Hi there I will try to cover as much stuff as I can, thnx for doing m4m!
By Personal Preference put the preview point here 01:37:113
I personally will not put in beatsnap divisor over 1/2 unless I was making a 3.5 star plus beatmap
I feel like there is no need to post all the distance snap problems because someone already mentioned in a previous mod that you have a lot of them that are easily fixable.
I hope this will help you and good luck!
DONE
By Personal Preference put the preview point here 01:37:113
I personally will not put in beatsnap divisor over 1/2 unless I was making a 3.5 star plus beatmap
Click me for Normal
Just to let you know that people usually increase volume in inheritance timings in kiai mode
Check your distance snaps by opening ai mod using (Ctrl + Shift + A) or (Command + Shift + A)
00:13:018 (2) - This note is unnecessary but end the slider here
00:41:901 Kiai time should start here
00:56:901-00:57:698 remove spinner and replace with something like this
00:58:177 - 00:59:454 ^
00:59:773-01:01:050 try something like this
01:01:528 (1) - end at 01:02:007
add spinner at 01:02:326 and end at 01:04:241
01:14:693 Inheritance timing here and also decrease volume to about 40%
01:38:071 Kiai start here and increase volume to about 70-80%
01:48:284 replace with a returning slider here
02:02:964 (1,2) - replace with a slider
02:20:198 another inheritance time should be added here with a lower volume
02:42:220 Inheritance timing right here and also decrease volume to about 30%
03:03:523 Kiai start here and increase volume to about 70-80%
03:21:475 add a double repeating slider here (first repeat on the next red tick and the next on the following white tick)
03:23:071 add slider here which ends at 03:23:550
03:23:869 should start slider here
03:26:581 bad place to end, if you are looking to end early consider 03:21:475 however i encourage you to show your love and finish the song
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HP Drain rate 5?
Just to let you know that people usually increase volume in inheritance timings in kiai mode
Check your distance snaps by opening ai mod using (Ctrl + Shift + A) or (Command + Shift + A)
00:00:730 (2,3) - inconsistent spacing check distance snap
00:44:454 (5,6,7) - ^
00:47:007 (2,3) - add a slider here instead of 2 separate notes
00:52:592 (3,4) - consider replacing these two notes with a slider
00:52:911 (4,5) - these two notes are unnecessary
00:54:188 (4,5) - ^
00:58:975 add a note here?
01:07:432 add a new inheritance timing here with a soft volume
01:07:432 I should barely hear the notes until the next inheritance timing
01:15:252 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Unstack everything and spacing is inconsistant (distance snap problem)
01:44:773 delete the note here
01:39:028 (2,3) - ^
01:56:262 (8,9) - for a 3 star map this is way to far apart
01:55:943 Inheritance should be here
01:57:698 - 01:58:496 could use some more notes
01:58:496 start spinner here and end at the same place
02:02:964 (1,2) - replace this with a long slider
02:20:837 slider velocity here should be reduced to around 0.7-0.8 from the original which is 1.30
02:23:230 slow down the inheritance timing and replace 02:23:230 (9) - with a slider that ends 02:23:709 at slider velocity at the very minimum
02:42:220 inheritance timing should be here
02:50:198 (1,2) - slider here
03:01:209 returning slider here
03:01:369 (6) - delete this, sounds weird
03:21:954 (9) - replace this with a spinner which ends at 03:22:752
03:23:230 - 03:23:709 slider
03:24:028 spinner start here and end at the same place
03:26:581 bad place to end, if you are looking to end early consider 03:21:475 however i encourage you to show your love and finish the song
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KEEP IN MIND
[*]Distance Snapping for both maps needs to be perfect in order for a shot to get it ranked
[*]Inheritance timing needs to be on the note to make the note snap
[*]Need some volume adjustments at kiai times
[*]This is a fast song and the ending of the map is too sudden for this fast paced song
[*]This song could be mapped in 1/4 for 3.5 star plus difficulties only adjust your maps to 1/2
[*]Some of your inheritance timings before and after kiais are way too loud, these timings should not be louder or as loud as kiai
[*]The kiai is like the chorus, make it stand out
[*]Stack leniency at 5
[*]By Personal Preference put the preview point here 01:37:113
[*]Distance Snapping for both maps needs to be perfect in order for a shot to get it ranked
[*]Inheritance timing needs to be on the note to make the note snap
[*]Need some volume adjustments at kiai times
[*]This is a fast song and the ending of the map is too sudden for this fast paced song
[*]This song could be mapped in 1/4 for 3.5 star plus difficulties only adjust your maps to 1/2
[*]Some of your inheritance timings before and after kiais are way too loud, these timings should not be louder or as loud as kiai
[*]The kiai is like the chorus, make it stand out
[*]Stack leniency at 5
[*]By Personal Preference put the preview point here 01:37:113
I feel like there is no need to post all the distance snap problems because someone already mentioned in a previous mod that you have a lot of them that are easily fixable.
I hope this will help you and good luck!