle at 00:56:901 and move 00:56:901 (1) at 00:57:220 (1). Also shorten it till 00:57:858
13. 01:03:762 (5) - Move it at 01:03:922 and shorten it till 01:04:560
14. 01:15:092 - The downbeat again. Add a circle here and move 01:15:252 (1) to 01:15:411 and shorten it till 01:16:050
15. 01:20:358 (1) - Move it to 01:20:518
16. 01:27:698 (1) - Move to 01:27:858
17. 01:28:975 (2) - Move it to 01:29:135
18. 01:30:252 (1) - Move it to 01:30:411 and extend shorten till 01:31:050
19. 01:32:805 (4) - Move to 01:32:964 and shorten till 01:33:922
20. 01:34:879 (1) - Move it to 01:34:241 and extend till 01:36:794
21. 01:40:624 (4) - Extend till 01:41:581. Then, remove 01:41:741 (5) and move 01:42:060 (6) to 01:41:901 and extend till 01:42:379
22. 01:48:284 (7) - Extend till 01:48:922 and add new combo
23. 01:55:943 (7) - Shorten it till 01:56:581 and move the spinner to 01:57:220 and end it at 02:01:050
24. 02:52:911 (1) - Shorten it till 02:53:230 and move 02:53:709 (2) to 02:53:390
25. 02:59:454 (2) - Shorten for one tick
26. 03:23:071 (1) - Move to 03:22:752 and extend till 03:26:581

xDarxen wrote:

Hullo, from my queue:

[General]

1. There are so many spacing issues, especially on Hard diff. It can be really annoying and confusing for players. It will take some time to fix, but it is worth it.
2. Slider shapes are monotonus. There are sooo many possibilities and slidershapes you can use to make a diff neat and fun.
3. I noticed that you often ignore downbeats, which are the most important thing in a beat. I will tell you what I mean below.

[Normal]

1. 00:02:805 (4) - Move it to (x:251 y:176) and curve it around 00:01:528 (2)
   Reference:

   
2. If you did the above, move 00:03:603 (1) around (x:266 y:82) and move 00:04:081 (2) around (x:408 y:127)
3. 00:04:879 (3) - You can make the slider shape more fancy.
   Something like:

   
4. Then you just have to space the rest of the notes 00:06:156 (1,2,3,4,5) to what I suggested above.
5. 00:11:262 - Here is the downbeat thing I said. It would be better to put a note here and shorten 00:11:581 (1) till 00:12:220. This way you will make the next downbeat clickable, by adding a circle at 00:12:539
6. 00:13:018 (2,3,4) - This is tricky for new players. Replace 00:13:018 (2,3) with a slider and replace 00:13:656 (4,5) with a slider that ends at 00:14:135.Then, add one more slider at 00:14:454, which ends at 00:14:773
7. 00:23:071 (3) - Extend it till 00:23:869
8. 00:31:688 (1) - Shorten it for one tick. Sounds better.
9. 00:38:390 (1) - Move the spinner to 00:38:071 and extend it till 00:40:624. Makes more sense to me.
10. 00:50:198 (5) - Extend till 00:51:315 with maybe a differend shape? Rythm.
11. 00:53:230 (2) - The downbeat thing again. Move the slider at 00:53:390 and add a circle at 00:53:071? Don't foget to change spacing if you do.
12. Same again. Add a circle at 00:56:901 and move 00:56:901 (1) at 00:57:220 (1). Also shorten it till 00:57:858
13. 01:03:762 (5) - Move it at 01:03:922 and shorten it till 01:04:560
14. 01:15:092 - The downbeat again. Add a circle here and move 01:15:252 (1) to 01:15:411 and shorten it till 01:16:050
15. 01:20:358 (1) - Move it to 01:20:518
16. 01:27:698 (1) - Move to 01:27:858
17. 01:28:975 (2) - Move it to 01:29:135
18. 01:30:252 (1) - Move it to 01:30:411 and extend shorten till 01:31:050
19. 01:32:805 (4) - Move to 01:32:964 and shorten till 01:33:922
20. 01:34:879 (1) - Move it to 01:34:241 and extend till 01:36:794
21. 01:40:624 (4) - Extend till 01:41:581. Then, remove 01:41:741 (5) and move 01:42:060 (6) to 01:41:901 and extend till 01:42:379
22. 01:48:284 (7) - Extend till 01:48:922 and add new combo
23. 01:55:943 (7) - Shorten it till 01:56:581 and move the spinner to 01:57:220 and end it at 02:01:050
24. 02:52:911 (1) - Shorten it till 02:53:230 and move 02:53:709 (2) to 02:53:390
25. 02:59:454 (2) - Shorten for one tick
26. 03:23:071 (1) - Move to 03:22:752 and extend till 03:26:581

