Thy Mod.
Note:
• First of all, I would want to apologize if I ever say something that will hurt your feelings as a mapper. Remember that I only want to give advices, suggestions, recommendations and sideas for some improvement in your map. Please do understand and thank you.
• do not be afraid to reject some parts of my mod. I am not perfect and I am not always right. But I do give my best to mod with sense. Also, I do not bite rawr.
• If I suggest to "remove or ctrl function moves" on certain note/s, do not forget and be sure to move the hitsound on the other note beside the suggested note. This is because I only mod the notes and with that, I do not pay attention on the hitsounds placements.
• First of all, I would want to apologize if I ever say something that will hurt your feelings as a mapper. Remember that I only want to give advices, suggestions, recommendations and sideas for some improvement in your map. Please do understand and thank you.
• do not be afraid to reject some parts of my mod. I am not perfect and I am not always right. But I do give my best to mod with sense. Also, I do not bite rawr.
• If I suggest to "remove or ctrl function moves" on certain note/s, do not forget and be sure to move the hitsound on the other note beside the suggested note. This is because I only mod the notes and with that, I do not pay attention on the hitsounds placements.
[General]
Audio: OK!
BG: OK!
BPM: OK!
Offset: OK!
Preview Time: OK!
AiMod:
• No problem!
Column:
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[Beginner]
SPOILER
01:15:512 - add note to 3, where it is like beat + sound effect. The beat sound is stronger than the double key press on 01:14:523 (74523|1,74523|3) - . It is almost similar to 01:13:205 (73205|1,73205|3) - which has an impact.
01:45:183 (105183|0,106501|2) - I would suggest to remove these LNs and re-position the remaining single notes. The reason is because holding LNs while tapping the singles gives a hard time especially on those mania players who just begin playing. Suggesting some patterns similar to https://puu.sh/uMkVE/e990cc0f48.png where the doubles emphasizes the cymbals and the singles flow still on-going.
02:45:512 - add note? since you made the similar sound doubles at 02:24:413 -
03:04:139 (184139|2,184303|1) - ctrl H for more comfortable execution.
01:45:183 (105183|0,106501|2) - I would suggest to remove these LNs and re-position the remaining single notes. The reason is because holding LNs while tapping the singles gives a hard time especially on those mania players who just begin playing. Suggesting some patterns similar to https://puu.sh/uMkVE/e990cc0f48.png where the doubles emphasizes the cymbals and the singles flow still on-going.
02:45:512 - add note? since you made the similar sound doubles at 02:24:413 -
03:04:139 (184139|2,184303|1) - ctrl H for more comfortable execution.
[A's Standard]
SPOILER
00:18:131 (18131|0) - Fix your snap here as it is snapped on the previous timing point. Check other difficulties snap.
00:26:887 (26887|0) - move to 3 and 00:27:876 (27876|3) - move to 2 for comfortability.
00:32:986 (32986|3,33151|1) - would suggest to add note to change these singles into double for strong sound emphasis.
00:33:975 - add note to 1, strong starting sound.
00:33:975 - until 00:44:524 - I recommend to add more notes as this part seems to be easier than Beginner's which quite feels off. Adding notes will also balance the part to other harder parts. You decide.
00:41:887 - add note to 1 impact sound.
00:49:799 - ^ to 4
00:56:722 - ^ to 4
01:25:567 (85567|2,85732|1,85897|2) - ctrl H, the pitch is on 01:25:567 (85567|2,85897|2) - differs with 01:25:238 (85238|2,86227|2) -
01:39:908 - until 01:44:523 - Buff the part with the percussion, same as previous reason it is because its easier than the Beginner's. Though I understand that you only wanted to follow the melody-like sound. You decide.
01:52:765 (112765|0) - Better if moved to 3 and change to LN until 01:53:095 - for that sweet sound effect. Beginner did LN on this part.
02:24:413 - add note to 4 impact sound
02:24:743 - ^ to 1 or 3
02:35:292 - ^ to 3
02:43:203 - add note to 2 and change 02:43:205 (163205|0) - to LN until 02:43:699 - for focusing the long sound that can be heard here.
02:45:512 - add note to 3 or 4 for the strong beat finish.
02:45:842 - ^ to 2 or 3
02:56:391 - ^ to 3
03:01:666 - ^ to 2
03:02:985 - ^ to 1
03:04:303 - ^ to 3
03:04:303 - until the end - Add more notes for the percussion as they are more consistent and audible than the melody that you want to follow. It feels empty while you hear those percussion but no notes. Example is like 03:04:468 - and 03:04:633 - where you can here that strong beat but no notes. If there are notes it would be more satisfying. Variations and Combinations with the melody can come up with consistent and better patterns.
