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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 19 November 2017 at 20:58:12

Artist: jioyi
Title: cyanine
Source: Lanota
Tags: aste- 1164530434 noxy games fisica ritmo dance EDM boss song chapter 2
BPM: 182
Filesize: 15980kb
Play Time: 03:09
Difficulties Available:
  1. Advanced - 4Key (2,77 stars, 1176 notes)
  2. Another - 4Key (4,46 stars, 1829 notes)
  3. As' Intermediate - 4Key (2,23 stars, 839 notes)
  4. Beginner - 4Key (1,34 stars, 550 notes)
  5. Hyper - 4Key (3,24 stars, 1473 notes)
  6. Standard - 4Key (1,77 stars, 781 notes)
  7. Ultimate - 4Key (5,07 stars, 2179 notes)


Download: jioyi - cyanine
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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"History is learned through the sacred silence"

Protastic101 | ?

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Standard by Aste- "Hitsound base" is not for mod! Hitsound by 1164530434.
Big thanks to them for contributing on this mapset :D
  1. genkicho
  2. erlinadewi-
  3. Alsty-
  4. Arcwinolivirus
  5. eyes
  6. Dustmoon
  7. knif3rism
  8. LordTimeWaste
  9. misternopal
  10. cpotfangirl
  11. Vortex-
  12. Moku_Hazushi
  13. imtdb1
  14. Mage
  15. CrumpetFiddler
  16. TheNewBungping
  17. Songofevil
  18. litharrale
  19. Protastic101
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A good map for me to get back into Mania stuff ! Good luck for rank Rivals, and also good luck to Aste- :3
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thx for the support pachiru :3/
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wheres the ↑↓↑↓↑↓↑↓↑↓↑↓↑↓↑↓
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Chara wrote:

wheres the ↑↓↑↓↑↓↑↓↑↓↑↓↑↓↑↓
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NM Req


Ultimate
00:16:400 i suggest -> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7545222
00:19:057 (19057|1) - volume too low, suggest delete
00:21:035 (21035|2) - Beat volume too low, suggest delete
00:20:953 (20953|1) - should be double like sec 19
00:26:887 (26887|3,26969|1) - like sec 19
00:32:738 (32738|1,32821|3,32903|0) - i suggest continue the trill -> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7545248
00:40:898 (40898|2,40898|1,40898|3,41227|1,41227|3,41227|2) - plus SV would be nice
00:41:557 (41557|0,41722|1,41887|0,41887|3,41887|2,41887|1) - this too
00:48:480 (48480|2,48480|3) - -> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7545265
00:49:799 (49799|1,49799|3,49799|0,49799|2,49909|3,49909|2,50019|2,50019|3,50129|0,50129|1) - you can add teleport in this part
00:51:227 (51227|2,51337|0) - i suggest -> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7545278
00:52:766 same like ^
00:54:524 (54524|3,54634|0) - ^
00:58:205 (58205|0,58700|2) - what are these.. it should start at 01:02:986 (62986|2) - because the piano start there
01:41:803 add note
01:42:545 (102545|2,102545|3) - from this part until pattern change i can hear 1/4 sound
01:53:754 (113754|0,113836|1,113919|2,114001|3) - 01:54:743 (114743|3,114825|2,114908|1,114990|3,115073|2) - 01:56:391 (116391|2,116474|3,116556|0,116639|1,116721|2) - i suggest trill for those sounds


nice song and nice map :D GoodLuck
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[ Drop ] wrote:

Chara wrote:

wheres the ↑↓↑↓↑↓↑↓↑↓↑↓↑↓↑↓

ayy lmao osumania didnt support flick notes. ppy pls add xdd

genkicho wrote:

NM Req


Ultimate
00:16:400 i suggest -> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7545222 emm nope i guess. dont want to grace here
00:19:057 (19057|1) - volume too low, suggest delete still kinda audible for me :/
00:21:035 (21035|2) - Beat volume too low, suggest delete ^
00:20:953 (20953|1) - should be double like sec 19
00:26:887 (26887|3,26969|1) - like sec 19 nope for this
00:32:738 (32738|1,32821|3,32903|0) - i suggest continue the trill -> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7545248
00:40:898 (40898|2,40898|1,40898|3,41227|1,41227|3,41227|2) - plus SV would be nice
00:41:557 (41557|0,41722|1,41887|0,41887|3,41887|2,41887|1) - this too ^ will add later :3
00:48:480 (48480|2,48480|3) - -> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7545265 added but i think its not 1/6 lol
00:49:799 (49799|1,49799|3,49799|0,49799|2,49909|3,49909|2,50019|2,50019|3,50129|0,50129|1) - you can add teleport in this part I'm not Evening :x
00:51:227 (51227|2,51337|0) - i suggest -> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7545278 I dont think so for balance sake
00:52:766 same like ^ ^
00:54:524 (54524|3,54634|0) - ^ ^
00:58:205 (58205|0,58700|2) - what are these.. it should start at 01:02:986 (62986|2) - because the piano start there low piano
01:41:803 add note Intend to omit for the balance
01:42:545 (102545|2,102545|3) - from this part until pattern change i can hear 1/4 sound yeah but i'm just focus with the kicks
01:53:754 (113754|0,113836|1,113919|2,114001|3) - 01:54:743 (114743|3,114825|2,114908|1,114990|3,115073|2) - 01:56:391 (116391|2,116474|3,116556|0,116639|1,116721|2) - i suggest trill for those sounds i dunno. the current seems flowy enough tho


nice song and nice map :D GoodLuck


Thanks o/

also thx Chara for the star :3/
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Hi Rivals :3

