Knif3rism wrote:

osu!mania Artist Whitelist queue

1|2|3|4

As' Standard

00:26:722 (26722|0,26887|0) - I advise against this for a normal difficulty the 1/2 jack although it isn't much I think it'll be better if you balance the notes out evenly // don't find any issue here. it's pretty well balanced and not too hard for Normal or Standart diff
00:33:315 (33315|2) - I'm not too sure but there is no apparent sound to be heard at this snap, so I don't it's necessary // there's a sound there. and it's still in the rhythm so why not?
01:48:479 (108479|3) - this can be a ln that goes to the 1/2 snap for the drum roll sound // yep. you're right. I think reverting it back to the LN looks much better
02:11:062 (131062|1) - perhaps move this to column 4 to make it flow more nicely and balance it out // uhh... i'll loose the Feels if I do that
02:11:556 (131556|0) - then this should be moved to column 1

The mods below is just suggestions to note placement with the idea of balancing the notes out in mind.
02:12:051 (132051|1) - move to column 2
02:13:040 (133040|1) - move to column 2
02:31:007 (151007|0) - move to column 1
02:34:139 (154139|3) - move to column 4
02:37:188 (157188|1) - move to column 3
02:37:353 (157353|2) - move to column 4
02:37:765 (157765|3) - move to column 4
02:37:930 (157930|1) - move to column 2
02:43:040 (163040|3) - move to column 3
02:57:380 (177380|0) - move to column 1
02:58:287 (178287|1) - move to column 3
02:58:452 (178452|2) - move to column 4
03:00:100 (180100|3) - move to column 4
// I've check all of the suggestion and I am sorry that I must reject all of it because some reason that I can't explain to you

LordTimeWaste wrote:

As i promised in our conversation, here's your full mod!

As' Standart

00:33:151 (33151|1) - Would move this note to col [3] because of the sound // eyy.. you understand my style. OK

Im sorry that the last 2 diffs got not really modded, but i couldn't find anything more. Really good map, good luck with ranking!

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320,192,162628,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,162792,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,162875,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,163040,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,163205,128,0,163699:0:0:0:0:
320,192,163699,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,163864,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,164194,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,164358,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,164441,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,164523,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,164688,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,164853,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,164935,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,165183,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,165265,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,165430,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,165512,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,165842,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,166172,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,166419,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,166584,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,166666,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,166831,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,166996,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,167161,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,167490,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,167738,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,167902,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,167985,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,168150,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,168314,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,168479,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,168727,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,168974,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,169056,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,169139,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,169221,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,169386,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,169633,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,169716,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,169880,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,170128,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,170292,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,170375,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,170457,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,170540,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,170705,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,170952,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,171117,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,171446,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,171694,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,171858,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,171941,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,172106,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,172270,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,172435,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,172765,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,173012,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,173177,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,173342,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,173424,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,173589,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,173754,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,174249,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,174496,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,174578,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,174743,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,174990,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,175238,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,175485,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,175567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,175650,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,175732,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,175897,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,176062,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,176227,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,176391,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,176721,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,176968,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,177133,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,177216,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,177380,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,177545,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,177710,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,178040,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,178287,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,178452,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,178534,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,178617,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,178699,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,178864,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,179029,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,179276,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,179523,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,179606,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,179688,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,179853,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,179935,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,180100,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,180265,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,180347,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,180677,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,180842,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,180924,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,181007,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,181089,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,181254,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,181501,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,181666,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,181996,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,182243,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,182408,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,182490,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,182655,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,182820,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,182902,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,182985,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,183314,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,183562,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,183727,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,183891,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,183974,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,184139,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,184303,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,184798,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,184963,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,185128,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,185292,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,185457,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,185622,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,185787,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,185869,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,185952,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,186034,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,186199,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,186281,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,186364,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,186446,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,186529,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,186611,128,0,186776:0:0:0:0:
64,192,186776,128,0,186941:0:0:0:0:
192,192,186941,128,0,188260:0:0:0:0:
448,192,188260,128,0,189578:0:0:0:0:

LordTimeWaste wrote:

As i promised in our conversation, here's your full mod!

Just to clarify this, if i say something about 0/1/2/3, i mean the 4 keys you are using for playing (0 = most left key, 3 = most right key).
Anyways, let's go!!!

Ultimate

00:11:208 - I think you could make this into a double kinda not suited for some reason
00:16:400 - You could insert a 3-note stream in 1/8 here i dont think so, think its best to keep it simple for this part
00:27:381 - I think this one should only be a double since the second one seems to be louder think its the same clap type(?). emphasized too
00:29:936 - You missed a note here? intended. player will got a better approach if its started on downbeat
00:32:986 (32986|3,32986|0,32986|2,33151|0,33151|2,33151|3) - You could consider to insert short LN's here for the "wush" sound hmm doesnt seem to be my thing so i'll pass :u
00:48:892 (48892|3) - I'd delete this note since it feels more fitting then, the piano stream would feel better to play then, i think
01:03:975 (63975|0) - I'd let this LN end at 01:05:623. I can't here it end earlier uh no? the noise is ended right there. extending it is kinda misleading
01:21:446 - Missed a note here uhhh there's already a note there
01:33:809 (93809|1) - Shouldn't this LN start at 01:33:644? Im not sure if you can shorten it just for playability, but yeah, maybe you can go with it yeah xd. think its more intuitive this way

One or two other things in this diff, but only suggestions to make it better, and my suggestions were not as good as what you already have xD

Another

00:11:208 - You could also make this into a double same reason
00:13:186 - This sounds different then the double before, would change it think its not really affecting much so would like to keep
00:16:400 - Same as in Ultimate, would insert a 1/8th 3-note-stream here again, i want this to be as simple as possible
00:24:579 (24579|3) - Would delete this note since you didn't use doubles for this sound before and the LN beginning should be enough LN and SN represent different sound, so i think its quite fine
00:24:909 (24909|1) - Sounds different then the LN before, would move it to another column i found that this one is better to control.
would like to keep this for now
00:45:513 (45513|3,45513|0,45596|1,45678|2,45760|3) - Shouldn't this be a 1/8th stream from here on? simplified for playability
00:55:953 (55953|3,55953|2,56063|2,56063|3,56172|1,56282|3,56282|2,56392|2,56392|3,56502|1,56612|2,56612|3,56722|3,56722|2,56777|1,56832|0,56887|3,56942|2,56997|1,57052|0,57107|3,57161|2,57216|0,57271|1,57326|2,57381|3,57436|0,57491|1,57546|2,57601|3,57656|0,57711|3,57711|1) - Suggestion for the end: https://puu.sh/vjR4p/175d4180b4.PNG Seems more fitting to me since every second double sounds different then the one before think i'll pass now. the snares placed on the same col to indicate its pitch and loudness which is literally same :u
01:21:446 - Here should be a double hmm seems too low for me
02:43:699 - here should be a double, too this one I agree xd

Man, you really did good on the main part, it seems so perfect

Hyper

00:45:266 (45266|2) - Would still delete this note everyone still notice it as a piano tho so i think deleting it is not necessary
01:28:095 - You could insert a note here for finish i prefer nope for this diff tho
02:08:589 (128589|3,128919|0,128919|1,129084|2,129249|1,129413|3,129496|2,129578|0,129578|1) - Suggestion: https://puu.sh/vjRtD/ada4582337.PNG Feels better then the double above the LN-end, i think changed but still keeping the shield tho.
02:34:963 - Here should be a tripple due to consistancy but there's a stream afterwards so.........
02:44:523 (164523|1,164523|0,164688|3,164770|2,164853|1,164935|0,165018|2,165100|3,165183|1,165265|0,165347|2,165430|3,165512|0,165512|1) - Again Suggestion: https://puu.sh/vjRAt/75eb37a80c.PNG Seems more fitting since A: The Tripple for the finish and B: Double and Tripple sound nearly the same, which is why i would place them in the same columns
02:56:062 - Would add a note here for a tripple same, there's a stream :u

Beginner

01:15:512 - Would add a note here because of the heavy sound its not as heavy as before i think so would like to keep
01:28:040 - Add a note here for the finish

Im sorry that the last 2 diffs got not really modded, but i couldn't find anything more. Really good map, good luck with ranking!

misternopal wrote:

hai~
lanota itu game kan !?
<- pernah nyoba versi gratisnya :v ena mz serasa maen maimai di hape

Beginner

00:31:337 - tambah note
00:31:667 - ^
p.s kalau dua di atas gk ditambah menurutku :
00:45:183 (45183|1,45513|2) - yg ini dihapus karena sebelumnya 1 ln udah ngewakilin drum dan yg bunyi *teketeketek itu :v jadi yg ini juga satu ln bisa wakilin piano+drum dua yg di atas emg sengaja kan disana byk LN tuh jadi kalo tiba2 ada note yg newbie mungkin rada kewalahan juga
00:48:315 - dan 00:48:645 - ini cuma saran, di tambah note utk suara *apalah yg ada disitu :v w fokus ke perkusi aja
00:48:810 (48810|2) - yg ini kalau dihapus menurutku lebih gampang buat dpt renbow \:v/ ngeng >:D
01:18:479 (78479|3) - ln
01:33:644 (93644|0) - ln
01:38:919 (98919|1,99249|3,99578|0) - ln ^entahlah. 3 ini rada kurang intuitive kalo LN
02:03:150 (123150|2,123314|0) - gimana kalau dituker ln sama notenya ? kurang balance imo
02:05:952 (125952|0,126281|2) - ctrl+g gk balance :u