03:06:941 (186941|1) - should end up at 03:08:260 - and 03:07:765 (187765|3) - starts at where the sound raises up at 03:08:260 - ending at 03:09:578 -
00:26:887 (26887|0) - move to 3 and 00:27:876 (27876|3) - move to 2 for comfortability.
00:32:986 (32986|3,33151|1) - would suggest to add note to change these singles into double for strong sound emphasis.
00:33:975 - add note to 1, strong starting sound.
00:33:975 - until 00:44:524 - I recommend to add more notes as this part seems to be easier than Beginner's which quite feels off. Adding notes will also balance the part to other harder parts. You decide.
00:41:887 - add note to 1 impact sound.
00:49:799 - ^ to 4
00:56:722 - ^ to 4
01:25:567 (85567|2,85732|1,85897|2) - ctrl H, the pitch is on 01:25:567 (85567|2,85897|2) - differs with 01:25:238 (85238|2,86227|2) -
01:39:908 - until 01:44:523 - Buff the part with the percussion, same as previous reason it is because its easier than the Beginner's. Though I understand that you only wanted to follow the melody-like sound. You decide.
01:52:765 (112765|0) - Better if moved to 3 and change to LN until 01:53:095 - for that sweet sound effect. Beginner did LN on this part.
02:24:413 - add note to 4 impact sound
02:24:743 - ^ to 1 or 3
02:35:292 - ^ to 3
02:43:203 - add note to 2 and change 02:43:205 (163205|0) - to LN until 02:43:699 - for focusing the long sound that can be heard here.
02:45:512 - add note to 3 or 4 for the strong beat finish.
02:45:842 - ^ to 2 or 3
02:56:391 - ^ to 3
03:01:666 - ^ to 2
03:02:985 - ^ to 1
03:04:303 - ^ to 3
03:04:303 - until the end - Add more notes for the percussion as they are more consistent and audible than the melody that you want to follow. It feels empty while you hear those percussion but no notes. Example is like 03:04:468 - and 03:04:633 - where you can here that strong beat but no notes. If there are notes it would be more satisfying. Variations and Combinations with the melody can come up with consistent and better patterns.
03:06:941 (186941|1) - should end up at 03:08:260 - and 03:07:765 (187765|3) - starts at where the sound raises up at 03:08:260 - ending at 03:09:578 -
[Hyper]
SPOILER
00:30:019 - until 00:32:986 - note density is almost the same as Another's and I would recommend to nerf it like reducing the doubles into singles. With the light jumpstream, it makes this part the spike of the difficulty.
01:39:578 (99578|0) - move to 3, much better to execute and more balance for both hands.
01:47:161 - add note to 3, cymbals can be heard here like you did at 01:46:501 (106501|0,106501|3) -
01:49:880 (109880|0) - move to 2 for comfortability.
02:03:314 - strong beat here, add note to 2
02:12:710 (132710|3,133040|2) - change to LN to emphasize the long synth
01:39:578 (99578|0) - move to 3, much better to execute and more balance for both hands.
01:47:161 - add note to 3, cymbals can be heard here like you did at 01:46:501 (106501|0,106501|3) -
01:49:880 (109880|0) - move to 2 for comfortability.
02:03:314 - strong beat here, add note to 2
02:12:710 (132710|3,133040|2) - change to LN to emphasize the long synth
[Another]
SPOILER
00:24:579 (24579|1) - much better if ends on the white line like you did at Hyper so the vision can be better and comfy to execute.
00:25:568 (25568|2,25651|0) - move to 1 and 2 respectively for comfy execute.
00:56:722 - until 00:57:711 - Just I thought so while test playing the hardest difficulty (which has the same burst as this) the notes are too fast for the sound. I listened 25% playback rate and tested using a different snap and it seems "1/6th" snap fits more on the instrument sound rather than 1/8. I recommend to change it and try it out.
01:15:512 - Same as above, the snap should be 1/6 which fits with the burst sound.
01:48:562 (108562|1,108644|1) - I suggest to re-position the above notes to avoid this mini-jack for the drum roll as this gives of the "fun" killer feeling. Something like https://puu.sh/uMnFd/cc43268cc0.png or move some notes before to avoid changing the patterns above. You decide.
02:13:369 (133369|3) - move to 3 for clearer sight and fits along with 02:13:040 (133040|1,133040|2,133040|3) -
02:22:765 (142765|1,142847|1) - just like before, this can be a combo breaker, recommending https://puu.sh/uMnU6/b7d9f83104.pngwhere the burst can be done comfortably and sight friendly.
03:01:172 (181172|0,181254|0) - unnecessary jack, might want to swap column 03:01:254 (181254|0,181501|1,181584|0,181666|1) - to avoid that.
03:02:820 - add note to 3 kick sound.
00:25:568 (25568|2,25651|0) - move to 1 and 2 respectively for comfy execute.
