yo gabba gabba!
holy fucking shit this song was originally released on a vinyl wtf how chav can you get
00:00:085 (85|2,2210|3) - the LN heads are at the wrong place, 00:02:335 - is where the background violin thingy changes pitch
00:03:460 (3460|1,4210|0) - same thing as above, changes at 00:04:335 -
00:31:647 (31647|2,31710|3,31835|2,31897|3,32022|2,32085|3) - eh could you do something else here its pretty biased on the right. 00:31:897 - also why is this a double now? if youre looking for the crash its 00:31:835 - right here bb
00:37:058 (37058|3,37058|1,37308|2,37308|0,37558|3,37558|1,37808|2,37808|0,38058|3,38058|1) - idk if theres a structure im supposed to follow here, the doubles here seem to be randomly placed, weve got this thing here but then 00:34:808 (34808|3,34808|2,35058|1,35058|0,35308|1,35308|3,35558|3,35558|0) -? not a big issue, just something to take note
00:43:808 (43808|3,43808|2,43933|1,43933|2,44058|0,44058|3) - can you flip this, weve got the same exact pattern as before 00:35:808 (35808|2,35808|3,35933|2,35933|1,36058|3,36058|0) -
00:48:058 (48058|2,48183|2,48308|2) - pls there isnt that eheheh synth sound unlike 00:49:058 (49058|3,49183|3) - also btw 00:48:183 (48183|2,48308|2,48308|3,48433|0,48558|2,48558|1,48683|3,48808|1,48808|0,48933|2) - arent these supposed to have stacks because of the eheheh synth sound?
00:50:808 (50808|3,50933|3) - the ehehehe synth isnt here, dont stack
00:52:183 (52183|3,52308|3) - wat from where
00:52:308 (52308|3,52308|0,52433|1,52558|0,52558|2,52683|3) - these are then meant to be stacked
00:55:745 (55745|2,55745|3,55995|1,55995|0) - iirc these are singles, maybe you did something wrong either here or 00:49:745 (49745|0,49808|2,49808|3) -
00:59:058 (59058|2,59058|3,59183|0) - the iiiiii synth sound still here, stack
01:02:308 (62308|3,62558|3,62808|3,63058|3,63308|3) - why is 01:02:058 (62058|1,62058|0) - left out
01:03:558 (63558|0,63683|0,63808|0,63933|0,64058|0) - seriously this is a little too much too sudden, ik youre trying to balance it out with 01:02:308 (62308|3,62558|3,62808|3,63058|3,63308|3) - but eh it isnt working. crtl-h 01:03:933 (63933|0,64058|1) - pls
01:05:729 (65729|1,65729|0,65792|2,65792|0) - can you not, a simple short jumpthrill will suffice, no need to slap me with 240 minis
01:11:292 (71292|0,71417|0,71542|1,71542|0) - you jack better with your left hand do you? maybe you could make this a little nicer on the left by 01:11:667 (71667|1) - shifting to 4 and 01:11:792 (71792|2) - to 2
01:13:729 (73729|0,73729|1,73792|2,73792|3) - im assuming your 240 mini jack thing was a mistake
01:25:291 (85291|1,85291|3,86291|2,86291|3,87291|1,87291|0) - maybe you might wanna keep your layering consistent, beforehand these LNs dont have notes (see 01:22:276 (82276|3) - and others)
01:26:041 (86041|2,86041|0) - same thing about layering, there isnt a clap here
01:27:666 - you wanna put a note here
01:31:166 (91166|1,91291|0) - move the short LN to the otherhand, these things on one hand are pretty ehehes to hit
01:36:933 (96933|3,97058|3,97183|3) - be more friendly pls
01:52:089 (112089|3,112214|3,112339|3) - same thing as above
01:55:026 (115026|3,115089|3,115589|3,115651|3) - you dont have to emphasize the clap anymore than this, these jacks come so suddenly i cant emphasize how awkward they are tbh. a simple jumpthrill shenanigan thing is enough