Hyper

00:35:953 (35953|2) - ln nda ena to :u
00:37:766 - tambah note ?
00:49:469 (49469|0) - yg diff ultimate&another berentinya disini loh 00:49:634 - gpp kah ?
01:33:644 (93644|3) - ln ini jgn deh xd
*entah kenapa jadi ketagihan main diff ini aku :v ea

Another

00:44:112 - tambah note snap 1/8 ke depan ? simplein aja deh kalo yg disini. ultimate udh ada to
01:33:809 (93809|3) - ln ?
01:39:084 - | 01:39:413 - dan 01:39:743 - tambah note gk ada clap disini :u

ama mau nanya... bagian ini 01:00:348 - nanti dikasih keysound kan !? udh ada yey xDD

itu aja... maaf modku sedikit, semoga memuaskan

misternopal wrote:

hai~
lanota itu game kan !?
<- pernah nyoba versi gratisnya :v

As' Standard

00:05:933 (5933|0) - col 4 hand balance // bias di lihat kan kalau pattern di sini berdasarkan Pitch?
00:18:131 (18131|0) - karena diff lain snapnya di 00:18:151 - sini, samain aja + tambah note menurutku // emang salah snap aku
00:19:469 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7877053 biar gk monoton aja maksudku, keputusan ditanganmu // no. keep
00:20:623 (20623|1,20705|2) - ctrl+g // no
00:24:579 (24579|1,24909|0) - mungkin agak aneh tapi menurutku cocok klo ln // no. ngga konsisten
00:26:063 - tambah note // no. diff ini khusus di buat single note only
00:27:381 - kalau yg ^^^^ diaccept disamain // no
00:33:315 (33315|2) - hapus utk istirahat // no. itungan nya berantakan ntar
00:33:975 - tambah note // no
00:37:766 (37766|3) - col 2 // no. Pitch nya di lihat
00:37:931 (37931|0) - col 4 // no
00:41:887 - tambah note (walaupun dejavu sama yg hyper tapi menurutku gpp :v) // no
00:43:535 - tambah note biar drumnya gk ilang // no
00:46:172 - ^ dan snap 1/1 selanjutnya //bisa di lihat kan.. itu ngikut suara apa?
01:16:007 - tambah note ? // ngikut hardbeat. untuk yang sample sound itu buat variasi penyiksa
01:16:172 (76172|3) - col 3

ama mau nanya... bagian ini 01:00:348 - nanti dikasih keysound kan !?

itu aja... maaf modku sedikit, semoga memuaskan

cpotfangirl wrote:

Yoyo!

From mine and vortex- modding queue

To begin with, holy waaaa this song is amazing~
Anyway, here is the mod, I'll start out with Ultimate difficulty, vortex- is working on the another difficulty

Ultimate difficulty

00:11:373 - Add a note here, you've made doubles out of the ones that have the "cling" sound (or whatever you call it owo) in the background actually no. there's only piano i could heard

00:22:931 - Add a note here to emphasize the extra drum sound, just like you've done here 00:18:975 - and here 00:20:953 -

00:26:887 - 00:28:865 - ^same as above

00:29:936 - Missing note, understand you might've removed it to make a smoother transition into the trill, but it doesn't make for a bad transition Personally think it doesnt relevant to any noise that have been builded before and after this line so i dont think thats kinda worth

00:34:222 - 00:35:541 - 00:35:870 - 00:36:200 - 00:36:530 - 00:37:848 - 00:39:497 - 00:40:156 - Missing notes on all of these, maybe you wanted to map like this for variety? all of the synths is kinda not hearable imo so I think its the best to leave it as it is

00:43:123 - 00:47:079 - ^same for these as stated above, especially since you mapped it like that here 00:48:398 - uh same

00:55:953 (55953|2,55953|3,56063|2,56063|3,56282|2,56282|3,56392|2,56392|3,56612|3,56612|2,56722|3,56722|2) - Adding notes to these to make them triples emphasizes the drum sound better, also want to point out that I absolutely love this part not wrong actually but it'll make the bias on the left is kinda lol. so i think i just keep it

01:07:931 - This part and forward is a good place to add SV's especially since you have alot of other SV's in the map there's already an SV lol

01:26:721 - This double should be here 01:26:639 - Instead, like this will keep this since the current one cover both piano chord and the deep bass thing which is kinda superior than the clap ones


01:30:842 - Add note to make double, emphasizes the drum sound actually i'm focusing on the main melody which is indicated by a bell noise throughout this section so yea not gonna double them

01:33:479 - 01:36:117 - 01:38:754 - ^Same as above ^

01:39:496 - Add note keep this for focusing the bassdrop fx (and smoother transitionish)

01:40:732 - Add note to emphasize the drum sound intended to keep the patterning buildup consistent

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01:42:710 - 01:43:040 - 01:43:699 - 01:44:029 - 01:44:358 - 01:44:688 - 01:45:018 - Remove one note each on these to make them singles, fits the drum sound better

01:43:781 - Add a note
ehhh for this part i think i have an idea to kinda remapped this to relate the song more better
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01:58:534 - Nothing from with this part, just cool that you've taken notice of the synth sound to make them doubles yey

01:59:441 - Ghost note, also adding SV's at this part fits the noice

02:00:595 - uh no the transition will be too awkward for that - 02:15:347 - 02:16:336 - 02:17:985 - 02:18:974 - Missing notes this is intended since the Drum are not on its stable rythm (different concepts from Another)

02:20:705 - Missing double here

02:25:979 - 02:27:298 - 02:28:617 - 02:29:935 - 02:31:254 - 02:32:573 - 02:33:891 - Missing notes, really feel like you should add these since the map is above 5* You've also mapped the same sound with a note like that here 02:39:166 - only doing the - 02:28:617 - since i notice it was the same rythmical noise as on what you've pointed

02:34:716 - 02:36:529 - 02:37:847 - 02:40:485 - 02:41:803 - Missing notes actually tho i kinda ignore the majority of the synths and let it focus on the main melody for better approach

02:44:523 - Feel like this should be a triple or double, using a double for the same sound here 02:44:358 - makes it confusing it has more than just a kick. its has more emphasize

02:48:809 - 02:49:468 - 02:50:787 - 02:59:358 - 03:00:018 - Add a note to emphasize the drum sound in all of these cases for some reason i dont really like putting three notes alongside the LN, personally think that it is too cramped and not really balance friendly

From here 02:50:952 - to here 02:51:034 - you can add notes to emphasize the drum sounds, like in other parts of the map where you have done it

02:52:270 - ^Same as above no drum I think

That's it for my mod

Hope it helped, GL with this amazing map

Vortex- wrote:

Hello Rivals_7!

Another

00:23:879 - LN should end here, since the sound supports it imo the fx still exist until there

00:24:085 - Maybe put LN on this type of sound? Up to you already emphasized with triples so LN is kinda unecessary

00:34:469 (34469|2,34469|3,34799|2,34799|3) - Change these two jumps to singles, but if you wanna keep them for the main piano sound (which I think is what you're trying to do), you should consider to map the piano sound on other parts of that section. 00:37:766 (37766|0) - Like here for instance

00:45:568 - There are two 1/6 piano notes here, not mapped correctly. Map two 1/6 notes instead of that single 1/4 note! actually its a simplified version for better sightreading but will consider it next

01:16:130 (76130|0) - Spooky ghost note? i thik its still a synths

Maybe add note here 01:52:930 - and 01:53:012 - Here to represent the sound better? Not necessary of course guess its better to keep

01:53:754 - to 02:01:007 - Seems to be a bit vague, maybe add notes between the hands?
02:04:303 - to 02:11:391 - Same here? ^ not really. i think its better to keep everything balanced

02:16:831 - Change this to hand maybe kinda cramped :u

02:22:765 - Having a jump in the middle here seemed to ruin the flow for me, I suggest you to move the jump to the left. its quite intended. having it on the left making it kinda more hard to read even more xd

02:43:122 - Hand? Suggesting to add a note to the jump, and move the LN one column to the left. the minijack that will created is somewhat unecessary so i guess i'll keep :c

02:44:523 - Change this to a jump its for emphasis here
03:02:985 - ^ ?

03:04:303 - Instead of a boring slow jumpthrill, have a jumpstream instead, which is better supported by the sound. kinda dont want to making the layer too dense from Hyper yet doesnt too close to Ultimate so....... :c

Overall, really good song, and a really good map. Want to see it ranked one day!

Moku_Hazushi wrote:

(From my modding queue~)

Sorry for the late mod, you posted the request in my queue more than 20 days ago, but in addition to having this queue really busy, many things happened irl xD
I hope you are still maintaining this map anyway, here is the mod for the first 2 difficulties, since its a long map ill mode the other diff tomorrow when ill have more time.