That'a all. I will not mod Hard as I said enough till now. You just have to check AiMod on Hard and fix the spacing. Good luck man!

Cheesecake wrote:

Hi, from modding queue

[Hard]

Generally, a lot of things would need to be remapped using a higher distance snap, as overlaps on every object don't look great
00:03:124 (8,9,10,1) - Things like this should be planned out using a slider for guidance before placing any hitcircles, this gives a nice smooth path. You should pretty much map every stream this way as well (but that's unrelated here).
00:08:550 - Object missing here
00:12:379 (5,6,7) - This triplet isn't mapped to anything
00:14:454 (3,4,5) - ^
00:15:411 (8) - Bad flow, you should try and make sure that slider paths will start in the same direction as the direction of your cursor, moving the middle anchor to X:377 Y:194 and the end to X:422 Y:97 would be better (you can see co-ordinates in the top right)
00:15:411 (8) - Also, this slider ends on a new measure which is typically bad
00:17:007 (2,3,4) - You should get that these triplets aren't mapped to anything by now so I'll stop mentioning them
00:22:113 (2,3) - Similarly to before, try and have the end of the slider path point towards the next object
00:24:188 (1,2) - ^ , will stop mentioning
00:25:145 (3) - Slider ends on a new measure
00:28:815 (1,2,3,5) - Now introducing: The blanket! A blanket is where the approach circle of an object completely overlaps the curve of a slider, so where this isn't blanketed, this is. You also don't need so many anchor points on a simple curved slider
00:32:805 (4,5,6,7) - Try and avoid doing this
00:34:081 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
00:41:502 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - Not mapped to anything
00:49:879 (6,7) - Flow
01:06:794 (8) - NC
01:11:422 (6,7,8,9) - The distance is misleading on this, since you've got a gap between the triplet and the slider on the timeline but the same distance in terms of placement. Although the triplet should be going anyway

Everything I've said can be applied to the rest of the map so I'll stop here I guess, good luck with the changes. Remember to find new songs to map and practice practice practice

1. I didn't mod this one because the snap distance is too inconsistent. Try to keep your snap distance consistent for Normal; there are many places where the snap distance changes radically, e.g. 00:02:805 (4,1) or 00:20:518 (3,1). If you're aiming for ranked, avoid breaking snap distance for Easy and Normal difficulties. If there's a long pause between notes, e.g. 1 or 2 bars (e.g. 01:05:358 (7,1) ), then I understand that snap distance break might be inevitable, but if it's something like one beat (e.g. 00:02:805 (4,1) ), the change would be too difficult for beginners.

1. I also didn't mod this one because your note placement is really confusing. There are a lot of points where your 1/1 snap distance is the same as your 1/2 snap distance, which can create a lot of confusion, like at 00:27:858 (6,7). You generally want to avoid these because they are incredibly confusing for the player. Also, your approach rate is really low. Given the amount of circles that show up and the fast BPM of the song, having a low approach rate like 6 would be hard to read since there are so many circles everywhere; too much information is being given to the player, and the player can't register which circles to click, which can result in the player not being able to play your map. I'd raise the approach rate to something like 8.

Doormat wrote:

Hello, here from your NM request a week ago- lol sorry it's so late, I was busy with school and Fallout 4

don't kd this; i didn't mod your map, just giving you suggestions as to how you can make your map better.

Normal

1. I didn't mod this one because the snap distance is too inconsistent. Try to keep your snap distance consistent for Normal; there are many places where the snap distance changes radically, e.g. 00:02:805 (4,1) or 00:20:518 (3,1). If you're aiming for ranked, avoid breaking snap distance for Easy and Normal difficulties. If there's a long pause between notes, e.g. 1 or 2 bars (e.g. 01:05:358 (7,1) ), then I understand that snap distance break might be inevitable, but if it's something like one beat (e.g. 00:02:805 (4,1) ), the change would be too difficult for beginners.

