From my queue:
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Kinda one of the biggest issues in this diff is lack of flow and overlaps
00:02:805 (4,1) - DS break here
00:04:081 (2,3) - Blanket?
00:07:432 (2,3,4,5) - I feel like this could be confusing to the group of people that you're trying to make this diff for, The 5 being so close to 3 may make them want to click that instead of 4, you can always try a small DS to make things look neater
00:08:709 (5) - Maybe make this end at 00:09:826 - to follow music better
00:13:496 (3,4) - Moving 3 to 00:13:337 - will follow the song better
00:27:858 (2,3,4) - Flow makes it seem that the next to to be clicked is 4, not 3, so fix the flow here
00:50:198 (5,1) - Overlapping doesn't make things look neat
00:52:113 (1,2,3) - Confusing, since this is your lowest diff that Easy players SHOULD be able to play, stacking and making 1/2 rhythms maybe really hard in 188 bpm
00:54:188 (4,5) - In general you should avoid stacking, I know it's called "Normal" but like, still
01:16:369 (2,3,4) - This is one of those situations where I highly recommend that you should remake the map with a lower SV and DS, because you really can't map such a large pause as this with the current SV and DS you have, and overall there is no indication for when the player is supposed to click the note, since the ds makes it seem like it's right after 2 but it isn't
01:51:635 (12,1) - Flow doesn't really, well, flow, since the slider end is pointing towards the left and you're going the exact opposite direction
I just noticed, but you should probably redo your NCs
01:53:071 (1,3) - Bad flow, players will want to click well these two notes instead of 01:54:347 (2) -
01:54:667 (3,4,5) - Don't overlap, fix blanket for curved sliders, 3 point slider are best
02:02:964 (1,2) - Since this is still the lowest difficulty we're talking about, you might want to make it a 1/2 slider since single tapping in 188 bpm for lower players probably is really hard
02:59:374 (2) - Don't put sliders on blue ticks
03:13:815 (1,2) - Flow makes it seem like the repeat thing is where the next note will be
That's all I'm gonna mod so like, GL~