00:56:722 - until 00:57:711 - Just I thought so while test playing the hardest difficulty (which has the same burst as this) the notes are too fast for the sound. I listened 25% playback rate and tested using a different snap and it seems "1/6th" snap fits more on the instrument sound rather than 1/8. I recommend to change it and try it out.
01:15:512 - Same as above, the snap should be 1/6 which fits with the burst sound.
01:48:562 (108562|1,108644|1) - I suggest to re-position the above notes to avoid this mini-jack for the drum roll as this gives of the "fun" killer feeling. Something like https://puu.sh/uMnFd/cc43268cc0.png or move some notes before to avoid changing the patterns above. You decide.
02:13:369 (133369|3) - move to 3 for clearer sight and fits along with 02:13:040 (133040|1,133040|2,133040|3) -
02:22:765 (142765|1,142847|1) - just like before, this can be a combo breaker, recommending https://puu.sh/uMnU6/b7d9f83104.pngwhere the burst can be done comfortably and sight friendly.
03:01:172 (181172|0,181254|0) - unnecessary jack, might want to swap column 03:01:254 (181254|0,181501|1,181584|0,181666|1) - to avoid that.
03:02:820 - add note to 3 kick sound.
[Ultimate]
SPOILER
00:31:008 (31008|0,31090|2,31172|0,31255|2,31337|0,31420|2,31502|0,31585|2,31667|0,31749|2,31914|2,32079|2,32244|2) - suggesting to re-position some notes so there won't be too much stress on column 1 and column 3. Moving some notes will assure comfortability in this part.
00:56:722 - same as Another's. Snap should be 1/6 according to the instrument sounds.
01:15:512 - Same as above, the snap should be 1/6 which fits with the burst sound.
01:28:617 - add note synth sound
01:28:781 - ^
01:49:551 (109551|3,109592|2,109592|0,109633|1,109674|3,109674|2,109716|0,109757|1,109757|3,109798|2,109839|0,109839|1,109880|3,109922|0,109922|2,109963|1,110004|2,110004|3,110045|0,110086|1,110086|3,110128|2,110169|0,110169|1,110210|3,110251|0,110251|2,110292|1,110334|3,110334|2,110375|0,110416|3,110416|1) - some doubles are unnecessary in this part as you made it like a high bpm jumpstream creating some combo breakable jacks in the process. Recommending something similar to https://puu.sh/uMoFe/77efef07cf.png where the doubles are only on the audible synth melody. (In the image not all synth melody on the burst are doubled, this is to avoid sudden 1/4 jacks in the burst execution.)
02:02:985 - add note to 2, melody is along with other percussion sound.
02:03:067 - add mini-LN to 1, same as Another's
02:20:045 - add note here as the snare-like sound can be heard here similar to 02:19:633 (139633|2,139633|3,139798|3,139798|2) -
02:20:540 - ^
02:23:342 - Suggesting https://puu.sh/uMp2x/2a7c06b727.png instead to avoid sudden 1/4 on the burst. After all you made similar beat sounds, doubles, like 02:22:106 (142106|2,142106|3,142765|2,142765|1) -
02:44:194 - add LN to 3 until 02:44:358 - since new entry of synth sound can be heard here.
00:56:722 - same as Another's. Snap should be 1/6 according to the instrument sounds.
01:15:512 - Same as above, the snap should be 1/6 which fits with the burst sound.
01:28:617 - add note synth sound
01:28:781 - ^
01:49:551 (109551|3,109592|2,109592|0,109633|1,109674|3,109674|2,109716|0,109757|1,109757|3,109798|2,109839|0,109839|1,109880|3,109922|0,109922|2,109963|1,110004|2,110004|3,110045|0,110086|1,110086|3,110128|2,110169|0,110169|1,110210|3,110251|0,110251|2,110292|1,110334|3,110334|2,110375|0,110416|3,110416|1) - some doubles are unnecessary in this part as you made it like a high bpm jumpstream creating some combo breakable jacks in the process. Recommending something similar to https://puu.sh/uMoFe/77efef07cf.png where the doubles are only on the audible synth melody. (In the image not all synth melody on the burst are doubled, this is to avoid sudden 1/4 jacks in the burst execution.)
02:02:985 - add note to 2, melody is along with other percussion sound.
02:03:067 - add mini-LN to 1, same as Another's
02:20:045 - add note here as the snare-like sound can be heard here similar to 02:19:633 (139633|2,139633|3,139798|3,139798|2) -
02:20:540 - ^
02:23:342 - Suggesting https://puu.sh/uMp2x/2a7c06b727.png instead to avoid sudden 1/4 on the burst. After all you made similar beat sounds, doubles, like 02:22:106 (142106|2,142106|3,142765|2,142765|1) -
02:44:194 - add LN to 3 until 02:44:358 - since new entry of synth sound can be heard here.
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