[Beginner]
  1. 00:11:373 (11373|0,11538|1) - menurut saya note itu lebih bagus di ctrl j menjadi stair 3-2-1 dan lebih ngepitch menurut saya
  2. 00:18:480 (18480|2,18810|1,20129|2,20458|1,21447|2,21777|1,22766|2,23096|1) - agak repetitive disana menggunakan pattern yang berulang2 kali (3-2-4-1 3-2-4-1), lebih bagus kalau divariasikan lagi
  3. 00:24:085 (24085|1,24414|0) - ctrl j lebih enak flownya
  4. 00:26:722 - suggest https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7547025
  5. 00:33:151 (33151|3) - move to 2 make jack with 00:32:986 (32986|1) - karena mereka memiliki kesamaan pitch dan lebih enak jika diletakan di 1 kolom yang sama
  6. 00:35:293 (35293|1,35953|0) - switch them lebih rapi imo
  7. 00:36:612 (36612|0,36942|0,37271|0) - triple jack untuk? kurang ada feel nya disana, sedikit suggest 00:36:612 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7547100 00:38:260 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7547105
  8. 00:41:722 (41722|2,41887|1) - ctrl j
  9. 00:42:876 (42876|1,43205|2) - ctrl j flow nya lebih enakan
  10. 00:41:887 (41887|1) - saran aja :3 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7547135 00:47:821 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7547139
  11. 01:28:040 - double for cymbal
  12. 01:25:732 (85732|1,85897|2,86721|1,86886|2,87710|1,87875|2,88534|1,88699|2) - lel perasaan disana make 2-3 2-3 mulu, divariasikan lagi mungkin jadi lebih bagus imo :D
  13. 01:46:501 (106501|2) - pendekin aja val 01:47:161 - bkin LN 1/2 chord 01:47:820 (107820|3) - begitu juga yang ini, pendekin dan add LN disini 01:48:479 -
  14. 01:48:479 (108479|0) - agak jarang liat diff beginner punya LN nyempil wkwk
  15. 01:50:128 - add LN? terlalu kosong kesannya disana
  16. 01:55:732 (115732|2,115732|3) - kick pakai single aja cukup imo sama kek 01:56:062 -
  17. 01:59:523 (119523|0) - saya saran aja :3 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7547298
  18. 02:22:106 (142106|0) - Ln nya buat 1/2 chord aja 02:22:765 - potong disitu
  19. 03:05:952 (185952|0) - move to col 2 biar gak terlalu berat di col 1


[As' Standard]
  1. 00:01:648 (1648|0) - move to 2? yang ini 00:02:307 - pitch nya turun soalnya
  2. 00:11:208 (11208|1,11373|2,11538|1) - bikin jadi 2-3-2? mirror dari 00:05:274 (5274|2,5439|1,5604|2) -
  3. 00:22:601 (22601|1,22683|0) - geser ke kanan 1x pindah ke kol 3-2 biar variasi aja, soalnya disini juga sama 00:11:538 (11538|0) - kol 1-2
  4. 00:26:887 (26887|0) - lebih bgus bkin double untuk penekanan cymbal nya dan awal masuk part yang berbeda
  5. 00:56:722 - ^
  6. 01:25:567 (85567|2) - ^
  7. 01:52:765 (112765|0) - col 3 aja
  8. 01:58:699 - add sesuatu disini? menurutku suaranya udah beda
  9. 02:38:177 (158177|1) - move to col 3 aja biar col 2 nya gak terlalu berat
  10. 02:59:276 (179276|1) - part ini terlalu berat di tangan kiri
  11. 03:06:611 (186611|3) - change to LN lebih bgus imo


[Hyper]
  1. 00:47:656 (47656|0,47738|1) - ctrl j bikin stair aja? xd
  2. 01:39:249 (99249|0,99249|3,99413|2,99578|0,99578|1,99743|2) - dibikin jack seru nih val wkwk
  3. 01:55:402 (115402|0) - move to 3 biar jadi 2-3 sama kek 01:55:238 (115238|1,115238|2) - nyesuaiin suara dug2 nya sama :v
  4. 02:13:946 (133946|1,134029|0) - ctrl j
  5. 02:35:045 (155045|1,155128|0) - ^
  6. 03:04:963 - triplet?
  7. 03:05:952 - double buat snare nya
  8. the rest are neat


good luck on ranking XD
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haii , rivaalssss.. more jioyi pls =3=

1|2|3|4
[Ultimate]
  1. 00:09:230 - 2 kek nya bagus , ada sedikit scratch gitu , mungkin di col 1 nah 00:09:560 (9560|0) - bisa pindah col 2
  2. 00:20:293 - mungkin bisa dibikin mirror dari 00:20:623 (20623|0,20705|1,20788|3,20788|2) - buat ngurangin flood trill di tengah aja sih :/
  3. 00:24:414 (24414|1) - move ke 4 , feel a bit empty
  4. 00:40:898 - sedikit suggestion https://puu.sh/uFIX0/a2aa346a1e.png
  5. 00:49:140 - mungkin tambah LN 1 di section ini jadi kek https://puu.sh/uFJbn/57e3a7d88e.png , ga terlalu ngeganggu SV nya kok
  6. 01:43:864 - dari awal beat ini bisa di kasih variasi [14][23] kalo mau :/
  7. 02:19:468 - jumpstream nya kenapa ga mulai dari sini aja? :/
  8. 02:23:424 - suggestion yang sedikit ekstrim mungkin https://puu.sh/uFJQY/93a82ee54e.png , btw itu ga asal"an @@
  9. 03:01:666 - js mungkin ? :/
  10. 03:05:787 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7550032
  11. 03:09:084 - 03:09:249 - disini bisa tambahin LN lagi , terus ada sedikit last SV kalo mau https://puu.sh/uFKrz/865e8ade4b.png
[Another]
  1. 00:40:898 - nyamain yang tadi suggestion di ultimate tp sedikit beda https://puu.sh/uFKCq/3523d826df.png
  2. 00:55:949 - buat sedikit ngebedain di jedub jedub nya mungkin enak begini https://puu.sh/uFKMv/19462ec40b.png
  3. 01:13:122 (73122|0) - move ke 4 mungkin? :/
  4. 01:15:512 - https://puu.sh/uFKXL/dafc9ede41.png mungkin lebih chalangging dan engga terlalu spammable
  5. 01:39:084 (99084|1) - LN nya mulai dari sini atau belakang nya lagi :/
  6. 01:57:051 - 01:57:216 - 01:57:545 - mungkin tambah single note di sela" kek gini biar ga terlalu hampa :/
  7. 02:02:820 - dari pada trill mepet di kiri buat double mending gini https://puu.sh/uFLeK/8364153e35.png
  8. 02:09:661 - isi aja , kiai kok :/
  9. 03:09:084 - sama kek ultimate kalo di apply :3

ahh neat diff ;w;
good luck rivalsssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
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erlinadewi-

erlinadewi- wrote:

Hi Rivals :3

[Beginner]
  1. 00:11:373 (11373|0,11538|1) - menurut saya note itu lebih bagus di ctrl j menjadi stair 3-2-1 dan lebih ngepitch menurut saya
  2. 00:18:480 (18480|2,18810|1,20129|2,20458|1,21447|2,21777|1,22766|2,23096|1) - agak repetitive disana menggunakan pattern yang berulang2 kali (3-2-4-1 3-2-4-1), lebih bagus kalau divariasikan lagi
  3. 00:24:085 (24085|1,24414|0) - ctrl j lebih enak flownya
  4. 00:26:722 - suggest https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7547025
  5. 00:33:151 (33151|3) - move to 2 make jack with 00:32:986 (32986|1) - karena mereka memiliki kesamaan pitch dan lebih enak jika diletakan di 1 kolom yang sama hmm terlalu deket jaraknya utk dibuat jack :/
  6. 00:35:293 (35293|1,35953|0) - switch them lebih rapi imo
  7. 00:36:612 (36612|0,36942|0,37271|0) - triple jack untuk? kurang ada feel nya disana, sedikit suggest 00:36:612 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7547100 00:38:260 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7547105 hmm ubah2 sendiri aja deh xd
  8. 00:41:722 (41722|2,41887|1) - ctrl j
  9. 00:42:876 (42876|1,43205|2) - ctrl j flow nya lebih enakan
  10. 00:41:887 (41887|1) - saran aja :3 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7547135 00:47:821 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7547139 hmm dunno. still enakan yg skrg imo xD
  11. 01:28:040 - double for cymbal intended gk double sih. soalnya disitu lagi rada dense juga patternnya
  12. 01:25:732 (85732|1,85897|2,86721|1,86886|2,87710|1,87875|2,88534|1,88699|2) - lel perasaan disana make 2-3 2-3 mulu, divariasikan lagi mungkin jadi lebih bagus imo :D
  13. 01:46:501 (106501|2) - pendekin aja val 01:47:161 - bkin LN 1/2 chord 01:47:820 (107820|3) - begitu juga yang ini, pendekin dan add LN disini 01:48:479 - hmm bisa sih tapi q pengen konsisten LN nya :u
  14. 01:48:479 (108479|0) - agak jarang liat diff beginner punya LN nyempil wkwk ehh itu harusnya sih bkn LN xD
  15. 01:50:128 - add LN? terlalu kosong kesannya disana sengaja aja biar ada recovery time bagi yg newbie xd
  16. 01:55:732 (115732|2,115732|3) - kick pakai single aja cukup imo sama kek 01:56:062 -
  17. 01:59:523 (119523|0) - saya saran aja :3 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7547298 agak dibedain dikit wkwk
  18. 02:22:106 (142106|0) - Ln nya buat 1/2 chord aja 02:22:765 - potong disitu sama kek sebelumnya. pen konsisten :u
  19. 03:05:952 (185952|0) - move to col 2 biar gak terlalu berat di col 1


[Hyper]
  1. 00:47:656 (47656|0,47738|1) - ctrl j bikin stair aja? xd
  2. 01:39:249 (99249|0,99249|3,99413|2,99578|0,99578|1,99743|2) - dibikin jack seru nih val wkwk
  3. 01:55:402 (115402|0) - move to 3 biar jadi 2-3 sama kek 01:55:238 (115238|1,115238|2) - nyesuaiin suara dug2 nya sama :v
  4. 02:13:946 (133946|1,134029|0) - ctrl j
  5. 02:35:045 (155045|1,155128|0) - ^ ^ dua ini sengaja gk flow sih supaya ada "challenge"nya la wkwkw
  6. 03:04:963 - triplet? too dense imo
  7. 03:05:952 - double buat snare nya
  8. the rest are neat


good luck on ranking XD
Alsty-

Alsty- wrote:

haii , rivaalssss.. more jioyi pls =3=

1|2|3|4
[Ultimate]
  1. 00:09:230 - 2 kek nya bagus , ada sedikit scratch gitu , mungkin di col 1 nah 00:09:560 (9560|0) - bisa pindah col 2 pianonya gk terlalu kenceng imo
  2. 00:20:293 - mungkin bisa dibikin mirror dari 00:20:623 (20623|0,20705|1,20788|3,20788|2) - buat ngurangin flood trill di tengah aja sih :/ nanti malah ngejack dong :/ rada susah juga kalo swing pattern kek gitu
  3. 00:24:414 (24414|1) - move ke 4 , feel a bit empty
  4. 00:40:898 - sedikit suggestion https://puu.sh/uFIX0/a2aa346a1e.png eng gk deh. stacatto LN ini dah ckup imo
  5. 00:49:140 - mungkin tambah LN 1 di section ini jadi kek https://puu.sh/uFJbn/57e3a7d88e.png , ga terlalu ngeganggu SV nya kok rada terlalu sempit sih :>
  6. 01:43:864 - dari awal beat ini bisa di kasih variasi [14][23] kalo mau :/ bisa sih tapi tak pikirin deh wkwkw
  7. 02:19:468 - jumpstream nya kenapa ga mulai dari sini aja? :/ gk sih. jadi idenya karena lagunya sendiri lama tingkat intens nya naik jadi patternnya ngikutin. dari chordjack di kanan utk yg pertama, jumpstream buat yg kedua, full 1/8 stream di yang ke 3. lagu makin intens, pattern makin rapet
  8. 02:23:424 - suggestion yang sedikit ekstrim mungkin https://puu.sh/uFJQY/93a82ee54e.png , btw itu ga asal"an @@ Hmm aku bedain dikit deh xd
  9. 03:01:666 - js mungkin ? :/ gk deh xd fokus di perkusi
  10. 03:05:787 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7550032 nanti tak pikir lagi deh xd
  11. 03:09:084 - 03:09:249 - disini bisa tambahin LN lagi , terus ada sedikit last SV kalo mau https://puu.sh/uFKrz/865e8ade4b.png gk deh LN nya xd buat SV emang kepikiran sih tapi mau bikin semacam stutter SV gitu. nanti deh bikin lel
[Another]
  1. 00:40:898 - nyamain yang tadi suggestion di ultimate tp sedikit beda https://puu.sh/uFKCq/3523d826df.png same. staccato LN aja udh cukup :u
  2. 00:55:949 - buat sedikit ngebedain di jedub jedub nya mungkin enak begini https://puu.sh/uFKMv/19462ec40b.png udh ada di hyper :u
  3. 01:13:122 (73122|0) - move ke 4 mungkin? :/
  4. 01:15:512 - https://puu.sh/uFKXL/dafc9ede41.png mungkin lebih chalangging dan engga terlalu spammable Biar PP
  5. 01:39:084 (99084|1) - LN nya mulai dari sini atau belakang nya lagi :/
  6. 01:57:051 - 01:57:216 - 01:57:545 - mungkin tambah single note di sela" kek gini biar ga terlalu hampa :/ emm ribet juga sih soalnya suaranya wub wub wkwkw
  7. 02:02:820 - dari pada trill mepet di kiri buat double mending gini https://puu.sh/uFLeK/8364153e35.png
  8. 02:09:661 - isi aja , kiai kok :/ wub :/
  9. 03:09:084 - sama kek ultimate kalo di apply :3 literally blm apply, tapi nanti wkwkw

