scary skeletins
this is insane btw
00:00:085 (85|2,2210|3) - the LN heads are at the wrong place, 00:02:335 - is where the background violin thingy changes pitch
☑ Ok fixed00:03:460 (3460|1,4210|0) - same thing as above, changes at 00:04:335 -
☑ Ok fixed00:31:647 (31647|2,31710|3,31835|2,31897|3,32022|2,32085|3) - eh could you do something else here its pretty biased on the right. 00:31:897 - also why is this a double now? if youre looking for the crash its 00:31:835 - right here bb
☑ Nice idea.img assuming you got the crash double thing wrong
00:37:058 (37058|3,37058|1,37308|2,37308|0,37558|3,37558|1,37808|2,37808|0,38058|3,38058|1) - idk if theres a structure im supposed to follow here, the doubles here seem to be randomly placed, weve got this thing here but then 00:34:808 (34808|3,34808|2,35058|1,35058|0,35308|1,35308|3,35558|3,35558|0) -? not a big issue, just something to take note
00:43:808 (43808|3,43808|2,43933|1,43933|2,44058|0,44058|3) - can you flip this, weve got the same exact pattern as before 00:35:808 (35808|2,35808|3,35933|2,35933|1,36058|3,36058|0) -
☑ Ok00:48:058 (48058|2,48183|2,48308|2) - pls there isnt that eheheh synth sound unlike 00:49:058 (49058|3,49183|3) - also btw 00:48:183 (48183|2,48308|2,48308|3,48433|0,48558|2,48558|1,48683|3,48808|1,48808|0,48933|2) - arent these supposed to have stacks because of the eheheh synth sound?
☑ Ok00:50:808 (50808|3,50933|3) - the ehehehe synth isnt here, dont stack
☑ Ok00:52:183 (52183|3,52308|3) - wat from where
?00:52:308 (52308|3,52308|0,52433|1,52558|0,52558|2,52683|3) - these are then meant to be stacked
☑ Ok00:55:745 (55745|2,55745|3,55995|1,55995|0) - iirc these are singles, maybe you did something wrong either here or 00:49:745 (49745|0,49808|2,49808|3) -
I don't think so but maybe... No. However, no.00:59:058 (59058|2,59058|3,59183|0) - the iiiiii synth sound still here, stack
☑ Ok01:02:308 (62308|3,62558|3,62808|3,63058|3,63308|3) - why is 01:02:058 (62058|1,62058|0) - left out
01:03:558 (63558|0,63683|0,63808|0,63933|0,64058|0) - seriously this is a little too much too sudden, ik youre trying to balance it out with 01:02:308 (62308|3,62558|3,62808|3,63058|3,63308|3) - but eh it isnt working. crtl-h 01:03:933 (63933|0,64058|1) - pls
☒ Frankly I didn't think about the balance just about increasing sound... so I leave.01:05:729 (65729|1,65729|0,65792|2,65792|0) - can you not, a simple short jumpthrill will suffice, no need to slap me with 240 minis
☑ Okimg if youre scared that the right hand takes too much you could move things like i did in the picture
01:11:292 (71292|0,71417|0,71542|1,71542|0) - you jack better with your left hand do you? maybe you could make this a little nicer on the left by 01:11:667 (71667|1) - shifting to 4 and 01:11:792 (71792|2) - to 2
☒ Yes but I think that this arrangement of notes shows the growing power of sound so I leave.01:13:729 (73729|0,73729|1,73792|2,73792|3) - im assuming your 240 mini jack thing was a mistake
01:25:291 (85291|1,85291|3,86291|2,86291|3,87291|1,87291|0) - maybe you might wanna keep your layering consistent, beforehand these LNs dont have notes (see 01:22:276 (82276|3) - and others)
☑ Ok fixed01:26:041 (86041|2,86041|0) - same thing about layering, there isnt a clap here
☑ Ok fixed01:27:666 - you wanna put a note here
☒ No because this is a kind of transition to the next part.01:31:166 (91166|1,91291|0) - move the short LN to the otherhand, these things on one hand are pretty ehehes to hit
☑ Ok fixed01:36:933 (96933|3,97058|3,97183|3) - be more friendly pls
☑Hah Okay 01:52:089 (112089|3,112214|3,112339|3) - same thing as above
☑ok 01:55:026 (115026|3,115089|3,115589|3,115651|3) -
you dont have to emphasize the clap anymore than this, these jacks come so suddenly i cant emphasize how awkward they are tbh. a simple jumpthrill shenanigan thing is enough
I do not know what to think about it. I'll ask others and decide what to doimg 01:54:839 (114839|1,114964|0,114964|1,115089|1,115089|0,115214|0,115339|0) - you might wanna watch out for hand balance thing too
you could theoractically have those jacks things, but i dont see a proper set-up smooth enough for the player to hit without making them angry. you could spread the jacks out to the other hand, but i dont see any change in how sudden and out of place it feels. which is the main problem here
01:57:964 (117964|2,118089|2,118214|2,118464|1,118589|1,118714|1) - weird how here you kinda changed things up a little. its cool and all, idk why you chose this section to feature this thing tho
☑ok fixed02:02:964 (122964|3,123089|3,123214|3) - same
☑^02:07:228 (127228|2,127228|1,127478|2,127478|1,127728|2,127728|1) - dont think these deserve doubles
☑hmm... me too. I forgot XD fixed02:54:055 (174055|0) - move up by one 1/4 tick
☑lol How did it here ... fixed02:54:242 (174242|3,174305|3) - same
☑ fixed02:57:242 (177242|0,177305|0,177430|0,177555|0,177805|0,177867|0) - just copy paste whatever i said above and flip it
I will wait03:10:336 (190336|0) - nope i dont recommend this at all, the LNs forces the stacks onto one hand. maybe you could have everything here stack each other, since beforehand you had much nicer chords 03:07:070 (187070|0,187070|2,187195|3,187195|1) - like this
☒ I simply prefer to leave it as is. These LNs aren't so bad. Seriously03:13:273 (193273|3,193336|3,193836|3,193898|3) - copy paste but dont flip
03:29:273 (209273|0,209336|0,209836|3,209898|3) - hey you changed it a little, same things still apply here tbh, the LNs and everything here makes it hard to anticipate such a thing
03:37:086 (217086|0,217211|1,217211|0,217336|0,217336|1,217461|1,217586|1,217586|0) - maybe you might wanna reconsider your choice of LN here. also the timings of the LNs are wrong heh
I think over it03:41:913 (221913|1) - the transition should be on the red tick
☒ Sound starts on the blue line in this case03:58:444 - why isnt this one the 4 note chord but 03:58:319 - this is what
Because I think that it fits but I will consider yetimg also you might wanna make things a little bit more balanced
i dont have much to say for the chorus, the layering is quite simple there
you might wanna look over the LNs in the second half of the chart, its pretty awkward on both hands