01:57:964 (117964|2,118089|2,118214|2,118464|1,118589|1,118714|1) - weird how here you kinda changed things up a little. its cool and all, idk why you chose this section to feature this thing tho
02:02:964 (122964|3,123089|3,123214|3) - same
02:07:228 (127228|2,127228|1,127478|2,127478|1,127728|2,127728|1) - dont think these deserve doubles
02:54:055 (174055|0) - move up by one 1/4 tick
02:54:242 (174242|3,174305|3) - same
02:57:242 (177242|0,177305|0,177430|0,177555|0,177805|0,177867|0) - just copy paste whatever i said above and flip it
03:10:336 (190336|0) - nope i dont recommend this at all, the LNs forces the stacks onto one hand. maybe you could have everything here stack each other, since beforehand you had much nicer chords 03:07:070 (187070|0,187070|2,187195|3,187195|1) - like this
03:13:273 (193273|3,193336|3,193836|3,193898|3) - copy paste but dont flip
03:29:273 (209273|0,209336|0,209836|3,209898|3) - hey you changed it a little, same things still apply here tbh, the LNs and everything here makes it hard to anticipate such a thing
03:37:086 (217086|0,217211|1,217211|0,217336|0,217336|1,217461|1,217586|1,217586|0) - maybe you might wanna reconsider your choice of LN here. also the timings of the LNs are wrong heh
03:41:913 (221913|1) - the transition should be on the red tick
03:58:444 - why isnt this one the 4 note chord but 03:58:319 - this is what
i dont have much to say for the chorus, the layering is quite simple there
you might wanna look over the LNs in the second half of the chart, its pretty awkward on both hands
01:15:792 (75792|2,75792|0,75917|3,75917|0,76042|3,76042|1) - howd you decide what to double and what to triple over here
01:37:058 (97058|0,97058|3,97183|2,97183|1,97308|3,97308|0,97433|2,97433|1,97558|3,97558|0,97683|2,97683|1,97808|3,97808|0,97933|2,97933|1) - maybe you might wanna variate the chords a little, the repetitive nature of these almost jumpthrills throw me off easily
01:54:964 (114964|2,114964|0,115026|3,115089|2,115089|1,115214|3,115214|0,115276|2,115339|0,115339|1) - entrance into this is not too smooth itself, see above
02:58:055 (178055|1,178055|2,178117|3,178117|0,178180|2,178180|1,178242|3,178242|0,178305|2,178305|1) - this isnt consistent with the above line, check
03:10:336 (190336|3) - the intensity of this is not equal to the intensity of 03:12:461 (192461|3,192461|1,192586|2,192586|0,192711|1,192711|3,192836|0,192836|2) - you might wanna consider layering more chords in the LN, maybe on each 1/2 tick would be good enough. applies for all similar sections
nothing else, chart is really consistent, which is why i dont have much to pick on the layering. also why i dont really have a lot of points here, generally main issues are a couple of pattern executions
ill mod 2 for today, think i had enough for a fill
hope my mod helped
good luck with rank
holy fucking shit this song was originally released on a vinyl wtf how chav can you get
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- BPM and Offset : ( × )timeseems like your timing is all wonky and fucked up
seems like what this track suffers from is the lack of a solid consistent bpm thing; which isnt surprising given how tech was limited back then
choo choo
your measure ticks make more sense if its on 480 bpm, but because of technical limitations (measure lines) id kinda suggest you keep it at 240wikiped wrote:
Lacrima Mosa Est, for example, has 480 BPM, although over the bass is a contrasting slow ambient sound.
