(From my modding queue~)
Sorry for the late mod, you posted the request in my queue more than 20 days ago, but in addition to having this queue really busy, many things happened irl xD
I hope you are still maintaining this map anyway, here is the mod for the first 2 difficulties, since its a long map ill mode the other diff tomorrow when ill have more time.
Also, i tend to make many personnal suggestions in my mod, so please only apply them if you 120% agree~
EDIT 1: Hyper modding is done but sorry Ill have to delayed Another & Ultimate modding once more, today was a busy day again :c
EDIT 2: Mod finally done~
Legend is 0|1|2|3
69th post hype >////<
Sorry for the late mod, you posted the request in my queue more than 20 days ago, but in addition to having this queue really busy, many things happened irl xD
I hope you are still maintaining this map anyway, here is the mod for the first 2 difficulties, since its a long map ill mode the other diff tomorrow when ill have more time.
Also, i tend to make many personnal suggestions in my mod, so please only apply them if you 120% agree~
EDIT 1: Hyper modding is done but sorry Ill have to delayed Another & Ultimate modding once more, today was a busy day again :c
EDIT 2: Mod finally done~
Legend is 0|1|2|3
Beginner
00:09:230 (9230|3,9560|1) - Id CTRL+G those, just to follow the piano pitch going higher
00:25:074 (25074|3) - Maybe move it to (2), sorry i dont have logic reason for this, i just feel it would go better with the drum to alternate with 2 columns only instead of going for a 3rd one
00:31:667 (31667|3) - Why not keeping the same jack pattern you used to do before ? I dont think its a big deal to break the LNs just here
00:37:766 - What about adding a note at (2) ? To match the piano (also you did it at 00:41:722 so it would be great to add here too for consistency)
00:47:491 (47491|3) - I find this LN a bit weird, im not sure what you intended to map with it, maybe the fast piano stair, but anyway this LN feels a bit alone in the middle of nothing maybe remove it and just add a note at 00:47:656 if you want to enhance the piano going faster
At 00:53:755 - Somehow i hear this part more with 2 LNs like this. Also maybe its interesting to keep with this 2 LN pattern so a beginner would recognize something he/she has already played at 00:45:183
01:23:095 (83095|1,83260|2) - I would CTRL+G those, first for to follow the synth pitch and then because i like playing a note just after an LN ahah :p
(more seriously, that one column jump pattern is more in the spirit of the surrounding mapping anyway, but the stair is also a good idea in a sense that it contrasts with those, up to you)
01:27:710 (87710|2) - And here is the magic, if you move it to (0) you would have :
01:20:292 - Stair pattern
01:22:930 - Column jump pattern
01:25:567 - Stair pattern
01:27:545 - Column jump pattern owo)b
01:31:336 (91336|2) - Maybe move it to (1) for the jack like at the beginning
01:36:611 (96611|1) - To (2) for the same reason
01:53:424 (113424|2) - I would have seen a LN here (until 01:53:754)
01:58:699 (118699|1) - Ok that would mean adding a LN here too
02:07:188 (127188|2) - Would move it to (1) and
02:07:435 (127435|0) - To (2), the idea is to go in the opposite direction as 02:04:633 (124633|3,124798|1) or 02:05:787 (125787|3,125952|0) so it wont confuse too much the beginners because of the rythm change (especially ternary in binary can be really tricky at that level)
02:05:787 (125787|3,125952|0) - Just maybe add a note here to make the middle of that kiai even more fun and challeging for beginner
02:55:897 - Same thing
Nice diff, entertaining and challenging with a great range of rythm pattern while keeping it simple for beginners. About the HS this is far above my skills i have nothing to contest about it. Just something bother me, during the last kiai, i heard the "click" sounds going sometime to the right ear and sometime in the middle but never to the left here. But anyway i thing it would be real fun to make it go from left to right and right to left during the kiai what do you think ?