ahh neat diff ;w;
good luck rivalsssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss


thx for mod elin and alsty xD No reply=fix
Not done yet. posting dulu jaga2 lappy ngecrash lul

BSS mati juga yawla
Not updated yet
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erlinadewi- wrote:

Hi Rivals :3

[As' Standard]
  1. 00:01:648 (1648|0) - move to 2? yang ini 00:02:307 - pitch nya turun soalnya
  2. 00:11:208 (11208|1,11373|2,11538|1) - bikin jadi 2-3-2? mirror dari 00:05:274 (5274|2,5439|1,5604|2) - // wo ya ngga dong, itu kan emang pitch nya kek gitu
  3. 00:22:601 (22601|1,22683|0) - geser ke kanan 1x pindah ke kol 3-2 biar variasi aja, soalnya disini juga sama 00:11:538 (11538|0) - kol 1-2 // uhh no, keep
  4. 00:26:887 (26887|0) - lebih bgus bkin double untuk penekanan cymbal nya dan awal masuk part yang berbeda // hmm.. no
  5. 00:56:722 - ^ // this too
  6. 01:25:567 (85567|2) - ^ // this too
  7. 01:52:765 (112765|0) - col 3 aja // feel hype nya ilang ntar, jangan
  8. 01:58:699 - add sesuatu disini? menurutku suaranya udah beda // keep. kayanya kau ndengerin suara yang berbeda
  9. 02:38:177 (158177|1) - move to col 3 aja biar col 2 nya gak terlalu berat
  10. 02:59:276 (179276|1) - part ini terlalu berat di tangan kiri // sengaja
  11. 03:06:611 (186611|3) - change to LN lebih bgus imo




good luck on ranking XD
https://puu.sh/uHDw9/5dd435bceb.rar
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added some additional tags. updated
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"Arcwinolivirus' Mod"

Thy Mod.
Note:
• First of all, I would want to apologize if I ever say something that will hurt your feelings as a mapper. Remember that I only want to give advices, suggestions, recommendations and sideas for some improvement in your map. Please do understand and thank you.

• do not be afraid to reject some parts of my mod. I am not perfect and I am not always right. But I do give my best to mod with sense. Also, I do not bite rawr.

• If I suggest to "remove or ctrl function moves" on certain note/s, do not forget and be sure to move the hitsound on the other note beside the suggested note. This is because I only mod the notes and with that, I do not pay attention on the hitsounds placements.
[General]
Audio: OK!
BG: OK!
BPM: OK!
Offset: OK!
Preview Time: OK!

AiMod:
• No problem!
Column:
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4K - |1|2|3|4|
[Beginner]
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01:15:512 - add note to 3, where it is like beat + sound effect. The beat sound is stronger than the double key press on 01:14:523 (74523|1,74523|3) - . It is almost similar to 01:13:205 (73205|1,73205|3) - which has an impact.

01:45:183 (105183|0,106501|2) - I would suggest to remove these LNs and re-position the remaining single notes. The reason is because holding LNs while tapping the singles gives a hard time especially on those mania players who just begin playing. Suggesting some patterns similar to https://puu.sh/uMkVE/e990cc0f48.png where the doubles emphasizes the cymbals and the singles flow still on-going.

02:45:512 - add note? since you made the similar sound doubles at 02:24:413 -

03:04:139 (184139|2,184303|1) - ctrl H for more comfortable execution.


[A's Standard]
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00:18:131 (18131|0) - Fix your snap here as it is snapped on the previous timing point. Check other difficulties snap.

00:26:887 (26887|0) - move to 3 and 00:27:876 (27876|3) - move to 2 for comfortability.

00:32:986 (32986|3,33151|1) - would suggest to add note to change these singles into double for strong sound emphasis.

00:33:975 - add note to 1, strong starting sound.

00:33:975 - until 00:44:524 - I recommend to add more notes as this part seems to be easier than Beginner's which quite feels off. Adding notes will also balance the part to other harder parts. You decide.

00:41:887 - add note to 1 impact sound.

00:49:799 - ^ to 4

00:56:722 - ^ to 4

01:25:567 (85567|2,85732|1,85897|2) - ctrl H, the pitch is on 01:25:567 (85567|2,85897|2) - differs with 01:25:238 (85238|2,86227|2) -

01:39:908 - until 01:44:523 - Buff the part with the percussion, same as previous reason it is because its easier than the Beginner's. Though I understand that you only wanted to follow the melody-like sound. You decide.

01:52:765 (112765|0) - Better if moved to 3 and change to LN until 01:53:095 - for that sweet sound effect. Beginner did LN on this part.

02:24:413 - add note to 4 impact sound

02:24:743 - ^ to 1 or 3

02:35:292 - ^ to 3

02:43:203 - add note to 2 and change 02:43:205 (163205|0) - to LN until 02:43:699 - for focusing the long sound that can be heard here.

