Ishida Yoko & Dai 501 Tougou Sentou Koukuudan with Hattori S

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Topic Starter
PumpkinIcedTea
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Wednesday, 30 December 2015 at 7:41:22 PM

Artist: Ishida Yoko
Title: Yakusoku no Sora he ~Watashi no Ita Basho~
Source: Strike Witches Movie
Tags: Strike Witches
BPM: 188
Filesize: 4089kb
Play Time: 03:26
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.86 stars, 180 notes)
  2. Hard (3.22 stars, 461 notes)
  3. Insane (4.22 stars, 638 notes)
  4. Normal (2.2 stars, 269 notes)


Download: Ishida Yoko - Yakusoku no Sora he ~Watashi no Ita Basho~
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Jaltzu
Ok, quick mod here.
Use distance snap most of the time (from left side toolbar). In easy and normal diffs you have to use it pretty much all the time, but in hard+ you have little bit more freedom in mapping. Press and hold ALT and then adjust 'Distance Spacing' (a bar in top left corner) to ~1.2 or so.
Use more curved sliders.
Choose some different combo colours from Song Setup -> Colours. Optional, but recommended.
Song Setup -> Design -> uncheck box called 'Letterbox during brake'. Also, consider removing countdown from there (optional).

In Song Setup -> General:
Remove "[Strike Witches Movie OST]" from song title.
Put "Strike Witches" in the Source box and remove it from Tags.
Artist: 石田 燿子
Romanised Artist: Ishida Yoko

00:36:794 (11) - Bad slider.
00:59:773 (1) - Stop the spinner at 01:01:050. Map the rest of it with notes + sliders.
01:02:326 - 01:07:113 Map this part too.
01:11:741 (7,1) - These sliders overlap pretty badly. Also, add something in between those. Try to map all the main beats (Long white ticks on the beatmap timeline).
01:53:071 (1,1) - This kind of long sliders might look cool, but they usually play pretty poorly. Consider remapping them.
02:01:050 Map this gap.
02:43:257 Maybe map the break time?

Tips:
Watch pro mapper's mapping styles.
You can find mapping tutorials on YT. (Didn't use them myself, tho...)

This still needs lots of work. It's pretty hard to mod this since distance snap is off. But don't worry, this is how everyones first maps look like, just practise more and you'll do great. :) This is just a quick check on stuff, but hopefully it helps.

EDIT: Oh, and remember to give Kudosu to helpfull mod posts. But don't give them to same person twice, unless the map has drastically changed between those mods.
Topic Starter
PumpkinIcedTea
Thank you very much ! I really appreciate it ! I will make the changes as soon as I can ! :)
LittlePigRMX
Hello from Queue!

Normal
00:19:241 (3) - Shorten this slider to 00:19:879 - . (keep the repeat and everything in it, just shorten it) then add a note to 00:20:198 - or whatever you want to do here.
00:53:230 (2) - Move this slider a pixel to the left so it lines up with 00:52:113 (1) -

Hard
HP Drain rate must be at least 6
Approach Rate must be at least 6
Overall Difficulty must be at least 6


that's it
Topic Starter
PumpkinIcedTea

LittlePigRMX wrote:

Hello from Queue!

Normal
00:19:241 (3) - Shorten this slider to 00:19:879 - . (keep the repeat and everything in it, just shorten it) then add a note to 00:20:198 - or whatever you want to do here.
00:53:230 (2) - Move this slider a pixel to the left so it lines up with 00:52:113 (1) -

Hard
HP Drain rate must be at least 6
Approach Rate must be at least 6
Overall Difficulty must be at least 6


that's it
Thank you very much ! I appreciate it !
Electoz
Hi, a very quick mod here. Just to return a favor. :D
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Normal
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Be sure to use distance snap in Normal, the distance between notes should be the same
Try to use AiMod to check things out.