Also, i tend to make many personnal suggestions in my mod, so please only apply them if you 120% agree~

EDIT 1: Hyper modding is done but sorry Ill have to delayed Another & Ultimate modding once more, today was a busy day again :c
EDIT 2: Mod finally done~

Legend is 0|1|2|3

Beginner

00:09:230 (9230|3,9560|1) - Id CTRL+G those, just to follow the piano pitch going higher

00:25:074 (25074|3) - Maybe move it to (2), sorry i dont have logic reason for this, i just feel it would go better with the drum to alternate with 2 columns only instead of going for a 3rd one think i'd keep this. i saw the flow work much better this way for a beginners hand

00:31:667 (31667|3) - Why not keeping the same jack pattern you used to do before ? I dont think its a big deal to break the LNs just here think of note spreading too so yea (i kinda didnt get what jack you were pointing out tho)

00:37:766 - What about adding a note at (2) ? To match the piano (also you did it at 00:41:722 so it would be great to add here too for consistency) oh the 00:41:722 are intended since its to indicate to approach a new song phase. the rest i'll keep it percussion only for better approach (and consistency)

00:47:491 (47491|3) - I find this LN a bit weird, im not sure what you intended to map with it, maybe the fast piano stair, but anyway this LN feels a bit alone in the middle of nothing maybe remove it and just add a note at 00:47:656 if you want to enhance the piano going faster deleting the LN but not adding any note

At 00:53:755 - Somehow i hear this part more with 2 LNs like this. Also maybe its interesting to keep with this 2 LN pattern so a beginner would recognize something he/she has already played at 00:45:183 its somewhat a different layering so it needs a different approach too



01:23:095 (83095|1,83260|2) - I would CTRL+G those, first for to follow the synth pitch and then because i like playing a note just after an LN ahah :p
(more seriously, that one column jump pattern is more in the spirit of the surrounding mapping anyway, but the stair is also a good idea in a sense that it contrasts with those, up to you)

01:27:710 (87710|2) - And here is the magic, if you move it to (0) you would have :
01:20:292 - Stair pattern
01:22:930 - Column jump pattern
01:25:567 - Stair pattern
01:27:545 - Column jump pattern owo)b

01:31:336 (91336|2) - Maybe move it to (1) for the jack like at the beginning
01:36:611 (96611|1) - To (2) for the same reason they're different snare so yea.... (Hence why the HS is different lel)

01:53:424 (113424|2) - I would have seen a LN here (until 01:53:754)
01:58:699 (118699|1) - Ok that would mean adding a LN here too thats somewhat not intuitive for me. think i'll keep those

02:07:188 (127188|2) - Would move it to (1) and
02:07:435 (127435|0) - To (2), the idea is to go in the opposite direction as 02:04:633 (124633|3,124798|1) or 02:05:787 (125787|3,125952|0) so it wont confuse too much the beginners because of the rythm change (especially ternary in binary can be really tricky at that level) thats rather subjective thing. i actually like this since there's some kinda of jump between the column (col2 to 0 then col 3 to 0|1 which is already intuitive for beginners. The rythm is yes kind of confusing but thats not my thing since it was the music who did confusing rythmic lel

02:05:787 (125787|3,125952|0) - Just maybe add a note here to make the middle of that kiai even more fun and challeging for beginner
02:55:897 - Same thing that would be too much for an ez tho xd


Nice diff, entertaining and challenging with a great range of rythm pattern while keeping it simple for beginners. About the HS this is far above my skills i have nothing to contest about it. Just something bother me, during the last kiai, i heard the "click" sounds going sometime to the right ear and sometime in the middle but never to the left here. But anyway i thing it would be real fun to make it go from left to right and right to left during the kiai what do you think ? that would be a cool thing but kinda lazy since i copied the Hitsound with software so i'll just leave it default lol

Hyper

00:05:604 - I really think you should have a chord here

Maybe add notes at 00:16:318 and 00:16:400 its an hard diff, i think you can match the piano a bit more here

00:19:799 (19799|2,19964|0) - Would CTRL+G those, the drum HS feels like a coming back so i think the single note going with the LNs should alternate directions
Just like you did after in fact 00:23:425 wouldnt do that since it'll break the consistency of hand balance

00:27:711 (27711|1,27876|3) - Would CTRL+G those too for the same reasons, but this create an unwanted jack with the next chords that should be fixed then yeah thats the reason

00:40:898 (40898|3,40898|0,41227|0,41227|3) - What about 1/2 long LN for those ? I feel like it could go well with the synth hmmh emphasis didnt go well with that

00:49:634 - Maybe add a note here, i really feel you should hit something at the end of that noise no beat tho.

01:05:623 (65623|3) - Would move it to (0) just to follow the piano pitch

01:28:864 - That LN only feels a bit weak for the drum going faster the starting drum is weak anyways

Maybe
01:55:897 (115897|1) - On (0) and
01:56:227 (116227|1) - On (2), i think the jacks could go well with the drum here they're not drum :u

01:56:227 (116227|1) - Okay i somehow expected a chord here to be consistent with the snare mapping before (02:01:831 (121831|2,121831|1) + 02:02:243 (122243|2,122243|0)) but this will be a bit out of context if you dont remove 02:03:067 (123067|0) so its up to you pretty sure its different than what you've pointed. - 01:56:227 (116227|1) - are synths

02:24:743 (144743|2,144743|3,144743|0) - Im really hesitating for this chords, as its the beginning of the kiai + cymbal HS so that would explain the triple but still if we look at the rest of the pattern the bass kick are mapped with double chords.
But still if you want to keep that triple chords i think you should reshape it or reshape 02:25:073 (145073|2,145073|3,145073|0), i dont think you hit the same chords for 2 different drum mapping sadly we dont have much choice since 4K column limit. I pretend the triples for both cymbal crash and the snare just for this final kiai since everything going intense so the patern are also intense too.

another kind of alternative if i want to keep the triple chords for snare are making the chords+cymbal a quad but thats too exaggerating for this diff

02:30:018 (150018|2,150018|3) - You should find another chords for this one, its the 3rd time you use the exact same chords for the bass kick mapping kick use double chord, snare use triple chord. its a natural on mapping since the snare is louder than a kick

02:37:270 (157270|3,157270|1,157435|2) - What happenned here ? The chord should be at 02:37:435

02:56:062 (176062|0,176062|1,176144|2,176227|3,176309|1,176391|0,176391|3) - Maybe go for a more trill-like pattern so the middle climax of this kiai will really contrast with the surrounding mapping Trill is somewhat too extreme for a "Hard" tier so hink i'll keep xd

Nice diff overall, not too hard, not too easy. Also i didnt see real mapping error, just some adjustement here and there. Nice work owo)b

Another

00:05:604 - Same remark as the hyper, i think you should have a chord here

00:19:469 (19469|3,19799|3) - For this section, im not sure the jack LN are really relevant since the drum is playing 2 very different sounds. What about having the second LN on the symetric side of the first one ? (like first LN is (3) then second is (0)) i'm kinda ignoring that thing. since my pattern revolved around one way of stairs to indicate the song pace

00:29:689 (29689|3) - I think this LN should last until 00:30:019

Maybe id add a (1,2) chords at
00:40:980 and
00:41:310 - I think its funnier to really hit something at the end of this LNs to match with the drum uhhh not intuitive with the emphasis

01:27:051 (87051|1) - Would move it to (2) to have the jack with the next LN like at 01:21:611 (81611|1,81776|1) that would make the col 1 somewhat empty tho

01:36:611 - Maybe a triple chord here already specialized my chord at - 01:33:974 (93974|2,93974|0,93974|1) -

At 01:45:183 i would suggest this kind of pattern first, to continue with the jacks a bit more : changed a little bit


02:25:732 (145732|0,145732|2,145897|1,146062|2,146062|0,146227|1,146391|0,146391|2) - Ok this is a bit sad & flat, what about using jack on those synth parts instead ? For example like this done it differently



That would mean using a kind of similar jack pattern at
02:31:007 + 02:36:281 + 02:41:556

02:34:963 - This is a 4.45 star, why no trill here ? T^T

02:48:150 (168150|3) - Shouldnt this LN be longer ? According to 02:46:666 (166666|1,166831|3,166996|1,167161|2)

Really cool diff, nothing much to mod actually. Fun to play and challenging at some part, but still kinda easy for a 4.45*. Many enjoyable idea through the whole map, definitly would like to see it ranked >w<)b

Ultimate

00:05:604 - Same remark as the 2 previous diff, i think a chord is necessary here

00:19:469 (19469|3,19799|3) - And also same remarks for those LN, once again i think it would be better to have them on different column idk i feel its really fit like this (I think its because the same pitch despite being different snare)

00:38:260 - What about having a chord here ? Okay the idea is, at the very beginning of this section you went full chords for 2 measures 00:34:304 (34304|2,34304|0,34469|3,34469|1,34634|1,34634|0,34799|3,34799|2) and i think this is a good idea. So maybe it would be nice to have some other small parts with full chord since its the last diff. Im thinking of doing 1 measure full chords at
00:38:260 + 00:40:568 + 00:47:161 I kinda dont get what are you trying to explain here. some of the chords are following both piano and snare and some of the piano i left it single since it was rather weak

00:53:096 - I really like this chord jack section, but maybe at the middle of it you can switch for other chords than (0,1) and (2,3) otherwise its a bit long and repetitive i dont like using split chord :c like 0|2, 1|3 etc

01:01:337 (61337|0) - Would move it to (3) to follow the piano pitch i think the pitch already fit tho

01:27:051 (87051|1) - Same remark as the another diff, would move it to (2) to have the jack with the next LN like at 01:21:611 (81611|1,81776|1) uhh same

01:42:216 - Okay, compared to the another diff, there is no reason for a specific jack pattern here, but still i think you can find a trill a bit different first instead of going (0,1) - (2,3) for 8 measures

02:15:430 (135430|2) - Maybe move it to (3) for the jack, it could go well with the snare
02:18:067 (138067|0) - Maybe to (1) for the same reasons then

02:25:732 (145732|0,145732|1,145897|2,146062|0,146062|1,146227|2,146391|1,146391|0) - Same remark as another, see above for the detailed explanation & suggestion ~ as for this one i think its fine. since the column limit is just 4. maybe you just complain it since it wasnt too aesthetical-ish so yea xD

By the way, this kiai seems really weak for a last diff, i almost felt like playing the another once more here Its somewhat intended for a buildup intensity

02:48:150 (168150|3) - I think this LN should be longer if i refer to 02:46:666 (166666|1,166831|0,166996|1,167161|3)

Except the kiai at 02:24:743 that in my opinion does not raise the difficulty compared to the another, the rest is pretty clean. Even if most of the time i really feel like playing another with more notes but i guess its okay, another is really well done and so is ultimate in final :3 yeah both last kiai concept are different just for the sake of pattern variety and buildup intensity lel

69th post hype >////<

Moku_Hazushi wrote:

(From my modding queue~)

Sorry for the late mod, you posted the request in my queue more than 20 days ago, but in addition to having this queue really busy, many things happened irl xD
I hope you are still maintaining this map anyway, here is the mod for the first 2 difficulties, since its a long map ill mode the other diff tomorrow when ill have more time.