Hard

1. I also didn't mod this one because your note placement is really confusing. There are a lot of points where your 1/1 snap distance is the same as your 1/2 snap distance, which can create a lot of confusion, like at 00:27:858 (6,7). You generally want to avoid these because they are incredibly confusing for the player. Also, your approach rate is really low. Given the amount of circles that show up and the fast BPM of the song, having a low approach rate like 6 would be hard to read since there are so many circles everywhere; too much information is being given to the player, and the player can't register which circles to click, which can result in the player not being able to play your map. I'd raise the approach rate to something like 8.

Sorry I didn't really mod your map, but I hope what I've mentioned to you helps. Good luck!

Aihuro wrote:

Hey! NM request from my queue.
Well, here goes nothing.

General:

1. Please enable "Widescreen Support" since you don't have a SB.
2. Uhm, I hope you have someone to make you an Easy diff, since the lowest diff must be below 2.00 stars.
3. I also suggest you get some help with hitsounding. It lags a lot imo.

Normal:

1. You have a lot of DS errors in you normal diff. Please fix that since it is unrankable! DS must stay consistant in easier diffs.
2. 00:03:603 (1) - Uhm, I think it will be better if you change that note into a slider. Which ends here: 00:03:922 - . Done
3. 00:04:081 (2,3) - The placement of those sliders isn't really neat. Why not Ctrl+H this slider: 00:04:081 (2) - and then move this one: 00:04:879 (3) - here X: 396 Y: 284. It looks better and also plays nicely imo. Done
4. 00:06:156 (1) - This slider shape can be improved! Why not just make a normal curve slider? It's easy to make and no one will have a problem with it.Done
5. 00:07:432 (1,2,3) - This pattern is really hard to follow. It's like circles coming out of nowhere, lol. Just make (1) a slider that ends here: 00:07:911 - and add a circle here: 00:08:390 - Imo, it sounds better. Done
6. 00:09:986 - Uhm. . it sounds like you can add a note or a spinner here, cause I hear a strong beat. I can't see how a spinner/hitcircle might fit here though
7. 00:11:581 (1) - Same here, the slider shape can be improved. Fixed
8. 00:15:092 (3) - I think a slider will fit here perfectly~ Which ends here: 00:15:411 - . Done
9. 00:16:369 - Here is a very strong beat! I highly suggest you add a note here since it feels so empty. Done
10. 00:17:964 (3,4) - This can be blanket better. Done
11. 00:17:964 (3,1) - I also don't like this overlap. The (3) head is touching (1) head. Please place them further away from each other. Done
12. 00:22:113 (2,3) - I think this rhythm can be improved. Just lengthen this slider a bit: 00:22:113 (2) - until here: 00:22:911 - . Then move this slider: 00:23:071 (3) - here: 00:23:230 - . It follows the vocal better. Done
13. 00:42:858 (2,1) - Overlap again, please fix that. Done
14. 00:44:135 (4,3) - Why not stack them instead of overlapping. Done
15. 00:47:645 (2,1) - Same here, satck them please~ Done
16. 00:51:794 (5) - I highly suggest you add a note here since there is a strong beat. And it also keeps the flow going. Done
17. 01:00:092 (4) - Why not turn this note into a slider? It will fit better with the vocals. Done
18. 01:10:145 (1) - The vocals starts here: 01:10:305 - so I suggest you start that slider here. Done
19. Okay, I think I will stop for now.