00:09:230 (9230|3,9560|1) - Id CTRL+G those, just to follow the piano pitch going higher
00:25:074 (25074|3) - Maybe move it to (2), sorry i dont have logic reason for this, i just feel it would go better with the drum to alternate with 2 columns only instead of going for a 3rd one
00:31:667 (31667|3) - Why not keeping the same jack pattern you used to do before ? I dont think its a big deal to break the LNs just here
00:37:766 - What about adding a note at (2) ? To match the piano (also you did it at 00:41:722 so it would be great to add here too for consistency)
00:47:491 (47491|3) - I find this LN a bit weird, im not sure what you intended to map with it, maybe the fast piano stair, but anyway this LN feels a bit alone in the middle of nothing maybe remove it and just add a note at 00:47:656 if you want to enhance the piano going faster
At 00:53:755 - Somehow i hear this part more with 2 LNs like this. Also maybe its interesting to keep with this 2 LN pattern so a beginner would recognize something he/she has already played at 00:45:183
01:23:095 (83095|1,83260|2) - I would CTRL+G those, first for to follow the synth pitch and then because i like playing a note just after an LN ahah :p
(more seriously, that one column jump pattern is more in the spirit of the surrounding mapping anyway, but the stair is also a good idea in a sense that it contrasts with those, up to you)
01:27:710 (87710|2) - And here is the magic, if you move it to (0) you would have :
01:20:292 - Stair pattern
01:22:930 - Column jump pattern
01:25:567 - Stair pattern
01:27:545 - Column jump pattern owo)b
01:31:336 (91336|2) - Maybe move it to (1) for the jack like at the beginning
01:36:611 (96611|1) - To (2) for the same reason
01:53:424 (113424|2) - I would have seen a LN here (until 01:53:754)
01:58:699 (118699|1) - Ok that would mean adding a LN here too
02:07:188 (127188|2) - Would move it to (1) and
02:07:435 (127435|0) - To (2), the idea is to go in the opposite direction as 02:04:633 (124633|3,124798|1) or 02:05:787 (125787|3,125952|0) so it wont confuse too much the beginners because of the rythm change (especially ternary in binary can be really tricky at that level)
02:05:787 (125787|3,125952|0) - Just maybe add a note here to make the middle of that kiai even more fun and challeging for beginner
02:55:897 - Same thing
Nice diff, entertaining and challenging with a great range of rythm pattern while keeping it simple for beginners. About the HS this is far above my skills i have nothing to contest about it. Just something bother me, during the last kiai, i heard the "click" sounds going sometime to the right ear and sometime in the middle but never to the left here. But anyway i thing it would be real fun to make it go from left to right and right to left during the kiai what do you think ?
As' Standard
00:03:296 (3296|2) - Move it to (3), its no fun to have this 00:02:307 (2307|2,2637|1) twice. You can move the whole pattern else where or move the next note, but the idea is not to have the same pattern twice. Also the idea behind moving it to (3) is to echo with 00:04:285 (4285|1,4615|2,4944|0)
Okay maybe move the following :
00:18:975 (18975|0) - To (1)
00:19:964 (19964|3) - To (2)
00:20:953 (20953|0) - To (1)
00:21:942 (21942|3) - To (2)
The thing is all those first triplet patterns 00:18:315 (18315|2,18398|1,18480|0) and 00:18:645 (18645|1,18727|2,18810|3) have their last note on the (0) or (3) column. But the single notes are also use those column creating a some king of void in the (1) and (2) column for the beginning of that section
(at least that what i feel when testplaying)
00:38:260 - Missing note for the piano
00:39:249 - Here too
00:44:194 (44194|3) - Move it to (2), not sure you need that jack triplet 00:44:194 (44194|3,44524|3,44689|3)
00:46:832 (46832|0,47161|0) - Move it to another column, the jack is good for the kicks, but you should not jack with the snare at 00:47:491 (47491|0)
00:48:810 (48810|1,48892|2,48975|3) - Ok im not sure what you are doing with this, its a bit confusing, there is no piano going that fast here, i think at least remove 00:48:892 (48892|2)
At 01:15:512 if you want to map those voice noise, i think a better choice would be to keep LNs and also map the "clop" tongue sound at 01:16:007
I suggest the following :
01:24:578 (84578|2) - Would move it to (1), there is no need for jack here, i think you should only use jack here when the synth is holding a note like you did at 01:22:600 (82600|2,82930|2)
01:25:238 (85238|2) - And so for this reason id move it to (1)
01:26:227 (86227|2) - Would move it to (3) to follow the synth going to a really high pitch here
01:32:490 (92490|2,92820|2,92985|1) - Maybe move it one column to the left, the pitch is a bit lower than 01:29:853 (89853|2,90183|2,90347|1) and it would avoid using exactly the same pattern twice
01:35:128 (95128|3,95457|2) - Why breaking the jack here ?