Also, i tend to make many personnal suggestions in my mod, so please only apply them if you 120% agree~

EDIT 1: Hyper modding is done but sorry Ill have to delayed Another & Ultimate modding once more, today was a busy day again :c
EDIT 2: Mod finally done~

Legend is 0|1|2|3

As' Standard

00:03:296 (3296|2) - Move it to (3), its no fun to have this 00:02:307 (2307|2,2637|1) twice. You can move the whole pattern else where or move the next note, but the idea is not to have the same pattern twice. Also the idea behind moving it to (3) is to echo with 00:04:285 (4285|1,4615|2,4944|0) // re-arrange it base on the HS pitch

Okay maybe move the following :
00:18:975 (18975|0) - To (1)
00:19:964 (19964|3) - To (2)
00:20:953 (20953|0) - To (1)
00:21:942 (21942|3) - To (2) // about this... the flow and pattern are no need more fix, thanks for your help thou
The thing is all those first triplet patterns 00:18:315 (18315|2,18398|1,18480|0) and 00:18:645 (18645|1,18727|2,18810|3) have their last note on the (0) or (3) column. But the single notes are also use those column creating a some king of void in the (1) and (2) column for the beginning of that section
(at least that what i feel when testplaying) // well.. that's the idea... make it feels like playing the rim of the drum

00:38:260 - Missing note for the piano
00:39:249 - Here too

00:44:194 (44194|3) - Move it to (2), not sure you need that jack triplet 00:44:194 (44194|3,44524|3,44689|3) // uhh.. keep for now. i want to keep the feel of the music there

00:46:832 (46832|0,47161|0) - Move it to another column, the jack is good for the kicks, but you should not jack with the snare at 00:47:491 (47491|0)

00:48:810 (48810|1,48892|2,48975|3) - Ok im not sure what you are doing with this, its a bit confusing, there is no piano going that fast here, i think at least remove 00:48:892 (48892|2) // oh. my mistake.. fixed and following the piano

At 01:15:512 if you want to map those voice noise, i think a better choice would be to keep LNs and also map the "clop" tongue sound at 01:16:007
I suggest the following :


01:24:578 (84578|2) - Would move it to (1), there is no need for jack here, i think you should only use jack here when the synth is holding a note like you did at 01:22:600 (82600|2,82930|2) // pitch.. sorry
01:25:238 (85238|2) - And so for this reason id move it to (1) // this too

01:26:227 (86227|2) - Would move it to (3) to follow the synth going to a really high pitch here

01:32:490 (92490|2,92820|2,92985|1) - Maybe move it one column to the left, the pitch is a bit lower than 01:29:853 (89853|2,90183|2,90347|1) and it would avoid using exactly the same pattern twice

01:35:128 (95128|3,95457|2) - Why breaking the jack here ?

At 02:07:930 i would suggest mapping like this :

First i think you can add a note at 02:08:177 for the normal difficulty, also i think its a good place to re-use that LN-side note-LN patterns you are using during those kiai
(I must say this pattern is freaking awsome >w<)b)

02:26:968 (146968|0) - Not sure this note is really necessary, i mean you just introduced this pattern once before, maybe its too soon to already add some arrangement to it // naah... it's fine

02:28:122 - I really hear a synth note here, but since you are alternating between drum and synth mapping im sure if you should add a note here or not
(remark you added one at 02:38:672 (158672|2))

02:34:633 (154633|3,154798|2,154963|1,155128|0) - Just a suggestion, what about making them LN ? Just to mark the middle of the kiai and contrast with the surrounding mapping // nice idea

02:55:238 (175238|2,175485|2) - I dont see any reason for this jack // uhh... yes it is.... feels

As the previous diff, nothing to say about the HS. I think this diff need a bit more of work before being ready to be ranked, but it already has many good ideas. The kiais might be a bit easy compared to some other parts of the map but i guess its fine anyway owo)/

69th post hype >////<

imtdb1 wrote:

NM req from imtdb1's modding queue
1|2|3|4

Hyper

00:34:469 - imo you should make that 1 note chord because there are no sounds that you followed that support it
00:34:799 - ^ ^ uh not rly. its my intention to make both piano and percussion to be doubled
00:44:194 - meybe add a little LN here? hmm its better like this imo
00:48:315 - make it 1 note chord because imo its better that you only use double not chords at the sounds like 00:48:480
00:48:645 - ^ ^ pretty much same reason
01:21:281 - make it double?
02:34:963 - add a note in 1st column intentional. as the note after this are stairs

Another

00:31:337 - why not use doubles?
00:31:997 - ^ ^ its snare tho
00:37:766 - make it 1 note same as hyper
00:49:909 - that pattern is really awkward to play (at least for me). Meybe make it like this hmm not really. it was intended to reflect the diff curve on Ultimate
01:10:567 - why not add a SV like you did at 01:07:931 ? i'll think about it later i guess

Good Luck!

Mage wrote:

Hello~

Hyper

00:11:208 - i hear two sounds, so double? not really a piano chord there

00:56:722 - i don't think it's a good idea to put 1/4 notes on 1/6 sounds. Is this rankable? xd its a matter of simplification so its ok

01:29:358 - i think better to put notes on main melody (01:29:853 - 01:30:183 - 01:32:490 - 01:32:820 - and etc.)

01:49:139 - shoundn't you put here 1/2 LN for 1/8 sounds like you did before (01:48:479 (108479|3))

Another

00:11:208 - same as in Hyper, double? same

00:16:400 - https://puu.sh/wlHU1/8ca7def593.jpg - right is Hyper diff. How you can see Hyper is more difficult than Another xd

02:11:886 - add note

03:04:303 - https://puu.sh/wlIKY/6a5e0ca226.jpg - let's look on Hyper again, yep, it's harder. Maybe you will make 1/4 jump stream huh

Ultimate

00:11:208 - same as in Hyper, double? same

00:16:400 - should i talk about hyper again? xd

01:39:249 - should be triple exception for this. to give a proper follow with the buildup

03:04:303 - https://puu.sh/wlJbA/2cbdcdf09b.png - it plays pretty well, and better fits to music hmm idk, feels too exagerrated to place a quad inside a trill lol

Good luck!

CrumpetFiddler wrote:

As requested in Crumpey's Mod Queue!

1|2|3|4

Beginner, As' Standard

Beginner (Mod)

00:41:227 - Id contemplate moving this to col 2 em rather not. as for the percussion are on the same pitch

01:16:007 - id consider putting a note here, but its very opinionated as this is the easiest diff

01:15:512 - put a note besides the ln in col 2

sorry for the long ass wait ive had things going on, hopefully next time ill notify you before making ya wait like a week XD
Good song choice this is what mania needs!

Mage wrote:

Hello~

As' Standard

00:03:296 (3296|2,3626|1) - i'm sure these sounds are different than 00:02:307 (2307|2,2637|1) . So, replace these notes // re-arrange it then

00:55:074 (55074|1,55183|2,55293|1,55403|2,55513|1,55623|2) - i don't think this trill is a really good idea, // hmm... nope~ this is a good idea 00:55:403 (55403|2,55513|1,55623|2) - replace this i guess // uhh nope~

00:55:733 - https://puu.sh/wlGCx/91fb1d53d4.png - i think it's better fits to music // uhhmm.. i take that as consideration

01:51:776 - i'm sure new LN start here // uhh.. do we hear the same sound? because the actual snap for the next one are the curent one

02:06:858 - finish LN and put note? // uhh... no. i want to make it as simple as posible

02:08:177 - add note? // eyy there's already 1 note there... no need to add some more

02:22:930 (142930|0,143012|2,143177|0,143260|2) - it play not so well, may be something like 02:22:930 - https://puu.sh/wlHdF/2e257d1efb.png // uhh.. maybe no...

CrumpetFiddler wrote:

As requested in Crumpey's Mod Queue!