ive fixed most of the measure tick issues (and the offset ones), keep in mind that this song was made in 2006 and the inconsistencies in the timing offset can be real tough to catch. idk if i managed to catch everything, better to ask someone else to check it for you
the timed diff is here, just copy paste it into a new diff (dont be an dum and copy paste it into one of your diffs pls)
you can crtl-a to select everything in the pastebin if you didnt know - Aimod : ( ✓ )
- Kiai : ( ✓ )
- Metadata : ( × )tagsadd
Project: Enigma Electronic
both are confirmed to be inside, check nomidk if you should keep terrorcoreok maybe suicide is kinda scary idk,im not that scared hearing this (ok maybe i dont understand the langauge its speaking)
thanks google!googlo wrote:
This is the story of a man
The 50th of the stock of 'nem skyscraper falls
This is the story of a man
The 50th of the stock of 'nem skyscraper falls
As he falls, he repeated to calm down, again and again:
So far, we went quite well
But the important thing is not the case
But the landing
The important thing is not the case
But the landing - Hitsound : ( ✓ ) those are some weak ass hitsounds
- Video : ( × ) .osb in your file? did i open it accidentally or
scary skeletins
this is insane btw00:00:085 (85|2,2210|3) - the LN heads are at the wrong place, 00:02:335 - is where the background violin thingy changes pitch
00:03:460 (3460|1,4210|0) - same thing as above, changes at 00:04:335 -
00:31:647 (31647|2,31710|3,31835|2,31897|3,32022|2,32085|3) - eh could you do something else here its pretty biased on the right. 00:31:897 - also why is this a double now? if youre looking for the crash its 00:31:835 - right here bb
img
assuming you got the crash double thing wrong
00:37:058 (37058|3,37058|1,37308|2,37308|0,37558|3,37558|1,37808|2,37808|0,38058|3,38058|1) - idk if theres a structure im supposed to follow here, the doubles here seem to be randomly placed, weve got this thing here but then 00:34:808 (34808|3,34808|2,35058|1,35058|0,35308|1,35308|3,35558|3,35558|0) -? not a big issue, just something to take note
00:43:808 (43808|3,43808|2,43933|1,43933|2,44058|0,44058|3) - can you flip this, weve got the same exact pattern as before 00:35:808 (35808|2,35808|3,35933|2,35933|1,36058|3,36058|0) -
00:48:058 (48058|2,48183|2,48308|2) - pls there isnt that eheheh synth sound unlike 00:49:058 (49058|3,49183|3) - also btw 00:48:183 (48183|2,48308|2,48308|3,48433|0,48558|2,48558|1,48683|3,48808|1,48808|0,48933|2) - arent these supposed to have stacks because of the eheheh synth sound?
00:50:808 (50808|3,50933|3) - the ehehehe synth isnt here, dont stack
00:52:183 (52183|3,52308|3) - wat from where
00:52:308 (52308|3,52308|0,52433|1,52558|0,52558|2,52683|3) - these are then meant to be stacked
00:55:745 (55745|2,55745|3,55995|1,55995|0) - iirc these are singles, maybe you did something wrong either here or 00:49:745 (49745|0,49808|2,49808|3) -
00:59:058 (59058|2,59058|3,59183|0) - the iiiiii synth sound still here, stack
01:02:308 (62308|3,62558|3,62808|3,63058|3,63308|3) - why is 01:02:058 (62058|1,62058|0) - left out
01:03:558 (63558|0,63683|0,63808|0,63933|0,64058|0) - seriously this is a little too much too sudden, ik youre trying to balance it out with 01:02:308 (62308|3,62558|3,62808|3,63058|3,63308|3) - but eh it isnt working. crtl-h 01:03:933 (63933|0,64058|1) - pls
01:05:729 (65729|1,65729|0,65792|2,65792|0) - can you not, a simple short jumpthrill will suffice, no need to slap me with 240 minis
img
if youre scared that the right hand takes too much you could move things like i did in the picture
01:11:292 (71292|0,71417|0,71542|1,71542|0) - you jack better with your left hand do you? maybe you could make this a little nicer on the left by 01:11:667 (71667|1) - shifting to 4 and 01:11:792 (71792|2) - to 2
01:13:729 (73729|0,73729|1,73792|2,73792|3) - im assuming your 240 mini jack thing was a mistake
01:25:291 (85291|1,85291|3,86291|2,86291|3,87291|1,87291|0) - maybe you might wanna keep your layering consistent, beforehand these LNs dont have notes (see 01:22:276 (82276|3) - and others)
01:26:041 (86041|2,86041|0) - same thing about layering, there isnt a clap here
01:27:666 - you wanna put a note here