At 02:07:930 i would suggest mapping like this :
First i think you can add a note at 02:08:177 for the normal difficulty, also i think its a good place to re-use that LN-side note-LN patterns you are using during those kiai
(I must say this pattern is freaking awsome >w<)b)
02:26:968 (146968|0) - Not sure this note is really necessary, i mean you just introduced this pattern once before, maybe its too soon to already add some arrangement to it
02:28:122 - I really hear a synth note here, but since you are alternating between drum and synth mapping im sure if you should add a note here or not
(remark you added one at 02:38:672 (158672|2))
02:34:633 (154633|3,154798|2,154963|1,155128|0) - Just a suggestion, what about making them LN ? Just to mark the middle of the kiai and contrast with the surrounding mapping
02:55:238 (175238|2,175485|2) - I dont see any reason for this jack
As the previous diff, nothing to say about the HS. I think this diff need a bit more of work before being ready to be ranked, but it already has many good ideas. The kiais might be a bit easy compared to some other parts of the map but i guess its fine anyway owo)/
00:03:296 (3296|2) - Move it to (3), its no fun to have this 00:02:307 (2307|2,2637|1) twice. You can move the whole pattern else where or move the next note, but the idea is not to have the same pattern twice. Also the idea behind moving it to (3) is to echo with 00:04:285 (4285|1,4615|2,4944|0)
Okay maybe move the following :
00:18:975 (18975|0) - To (1)
00:19:964 (19964|3) - To (2)
00:20:953 (20953|0) - To (1)
00:21:942 (21942|3) - To (2)
The thing is all those first triplet patterns 00:18:315 (18315|2,18398|1,18480|0) and 00:18:645 (18645|1,18727|2,18810|3) have their last note on the (0) or (3) column. But the single notes are also use those column creating a some king of void in the (1) and (2) column for the beginning of that section
(at least that what i feel when testplaying)
00:38:260 - Missing note for the piano
00:39:249 - Here too
00:44:194 (44194|3) - Move it to (2), not sure you need that jack triplet 00:44:194 (44194|3,44524|3,44689|3)
00:46:832 (46832|0,47161|0) - Move it to another column, the jack is good for the kicks, but you should not jack with the snare at 00:47:491 (47491|0)
00:48:810 (48810|1,48892|2,48975|3) - Ok im not sure what you are doing with this, its a bit confusing, there is no piano going that fast here, i think at least remove 00:48:892 (48892|2)
At 01:15:512 if you want to map those voice noise, i think a better choice would be to keep LNs and also map the "clop" tongue sound at 01:16:007
I suggest the following :
01:24:578 (84578|2) - Would move it to (1), there is no need for jack here, i think you should only use jack here when the synth is holding a note like you did at 01:22:600 (82600|2,82930|2)
01:25:238 (85238|2) - And so for this reason id move it to (1)
01:26:227 (86227|2) - Would move it to (3) to follow the synth going to a really high pitch here
01:32:490 (92490|2,92820|2,92985|1) - Maybe move it one column to the left, the pitch is a bit lower than 01:29:853 (89853|2,90183|2,90347|1) and it would avoid using exactly the same pattern twice
01:35:128 (95128|3,95457|2) - Why breaking the jack here ?