1|2|3|4

Beginner, As' Standard

As' Standard (Mod)

00:02:637 (2637|1) - move to col 1 // uhh already re-arrange it

00:05:604 (5604|2) - move to col 4 // this too

00:18:151 (18151|0) - add another note in col 4? theres a cymbol crash so you might want to use a double // take note that this diff are not using dual

00:26:063 (26063|0) - put a note on col 2 for the cymbol crash //^

00:32:986 (32986|3,33151|3) - make these 2 doubles using keys 3 and 4 //^

00:33:315 (33315|2) - after doing that ^ move this to col 2 // uhh no

00:42:216 - in this "segment" you have chosen not to map the major beats, i think the song would flow better if you were to map them, ill timestamp a few of the main beats but there are a bit so ill let you find the rest providing you choose to map these // uhh.. thanks but no thanks

00:43:535 - main beat

00:46:172 - main beat

00:46:502 - main beat

01:06:612 (66612|2) - consider making an ln

01:25:567 (85567|1) - move to col 1

01:34:633 (94633|1) - move to col 1

02:23:012 (143012|2) - move to col 4

02:29:606 (149606|0) - looks like you accidentally placed it on the blue tick instead of the white // not accidentaly.. if you hear it again.. there's a synth sound that i've follow

02:34:303 - you have sometimes mapped this beat in and sometimes not, i think all of the prominant beats should be mapped, youve done so here 02:30:347 - 02:31:336 - 02:32:655 - 02:32:985 - to name a few, skipping any now makes the song play weird, i think all of those noticeable beats should be mapped // i follow the synth

02:54:084 - youve forgotten a note here // no i dont

03:04:303 - after this note theres nothing, theres room to put more notes in and to see it just left blank is very odd. // intended

sorry for the long ass wait ive had things going on, hopefully next time ill notify you before making ya wait like a week XD
Good song choice this is what mania needs!

TheNewBungping wrote:

Hi, I will mod the lower diffs as requested in the mod queue

nice song XD

1|2|3|4

Beginner

00:24:909 try removing this LN, I don't think it's neccessary since this is the easiest diff

01:33:974 despite how loud this is, I don't think that it's appropiate for this diff, so I suggest you remove a note
02:16:831 ^ mmh its pretty alright imo

02:24:743 - 03:01:666 pls map according to the drum well sadly the drum are not in consistent 1/4 rythm :/. mapping accurately to the drum may cause confusion to newer player

GL

Songofevil wrote:

Beginner

• 00:24:579 There’s a sound at this time. Maybe you could add a LN on col. 4 or in col. 1. there's already a 3-sequence SN to follow after it so adding another note is kinda too hard. i'm also highly focused on kick and snare
• 00:48:810 (48810|2) - This note of piano should not be a LN because it’s not enough long. It has the same reverb as the others SNs before.
• Ending LNs with 2 simple notes are not a bit difficult for 1 star or less? Could ending LNs with one notes (it’s just my opinion, maybe is not that tough for a beginner). Its pretty alright i believe
• 01:48:479 (108479|0) - Should remove this note. its to indicate another short roll. it was an LN back then but i simplified it
• 02:06:611 (126611|1) - ^ letting this empty is kinda eh. while there still a lot happening in the song
• 02:09:249 (129249|1) - Move it to 02:09:413.
• 02:11:227 (131227|0) - Move it to 02:11:062.
• 02:23:424 Ending LN with 2 simple notes followed by a stair could be tough for the first-time play. Ending LN with 1 simple note should be easier for a new player to do the followed stair. The best would be to remove the note in the col. 4 at this time. I know there is 2 single notes for the drum and for the synth who goes with the stairs, but if this is the reason why you put 2 simple notes, you should remove one of those in 02:22:765., because there, there is no synth sound.
• 02:25:402 (145402|3) - Should be at 02:25:567 to be on time.
• 02:26:721 (146721|3,148040|3,149358|3,150677|3,151996|0,153314|0,155952|3,157270|2,158589|2,159908|1,161227|1,162545|2,166501|0,167820|0,169139|0,170457|0,171776|0,173095|3,174413|3,177051|0,178369|1,179688|1,181007|2) - Same thing. Up them by an half of a time to be on the drum time. all of these are quite intended. because if i set them up in different spacing between, there will be quite major concern of readability for newbies. because ofc they can not yet synchronizing their fingers with their reading ability
• 02:55:567 Need a note at this time to follow the beat. still a thing ^
• 02:56:391 Could remove one of the simple notes at the end of the LN. start of other song pace. and its crash (quite a nonsense if a crash was mapped in a really small chord xd)
• 03:04:139 (184139|2) - I don’t think it fits there; the synth is always playing during the LN, so why put only one note for only one of these synth sounds? And I don’t think that adding notes for each EML sounds during the LN is a good idea for a beginner beat map. You should remove 03:04:139 (184139|2) - because it doesn’t fit with the ending pattern. this "EML" (though idk what that is lol) did not exist till the downbeat, thus the differentiation. and also i dont think beginner will have much problem on this one

I really love this song! I hope it would be rank soon. If you have any questions, I’ll be happy to answer it! Progress, rank and prosperity.

TheNewBungping wrote:

Hi, I will mod the lower diffs as requested in the mod queue

nice song XD

1|2|3|4

As' Standard

pls do not strict to much on pitch relevancy

00:10:219 move note on 4 to 2 // i think the curent one are already fit with the hitsound pitch so i dont see any reason for moving it, sorry but i must refuse
00:10:549 move note on 3 to 4 // ^

00:16:318 (16318|3,16400|2,16483|1) - move these up to 00:16:400 (16400|3,16483|2,16565|1) - // i dont quite get here, did you mean i must re-snap it to make it similar with hitsound base diff? if so i'll do as you say

00:18:151 this obviously needs to be double // uh no. as you can see in this diff, there's no dual used here so i'm sorry if i must refuse it
00:26:063 ^ // ^
00:33:975 ^
02:24:743 ^ // ^

00:26:887 move note on 1 to 3
00:27:876 move note on 4 to 2

00:42:381 move note on 3 to 1
00:44:524 move note on 4 to 2
01:22:600 move note on 3 to 2
01:24:578 move note on 3 to 2
01:29:853 move note on 3 to 2
01:32:820 move note on 3 to 2
01:35:128 move note on 3 to 4

03:04:468 add a note on 2
03:04:633 add a note on 3

01:38:095 move note on 3 to 4
01:38:260 move note on 1 to 2
01:40:402 move note on 3 to 2
01:43:369 move note on 3 to 2
02:01:501 move note on 3 to 2
02:01:996 move note on 4 to 3 // sorry but i dont quite understand about the last mod, and i dont see any reason why i must move it around since it's already well structured as i planned so i hardly must refuse the rest of the mod you give to me

GL

OscarRickyH02 wrote:

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ugh, why there are 2 standard and 2 hyper? i assume you need more diff name soon (TM)
yeah let skip meta because im succ

Ultimate

00:21:447 - why is this triple? nvm anyway, i think these doubles like 00:18:480 - should be triple instead since 00:18:975 - is must have different emphasize with 00:19:140 , and by that i think you should change the other one
00:31:337 (31337|0,31420|2,31502|0,31585|2) - this is just intentional but i would not recommend that since you already have 00:31:008 (31008|0,31090|2,31172|0,31255|2) - right before it
00:32:326 - and this both are intentional due to song nature
00:34:964 - not sure why you put triples for some kick, and double for another kick. If its because of the piano, im sure this is should be triple, and some other too, i think you should recheck it all triple are snares (Clap HS). heard it again
00:45:266 (45266|2) - ghost i guess
01:26:557 - maybe ln should change lane here because i dont think 01:26:392 (86392|2) - sound just "bend" in there adding another LN would quite jumbled the movement with the other SNs and pattern afterwards so i would like to keep it
01:49:675 - oh god this reminds me of Algorithm p//s, is it really safe to put those jumpstream with chord in every 1/4 and 182 bpm to basically an I iconed diff? well i do get why you put that but i have a few suggestion. Since it 182 bpm, i think putting chord every 1/2 works better, and by that is suggest you the chord starts from blue line 01:49:716 - (or red line before it if you prefer) the burst getting deepen right where I put the chords so yea..... putting it on blue would be a little bit misleading with the noise actual purposes
02:03:810 - why no doubles like 01:58:535 - its not really worth it than a second highlight you've listed there. which there's 3 deep bass distort whilst the first highlight only got one
well i dont like 02:23:343 (143343|0,143425|0) - and you put double for kicks in that roll but then there was triple so i suggest to delete the ln on the 1st lane uhh cymbals
02:24:002 (144002|1,144167|3) - i think the synth didn't change pitch on 02:24:002 (144002|1,144167|3) - so it kinda ghosty hmm it did change on my side. and imo its fit with the buildup
the sound in 02:28:782 - is stronger than 02:28:865 , you got what i mean
02:31:255 - strong sound here i think
02:32:409 - here as well
02:33:892 - here
02:34:057 - here, but i might just heard the echo so nvm
02:38:178 - here
02:39:332 - again, might be echo
02:40:486 - here ^ this and the other above. nope. some of the synts were indeed ignored for the sake of clean movement and aesthetic
02:46:337 (166337|1) - ln? emm no i guess
02:49:881 - synth, i think
02:52:024 - ^ doesnt seem to be worth it
02:56:475 - ^ ^
02:58:947 (178947|2) - but i think this is ghost a clear synth on my heard tho
03:00:431 - synth
03:04:304 - i suggest you jumpstream since almost all of the snare are quite weak jumpstream because >snare are weak<? should that thing is the opposite? anyways dont think jumpstreaming this is a good idea either since there's no synth between all the chords
03:06:530 - synth intended to be ignored for lenient movement against 1/12
anyway, about i told you about you missed a sound or a ghost im not 100% because, you are BN and i assume you only have less than 10% chance of missing sound and i'm half-deaf(?)

i think i'd better keep the other diff (blame this lazy dude), but you can use this mod to another diff(?)