02:45:512 - add note to 3 or 4 for the strong beat finish.

02:45:842 - ^ to 2 or 3

02:56:391 - ^ to 3

03:01:666 - ^ to 2

03:02:985 - ^ to 1

03:04:303 - ^ to 3

03:04:303 - until the end - Add more notes for the percussion as they are more consistent and audible than the melody that you want to follow. It feels empty while you hear those percussion but no notes. Example is like 03:04:468 - and 03:04:633 - where you can here that strong beat but no notes. If there are notes it would be more satisfying. Variations and Combinations with the melody can come up with consistent and better patterns.

03:06:941 (186941|1) - should end up at 03:08:260 - and 03:07:765 (187765|3) - starts at where the sound raises up at 03:08:260 - ending at 03:09:578 -



[Hyper]
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00:30:019 - until 00:32:986 - note density is almost the same as Another's and I would recommend to nerf it like reducing the doubles into singles. With the light jumpstream, it makes this part the spike of the difficulty.

01:39:578 (99578|0) - move to 3, much better to execute and more balance for both hands.

01:47:161 - add note to 3, cymbals can be heard here like you did at 01:46:501 (106501|0,106501|3) -

01:49:880 (109880|0) - move to 2 for comfortability.

02:03:314 - strong beat here, add note to 2

02:12:710 (132710|3,133040|2) - change to LN to emphasize the long synth



[Another]
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00:24:579 (24579|1) - much better if ends on the white line like you did at Hyper so the vision can be better and comfy to execute.

00:25:568 (25568|2,25651|0) - move to 1 and 2 respectively for comfy execute.

00:56:722 - until 00:57:711 - Just I thought so while test playing the hardest difficulty (which has the same burst as this) the notes are too fast for the sound. I listened 25% playback rate and tested using a different snap and it seems "1/6th" snap fits more on the instrument sound rather than 1/8. I recommend to change it and try it out.

01:15:512 - Same as above, the snap should be 1/6 which fits with the burst sound.

01:48:562 (108562|1,108644|1) - I suggest to re-position the above notes to avoid this mini-jack for the drum roll as this gives of the "fun" killer feeling. Something like https://puu.sh/uMnFd/cc43268cc0.png or move some notes before to avoid changing the patterns above. You decide.

02:13:369 (133369|3) - move to 3 for clearer sight and fits along with 02:13:040 (133040|1,133040|2,133040|3) -

02:22:765 (142765|1,142847|1) - just like before, this can be a combo breaker, recommending https://puu.sh/uMnU6/b7d9f83104.pngwhere the burst can be done comfortably and sight friendly.

03:01:172 (181172|0,181254|0) - unnecessary jack, might want to swap column 03:01:254 (181254|0,181501|1,181584|0,181666|1) - to avoid that.

03:02:820 - add note to 3 kick sound.



[Ultimate]
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00:31:008 (31008|0,31090|2,31172|0,31255|2,31337|0,31420|2,31502|0,31585|2,31667|0,31749|2,31914|2,32079|2,32244|2) - suggesting to re-position some notes so there won't be too much stress on column 1 and column 3. Moving some notes will assure comfortability in this part.

00:56:722 - same as Another's. Snap should be 1/6 according to the instrument sounds.

01:15:512 - Same as above, the snap should be 1/6 which fits with the burst sound.

01:28:617 - add note synth sound

01:28:781 - ^

01:49:551 (109551|3,109592|2,109592|0,109633|1,109674|3,109674|2,109716|0,109757|1,109757|3,109798|2,109839|0,109839|1,109880|3,109922|0,109922|2,109963|1,110004|2,110004|3,110045|0,110086|1,110086|3,110128|2,110169|0,110169|1,110210|3,110251|0,110251|2,110292|1,110334|3,110334|2,110375|0,110416|3,110416|1) - some doubles are unnecessary in this part as you made it like a high bpm jumpstream creating some combo breakable jacks in the process. Recommending something similar to https://puu.sh/uMoFe/77efef07cf.png where the doubles are only on the audible synth melody. (In the image not all synth melody on the burst are doubled, this is to avoid sudden 1/4 jacks in the burst execution.)

02:02:985 - add note to 2, melody is along with other percussion sound.

02:03:067 - add mini-LN to 1, same as Another's

02:20:045 - add note here as the snare-like sound can be heard here similar to 02:19:633 (139633|2,139633|3,139798|3,139798|2) -

02:20:540 - ^

02:23:342 - Suggesting https://puu.sh/uMp2x/2a7c06b727.png instead to avoid sudden 1/4 on the burst. After all you made similar beat sounds, doubles, like 02:22:106 (142106|2,142106|3,142765|2,142765|1) -

02:44:194 - add LN to 3 until 02:44:358 - since new entry of synth sound can be heard here.


Overall

Very Good Song Choice, I like genres like this as it has alot of synthesizers and some intense action feeling song. Go go rank this and good luck!


~ END ~
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arcwinolivirus wrote:

"Arcwinolivirus' Mod"

Thy Mod.
Note:
• First of all, I would want to apologize if I ever say something that will hurt your feelings as a mapper. Remember that I only want to give advices, suggestions, recommendations and sideas for some improvement in your map. Please do understand and thank you.

• do not be afraid to reject some parts of my mod. I am not perfect and I am not always right. But I do give my best to mod with sense. Also, I do not bite rawr.

• If I suggest to "remove or ctrl function moves" on certain note/s, do not forget and be sure to move the hitsound on the other note beside the suggested note. This is because I only mod the notes and with that, I do not pay attention on the hitsounds placements.
[General]
Audio: OK!
BG: OK!
BPM: OK!
Offset: OK!
Preview Time: OK!