At 02:07:930 i would suggest mapping like this :
First i think you can add a note at 02:08:177 for the normal difficulty, also i think its a good place to re-use that LN-side note-LN patterns you are using during those kiai
(I must say this pattern is freaking awsome >w<)b)
02:26:968 (146968|0) - Not sure this note is really necessary, i mean you just introduced this pattern once before, maybe its too soon to already add some arrangement to it
02:28:122 - I really hear a synth note here, but since you are alternating between drum and synth mapping im sure if you should add a note here or not
(remark you added one at 02:38:672 (158672|2))
02:34:633 (154633|3,154798|2,154963|1,155128|0) - Just a suggestion, what about making them LN ? Just to mark the middle of the kiai and contrast with the surrounding mapping
02:55:238 (175238|2,175485|2) - I dont see any reason for this jack
As the previous diff, nothing to say about the HS. I think this diff need a bit more of work before being ready to be ranked, but it already has many good ideas. The kiais might be a bit easy compared to some other parts of the map but i guess its fine anyway owo)/
Hyper
00:05:604 - I really think you should have a chord here
Maybe add notes at 00:16:318 and 00:16:400 its an hard diff, i think you can match the piano a bit more here
00:19:799 (19799|2,19964|0) - Would CTRL+G those, the drum HS feels like a coming back so i think the single note going with the LNs should alternate directions
Just like you did after in fact 00:23:425
00:27:711 (27711|1,27876|3) - Would CTRL+G those too for the same reasons, but this create an unwanted jack with the next chords that should be fixed then
00:40:898 (40898|3,40898|0,41227|0,41227|3) - What about 1/2 long LN for those ? I feel like it could go well with the synth
00:49:634 - Maybe add a note here, i really feel you should hit something at the end of that noise
01:05:623 (65623|3) - Would move it to (0) just to follow the piano pitch
01:28:864 - That LN only feels a bit weak for the drum going faster
Maybe
01:55:897 (115897|1) - On (0) and
01:56:227 (116227|1) - On (2), i think the jacks could go well with the drum here
01:56:227 (116227|1) - Okay i somehow expected a chord here to be consistent with the snare mapping before (02:01:831 (121831|2,121831|1) + 02:02:243 (122243|2,122243|0)) but this will be a bit out of context if you dont remove 02:03:067 (123067|0) so its up to you
02:24:743 (144743|2,144743|3,144743|0) - Im really hesitating for this chords, as its the beginning of the kiai + cymbal HS so that would explain the triple but still if we look at the rest of the pattern the bass kick are mapped with double chords.
But still if you want to keep that triple chords i think you should reshape it or reshape 02:25:073 (145073|2,145073|3,145073|0), i dont think you hit the same chords for 2 different drum mapping
02:30:018 (150018|2,150018|3) - You should find another chords for this one, its the 3rd time you use the exact same chords for the bass kick mapping
02:37:270 (157270|3,157270|1,157435|2) - What happenned here ? The chord should be at 02:37:435
02:56:062 (176062|0,176062|1,176144|2,176227|3,176309|1,176391|0,176391|3) - Maybe go for a more trill-like pattern so the middle climax of this kiai will really contrast with the surrounding mapping
Nice diff overall, not too hard, not too easy. Also i didnt see real mapping error, just some adjustement here and there. Nice work owo)b
00:05:604 - I really think you should have a chord here
Maybe add notes at 00:16:318 and 00:16:400 its an hard diff, i think you can match the piano a bit more here
00:19:799 (19799|2,19964|0) - Would CTRL+G those, the drum HS feels like a coming back so i think the single note going with the LNs should alternate directions
Just like you did after in fact 00:23:425
00:27:711 (27711|1,27876|3) - Would CTRL+G those too for the same reasons, but this create an unwanted jack with the next chords that should be fixed then
00:40:898 (40898|3,40898|0,41227|0,41227|3) - What about 1/2 long LN for those ? I feel like it could go well with the synth
00:49:634 - Maybe add a note here, i really feel you should hit something at the end of that noise
01:05:623 (65623|3) - Would move it to (0) just to follow the piano pitch
01:28:864 - That LN only feels a bit weak for the drum going faster
Maybe
01:55:897 (115897|1) - On (0) and
01:56:227 (116227|1) - On (2), i think the jacks could go well with the drum here
01:56:227 (116227|1) - Okay i somehow expected a chord here to be consistent with the snare mapping before (02:01:831 (121831|2,121831|1) + 02:02:243 (122243|2,122243|0)) but this will be a bit out of context if you dont remove 02:03:067 (123067|0) so its up to you
02:24:743 (144743|2,144743|3,144743|0) - Im really hesitating for this chords, as its the beginning of the kiai + cymbal HS so that would explain the triple but still if we look at the rest of the pattern the bass kick are mapped with double chords.