Also, [Letterbox in breaks conflicts with Hard diff.]
Curve sliders can make the map become more natural instead of elbow ones. << it's optional though, just my opinion.
Yeah, this is probably much I can do, I'm a newbie mapper after all.
Goodluck. :)
Topic Starter
PumpkinIcedTea

Electoz wrote:

Hi, a very quick mod here. Just to return a favor. :D
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Normal
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Be sure to use distance snap in Normal, the distance between notes should be the same
Try to use AiMod to check things out.

Also, [Letterbox in breaks conflicts with Hard diff.]
Curve sliders can make the map become more natural instead of elbow ones. << it's optional though, just my opinion.
Yeah, this is probably much I can do, I'm a newbie mapper after all.
Goodluck. :)
Yeah for normal I know that I have to use distance snap but I found it to be very restrictive sometimes, I will go over it again and see where I can improve it though. As for the letterbox problem, I have tried lots of things but I have no idea how to get rid of that problem XD . I tried shifting the letterbox but it didn't work either. Do you know a fix? Thanks and don't worry I'm a newbie mapper too XD
Electoz

Ars Novaa wrote:

Yeah for normal I know that I have to use distance snap but I found it to be very restrictive sometimes, I will go over it again and see where I can improve it though. As for the letterbox problem, I have tried lots of things but I have no idea how to get rid of that problem XD . I tried shifting the letterbox but it didn't work either. Do you know a fix? Thanks and don't worry I'm a newbie mapper too XD


Be sure to check this box in every difficulties, so they don't conflict with each other, that's it.
Topic Starter
PumpkinIcedTea

Electoz wrote:

Ars Novaa wrote:

Yeah for normal I know that I have to use distance snap but I found it to be very restrictive sometimes, I will go over it again and see where I can improve it though. As for the letterbox problem, I have tried lots of things but I have no idea how to get rid of that problem XD . I tried shifting the letterbox but it didn't work either. Do you know a fix? Thanks and don't worry I'm a newbie mapper too XD


Be sure to check this box in every difficulties, so they don't conflict with each other, that's it.
Ahhh yes ! That fixed it ! Thanks alot !
Lexis

Normal



I think too many sliders are straight. Change that please.

01:04:879 (2,3,4) - 3 sliders

01:40:624 (4) - This slider need to be more long/big.

02:27:858 (2,3,4,5) - 2 sliders

02:39:347 (7) - Make a littlest slider but with a reverse

02:40:305 - Begin a slider, erase the 8, and end the slider here → 02:40:464 -

02:42:220 (1) - Change this slider

Hard



00:22:752 (5) - Change this slider.

00:26:901 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - You can make sliders here

01:02:326 (1,2,3) - /!\ Spacing

01:04:879 (4,5,6) - Same

01:55:464 (6,7) - Slider

02:02:964 (1,2) - Slider
Topic Starter
PumpkinIcedTea

Dono027 wrote:

Normal



I think too many sliders are straight. Change that please.

01:04:879 (2,3,4) - 3 sliders

01:40:624 (4) - This slider need to be more long/big.

02:27:858 (2,3,4,5) - 2 sliders

02:39:347 (7) - Make a littlest slider but with a reverse

02:40:305 - Begin a slider, erase the 8, and end the slider here → 02:40:464 -

02:42:220 (1) - Change this slider

Hard



00:22:752 (5) - Change this slider.

00:26:901 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - You can make sliders here

01:02:326 (1,2,3) - /!\ Spacing

01:04:879 (4,5,6) - Same

01:55:464 (6,7) - Slider

02:02:964 (1,2) - Slider
Thank you very much for your help ! I'll implement these changes the next chance I get ! :)
Topic Starter
PumpkinIcedTea

Ars Novaa wrote:

Dono027 wrote:

Normal



I think too many sliders are straight. Change that please.