Litharrale wrote:

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only mentioning each issue once
1|2|3|4

fix diff names already>:0 ay

I remade your bg to be better, use this one https://i.imgur.com/f2T1PRX.jpg (or the one altered from discord) I prefer my fog-ish :c

I am 99% sure the timing resnap at 00:18:151 is mistimed and not needed. The map sounds perfect without it and with it, everything is slightly late. (note: the whole mod is done without this changed but you should 100% change it or ask someone super experienced with timing to check it) i'll try to ask around

The SR jump between Hyper and Another is significantly bigger than the rest of the SR gaps

The gap between the two is actually only weighted at - 01:47:821 - and - 02:22:107 - whilst the rest is a pretty fair diff gap inbetween

Get rid of all storyboard hitsounds and all double hitsounds

First off, double hitsound is pretty fair if the volume is well distributed (and its not earrape lol). I use all of these techniques in all of my latest maps and there doesnt seem to be much of a problem

the second, about the SB hs. I think this is pretty fair since all the bassline have at least one note to cover. take example on the beginner
00:18:151 - these part afterwards is filled with 2 synths and 1 kick. the synths is on SB to accompany and emphasize the songs. since beginner would naturally hit 1/1 focus kick so they wouldnt be confused with the 2 synths being played as SB. rather, some of the newbie players i asked to test didnt realize that there was an additional synths on SB. they thought it was original song fx

things may got complicated after - 02:01:008 - and - 02:14:194 - in which drumline didnt match my notes which could be confusing, but the song drumline itself is confusing already to follow by newbies so removing the SB hs here wouldnt do much either

tl;dr i dont want to remove the SB because
1) it would remove some special emphasisi which was intended
2) removing the SB hs wouldnt do much either. if you play the song with fx or without the fx, they wouldnt be much different. the only thing different with fx enabled is that you will hear a higher volume version of the original fx from the song

Hitsound base

02:46:172 (166172|4) - These tick sounds are a nice addition but they should be used one 4 beats apart rather than 3 beats. 3 beats sounds really weird and doesnt really fit imo. On the second beat of every bar would be good. the tick is slightly 1 seconds apart. thus the clock - like - fx being used is properly make sense

Ultimate

00:22:766 (22766|0,22766|1) - A tonne of double hitsounds which theres probably a lot of in the diffs. Remove them all pls explained above

00:01:648 (1648|2) - is a chord in the song so add another note here

00:19:469 (19469|1,19469|3,19469|0) - Having this as a triple detracts from the power of this 00:19:799 (19799|2,19799|0,19799|3) - which should be a triple. remove the note in col 2 both is a snare, though its different in volume power but having it to be a double would be kinda misleading as the doubles are for kicks

00:39:579 (39579|1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9079331 proposed pattern for better PR mapping not so sure with the balance there. especially that 4|3|4|3 at the beginning

00:43:205 (43205|0) - https://i.imgur.com/FlOkYz7.png A lot of emphasis on col 1, maybe break it up a bit in the middle

01:01:337 (61337|0) - add another note on col 4 for the chord i think its not worthy of a chord since its pretty softy

01:03:975 (63975|0) - same, you get the point ^

01:16:008 (76008|3,76049|2,76090|1,76131|0) - You should redesign this stream to map this "gulp" sound more. Perhaps a 1/2 LN and a 1/4 LN to capture it

01:21:777 (81777|1) - Add something for the snare sound to stay consistent

01:30:843 (90843|1) - add a note on 2 and 01:31:172 (91172|2,91337|1,91337|0,91337|3) - add a note between these to capture the full percussion pattern i'm not really following the percussion here. my main follow is a piano

01:40:238 (100238|0,100238|1,100568|0,100568|1,100898|0,100898|1,101227|0,101227|1,101557|0,101557|1) - This pattern is weird when you dont continue it on the other side. Either swap it out for something else or change the pattern after it to be similar in theme

02:06:859 (126859|0,126859|1,126942|0,126942|2,126942|3) - This jack feels really weird. It kind of just pops up 2 minutes into the map without any other jacks before it. I'd remove it. well its because there is no fx that could accompanied to make a minijack like this, wouldnt it? :d so its totally relevant

02:08:590 (128590|3) - Shorten this LN to reflect the sound that starts halfway through. I was gonna start start the LN halfway through when the sound starts but the SV makes it feel weird i'm pretty sure the bass noise is started where i placed. the halfway you mentioned is where the bass got stronger

02:44:524 (164524|2,164524|3,164524|1,164524|0) - Doesn't sound strong enough to be a quad here imo. remove the note on 3 i think i'm keeping this. idk its personally fits towards where everything will got harder

Another

00:27:711 (27711|0,27711|3) Making these triples is completely a-ok for a 4.4* particularly i want to keep the layering consistency with the other. the triples only used where there's no LN

00:41:722 (41722|2) - Could change this isnt an LN that leads to the triples, would play awesomely

00:47:738 (47738|2) - note here thats not in ultimate?

00:49:799 (49799|2) - the 3-4 here plays kinda weird, maybe just remove the 3 not rly sure i would do that since that will kinda distinguish the cymbal emphasis

00:56:990 (56990|1,57113|3,57278|1,57443|0) - Why are these 1/16? Should be 1/6 dafuq i'm screwed

00:57:711 (57711|1) - no where near strong enough for a double its kinda for the following 1/6 you've pointed before

01:22:107 (82107|1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9079859 literally copy pasted from the ultimate, try make the patterns a little harder/easier in one of them wait i dont remember i copasta aaaaaa. made ultimate different

01:35:623 (95623|0) - section feels boring and uninspired tbh. Try adding in a cool theme like have the two beats before the snare be the same and then the snare be different or something like that e.g https://i.imgur.com/qd6S0ER.png i did something with some light jacking piano

01:42:216 (102216|3) - why does the stack theme start here and not earlier/later? this to keep everything various, the earlier has different theme which tend to be simple, then it goes harder with introducing the stacks towards the jtrill and streams later

01:59:359 (119359|3,119359|2,119524|1,119524|3,119524|0) - This is harder than the ultimate equivalent

02:08:178 (128178|2,128260|2) - jacks again. if you kept them in the ultimate, definitely get rid of them here.

Hyper

00:16:400 (16400|1,16441|2,16483|3,16483|0) - This pattern feels like it belongs in the higher diffs. I think a simple 4-3-21 stair would work better i think its still pretty fair since hyper still on its 3 highest diff which is still pretty simple to handle by intermediate players

00:24:579 (24579|1) - seems like an odd choice to shorten this by 1/4 just to keep the next LN in the same column but it seems pretty ok to me :c see higher diffs

00:29:194 (29194|3) - https://i.imgur.com/jUFuntR.png the pattern here is significantly harder than the one in the another, id suggest changing to a stair

00:35:623 (35623|0) - only 1/1 doubles after trusting the player to do jumpstreams? yeah people need to relax xd

00:42:381 (42381|1,42381|3,42711|2,42711|1) - these should be singles to be consistent consistent with... what? if you refering hyper2 its totally different diff so there's that

01:21:777 (81777|2) - single for the snare? >:00000000 its still a pretty low snare imo so single fit pretty well

01:23:755 (83755|2) - srsly though, you have random bass doubled even though they're weaker, it's an odd choice

01:26:722 (86722|0) - should really be 1/4 of a tick back to match up with the strong sound. Otherwise the bass is uneven and it doesnt match with the identical sound here 01:26:392 (86392|0,86392|3) - for both ^ i kinda didnt intend to doubled the snare since its a pretty weak snare in general and intended to keep the diff curve with hyper2. the doubled bass is because there's a deep bass in it. which where the snare doesnt have it.
thus the idea. exception to - 01:27:711 (87711|2,87711|3) - where the snare is matched with piano

01:39:909 (99909|2) - add singles on the red ticks in this section to match with the increase in intensity but i was follows piano :cc

01:49:140 (109140|0,109387|0) - This reverse shield plays weird as hell, maybe something like https://i.imgur.com/10GeqSF.png it doesnt on my side lol stop using imgur rip my data :c

Hyper2

01:19:799 (79799|3) - You mapped the sound here but not the one here 01:20:788 - make it all consistent its actually piano but i did forget to place it anywhere else so fixed that

Same section 01:25:074 (85074|2) - mapping the snares sometims and other times not is super weird ^

01:46:832 (106832|3) - This section is the same density as the beginner and half as dense as the standards oh ups

01:50:458 (110458|0) - This LN should stop around here 01:51:777 and transfer into a different LN, can apply this to other diffs as well

02:01:008 (121008|0,121008|2,121337|0,121337|2,121832|2,121832|0,122244|0,122244|2) - I really like the theme you had before this pattern here 01:59:030 (119030|2) - with all the doubles in the same columns but at 02:01:008 it doesnt really fit and detracts from the pattern

Standard2

00:32:986 (32986|1,32986|3,33151|1,33151|3) - Put these on the same hand for difficulty, I feel like a jack like this in a diff this low is a little too hard

00:49:799 (49799|0) - This section is 1/4 not 1/3 (it is 1/3 but the LNs start every beat)

01:10:898 (70898|2,70898|3,71392|1,71392|2,71887|0,71887|1) - PR!