But still if you want to keep that triple chords i think you should reshape it or reshape 02:25:073 (145073|2,145073|3,145073|0), i dont think you hit the same chords for 2 different drum mapping
02:30:018 (150018|2,150018|3) - You should find another chords for this one, its the 3rd time you use the exact same chords for the bass kick mapping
02:37:270 (157270|3,157270|1,157435|2) - What happenned here ? The chord should be at 02:37:435
02:56:062 (176062|0,176062|1,176144|2,176227|3,176309|1,176391|0,176391|3) - Maybe go for a more trill-like pattern so the middle climax of this kiai will really contrast with the surrounding mapping
Nice diff overall, not too hard, not too easy. Also i didnt see real mapping error, just some adjustement here and there. Nice work owo)b
Another
00:05:604 - Same remark as the hyper, i think you should have a chord here
00:19:469 (19469|3,19799|3) - For this section, im not sure the jack LN are really relevant since the drum is playing 2 very different sounds. What about having the second LN on the symetric side of the first one ? (like first LN is (3) then second is (0))
00:29:689 (29689|3) - I think this LN should last until 00:30:019
Maybe id add a (1,2) chords at
00:40:980 and
00:41:310 - I think its funnier to really hit something at the end of this LNs to match with the drum
01:27:051 (87051|1) - Would move it to (2) to have the jack with the next LN like at 01:21:611 (81611|1,81776|1)
01:36:611 - Maybe a triple chord here
At 01:45:183 i would suggest this kind of pattern first, to continue with the jacks a bit more :
02:25:732 (145732|0,145732|2,145897|1,146062|2,146062|0,146227|1,146391|0,146391|2) - Ok this is a bit sad & flat, what about using jack on those synth parts instead ? For example like this
That would mean using a kind of similar jack pattern at
02:31:007 + 02:36:281 + 02:41:556
02:34:963 - This is a 4.45 star, why no trill here ? T^T
02:48:150 (168150|3) - Shouldnt this LN be longer ? According to 02:46:666 (166666|1,166831|3,166996|1,167161|2)
Really cool diff, nothing much to mod actually. Fun to play and challenging at some part, but still kinda easy for a 4.45*. Many enjoyable idea through the whole map, definitly would like to see it ranked >w<)b
00:05:604 - Same remark as the hyper, i think you should have a chord here
00:19:469 (19469|3,19799|3) - For this section, im not sure the jack LN are really relevant since the drum is playing 2 very different sounds. What about having the second LN on the symetric side of the first one ? (like first LN is (3) then second is (0))
00:29:689 (29689|3) - I think this LN should last until 00:30:019
Maybe id add a (1,2) chords at
00:40:980 and
00:41:310 - I think its funnier to really hit something at the end of this LNs to match with the drum
01:27:051 (87051|1) - Would move it to (2) to have the jack with the next LN like at 01:21:611 (81611|1,81776|1)
01:36:611 - Maybe a triple chord here
At 01:45:183 i would suggest this kind of pattern first, to continue with the jacks a bit more :
02:25:732 (145732|0,145732|2,145897|1,146062|2,146062|0,146227|1,146391|0,146391|2) - Ok this is a bit sad & flat, what about using jack on those synth parts instead ? For example like this
That would mean using a kind of similar jack pattern at
02:31:007 + 02:36:281 + 02:41:556
02:34:963 - This is a 4.45 star, why no trill here ? T^T
02:48:150 (168150|3) - Shouldnt this LN be longer ? According to 02:46:666 (166666|1,166831|3,166996|1,167161|2)
Really cool diff, nothing much to mod actually. Fun to play and challenging at some part, but still kinda easy for a 4.45*. Many enjoyable idea through the whole map, definitly would like to see it ranked >w<)b
Ultimate
00:05:604 - Same remark as the 2 previous diff, i think a chord is necessary here
00:19:469 (19469|3,19799|3) - And also same remarks for those LN, once again i think it would be better to have them on different column