Will go on later with this mod

1. BG image size should be either 1024*768 or 1366*768.
2. You should use your own hitsounds instead of default ones.

1. I thought I told you once already but I just gonna repeat this again : DS has to be consistent through out the map. On EVERY objects.
2. Some general tips on how AImod works :
   
   1. AImod's distance calculation was based on The first circle of the new combo --> second one. In other words, if you misplacing the first combo/the second one, you're done.
   2. AImod will never report any errors coming from any last circle before a new combo. And first circle of the new combo --> second one too. To make sure the spacing is right, remove NC from the objects and fix the spacing errors reported by AImod, after you done that. Place that NC on where it was again.
3. I won't mod it now, because you have to fix many spacing issues, I'll just point out a few general comments here.
4. 00:22:113 (2) - Never lands the object on the blue tick in the easier difficulties unless it has a strong beat on it, in this case? I don't think so, the slider's rhythm here is off imo.
5. Try to have a constant beat spacing(spacing between objects) throughout the song, so it'll become easier for beginners to follow.

1. 00:30:730 - Why there's nothing here? map sth
2. Overall I think the flows kinda weird and not completely smooth yet. If you play through some parts in the song you'll realise that some parts you have to move the cursor sharply than smoothly, try checking the objects that if they have the right flow before the next object or not.
3. Putting a kickslider can confuse most of the players sometimes. This is an example > 00:45:571 (4) . Try not to put 2 or more kicks on kicksliders like this. Because most players will thought that this kickslider has only a kick, and then miss. Try and play every part by yourself to see which parts is ok and not as a player.
4. I think putting too many 1/2 doubletap is kinda boring imo, because there's a lot of those in the song . Try to come up with sth more creative in terms of rhythm.

Electoz wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue~ So it's a remod for me on this map.

[General]

1. BG image size should be either 1024*768 or 1366*768.
2. You should use your own hitsounds instead of default ones.

[Normal]

1. I thought I told you once already but I just gonna repeat this again : DS has to be consistent through out the map. On EVERY objects.
2. Some general tips on how AImod works :
   
   1. AImod's distance calculation was based on The first circle of the new combo --> second one. In other words, if you misplacing the first combo/the second one, you're done.
   2. AImod will never report any errors coming from any last circle before a new combo. And first circle of the new combo --> second one too. To make sure the spacing is right, remove NC from the objects and fix the spacing errors reported by AImod, after you done that. Place that NC on where it was again.
3. I won't mod it now, because you have to fix many spacing issues, I'll just point out a few general comments here.
4. 00:22:113 (2) - Never lands the object on the blue tick in the easier difficulties unless it has a strong beat on it, in this case? I don't think so, the slider's rhythm here is off imo.
5. Try to have a constant beat spacing(spacing between objects) throughout the song, so it'll become easier for beginners to follow.

[Hard]

1. 00:30:730 - Why there's nothing here? map sth
2. Overall I think the flows kinda weird and not completely smooth yet. If you play through some parts in the song you'll realise that some parts you have to move the cursor sharply than smoothly, try checking the objects that if they have the right flow before the next object or not.
3. Putting a kickslider can confuse most of the players sometimes. This is an example > 00:45:571 (4) . Try not to put 2 or more kicks on kicksliders like this. Because most players will thought that this kickslider has only a kick, and then miss. Try and play every part by yourself to see which parts is ok and not as a player.
4. I think putting too many 1/2 doubletap is kinda boring imo, because there's a lot of those in the song . Try to come up with sth more creative in terms of rhythm.

Try to apply what I suggested you as much as possible, you can still catch me in game for a remod or whatever. Oh, and please reply to the mods properly btw.
Good luck~

Dyl-Byl wrote:

Hi! From My Queue! I was about to Reject your request but since this a first, i'll go ahead!

Insane

[General]
The AR rate is to fast. More like an extra map. Change the AR. I feel the AR is suitable for the face pace though
[Modding Itself]
00:00:571 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - If you look carefully, these notes are going in a loop, fix that.Fixed
00:38:550 (1) - Get rid of this and remap this part. I feel the spinner would be better though, I did change it a little
00:50:518 (9,10) - Use DS DS doesn't show any problems though
00:53:550 (5,6) - Don't stackt the 6 on the 5. It doesn't resemble any patterns. Fixed
01:58:018 (1) - No NC here. Fixed
02:21:475 (4,5) - Blanket.Changed it

Prismetical wrote:

Hello! from my modding queue

Easy

- slider velocity too fast Fixed
- AiMod already ranks that as Normal, care Yea I noticed :v Tried to make it easier but really struggle to XD
00:13:975 (1) - put on next white tick and shorten one tick, doesn't feel good Fixed
00:15:092 (3,3) - ugly overlay Fixed
00:20:518 (3,3) - repetetive Didn't quite get what this meant though..
00:24:188 (1) - too much use of this, 'slider starts on a red tick', first: it doesn't fell good to play, second: not recommended for Easy
00:27:858 (2,2) - stack somehow Fixed
00:35:518 (4,6) - stack with sliderending Fixed
00:43:177 (2,1) - ^
00:43:177 (2,3) - okay, remove everything on a red tick and move it to a white tick, this feels literally, horrible For this problem, I went back to check and it did sound bad, so I moved some of the red ticks to white ticks. However there were some parts where putting it on a white tick didn't match the song so I just left it on a red tick
01:10:145 (1) - ...
01:15:252 (1) - ^
01:16:369 (2,1) - ugly overlay / stack this Fixed
- you shouldn't follow the voice at all, the background music has much more to offer, I stop here

Normal

- I'll ignore the red tick shenanigans Same as above
00:09:826 - circle Fixed
00:51:315 (6,2) - stack with sliderending Fixed
00:54:507 (1) - ugly Fixed
01:02:167 (2,1) - fix pattern Fixed
01:03:922 (4) - oom... doesn't fit Fixed
01:10:145 (1) - shorten to previous red tick, I guess Fixed, though I extended it instead to the next white tick
01:31:528 (2,1) - stack Fixed
01:42:858 (1) - ugly Fixed
01:54:667 (2,4) - stack sliderendings Fixed
02:02:964 (1,2) - what is this? xD I know what you mean, but then keep on Removed
02:27:379 (3) - shorten to red tick, sounds wrong Fixed
02:35:198 (3,2) - stack Fixed
- it's ok...

Good luck!

neonat wrote:

Insane

00:05:518 (3,4,5,6) - 00:06:475 (2,3,5,6) - these anti-jumps are weird, I'd rather you stack them closer instead of having them overlap only this slightlyFixed
00:08:709 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - pattern looks kinda off, also it would be nice if you had spaced 3-4 away from each other more for emphasis in the songFixed
00:15:411 (8,9,10,1) - I find the spacing odd, as well some of the stacking like this. If anything, it seems underwhelming, and too close for comfortFixed
00:21:794 (1,2,3) - kinda lacks some sense of flow that would help movement, seems pretty haphazardly placed at the momentFixed ( I think)
00:23:230 (8) - odd slider shape, looks poor Fixed
00:25:145 (4) - strong beat on slider end, which feels weak to play Fixed
00:27:220 (2,3) - direction of movement affected by placing the circle behind the slider Fixed
00:27:698 (4) - again strong beat on slider end I went through the song and fixed most of these
00:30:411 (4,1) - this gap is very obvious and halts any momentum gained in the song Fixed
00:35:358 (1,2,3) - weird positions, and slider end has the strong beat again Fixed
00:38:550 (1) - what is this spinner starting on Fixed
00:41:502 (3) - what is this beat on Missed that out XD Fixed
00:47:964 (9,10,11) - weird spacing Fixed
01:03:762 (7) - multiple repeat slider lack rhythm or any intuitive pattern here, you can make a better phrase here Fixed

Overall the rhythm seems very start stop, which could be contributed to you trying to be with the vocals, which isn't really working well. The shapes of the sliders are odd, and they don't really match up together to look presentable, often looking like they are just randomly placed where they are. Spacing can be improved and it just seems very constricted and bunched up at the moment.
Good Luck

1. 02:20:837 (2,3) - http://puu.sh/mls4x.png
2. 00:25:624 (3) - Did you mean to have this reverse slider end on the white tick? If not, try that out instead.
3. 01:28:975 (2) - Yes, I realize it follows the vocals, but I'm sure you could do something much better that doesn't odd.
4. 02:21:475 (3) - End this on the white tick instead.
5. 02:22:752 (4) - Change this to a complete slider.

1. 00:55:145 (6,7) - Move (7) to around x: 208 y: 120 for a better blanket.
2. 01:45:092 (1,2,3,4) - Remove everything and try something like this instead. http://puu.sh/mlsSI.png
3. 01:55:624 (3,4) - Fix blanket.
4. 02:58:815 (2,3,2,3) - You don't really need these. Remove both (2).