01:04:879 (2,3,4) - 3 sliders I removed 2 hitcircles and replaced them with a slider

01:40:624 (4) - This slider need to be more long/big. Fixed

02:27:858 (2,3,4,5) - 2 sliders Fixed

02:39:347 (7) - Make a littlest slider but with a reverse Fixed

02:40:305 - Begin a slider, erase the 8, and end the slider here → 02:40:464 - Fixed

02:42:220 (1) - Change this slider Fixed

Hard



00:22:752 (5) - Change this slider. Fixed

00:26:901 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - You can make sliders here Fixed

01:02:326 (1,2,3) - /!\ Spacing I didn't change this one because I wanted that part to accompany the fast paced part of the song

01:04:879 (4,5,6) - Same As above ^

01:55:464 (6,7) - Slider Fixed

02:02:964 (1,2) - Slider Fixed
Thank you very much for your help ! I'll implement these changes the next chance I get ! :)
MondoKuma
Hey thanks for modding my map so now im gonna mod your :D

First Thing is that i went over the normal difficulty several times but i couldnt find anything to correct :P Good Job!


Hard Difficult: i could only find two things first off some combos are only 4 or 5 like
01:33:603 (4) -

Also some sliders seemed like they ended too early like 01:55:464 (6) -

Other than that the others covered it Good job and Great map :D
Topic Starter
PumpkinIcedTea

MondoKuma wrote:

Hey thanks for modding my map so now im gonna mod your :D

First Thing is that i went over the normal difficulty several times but i couldnt find anything to correct :P Good Job! Thanks :D


Hard Difficult: i could only find two things first off some combos are only 4 or 5 like
01:33:603 (4) - Fixed

Also some sliders seemed like they ended too early like 01:55:464 (6) - I ended this one early to match the rhythm of the song

Other than that the others covered it Good job and Great map :D
Thanks for you help !
gameuse
Hi there I will try to cover as much stuff as I can, thnx for doing m4m!

By Personal Preference put the preview point here 01:37:113
I personally will not put in beatsnap divisor over 1/2 unless I was making a 3.5 star plus beatmap
Just to let you know that people usually increase volume in inheritance timings in kiai mode
Check your distance snaps by opening ai mod using (Ctrl + Shift + A) or (Command + Shift + A)
00:13:018 (2) - This note is unnecessary but end the slider here
00:41:901 Kiai time should start here
00:56:901-00:57:698 remove spinner and replace with something like this
00:58:177 - 00:59:454 ^
00:59:773-01:01:050 try something like this
01:01:528 (1) - end at 01:02:007
add spinner at 01:02:326 and end at 01:04:241
01:14:693 Inheritance timing here and also decrease volume to about 40%
01:38:071 Kiai start here and increase volume to about 70-80%
01:48:284 replace with a returning slider here
02:02:964 (1,2) - replace with a slider
02:20:198 another inheritance time should be added here with a lower volume
02:42:220 Inheritance timing right here and also decrease volume to about 30%
03:03:523 Kiai start here and increase volume to about 70-80%
03:21:475 add a double repeating slider here (first repeat on the next red tick and the next on the following white tick)
03:23:071 add slider here which ends at 03:23:550
03:23:869 should start slider here
03:26:581 bad place to end, if you are looking to end early consider 03:21:475 however i encourage you to show your love and finish the song
HP Drain rate 5?
Just to let you know that people usually increase volume in inheritance timings in kiai mode
Check your distance snaps by opening ai mod using (Ctrl + Shift + A) or (Command + Shift + A)
00:00:730 (2,3) - inconsistent spacing check distance snap
00:44:454 (5,6,7) - ^
00:47:007 (2,3) - add a slider here instead of 2 separate notes
00:52:592 (3,4) - consider replacing these two notes with a slider
00:52:911 (4,5) - these two notes are unnecessary
00:54:188 (4,5) - ^
00:58:975 add a note here?
01:07:432 add a new inheritance timing here with a soft volume
01:07:432 I should barely hear the notes until the next inheritance timing
01:15:252 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Unstack everything and spacing is inconsistant (distance snap problem)
01:44:773 delete the note here
01:39:028 (2,3) - ^
01:56:262 (8,9) - for a 3 star map this is way to far apart
01:55:943 Inheritance should be here
01:57:698 - 01:58:496 could use some more notes
01:58:496 start spinner here and end at the same place
02:02:964 (1,2) - replace this with a long slider
02:20:837 slider velocity here should be reduced to around 0.7-0.8 from the original which is 1.30
02:23:230 slow down the inheritance timing and replace 02:23:230 (9) - with a slider that ends 02:23:709 at slider velocity at the very minimum
02:42:220 inheritance timing should be here
02:50:198 (1,2) - slider here
03:01:209 returning slider here
03:01:369 (6) - delete this, sounds weird
03:21:954 (9) - replace this with a spinner which ends at 03:22:752
03:23:230 - 03:23:709 slider
03:24:028 spinner start here and end at the same place
03:26:581 bad place to end, if you are looking to end early consider 03:21:475 however i encourage you to show your love and finish the song
KEEP IN MIND
[*]Distance Snapping for both maps needs to be perfect in order for a shot to get it ranked
[*]Inheritance timing needs to be on the note to make the note snap
[*]Need some volume adjustments at kiai times
[*]This is a fast song and the ending of the map is too sudden for this fast paced song
[*]This song could be mapped in 1/4 for 3.5 star plus difficulties only adjust your maps to 1/2
[*]Some of your inheritance timings before and after kiais are way too loud, these timings should not be louder or as loud as kiai
[*]The kiai is like the chorus, make it stand out
[*]Stack leniency at 5
[*]By Personal Preference put the preview point here 01:37:113