00:38:260 - What about having a chord here ? Okay the idea is, at the very beginning of this section you went full chords for 2 measures 00:34:304 (34304|2,34304|0,34469|3,34469|1,34634|1,34634|0,34799|3,34799|2) and i think this is a good idea. So maybe it would be nice to have some other small parts with full chord since its the last diff. Im thinking of doing 1 measure full chords at
00:38:260 + 00:40:568 + 00:47:161
00:53:096 - I really like this chord jack section, but maybe at the middle of it you can switch for other chords than (0,1) and (2,3) otherwise its a bit long and repetitive
01:01:337 (61337|0) - Would move it to (3) to follow the piano pitch
01:27:051 (87051|1) - Same remark as the another diff, would move it to (2) to have the jack with the next LN like at 01:21:611 (81611|1,81776|1)
01:42:216 - Okay, compared to the another diff, there is no reason for a specific jack pattern here, but still i think you can find a trill a bit different first instead of going (0,1) - (2,3) for 8 measures
02:15:430 (135430|2) - Maybe move it to (3) for the jack, it could go well with the snare
02:18:067 (138067|0) - Maybe to (1) for the same reasons then
02:25:732 (145732|0,145732|1,145897|2,146062|0,146062|1,146227|2,146391|1,146391|0) - Same remark as another, see above for the detailed explanation & suggestion ~
By the way, this kiai seems really weak for a last diff, i almost felt like playing the another once more here
02:48:150 (168150|3) - I think this LN should be longer if i refer to 02:46:666 (166666|1,166831|0,166996|1,167161|3)
Except the kiai at 02:24:743 that in my opinion does not raise the difficulty compared to the another, the rest is pretty clean. Even if most of the time i really feel like playing another with more notes but i guess its okay, another is really well done and so is ultimate in final :3
00:05:604 - Same remark as the 2 previous diff, i think a chord is necessary here
00:19:469 (19469|3,19799|3) - And also same remarks for those LN, once again i think it would be better to have them on different column
00:38:260 - What about having a chord here ? Okay the idea is, at the very beginning of this section you went full chords for 2 measures 00:34:304 (34304|2,34304|0,34469|3,34469|1,34634|1,34634|0,34799|3,34799|2) and i think this is a good idea. So maybe it would be nice to have some other small parts with full chord since its the last diff. Im thinking of doing 1 measure full chords at
00:38:260 + 00:40:568 + 00:47:161
00:53:096 - I really like this chord jack section, but maybe at the middle of it you can switch for other chords than (0,1) and (2,3) otherwise its a bit long and repetitive
01:01:337 (61337|0) - Would move it to (3) to follow the piano pitch
01:27:051 (87051|1) - Same remark as the another diff, would move it to (2) to have the jack with the next LN like at 01:21:611 (81611|1,81776|1)
01:42:216 - Okay, compared to the another diff, there is no reason for a specific jack pattern here, but still i think you can find a trill a bit different first instead of going (0,1) - (2,3) for 8 measures
02:15:430 (135430|2) - Maybe move it to (3) for the jack, it could go well with the snare
02:18:067 (138067|0) - Maybe to (1) for the same reasons then
02:25:732 (145732|0,145732|1,145897|2,146062|0,146062|1,146227|2,146391|1,146391|0) - Same remark as another, see above for the detailed explanation & suggestion ~
By the way, this kiai seems really weak for a last diff, i almost felt like playing the another once more here
02:48:150 (168150|3) - I think this LN should be longer if i refer to 02:46:666 (166666|1,166831|0,166996|1,167161|3)
Except the kiai at 02:24:743 that in my opinion does not raise the difficulty compared to the another, the rest is pretty clean. Even if most of the time i really feel like playing another with more notes but i guess its okay, another is really well done and so is ultimate in final :3
69th post hype >////<