AiMod:
• No problem!
Column:
_ _ _ _
4K - |1|2|3|4|
[Beginner]
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01:15:512 - add note to 3, where it is like beat + sound effect. The beat sound is stronger than the double key press on 01:14:523 (74523|1,74523|3) - . It is almost similar to 01:13:205 (73205|1,73205|3) - which has an impact. Imo the impact doesnt seem to be real loud. just a low bass with low beat as well

01:45:183 (105183|0,106501|2) - I would suggest to remove these LNs and re-position the remaining single notes. The reason is because holding LNs while tapping the singles gives a hard time especially on those mania players who just begin playing. Suggesting some patterns similar to https://puu.sh/uMkVE/e990cc0f48.png where the doubles emphasizes the cymbals and the singles flow still on-going.

02:45:512 - add note? since you made the similar sound doubles at 02:24:413 - intendedly omitted due to different kind of patterning. The LN release already enough to signifies since its accomodated with the SN on 4

03:04:139 (184139|2,184303|1) - ctrl H for more comfortable execution. was in purpose. probably newbies cant handle the LN release and SN at the same time



[Hyper]
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00:30:019 - until 00:32:986 - note density is almost the same as Another's and I would recommend to nerf it like reducing the doubles into singles. With the light jumpstream, it makes this part the spike of the difficulty. its actually pretty doable imo. otherwise the gap in between would be quite awkward

01:39:578 (99578|0) - move to 3, much better to execute and more balance for both hands.

01:47:161 - add note to 3, cymbals can be heard here like you did at 01:46:501 (106501|0,106501|3) -

01:49:880 (109880|0) - move to 2 for comfortability.

02:03:314 - strong beat here, add note to 2

02:12:710 (132710|3,133040|2) - change to LN to emphasize the long synth emm i guess the current fine enough



[Another]
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00:24:579 (24579|1) - much better if ends on the white line like you did at Hyper so the vision can be better and comfy to execute. actually yea tru. but not changing because this diff overall are already quite challenging to have this kind of patterns like this

00:25:568 (25568|2,25651|0) - move to 1 and 2 respectively for comfy execute.

00:56:722 - until 00:57:711 - Just I thought so while test playing the hardest difficulty (which has the same burst as this) the notes are too fast for the sound. I listened 25% playback rate and tested using a different snap and it seems "1/6th" snap fits more on the instrument sound rather than 1/8. I recommend to change it and try it out.

01:15:512 - Same as above, the snap should be 1/6 which fits with the burst sound. quite ambiguous here. i'll just leave this for now and will try to ask confirmation

01:48:562 (108562|1,108644|1) - I suggest to re-position the above notes to avoid this mini-jack for the drum roll as this gives of the "fun" killer feeling. Something like https://puu.sh/uMnFd/cc43268cc0.png or move some notes before to avoid changing the patterns above. You decide.

02:13:369 (133369|3) - move to 3 for clearer sight and fits along with 02:13:040 (133040|1,133040|2,133040|3) - shield was intended apparently

02:22:765 (142765|1,142847|1) - just like before, this can be a combo breaker, recommending https://puu.sh/uMnU6/b7d9f83104.pngwhere the burst can be done comfortably and sight friendly.

03:01:172 (181172|0,181254|0) - unnecessary jack, might want to swap column 03:01:254 (181254|0,181501|1,181584|0,181666|1) - to avoid that. doesnt seem to be a big deal to hit

03:02:820 - add note to 3 kick sound.



[Ultimate]
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00:31:008 (31008|0,31090|2,31172|0,31255|2,31337|0,31420|2,31502|0,31585|2,31667|0,31749|2,31914|2,32079|2,32244|2) - suggesting to re-position some notes so there won't be too much stress on column 1 and column 3. Moving some notes will assure comfortability in this part. doesnt seem to be necessary since those are quite intended

00:56:722 - same as Another's. Snap should be 1/6 according to the instrument sounds.

01:15:512 - Same as above, the snap should be 1/6 which fits with the burst sound. still ambiguous

01:28:617 - add note synth sound

01:28:781 - ^ intended to ignore to focus on the buildup pattern afterwards

01:49:551 (109551|3,109592|2,109592|0,109633|1,109674|3,109674|2,109716|0,109757|1,109757|3,109798|2,109839|0,109839|1,109880|3,109922|0,109922|2,109963|1,110004|2,110004|3,110045|0,110086|1,110086|3,110128|2,110169|0,110169|1,110210|3,110251|0,110251|2,110292|1,110334|3,110334|2,110375|0,110416|3,110416|1) - some doubles are unnecessary in this part as you made it like a high bpm jumpstream creating some combo breakable jacks in the process. Recommending something similar to https://puu.sh/uMoFe/77efef07cf.png where the doubles are only on the audible synth melody. (In the image not all synth melody on the burst are doubled, this is to avoid sudden 1/4 jacks in the burst execution.) this one really is intended. Due to the burst noise are on 1/12 and (maybe) 1/16 towards the end of the burst. ofc that would be extremely unecessary to use 1/12 and 1/16 respectively after 1/4 1/8 on the buildup process so i decided to do dense jumpstream instead

02:02:985 - add note to 2, melody is along with other percussion sound.

02:03:067 - add mini-LN to 1, same as Another's

02:20:045 - add note here as the snare-like sound can be heard here similar to 02:19:633 (139633|2,139633|3,139798|3,139798|2) -

02:20:540 - ^

02:23:342 - Suggesting https://puu.sh/uMp2x/2a7c06b727.png instead to avoid sudden 1/4 on the burst. After all you made similar beat sounds, doubles, like 02:22:106 (142106|2,142106|3,142765|2,142765|1) -

02:44:194 - add LN to 3 until 02:44:358 - since new entry of synth sound can be heard here.


Overall

Very Good Song Choice, I like genres like this as it has alot of synthesizers and some intense action feeling song. Go go rank this and good luck!


~ END ~


Everything else is fix. Thx for mod :D
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arcwinolivirus wrote:

"Arcwinolivirus' Mod"

Thy Mod.
Note:
• First of all, I would want to apologize if I ever say something that will hurt your feelings as a mapper. Remember that I only want to give advices, suggestions, recommendations and sideas for some improvement in your map. Please do understand and thank you.

• do not be afraid to reject some parts of my mod. I am not perfect and I am not always right. But I do give my best to mod with sense. Also, I do not bite rawr.