I feel like there is no need to post all the distance snap problems because someone already mentioned in a previous mod that you have a lot of them that are easily fixable.
I hope this will help you and good luck!
DONE
Topic Starter
PumpkinIcedTea

gameuse wrote:

Hi there I will try to cover as much stuff as I can, thnx for doing m4m!

By Personal Preference put the preview point here 01:37:113
I personally will not put in beatsnap divisor over 1/2 unless I was making a 3.5 star plus beatmap
Just to let you know that people usually increase volume in inheritance timings in kiai mode
Check your distance snaps by opening ai mod using (Ctrl + Shift + A) or (Command + Shift + A)
00:13:018 (2) - This note is unnecessary but end the slider here
00:41:901 Kiai time should start here
00:56:901-00:57:698 remove spinner and replace with something like this
00:58:177 - 00:59:454 ^
00:59:773-01:01:050 try something like this
01:01:528 (1) - end at 01:02:007
add spinner at 01:02:326 and end at 01:04:241
01:14:693 Inheritance timing here and also decrease volume to about 40%
01:38:071 Kiai start here and increase volume to about 70-80%
01:48:284 replace with a returning slider here
02:02:964 (1,2) - replace with a slider
02:20:198 another inheritance time should be added here with a lower volume
02:42:220 Inheritance timing right here and also decrease volume to about 30%
03:03:523 Kiai start here and increase volume to about 70-80%
03:21:475 add a double repeating slider here (first repeat on the next red tick and the next on the following white tick)
03:23:071 add slider here which ends at 03:23:550
03:23:869 should start slider here
03:26:581 bad place to end, if you are looking to end early consider 03:21:475 however i encourage you to show your love and finish the song
HP Drain rate 5?
Just to let you know that people usually increase volume in inheritance timings in kiai mode
Check your distance snaps by opening ai mod using (Ctrl + Shift + A) or (Command + Shift + A)
00:00:730 (2,3) - inconsistent spacing check distance snap
00:44:454 (5,6,7) - ^
00:47:007 (2,3) - add a slider here instead of 2 separate notes
00:52:592 (3,4) - consider replacing these two notes with a slider
00:52:911 (4,5) - these two notes are unnecessary
00:54:188 (4,5) - ^
00:58:975 add a note here?
01:07:432 add a new inheritance timing here with a soft volume
01:07:432 I should barely hear the notes until the next inheritance timing
01:15:252 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Unstack everything and spacing is inconsistant (distance snap problem)
01:44:773 delete the note here
01:39:028 (2,3) - ^
01:56:262 (8,9) - for a 3 star map this is way to far apart
01:55:943 Inheritance should be here
01:57:698 - 01:58:496 could use some more notes
01:58:496 start spinner here and end at the same place
02:02:964 (1,2) - replace this with a long slider
02:20:837 slider velocity here should be reduced to around 0.7-0.8 from the original which is 1.30
02:23:230 slow down the inheritance timing and replace 02:23:230 (9) - with a slider that ends 02:23:709 at slider velocity at the very minimum
02:42:220 inheritance timing should be here
02:50:198 (1,2) - slider here
03:01:209 returning slider here
03:01:369 (6) - delete this, sounds weird
03:21:954 (9) - replace this with a spinner which ends at 03:22:752
03:23:230 - 03:23:709 slider
03:24:028 spinner start here and end at the same place
03:26:581 bad place to end, if you are looking to end early consider 03:21:475 however i encourage you to show your love and finish the song
KEEP IN MIND
[*]Distance Snapping for both maps needs to be perfect in order for a shot to get it ranked
[*]Inheritance timing needs to be on the note to make the note snap
[*]Need some volume adjustments at kiai times
[*]This is a fast song and the ending of the map is too sudden for this fast paced song
[*]This song could be mapped in 1/4 for 3.5 star plus difficulties only adjust your maps to 1/2
[*]Some of your inheritance timings before and after kiais are way too loud, these timings should not be louder or as loud as kiai
[*]The kiai is like the chorus, make it stand out
[*]Stack leniency at 5
[*]By Personal Preference put the preview point here 01:37:113