01:31:166 (91166|1,91291|0) - move the short LN to the otherhand, these things on one hand are pretty ehehes to hit
01:36:933 (96933|3,97058|3,97183|3) - be more friendly pls
01:52:089 (112089|3,112214|3,112339|3) - same thing as above
01:55:026 (115026|3,115089|3,115589|3,115651|3) - you dont have to emphasize the clap anymore than this, these jacks come so suddenly i cant emphasize how awkward they are tbh. a simple jumpthrill shenanigan thing is enough
img
01:54:839 (114839|1,114964|0,114964|1,115089|1,115089|0,115214|0,115339|0) - you might wanna watch out for hand balance thing too
you could theoractically have those jacks things, but i dont see a proper set-up smooth enough for the player to hit without making them angry. you could spread the jacks out to the other hand, but i dont see any change in how sudden and out of place it feels. which is the main problem here
you could theoractically have those jacks things, but i dont see a proper set-up smooth enough for the player to hit without making them angry. you could spread the jacks out to the other hand, but i dont see any change in how sudden and out of place it feels. which is the main problem here
01:57:964 (117964|2,118089|2,118214|2,118464|1,118589|1,118714|1) - weird how here you kinda changed things up a little. its cool and all, idk why you chose this section to feature this thing tho
02:02:964 (122964|3,123089|3,123214|3) - same
02:07:228 (127228|2,127228|1,127478|2,127478|1,127728|2,127728|1) - dont think these deserve doubles
02:54:055 (174055|0) - move up by one 1/4 tick
02:54:242 (174242|3,174305|3) - same
02:57:242 (177242|0,177305|0,177430|0,177555|0,177805|0,177867|0) - just copy paste whatever i said above and flip it
03:10:336 (190336|0) - nope i dont recommend this at all, the LNs forces the stacks onto one hand. maybe you could have everything here stack each other, since beforehand you had much nicer chords 03:07:070 (187070|0,187070|2,187195|3,187195|1) - like this
03:13:273 (193273|3,193336|3,193836|3,193898|3) - copy paste but dont flip
03:29:273 (209273|0,209336|0,209836|3,209898|3) - hey you changed it a little, same things still apply here tbh, the LNs and everything here makes it hard to anticipate such a thing
03:37:086 (217086|0,217211|1,217211|0,217336|0,217336|1,217461|1,217586|1,217586|0) - maybe you might wanna reconsider your choice of LN here. also the timings of the LNs are wrong heh
03:41:913 (221913|1) - the transition should be on the red tick
03:58:444 - why isnt this one the 4 note chord but 03:58:319 - this is what
img
also you might wanna make things a little bit more balanced
i dont have much to say for the chorus, the layering is quite simple there
you might wanna look over the LNs in the second half of the chart, its pretty awkward on both hands
MEGA spoopy
00:31:710 - you missed a spot01:15:792 (75792|2,75792|0,75917|3,75917|0,76042|3,76042|1) - howd you decide what to double and what to triple over here
01:37:058 (97058|0,97058|3,97183|2,97183|1,97308|3,97308|0,97433|2,97433|1,97558|3,97558|0,97683|2,97683|1,97808|3,97808|0,97933|2,97933|1) - maybe you might wanna variate the chords a little, the repetitive nature of these almost jumpthrills throw me off easily
img
nothing too bold and scary, tame enough to retain some of your elements whilst hard enough to keep the player focused on the chords. you could apply this to every chorus tbh
01:54:964 (114964|2,114964|0,115026|3,115089|2,115089|1,115214|3,115214|0,115276|2,115339|0,115339|1) - entrance into this is not too smooth itself, see above
02:58:055 (178055|1,178055|2,178117|3,178117|0,178180|2,178180|1,178242|3,178242|0,178305|2,178305|1) - this isnt consistent with the above line, check
03:10:336 (190336|3) - the intensity of this is not equal to the intensity of 03:12:461 (192461|3,192461|1,192586|2,192586|0,192711|1,192711|3,192836|0,192836|2) - you might wanna consider layering more chords in the LN, maybe on each 1/2 tick would be good enough. applies for all similar sections
nothing else, chart is really consistent, which is why i dont have much to pick on the layering. also why i dont really have a lot of points here, generally main issues are a couple of pattern executions
ill mod 2 for today, think i had enough for a fill
hope my mod helped
good luck with rank