02:07:436 (127436|3,127931|3,128260|3) - Fairly sure these are meant to be doubles looking at the distance inbetween the note which is pretty odd to be predicted by newer players, i made this a little bit simplier

02:09:579 (129579|2) - Move to 3 to avoid the reverse shield its already on 3 :thonk:

02:10:486 (130486|0) - Double? most of these are doubles but some arent which is odd

03:05:788 (185788|3) - move to 3 to disconnect it with the previous pattern as its not part of it in the music

Beginner

Not much to say other than a bunch of missed PR opportunities in sections like 00:34:304 (34304|0) -

01:16:008 (76008|1) - This part is significantly harder than standard(2) https://i.imgur.com/B4F5pgO.png

Litharrale wrote:

hiiiiiiiiiiiiii
only mentioning each issue once
1|2|3|4

A's standard

(note some of these timestamps might be off because this is when i realised the timing was wrong)

00:16:359 (16359|3,16400|2,16483|1) - This is timed different to all of the other difficulties, talk to rivals and figure out what it should be at // ok i fixed it

00:18:315 (18315|2) - This sections patterning feels unnatural, lots of repeated patterns and patterns not really suited for a standard like 00:26:227 (26227|3,26310|2,26392|3,26557|0,26640|1,26722|0) - // uhh... from where do you see it not suited if i may ask? i think that pattern are pretty much suited for novice player to learn something new

00:33:975 (33975|1) - Add a note since it's a super strong sound // as you can see here. i dont use any dual at all.. so any suggestion about adding more note to make dual are rejected, sorry

00:34:469 (34469|3) - I understand what you're trying to do in this section but it's really slow and boring due to how sparse it is. Even the beginner is more dense // FYI, 00:49:799 - this is the reason why i left it like that. i want to make a rest point before i give them the stream

01:11:887 (71887|1) - Col 3 for pitch relevancy // uhh.. no.. the key are (from what i heard here) like this

01:13:453 (73453|0) - Remove, neither of the hypers have this note, 01:13:205 (73205|3) - extend this to the white tick. If you dont want to do this (i'd rather you not) just make it a lot more clear in the patterning. What you did on the LN right before it here https://i.imgur.com/V0fIWdP.png is a good example //uhh... no thankyou

01:32:821 (92821|2) - same comment as before. boring because super sparse like you have gaps of >1 measure 01:35:623 (95623|1,97766|2) . add something else in // same reason as before

01:40:898 (100898|1) - add something even more in for this section to reflect the increase in intensity // no

01:46:008 (106008|2) - https://i.imgur.com/tFjm2CL.png (right is hyper2) the spread between this and the hyper2 is wew // cant open imgur, sorry (blocked here)

02:20:458 (140458|0,140541|1,140623|2,140705|1,140788|3,140953|1) - This pattern feels very weird to play, smooth it out a bit (or get rid of it because the hyper has no 1/4 rhythms here) // no

02:46:585 (166585|3) - big gap in col 4 after this note // keep it

02:53:178 (173178|3) - same here (dont do this) // ^

02:57:711 (177711|3) - again, theres no reason for these large gaps // yes there's a reason for that i cant explain it

Protastic101 wrote:

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[General]

1. Might wanna increase HP of As' Intermediate to 7.5 or something cause there's a bunch of little 1/4 rolls that the player won't really be punished for if they miss a lot in.
2. Spent about 20 minutes checking that every sample in the folder was used and it is T_T)b tfw cant keysound

[Ultimate]
00:17:162 - This SV is a 0.4x average cause math but the normalizing of this section is 0.8x. You'll want to average the SV sequence to 0.8x as a result to avoid changing up the reading on the player at last second and forcing them to adjust to a new scroll for only three beats. What you can do is something like this (adds up to 9.6/12 to get 0.8x average)

1. 00:17:162 - 0.3x
2. 00:17:821 - 0.5x
3. 00:17:904 - 1.2x
4. 00:17:986 - 2.0x
5. 00:18:069 - 3.5x

edit: i change my mind to keep it. the reason is the scrool going in a really fast pace that the player wont even see they coming so they dont have the reflex to the upcoming pattern. so far my SVs the prolly best choice for being readable

00:31:090 (31090|2,31255|2,31420|2,31585|2,31749|2,31914|2,32079|2,32244|2) - The stack here gets pretty long and repetitive while everything else has been a fairly short trill so far. I'd try to break it at 00:31:502 - ish like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9419284

00:32:986 - Imo, a bump using four units (1/8 snap) would have been better for emphasis as it sends the next note flying towards the player which represents the sudden stop in the music or smth i dunno.
00:33:151 - I'd apply the same thing here. if i'm not misunderstanding this, you wish me to go by 1,5 -> 0,83 on 1/8 interval from 4/8 snaps? its kinda didnt suit the bump you've been said. i honestly rather go like my current one as the bump are more noticeable to read

00:35:458 (35458|1,35788|1,36118|1,36447|1,36777|1,37107|1,37436|1,37766|1) - Long stack and also a lot of back and forth on the left hand. Not sure if it's intentional, but I dont think it is cause the following measure at 00:37:931 - only has a measure long stack before changing columns

00:40:898 - 00:41:227 - 4 - 1.8 = 2.2 / 3 = 0.733x as your final SV for these two timestamps listed. The current average is 1.125x which is inconsistent with the current normalizing SV of 1x. As a side note though, I think the placement of the SV is a bit odd. It would make more sense to put them on the downbeat rather than the 1/4 line before as the downbeat is where the sound comes in full force, though I think it's fine. You do need a normalizing SV at 00:41:475 - or you'll have to make the SV average with 5 units instead of 4. this is kinda intended to make the SVs more bumpy friendly towards mini LN.
if i put the starting value at the downbeat, the LN will become visually longer than what the noise should represnt so it'll kind of misleading that way

00:49:634 - I'd consider adding a note here to represent the height of the sound after which it kind of just tapers off into silence.

01:07:436 - to 01:07:931 - 1.15x average, although since you're kind of getting at a speed up for 01:07:931 - , I'd keep the average to 1x instead so the player will be accustomed to a 1x average at 01:07:931 - . Something like this would work (each value only lasts one unit)

01:10:568 - Think it'd be nice here to have a similar but probably weaker SV like the one at 01:07:931 - as the cut off is very sudden but the sound is rather weak with it only being a kick.

01:49:675 - Concerning this burst, I disagree with upping the note density rather than the rhythm here. Essentially, col 2 and 3 have all the minijacks with the outer columns in 1 and 4 only having 3/8 rhythms which are still pretty harder to predict. What I think would have worked better here is a single note roll of 1/12 going into 1/16 at 01:50:129 - , like so https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9419329 . Or, you could add jumps to the 1/12 rather than using 1/16 which gets really dense really fast https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9419337 changed for now, might change back to 1/8js if people getting to disagree with this. (though i know the burst is 1/12 justified lul but meh maniaq)

01:53:755 - Edgy SVs, I couldn't be any prouder tbh yos

01:55:115 - 01:55:280 - tfw not 1x average reeee. Make 0.4x to 0.5x or make the 2.5x to 2.8x and leave the 0.4x.
01:59:359 - ^ Also, is there any reason for this one to start with the slow value first and fast value second when the first time it occured was a simple fast -> slow bump? Makes the reading a bit awkward too as it connects a slow-fast to fast-slow sequence which I think is better suited for sounds that crescendo/decrescendo rather than sudden stops. you might notice on how the song suddenly afloat with the stops. imo its better to slow -> fast rather than vice versa
02:00:390 - 02:00:554 - s m h. So on and so forth, not gonna mention the rest of these

01:58:041 - In my opinion, for SV sequences that span over LNs, I tend to favor having them be reversed and start slow value -> fast value as it drags the LN out at the very start, making it seem like it's never going to be released as opposed to jumping forward first before dragging in a really short time frame.pretty much my preference on how the song acts like "holding" its "beat". based on my experience also, people tend to control fast ->
slow more perfectly rather than slow -> fast because of the nature sense of "we dont know when the notes will speeding up"

02:12:711 - 02:13:041 - half half method on 3/4 LNs *sad life* Would honestly have benefitted from a simple bump like 02:12:711 - 2x and 02:12:793 - 0.5x, cap at 02:12:958 - with 1x.

03:02:903 (182903|0,182986|0) - t r i g g e r e d. Honestly, the minijack this creates is a really hard transition as the patterns immediately after this are all focused on the left hand in order to contrast the right hand heavy patterns used in the previous measure, so I'd just delete the first note in 1 and avoid the minijack altogether.

03:06:612 - For this, I think the ending burst is a bit unfair to players who have made it this far as the sound is a bit smoother than the rest of the sounds that are represented with bursts. Also, there's the fact that there's a 1/4 pause at the very end which can be a bit misleading when reading as a lot of people will simply assume it is a consistent roll going all the way to the last chord at 03:06:942 - . What I think should be used instead is a simple LN with a gradually increasing SV to show how the sound kind of lurches forward a bit. Wont list all the SVs here but poke me in discord if you need an idea of what kind of sv Im talking about.


[Another]
00:49:469 - Tfw edgy SV here but no edgy SV in Ultimate smh. Anyways, they aren't averaged though cause you need 16 units to properly utilize a 10x SV (could do 12 but that's not enough edge). Either way, these only use 8 units, so the max rankable value you could do is 7.3x to 0.1x. Or you can set BPM to 2912 and set snap to 1/16 and set 10x to 0.4x SVs that way if you really wanted, but the space between 1/16 snaps is only 2 ms so it's not worth it as it's too unnoticeable. deleted entirely. i forgot to remove this since i was too focused around ultimate lol

01:07:436 - Same thing as mentioned in ultimate

01:37:931 (97931|0,98096|3) - Might control H this or something cause none of the ministacks have ever been in col 1 so far and they have a bit of a bias towards the right hand in col 3 and 4.

03:00:183 (180183|0,180266|2,180348|1,180348|3,180431|2,180513|0) - Nice symmetry but at the same time I hate the movement restriction :ccc but its a gem (geddit DD)

03:01:255 (181255|0) - Think it would be better to either move this to col 2 or move 03:01:172 (181172|0) - to 2 to avoid the sudden minijack which may be justified due to the synth being the same pitch here, but it feels out of place as the section so far has been pretty rolly and smooth to play.