I feel like there is no need to post all the distance snap problems because someone already mentioned in a previous mod that you have a lot of them that are easily fixable.
I hope this will help you and good luck!
DONE
Thank you ! I will make the necessary changes :)
hanyuu_nanodesu
Hi, from my modding Q
Thank you for waiting -w-

Red : unrankable issue
Blue : highly suggested to fix
Black : normal suggestion
Green : random comment
Bold : slightly more important than others

[General]
  1. I'm pretty sure you can make Insane with 188 BPM... Or even Extra .-. the absence of those diffs kinda surprised me .-.
  2. Use this for title: 約束の空へ ~私のいた場所~ and for the romanized one: Yakusoku no Sora he ~Watashi no Ita Basho~ (pay attention to the capitalized word)
  3. The source should be "Strike Witches Movie" (add movie since it from the movie, not the series) or you can replace it with this instead: 劇場版 ストライクウィッチーズ (the Japanese name) and move" Strike Witches Movie to the tags. Oh yeah, you don't need comma to separate tags so remove it and you don't need "Yakusoku No Sora" either since it's already mentioned in the title, remove it.
  4. And for the tags, you can add the English version of the title (you can do your own research, I'm to lazy to do this xD), or the anime studio, or anything else that haven't mentioned above.
  5. You can set combo colors to support the background more (song setup -> colours) I suggest to use grey, dark blue, dark purple, and anything else you feel appropriate
  6. Oh yeah, go to song setup -> design, uncheck "Widescreen Support", it's only used if you have storyboard and you don't have any so it's unnecessary. Furthermore, at your folder, why do you have two OSB file? it's only used if you have storyboard, hence it's unnecessary, just delete it. Just in case: http://puu.sh/kVyMn/c8b6358b53.jpg