• If I suggest to "remove or ctrl function moves" on certain note/s, do not forget and be sure to move the hitsound on the other note beside the suggested note. This is because I only mod the notes and with that, I do not pay attention on the hitsounds placements.
[General]
Audio: OK!
BG: OK!
BPM: OK!
Offset: OK!
Preview Time: OK!

AiMod:
• No problem!
Column:
_ _ _ _
4K - |1|2|3|4|
[A's Standard]
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00:18:131 (18131|0) - Fix your snap here as it is snapped on the previous timing point. Check other difficulties snap.

00:26:887 (26887|0) - move to 3 and 00:27:876 (27876|3) - move to 2 for comfortability. // uhh.. i'll keep this

00:32:986 (32986|3,33151|1) - would suggest to add note to change these singles into double for strong sound emphasis. // hmm.. I think i'll keep it as it is

00:33:975 - add note to 1, strong starting sound. // this too, sorry

00:33:975 - until 00:44:524 - I recommend to add more notes as this part seems to be easier than Beginner's which quite feels off. Adding notes will also balance the part to other harder parts. You decide. // i'll keep it as it is

00:41:887 - add note to 1 impact sound. // this too

00:49:799 - ^ to 4 // this too

00:56:722 - ^ to 4 // this too

01:25:567 (85567|2,85732|1,85897|2) - ctrl H, the pitch is on 01:25:567 (85567|2,85897|2) - differs with 01:25:238 (85238|2,86227|2) -

01:39:908 - until 01:44:523 - Buff the part with the percussion, same as previous reason it is because its easier than the Beginner's. Though I understand that you only wanted to follow the melody-like sound. You decide. // already try that and that makes the SR goes up, *as requested from the owner to make it below 2,4*

01:52:765 (112765|0) - Better if moved to 3 and change to LN until 01:53:095 - for that sweet sound effect. Beginner did LN on this part. // hmm... I think i'll keep it as it is since that represent the impact better

02:24:413 - add note to 4 impact sound // i'll keep it as it is

02:24:743 - ^ to 1 or 3 // this too

02:35:292 - ^ to 3 // this too

02:43:203 - add note to 2 and change 02:43:205 (163205|0) - to LN until 02:43:699 - for focusing the long sound that can be heard here. // hmm.. should be good like that, ok I change it to LN, but not adding another note

02:45:512 - add note to 3 or 4 for the strong beat finish. // this too. keep

02:45:842 - ^ to 2 or 3 // this too

02:56:391 - ^ to 3 // this too

03:01:666 - ^ to 2 // this too

03:02:985 - ^ to 1 // this too

03:04:303 - ^ to 3 // this too

03:04:303 - until the end - Add more notes for the percussion as they are more consistent and audible than the melody that you want to follow. It feels empty while you hear those percussion but no notes. Example is like 03:04:468 - and 03:04:633 - where you can here that strong beat but no notes. If there are notes it would be more satisfying. Variations and Combinations with the melody can come up with consistent and better patterns. // same reason as the previous point about the same thing

03:06:941 (186941|1) - should end up at 03:08:260 - and 03:07:765 (187765|3) - starts at where the sound raises up at 03:08:260 - ending at 03:09:578 // fixed -




Overall

Very Good Song Choice, I like genres like this as it has alot of synthesizers and some intense action feeling song. Go go rank this and good luck!


~ END ~
https://puu.sh/uUCmp/5e9e66b56d.rar
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"I want to die" Team's modding

My english is very poor, feel free to ask something if you do not understand me.
1/2/3/4


[Ultimate]

00:16:400 - 00:16:441 - are you sure about missing these sounds? They are very audible.

00:24:579 (24579|0) - I guess this sound splits at this moment 00:24:744. Emphasize it.

00:40:898 (40898|1,40898|3,40898|2,41227|1,41227|2,41227|3) - looks very boring.

01:30:018 (90018|3,90018|1,91336|3,91336|0,92655|3,92655|0,95292|2,95292|0,97930|3,97930|0,99249|3,99249|0) - why don't you emphasizing these sounds?

01:39:249 - suggestion: 01:39:413 (99413|2,99413|1,99578|0,99578|3) - CTRL+G.

02:16:831 - suggestion: place lns or triple.

03:04:880 - suggestion: https://puu.sh/v4Q5s/fbdb8f4e94.png

03:06:611 - are you sure about 1/12 here? Anyway swap this 03:06:803 (186803|3,186831|2) - for emphasizing the pitch increasing.

[Another]

00:20:129 (20129|3) - move to 3, because it's painful 00:19:469 (19469|3,19799|3,20129|3,20293|3)

00:51:118 (51118|0,51227|2) - CTRL+G maybe (00:52:766 - 00:54:414 - same)

01:44:194 - suggestion for balancing: https://puu.sh/v4QZV/16af8f6aab.png

01:49:510 (109510|1,109592|3) - suggestion: delete

01:56:721 (116721|1,116721|0,116886|0,116886|3,116886|2) - CTRL+H, because it looks bad: 01:56:062 (116062|0,116227|0,116391|0,116721|0,116886|0)

02:29:358 (149358|3,149441|0) - move to 1 2 or 2 1, also your previous 1/2 jack was on right hand too, so it looks imbalance

02:35:045 - 02:35:210 - it looks boring that you missed these sounds

02:39:908 (159908|0,159990|3) - same situation: move to 3 4 or 4 3

02:52:435 (172435|3,172765|3,173095|3,173260|2,173260|3,173424|2,173424|3) - don't overload right hand so much, especially with this 02:50:622 (170622|3,170705|3)
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eyes wrote:

"I want to die" Team's modding

My english is very poor, feel free to ask something if you do not understand me.
1/2/3/4


[Ultimate]

00:16:400 - 00:16:441 - are you sure about missing these sounds? They are very audible. Think its not really worthy to be graced so i decide to follow the main piano

00:24:579 (24579|0) - I guess this sound splits at this moment 00:24:744. Emphasize it. Only did this in the lower difficulties, i believe the sound were snapped correctly.

00:40:898 (40898|1,40898|3,40898|2,41227|1,41227|2,41227|3) - looks very boring. nah. have any ideas?