1. 00:14:773 (4,5,6) - A triple does not fit here. Remove (5).
2. 00:17:167 (2,3) - Stack.
3. 00:26:422 (7,8,9) - Uneccesary triple. It doesn't follow anything.
4. 00:41:502 (3) - You should remove this and have something that follows the vocals.
5. 01:03:762 (1) - You could do something much nicer here instead of using a long reverse slider. Be creative.
6. Continue to watch out for overexaggerated reverse sliders and uneccesary triples.

1. Use the advice I've given you about your other difficulty for this one.

_vanity wrote:

Hello, from my modding queue. o/
[Easy]

1. 02:20:837 (2,3) - http://puu.sh/mls4x.png Missed that out XD , Fixed
2. 00:25:624 (3) - Did you mean to have this reverse slider end on the white tick? If not, try that out instead. Yeah it sounded better
3. 01:28:975 (2) - Yes, I realize it follows the vocals, but I'm sure you could do something much better that doesn't odd. Fixed
4. 02:21:475 (3) - End this on the white tick instead. Fixed
5. 02:22:752 (4) - Change this to a complete slider. Fixed

[Normal]

1. 00:55:145 (6,7) - Move (7) to around x: 208 y: 120 for a better blanket. Fixed
2. 01:45:092 (1,2,3,4) - Remove everything and try something like this instead. http://puu.sh/mlsSI.png Fixed, the last part sounded abit weird though so I didn't implement it.
3. 01:55:624 (3,4) - Fix blanket. Fixed
4. 02:58:815 (2,3,2,3) - You don't really need these. Remove both (2)Fixed.

[Hard]

1. 00:14:773 (4,5,6) - A triple does not fit here. Remove (5). Fixed
2. 00:17:167 (2,3) - Stack. Fixed
3. 00:26:422 (7,8,9) - Uneccesary triple. It doesn't follow anything. Fixed
4. 00:41:502 (3) - You should remove this and have something that follows the vocals. I think I'll keep this here. I try to follow an increasing difficulty level for maps and if I were to reduce it to something that doesn't sound like a stream, I think that would make it aa Normal kind of map. If the player can pass the Hard mode and attempts the Insane ( which has a stream at this point ) at least it can relate back to the Hard mode which has something that sounds like a stream. Just my personal opinion though, I'm still not quite good at this so I might be wrong ...
5. 01:03:762 (1) - You could do something much nicer here instead of using a long reverse slider. Be creative. Fixed
6. Continue to watch out for overexaggerated reverse sliders and uneccesary triples.

[Insane]

1. Use the advice I've given you about your other difficulty for this one.Alright !

[]
Good luck!

arnoldusj wrote:

Insane

This is very difficult to find fault in this map, but I found some fault on this map, example, 01:16:688 (8) - The knock is less fitFixed, 01:38:071 (7) - add nc, Fixed
01:58:815 - try to remove Kiai, if there should be no plotFixed, 03:03:922 (8) - add nc Fixed

Good Luck

DreaM117er wrote:

Nice song, I must use time to watch this.

eclipselotus wrote:

DreaM117er wrote:

Nice song, I must use time to watch this.

And here's a little check

KIAI TIMING (Use this to all the diffs)

SPOILER

00:41:901 Kiai I Start
01:02:326 Kiai I End
01:38:071 Kiai II Start
02:01:050 Kiai II End
03:03:603 Kiai III Start
03:26:581 Kiai III End

03:26:901 - 04:03:603 i think this space would be nice if you fill them, feel quite unconf end the map right at kiai end (rarely see this)

EASY

SPOILER

Basically just follow the beat 1-2-1 and the flow supposed to be easy to follow
CS 2
AR 3

00:24:347 (2) end slider 00:24:986
00:43:656 (3) move it to 00:43:815
01:15:252 (1) ^ 01:15:411 (current end)
01:20:358 (1) ^ 01:20:518 ^
01:28:975 (2) ^ 01:29:135 ^
01:32:964 (6) need better slider here
01:42:858 (1) start the slider 01:43:177 (current end)
01:46:369 (2) end slider 01:47:007
01:47:486 add circle
01:48:284 (1) end slider01:48:922
02:01:050 end the spinner
02:38:071 (1) slider fix
02:56:741 (3) ^