I'm just gonna mod Normal

  1. This Normal could (if not should) be much harder. Like between 1.8 till 2.2 stars. I'll help you to make this harder
  2. First of all, I think the SV is too slow. Normal SV is usually between 1.00 - 1.20, but 0.80 is still acceptable somehow. If you want to remap, you can increase the SV; but if you are too lazy (like me xD) you can keep it. You can try increasing the star diff with anything else like increasing the density.
  3. I suggest using 3 - 3.5 CS for Normal
  4. Oh yeah, and check your AiMod (ctrl+shift+A) and check the "Check Distance Snap" option. You have pretty much DS problems and for Normal, it should be clear so be sure to fix all of them. http://puu.sh/kVyYK/1ab0b256c9.png
  5. 00:01:050 (1,2) - This is called a "polarity problem" Polarity problem is a problem that appeared when a mapper change rhythm from white and red tick to blue tick like http://puu.sh/kVz1R/a8ee31f481.jpg usually it's only between white-red to blue (like the example) but for Normal and Easy, sudden change from white pattern to red pattern (like your current problem) can also be classified as polarity problem (since red tick could be assumed as blue tick at Easy and Normal). There are several way to fix this, watch https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=53PkFLrK8Ws For this case, I suggest to use reverse slider like http://puu.sh/kVz7P/60a25e1ff8.jpg or since it Normal (the harder pattern) http://puu.sh/kVz9A/ef2b95da9a.jpg or anything else appropriate. This would be the same as the other case. Your map have pretty much of this problem so pay more attention to it next time ^^ I will not tell you about this problem after this assuming you will fix them yourself~
  6. 00:08:709 (7) - End this here 00:09:826 the big sound is there http://puu.sh/kVze3/d3134f8512.jpg
  7. 00:31:528 (1) - Umm, maybe do it like this http://puu.sh/kVzjZ/a77ceb44cf.jpg
  8. 00:38:390 (1) - Just end this at big white tick
  9. 00:41:901 (1,2) - Actually the vocal end at red tick, so just end the slider there. I suggest to add reverse to both of them to increase density and for better polarity -w-
  10. 00:44:454 (3) - End this here 00:45:571 and then add a note here 00:45:890 that should fit much better. http://puu.sh/kVzrs/4cbf8f4a75.jpg
  11. 00:47:645 (2) - End this at big white tick. Add a note at the white tick after that if you want, to increase density http://puu.sh/kVzts/cd970894cd.jpg
  12. 00:48:922 (4,5) - Actually, the whole rhythm from here 00:48:922 to here 00:52:113 try to do it like this http://puu.sh/kVzwH/b6ff937a3b.jpg (sorry I have to shrink the timeline so much to fit the entire rhythm to one screenshot x-x)
  13. 00:55:464 (4) - maybe like this http://puu.sh/kVzA8/fd8760abba.jpg the sound here 00:55:784 is just to big to ignore
  14. 00:56:901 (1) - Unnecessary spinner, just delete it an map this part.
  15. 01:04:879 (2,3) - I suggest to just delete this and add a short break from 01:02:326 to 01:07:432
  16. Okay I'll end it here for now. Your main problem here is you stick to vocal to much so there are would be too many unnecessary break between notes, usually it's old map that uses that style. Second, you roughly follow the vocal without really paying attention to big sounds so they are often got ignored or less emphasized (a big sound would be emphasized better if it's clickable (supported with circle or slider head) and would be less emphasized if unclickable (supported with slider end or slider reverse), pay more attention to it. And your slider looks like slider from old maps xD the update of the slider formula is a grace, be sure to take benefit from it. You can read this for that t/37194 t/208596 these are pretty old so you can make more modification yourself. I have to say that actually almost everything at this mod would be blue colored but I'm just to lazy to color it xD. But overall, it's pretty neat for first map -w- it can be ranked, but it will need pretty much work to fit with current pro-beatmapper quality.