[Hyper]
00:30:019 - Not too sure how I feel about this as it is a Hyper diff and longer jumpstreams like this tend to be focused more on the difficulty just above this level. I might reduce the amount of jumps to be only every 2/1 instead of 1/1 as the player is still just mastering 1/4 bursts and singles I think. but then it'll lost its contrasts to Another. we have Advanced as an alternative. putting chord every 2/1 isnt musically fit either since its literally become layering inconsistency

01:28:865 (88865|0) - Rather than use an LN here, I think you're fine mapping the 3/2 long 1/4 burst here as you have already introduced denser 1/4 patterning to the player before, so it seems kind of anticlimactic to only extend an LN over the entire series of sound.

01:49:799 (109799|2,109881|1,109964|2,110046|0,110129|1,110211|2,110293|0,110376|2) - I think it'd be better to control H here to avoid having a 1/2 ministack on the same hand as the LN or something, cause I keep missing here and it's making me sad https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9420533 i thinki keep this. it feels like doesnt seem to flow for me because of the one handed minitrill before the LN (look at the first 2 notes of your screenshot and the LN after it)

02:44:689 - I'd try to differentiate the roll direction or something a bit because it's identical to Another atm and does feel slightly repetitive the way it is now https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9420547


[Advanced]
00:44:689 - I think you're missing a note for the piano here because every where else in this section has at least a single note for it :thinking:

01:00:348 (60348|0,60843|3,61337|1) - I'd change the arrangement of these LNs as they're the same as 00:57:711 - despite being different pitches.


[Standard]
02:00:019 (120019|3,120348|0,120348|3) - Shouldn't this still be [3]/[2][23] as you mapped all the snares in the same column, changing only at the end of the measure but this little miniphrase hasnt been completed yet but the chord changes from [23] to [14].


[Basic]
01:31:667 (91667|3,91997|0) - Think it would have been nice to stack these two notes to represent the staccato kick.
01:34:304 (94304|2,94634|0) - ^ just to add a little variation to the map.

02:23:425 (143425|3) - I'd consider moving this to col 2 and then turning 02:22:766 (142766|3) - into a 2/1 LN to represent the constantly increasing speed of the rhythm.

Protastic101 wrote:

mods are a social construct

[General]

1. Might wanna increase HP of As' Intermediate to 7.5 or something cause there's a bunch of little 1/4 rolls that the player won't really be punished for if they miss a lot in.// how about 8?
2. Spent about 20 minutes checking that every sample in the folder was used and it is T_T)b

[As' Intermediate]
00:55:953 (55953|2,56063|3,56282|1,56392|3,56612|1,56722|0) - I think it'd be nice to put these solely on one hand to better emphasize the kicks here, and leave the rest of the synths on the other hand, like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9420599 // change to that, thankyou

03:06:942 (186942|1,188260|3) - Tbh, I think it's a bit odd to split the LNs here as they're basically part of the same sound with no distinct separation or cut between them to show that they're different sounds. Instead, the volume just grows a little bit faster at 03:08:260 - so I think overlapping the LNs similar to what the other diffs have done would be a more accurate representation of the crescendo.// fine i'll do that

Guilhermeziat wrote:

Hi, I came across the map and I really liked it but I found a couple inconsistencies on your last difficulty so I'll try to convey my points about them as well as possible while trying not to hurt your mapping structure.

Ultimate

00:45:348 - Maybe repattern this section to this instead ( http://puu.sh/yfue9/c131d47ca9.jpg )? I think it represents the pitch going up better without making it too dense, unless you really want to follow the triple layering. wasnt it already and yeah i still want to keep the triple, alas it'll become inconsistent with the rest of this section

00:49:799 - 00:55:733 - This could use more variety, it goes on for really long and it feels like you just copy pasted and mirrored the patterns a few times. Maybe you could layer a triple every third beat (like on 00:50:458 - and 00:51:447 - and so on) where there's a stronger kick (just like you were doing before) and then vary the pattern right after it (Example: http://puu.sh/yfuL7/d8cac22e3c.jpg though it doesn't need to be exactly like that, it's just to add a bit more variety). I don't think this will make it much harder either, so that'd be solved for you aswell. i'm actually in the brink of "yes" or "no"
on this. mainly the concern its about triple stacks. which seem to be quite harsh execution since there's SVs. secondly, it'll lose contrast between this diff and Another which contains pretty light hammerjack while this diff emphasized it more

00:55:733 (55733|3,55733|2) - 00:56:063 (56063|3,56063|2) - 00:56:392 (56392|3,56392|2) - These could also be triples, since the kick gets really hard on them, but it's up to you. I didn't highlight 00:56:722 (56722|2,56722|3) - for this matter because it's the start of a burst and it would make the transition a bit rough, however changing it from a [34] chord to a [14] chord I think would represent the crash better. Applying all the mods, it'd probably look something like this I guess ( http://puu.sh/yfuXG/71cbff24e0.jpg ), however applying the double change would require you to change up the patterning of the roll burst afterwards, so that's up to you. i guess i agree with the 2 and 3 but not the first one, however. since the first are not the part of the climax part

01:47:161 (107161|0,107161|1) - I also hear a crash in this double right here, so maybe consider changin it to a [14] aswell, but without inverting the hand that does the jumps again. I think it'd look pretty neat. it doesnt seem to be aesthetical-ish so i think i'll pass this one :c

01:49:140 - - to 01:50:458 - This goes way overboard compared to the rest of the map. Highly suggest you either start this as a 1/6 roll and then speed it up to 1/8 on the second part or just keep it at a 1/8 roll all along. Having a spike like this hurts the structure of the map in general due to the difference in difficulty, and it surely isn't very fun for players who are either trying to pass the song or FC it. Hah, just imagine, getting a really good acc FC up to that point and then getting absolutely trolled. kind of.... no. first off that we heard those burst are really really dense in which they definitely above the usual 1/8 setting. so using either 1/6 or 1/8 in a dense part are quite misleading. its also making it a little to no difference with "Another" in which in another way, pretty misleading since its displayed "Harder" than Another.


SV section: This looks awesome
01:53:178 (113178|2,113260|3,113343|1,113425|0,113508|2,113590|3,113672|1) - I'd check this patterning again if I were you, because I think 01:53:508 (113508|2,113672|1) - are ghost notes.
02:03:727 (123727|1,123810|0,123892|3,123975|2,124057|0,124140|1,124222|3) - ^ wha? i believe they're the part of the wub noises
01:55:568 (115568|3,115651|0) - Pretty sure this is a 1/6 burst (something like this http://puu.sh/yfw8v/20e00dfeb5.jpg ) woop
02:10:568 - Missing note? Not that this one matters too much because you put an SV here to another sound anyway. already represented by LN there so i guess its fine


02:22:766 (142766|2,142766|1) - and 02:23:425 (143425|2,143425|0,143425|3) - These chords... I don't really know what to say to fix the first one, but i'm guessing you don't really want to take it away if it's there in the first place, do you. As to the second one, I'd just reduce it to a double on [34] to prevent this minijack (02:23:425 (143425|2,143425|0,143425|3) - ) idk. its actually pretty fit for emphasis towards dense LN. well i think 1/4 minijack is kinda doable since ite present in the othe parts in the map as well

02:23:920 (143920|0,144002|1,144085|2,144167|3,144167|0,144249|1,144332|2,144414|0,144414|1,144414|3) - I don't know about you, but I don't hear the sound you're mapping LNs to on these notes 02:24:002 (144002|1,144167|3) - and i do hear it here 02:24:249 (144249|1) - . Might wanna get that part checked aswell (though the pattern is really cool and I'd leave it just for the aesthetics hue but this is the ranking criteria ). its a pitch (?) if i'm not mistaken. .. they simply represent the Gradual pitch raise :ddd

First main kiai: I'm not exactly sure if you're trying to map the synth or the hihats or both here, so take these mods with a grain of salt. Layering looks fine and the kiai is really fun to play too .
02:25:651 (145651|2) - Ghost note?
02:27:629 - Missing note?
02:28:453 - ^
02:28:782 (148782|1) - Ghost note?
02:30:925 (150925|0) - ^
02:33:892 - Missing note?
02:36:200 (156200|1) - Ghost note?
02:38:178 - Missing note?
02:39:332 (159332|0) - Ghost note?
02:41:475 (161475|2) - ^ I'll keep the "Ghost notes" as they are actually have noises tho :u some kind of synth and some are pitch changes else is yep

LN section between both kiais
02:44:689 (164689|2,164771|3,164854|0,164936|1,165019|2,165101|3,165183|1,165266|0,165348|2,165431|3) - I think this is supposed to be snapped to 1/3, unless you're not mapping the wubs. If you're mapping the synths here, then 02:44:689 (164689|2) - 02:44:936 (164936|1) - 02:45:183 (165183|1) - 02:45:266 (165266|0) - 02:45:431 (165431|3) - are the ones that should have LNs mapped to them, pretty sure the rest of them would be ghost notes. not really ghost notes if i must say, they are correctly represent the pitch raise every 1/4.

Second main kiai: I really liked how you spiced things up with the LNs here super cool
02:48:068 - Missing note?
02:58:618 - ^
03:06:118 (186118|1) - Ghost note? its still have noises, though not the one in particular follows but in order to not break aesthethics i decided to make it flows towards col 1 since the pitch are descended
03:06:530 - Missing note?

Good luck with your map! Hope I helped! I really liked it
I can also mod the other diffs if there's any need by the way