NORMAL

SPOILER

00:13:975 slider start 00:14:135 (end current)
00:30:092 (3) reverse it 2x
01:25:943 (2) ^ 3x total
02:40:464 (5) change circle with slider and end it 02:41:262
02:41:901 add circle
03:21:794 (7) end slider 03:22:432
03:22:752 spinner start (end current)

Just can check it for now, Nice song btw
Good Luck

eclipselotus wrote:

DreaM117er wrote:

Nice song, I must use time to watch this.

And here's a little check

KIAI TIMING (Use this to all the diffs) Fixed

SPOILER

00:41:901 Kiai I Start
01:02:326 Kiai I End
01:38:071 Kiai II Start
02:01:050 Kiai II End
03:03:603 Kiai III Start
03:26:581 Kiai III End

03:26:901 - 04:03:603 i think this space would be nice if you fill them, feel quite unconf end the map right at kiai end (rarely see this) Fixed ( Thats why it took me so long to reply

EASY

SPOILER

Basically just follow the beat 1-2-1 and the flow supposed to be easy to follow
CS 2
AR 3

00:24:347 (2) end slider 00:24:986 Fixed
00:43:656 (3) move it to 00:43:815 Fixed
01:15:252 (1) ^ 01:15:411 (current end)I'm not quite sure what these 3 meant but I think you are asking to move the sliders forward a little to start on the long white tick, doesn't seem right to me though
01:20:358 (1) ^ 01:20:518 ^
01:28:975 (2) ^ 01:29:135 ^
01:32:964 (6) need better slider here Fixed
01:42:858 (1) start the slider 01:43:177 (current end) Doesn't seem right to me either
01:46:369 (2) end slider 01:47:007 Fixed
01:47:486 add circle Fixed
01:48:284 (1) end slider01:48:922 Fixed
02:01:050 end the spinner Fixed
02:38:071 (1) slider fix I don't know whats wrong here though
02:56:741 (3) ^ I didn't change this one as I felt the curves of the slider matches the song well
NORMAL
[spoilerbox]00:13:975 slider start 00:14:135 (end current) Fixed
00:30:092 (3) reverse it 2x Fixed
01:25:943 (2) ^ 3x total Fixed
02:40:464 (5) change circle with slider and end it 02:41:262 Fixed
02:41:901 add circle I don't see how this could fit
03:21:794 (7) end slider 03:22:432
03:22:752 spinner start (end current)It doesn't sound right either

Just can check it for now, Nice song btw
Good Luck

eclipselotus wrote:

here's the other

General
add to tags: atsuko & KATSU angelaUhh idk what is this though XD


HARD

SPOILER

00:41:502 (3) slider start 00:41:581 Fixed
00:49:401 (2,3) ctrl + g Idk how I'm supposed to ctrl + g this though..
01:30:092 add cirlcle Fixed
01:37:592 (3) slider start 01:37:752 Fixed
01:56:581 - 01:58:018 add stuff Fixed
01:58:177 (1) spinner start (end current) I think putting it here matches the sond more though
02:02:964 (1) reverse it 1x Fixed

03:00:571 (4,5) ctrl + g I think you are referring to the overlaps.. Is there anything wrong with overlaps? Uhh if there is do tell me I'm still a newbie mapper
03:20:518 (2,3) ^
03:21:954 (7) change circle to slow slider untill 03:22:752 and reverse it 1xChanged it
03:24:028 (1) spinner start I don't think it fits with the parts I added in..

INSANE

SPOILER

00:09:826 (2) slider end 00:10:624 Fixed
00:29:135 (3) better slider here Fixed
00:30:571 (2,4) ctrl + g Uhh I don't know what the problem is here..
00:52:113 (7,8,9) change it to short slider and reverse it 1x (ex) This seems a bit too hard to play I think
00:53:550 (5,6) ctrl+ g By doing that it goes opposite of the direction lol
00:55:784 (2) ^
01:16:528 (8,9) ^
01:58:815 - 02:20:198 This usually used to show "other side" of your map this dayAdded stuff inside

-no kds-