Good luck for this :3

Edit : I did a quick glance at Hard and find the same main problem at Normal : you stick too much to vocal; so it looks like old map xD. Try to map the background music more. Take a glance at new ranked Hard maps and find the pattern, you should learn from that -w-
Topic Starter
PumpkinIcedTea

hanyuu_nanodesu wrote:

Hi, from my modding Q
Thank you for waiting -w-

Red : unrankable issue
Blue : highly suggested to fix
Black : normal suggestion
Green : random comment
Bold : slightly more important than others

[General]
  1. I'm pretty sure you can make Insane with 188 BPM... Or even Extra .-. the absence of those diffs kinda surprised me .-.
  2. Use this for title: 約束の空へ ~私のいた場所~ and for the romanized one: Yakusoku no Sora he ~Watashi no Ita Basho~ (pay attention to the capitalized word)
  3. The source should be "Strike Witches Movie" (add movie since it from the movie, not the series) or you can replace it with this instead: 劇場版 ストライクウィッチーズ (the Japanese name) and move" Strike Witches Movie to the tags. Oh yeah, you don't need comma to separate tags so remove it and you don't need "Yakusoku No Sora" either since it's already mentioned in the title, remove it.
  4. And for the tags, you can add the English version of the title (you can do your own research, I'm to lazy to do this xD), or the anime studio, or anything else that haven't mentioned above.
  5. You can set combo colors to support the background more (song setup -> colours) I suggest to use grey, dark blue, dark purple, and anything else you feel appropriate
  6. Oh yeah, go to song setup -> design, uncheck "Widescreen Support", it's only used if you have storyboard and you don't have any so it's unnecessary. Furthermore, at your folder, why do you have two OSB file? it's only used if you have storyboard, hence it's unnecessary, just delete it. Just in case: http://puu.sh/kVyMn/c8b6358b53.jpg

I'm just gonna mod Normal

  1. This Normal could (if not should) be much harder. Like between 1.8 till 2.2 stars. I'll help you to make this harder
  2. First of all, I think the SV is too slow. Normal SV is usually between 1.00 - 1.20, but 0.80 is still acceptable somehow. If you want to remap, you can increase the SV; but if you are too lazy (like me xD) you can keep it. You can try increasing the star diff with anything else like increasing the density.
  3. I suggest using 3 - 3.5 CS for Normal
  4. Oh yeah, and check your AiMod (ctrl+shift+A) and check the "Check Distance Snap" option. You have pretty much DS problems and for Normal, it should be clear so be sure to fix all of them. http://puu.sh/kVyYK/1ab0b256c9.png
  5. 00:01:050 (1,2) - This is called a "polarity problem" Polarity problem is a problem that appeared when a mapper change rhythm from white and red tick to blue tick like http://puu.sh/kVz1R/a8ee31f481.jpg usually it's only between white-red to blue (like the example) but for Normal and Easy, sudden change from white pattern to red pattern (like your current problem) can also be classified as polarity problem (since red tick could be assumed as blue tick at Easy and Normal). There are several way to fix this, watch https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=53PkFLrK8Ws For this case, I suggest to use reverse slider like http://puu.sh/kVz7P/60a25e1ff8.jpg or since it Normal (the harder pattern) http://puu.sh/kVz9A/ef2b95da9a.jpg or anything else appropriate. This would be the same as the other case. Your map have pretty much of this problem so pay more attention to it next time ^^ I will not tell you about this problem after this assuming you will fix them yourself~
  6. 00:08:709 (7) - End this here 00:09:826 the big sound is there http://puu.sh/kVze3/d3134f8512.jpg
  7. 00:31:528 (1) - Umm, maybe do it like this http://puu.sh/kVzjZ/a77ceb44cf.jpg
  8. 00:38:390 (1) - Just end this at big white tick
  9. 00:41:901 (1,2) - Actually the vocal end at red tick, so just end the slider there. I suggest to add reverse to both of them to increase density and for better polarity -w-
  10. 00:44:454 (3) - End this here 00:45:571 and then add a note here 00:45:890 that should fit much better. http://puu.sh/kVzrs/4cbf8f4a75.jpg
  11. 00:47:645 (2) - End this at big white tick. Add a note at the white tick after that if you want, to increase density http://puu.sh/kVzts/cd970894cd.jpg
  12. 00:48:922 (4,5) - Actually, the whole rhythm from here 00:48:922 to here 00:52:113 try to do it like this http://puu.sh/kVzwH/b6ff937a3b.jpg (sorry I have to shrink the timeline so much to fit the entire rhythm to one screenshot x-x)
  13. 00:55:464 (4) - maybe like this http://puu.sh/kVzA8/fd8760abba.jpg the sound here 00:55:784 is just to big to ignore
  14. 00:56:901 (1) - Unnecessary spinner, just delete it an map this part.
  15. 01:04:879 (2,3) - I suggest to just delete this and add a short break from 01:02:326 to 01:07:432
  16. Okay I'll end it here for now. Your main problem here is you stick to vocal to much so there are would be too many unnecessary break between notes, usually it's old map that uses that style. Second, you roughly follow the vocal without really paying attention to big sounds so they are often got ignored or less emphasized (a big sound would be emphasized better if it's clickable (supported with circle or slider head) and would be less emphasized if unclickable (supported with slider end or slider reverse), pay more attention to it. And your slider looks like slider from old maps xD the update of the slider formula is a grace, be sure to take benefit from it. You can read this for that t/37194 t/208596 these are pretty old so you can make more modification yourself. I have to say that actually almost everything at this mod would be blue colored but I'm just to lazy to color it xD. But overall, it's pretty neat for first map -w- it can be ranked, but it will need pretty much work to fit with current pro-beatmapper quality.