01:30:018 (90018|3,90018|1,91336|3,91336|0,92655|3,92655|0,95292|2,95292|0,97930|3,97930|0,99249|3,99249|0) - why don't you emphasizing these sounds? Yes to all except the last one

01:39:249 - suggestion: 01:39:413 (99413|2,99413|1,99578|0,99578|3) - CTRL+G.

02:16:831 - suggestion: place lns or triple.

03:04:880 - suggestion: https://puu.sh/v4Q5s/fbdb8f4e94.png doesnt really look well. wil change if there's more concern

03:06:611 - are you sure about 1/12 here? Anyway swap this 03:06:803 (186803|3,186831|2) - for emphasizing the pitch increasing. quite tricky imo. will change if there's more concern too

[Another]

00:20:129 (20129|3) - move to 3, because it's painful 00:19:469 (19469|3,19799|3,20129|3,20293|3) I see no difference. if you decrease your timeline zoom, you'll see

00:51:118 (51118|0,51227|2) - CTRL+G maybe (00:52:766 - 00:54:414 - same) still in the same structure. I do this every 4 measures tho

01:44:194 - suggestion for balancing: https://puu.sh/v4QZV/16af8f6aab.png

01:49:510 (109510|1,109592|3) - suggestion: delete wait this doesnt highlight anything

01:56:721 (116721|1,116721|0,116886|0,116886|3,116886|2) - CTRL+H, because it looks bad: 01:56:062 (116062|0,116227|0,116391|0,116721|0,116886|0) please elaborate what is "bad". I play those just fine

02:29:358 (149358|3,149441|0) - move to 1 2 or 2 1, also your previous 1/2 jack was on right hand too, so it looks imbalance

02:35:045 - 02:35:210 - it looks boring that you missed these sounds dont think so. anyways I add some LN

02:39:908 (159908|0,159990|3) - same situation: move to 3 4 or 4 3

02:52:435 (172435|3,172765|3,173095|3,173260|2,173260|3,173424|2,173424|3) - don't overload right hand so much, especially with this 02:50:622 (170622|3,170705|3) hmm its pretty much like anywhere else in this particular section. I dont see the point


No reply = fix. Thx :>
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Rivals_7 wrote:


[Ultimate]

00:40:898 (40898|1,40898|3,40898|2,41227|1,41227|2,41227|3) - looks very boring. nah. have any ideas? https://puu.sh/v6EMB/60fcd93b92.png or https://puu.sh/v6ENx/82e06b4ae4.png

[Another]

01:49:510 (109510|1,109592|3) - suggestion: delete wait this doesnt highlight anything hmm.. For me it does highlights the pitch changing

[/quote]

Also why did you place a note here 02:46:584 (166584|0) - 02:57:133 (177133|1) - if you placed ln here 02:51:858 (171858|2,171941|0)
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wheres the ↑↓↑↓↑↓↑↓↑↓↑↓↑↓↑↓ lol
i love LANOTA!!!!!
1|2|3|4|
Ultimate
00:18:151 (18151|1) - delete
00:19:469 (19469|3,19799|3) - if you want to catch "Cachoo"sound why not catch 00:19:634 (19634|2,19716|1,19799|2) - these notes to mapping LN (and so on)(i won't need to list them)
00:21:777 (21777|0) - i don't understand why you want to mapping here
00:23:425 (23425|3,23590|2,23672|0,23755|3,23755|1,23755|2,23920|0) - and you not same mapping to 00:19:469 (19469|3,19634|2,19716|1,19799|3,19799|0,19799|2,19964|1) -
00:24:579 (24579|0,24909|0) - put the distance between the two LNs are too short ,may be you can 00:25:074 (25074|1) - delete this and 00:24:909 (24909|0) - move to col 2
00:30:183 (30183|0) - move to 3
00:33:315 (33315|1,33398|3,33480|2,33563|1,33563|0,33645|3,33645|2,33727|0,33810|2,33892|1,33975|2,33975|0,33975|3) - Compared to previous sounds ,i think them to soft(00:32:986 (32986|3,32986|2,32986|0,33151|3,33151|0,33151|2) - )
00:40:898 - 00:41:475 - https://puu.sh/v7wVO/137e906506.jpg
00:41:557 (41557|0,41722|1) - change to short LNs
00:44:174 (44174|2,44194|3,44194|0) - ??? there is no right
00:56:777 (56777|1,56832|0,56887|3,56942|2,56997|0,57052|1,57107|2,57161|3,57216|0,57271|1,57326|3,57381|2,57436|1,57491|0,57546|3,57601|2,57656|1,57711|0) - ^i think you this period of treatment is not good enough
00:49:799 - 00:56:722 - add more SV
01:09:249 (69249|1,69249|2,70567|1) - Ctrl+h
01:13:452 (73452|3) - no sound
01:15:512 (75512|3,75512|0,75553|2,75595|1,75636|0,75677|3,75718|2,75760|0,75801|1,75842|2,75883|3,75924|0,75966|1,76007|3,76048|2,76089|1,76130|0) - WTF?those rhythm
01:26:391 (86391|1,86556|3) - Ctrl+j
01:28:040 (88040|1,88040|3,88040|2,88205|3,88369|3,88534|3,88699|3,88864|3,88946|2,89029|3,89111|1,89194|3,89276|0,89358|3,89358|2) - lol
01:33:809 (93809|1) - this LN should start 01:33:644 -
01:58:040 (118040|1,118369|2) - 02:03:314 (123314|1,123644|2) - ctrl+h
02:02:490 (122490|3,122655|0,122655|1,122738|2,122820|3,122820|1,122902|3,122902|0,122985|2,122985|1,123067|0,123150|3) - ^
02:05:622 (125622|2,125622|1,125622|3,125787|2,125787|1,125952|1,125952|2) - not same pitch
02:08:589 - add one single note
02:12:710 (132710|3,132710|2,132710|1,133040|0,133040|1,133040|2,133369|3,133369|2,133369|1,133534|1,133534|0) - hh
02:23:342 (143342|3,143383|2,143424|3,143424|0,143424|1,143589|1,143672|2,143754|3,143754|0,143836|1,143919|3,144001|2,144084|1,144166|0,144166|3,144249|2,144331|1,144413|0,144413|3,144413|2) - ^

Good luck! :)
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