Good luck for this :3
Thanks Alot ! I'll get to it when I have the time !
rs_fadeaway
hi~ from my queue :3

[Nornal]
this Normal actually is an Easy
Normal diff should use 1/2 snap most time
00:41:901 (1,2,3) - u can not make sliders, like these , sometimes end on red tick, sometimes end on blue tick
..well i think first u should try to put notes on the right rhythm.for example:
01:38:071 (1,2,3) - here, remake like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3868421
01:40:624 (4) - and from here, the vocal is 0...0.0...0...0...0...0 (0= a note, . =no note; 1/4 snap),the vocal is on the red tick,but in normal or easy diff, u sometime have to give up the vocal, so just do some slider from white tick to red or white
try to follow the drum

[Hard]
change CS to 4
00:41:901 (6) - NC here
02:26:901 (5) - remake like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3868475
02:39:427 (1) - remove this spinner, and map this part, until 02:40:624 - after here can put a spinner and end as it was
02:52:592 (8,1) - too close
this diff much better than Normal !

well, keep working on it, and check others' map will help a lot
GL :)
Topic Starter
PumpkinIcedTea

rs_fadeaway wrote:

hi~ from my queue :3

[Nornal]
this Normal actually is an Easy
Normal diff should use 1/2 snap most time
00:41:901 (1,2,3) - u can not make sliders, like these , sometimes end on red tick, sometimes end on blue tick
..well i think first u should try to put notes on the right rhythm.for example:
01:38:071 (1,2,3) - here, remake like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3868421
01:40:624 (4) - and from here, the vocal is 0...0.0...0...0...0...0 (0= a note, . =no note; 1/4 snap),the vocal is on the red tick,but in normal or easy diff, u sometime have to give up the vocal, so just do some slider from white tick to red or white
try to follow the drum

[Hard]
change CS to 4
00:41:901 (6) - NC here
02:26:901 (5) - remake like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3868475
02:39:427 (1) - remove this spinner, and map this part, until 02:40:624 - after here can put a spinner and end as it was
02:52:592 (8,1) - too close
this diff much better than Normal !

well, keep working on it, and check others' map will help a lot
GL :)
Hi ! Thanks for helping. Uhh but at this point in time, I'm making very big changes to Normal and Hard mode . I'll take note of the changes, but would it be too much to ask for a possible remod in the future?
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