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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Donnerstag, 28. September 2017 at 09:34:38

Artist: chano & 40mP
Title: Natsukoi Hanabi
Tags: Shano 40meterP Panorama Note VINXIS Bonsai deetz
BPM: 158
Filesize: 6874kb
Play Time: 01:37
Difficulties Available:
  1. Bonsai's Insane (3,1 stars, 204 notes)
  2. deetz' Insane (4,16 stars, 242 notes)
  3. Easy (1,46 stars, 97 notes)
  4. Expert (4,93 stars, 352 notes)
  5. Hard (2,7 stars, 200 notes)
  6. Harder (3,15 stars, 256 notes)
  7. Insane (4,1 stars, 304 notes)
  8. Normal (2,06 stars, 182 notes)
  9. VINXIS' Insane (3,17 stars, 195 notes)


Download: chano & 40mP - Natsukoi Hanabi
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where are all these insanes coming from help

https://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=63238926
https://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=37387501
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tags and diffname are the same sorry but i'll have to veto this set for the moment
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ur face is the same - _-



is this 4 rank or just meme lolz cute moe bg tho
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👍
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good song
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Idealism wrote:

is this 4 rank or just meme lolz cute moe bg tho
partially remapped 00:18:575 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - to make more sense with the melody instead of only following drums, so I might actually try ranking it if I get around making a set
also finished hitsounding
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pp farmers eat your heart out
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👀
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hello I love your map, can I make a GD?
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40 mp <3
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y did u call ur other insane diff hard /s
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this is really fun to play
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[ Insane]
  1. 00:20:284 (5) - since theres no piano on this slider it might be more fitting to make it circles for consistency with these 00:18:575 (1,2,3,4) -
  2. 00:27:310 (2,1) - ctrl g?
  3. 00:35:094 (1,2,3,4) - you follow the instruments in this section so these sliders feel odd. the piano rhythm is more interesting anyway imo
  4. 00:51:993 (1) - cute bezier
  5. 01:31:582 (1) - i get the idea but kinda sad considering how cute the rhythms are here

    how to mod this T_T its too cute
[ vinxis]
  1. 00:14:968 (2) - i feel like making this a 1/2 slider with a 1/1 gap afterwards would fit the music better and emphesise the new downbeat better 00:15:537 (1) - .
  2. 00:19:145 (2) - i think this beat definetly has to go since you seem to only be mapping the piano. this beat is way weaker than the other drums youve been ignoring
  3. 00:19:904 (4) - similarly this reverse is pretty unfitting. for this section with so few piano beats map the strong drum beats instead of the weak ones
  4. 00:46:487 (2,3) - stack is off
  5. 00:51:993 (1,2) - ^
  6. 01:08:512 (1,2,3) - this slider realation could look nicer
  7. 01:24:272 - missed vocal
[ Normal]
  1. 00:22:563 (4,5) - ds
[ Easy]
  1. 01:28:449 (1,2) - ds error
tfw hard is harder than insane

cant really mod the topdiff since i dont really understand that "emphesis with antijumps concept... its really fun though

gl!!
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Hello~ sry for kinda delay ;w;
moe bg :eyes:

Easy

  1. i find inconsistently NC patterns on some part. you would be nice to unify them to 2 measure on all sections in my view.
    add NC?
    00:03:385 (4) - 00:09:461 (4) - 00:55:031 (3) -
  2. 00:33:765 (1,2,3) - vs. 00:45:917 (1,2,3) - there are not consistently rhythm patterns. on precious one, you are following mainly vocal however you are following drum and different vocal on the next one in my thought. why dont you unify them to one side?
  3. 01:28:449 (1,2) - closer ds ;w;

Normal

  1. 00:00:348 - 00:09:461 - 00:10:791 - 3 green lines SV are kinda low compared with next green line SV(00:12:499 - ) since i feel that the gap(x0.2) is large a bit for beginners imo
  2. 00:38:702 (5,6) - why dont you stack them like 00:31:866 (3,4) - since they are in calm part.

Bonsai's Insane

  1. 00:04:715 - 00:05:094 - can you swap both green lines Volume? i listen previous sound is louder obviously than next one
  2. 00:07:753 (1,1) - why you add NC here? i feel kinda NC spamming...
  3. 01:11:550 (1,2) - kinda blanket off?

Hard

  1. faultless stuffs, fine!

VINXIS' Insane

  1. No green lines Owo are you seriously? i have some concerns about lack of hitsound varieties mainly drums
  2. 01:21:234 - maybe you are missing vocal on here in term of your rhythm pattern

Insane

  1. 01:03:955 (1,2,3) - can you put objects to be same straight line for easy to play? i am care of slightly out of alignment. 01:04:525 (1,2,3) - maybe you can unify with that
  2. 01:06:044 (2,3) - there is questionable distance for me since in your other diffs you emphasized this 01:06:234 (3) - sound to gain distance.

Expert

  1. 00:12:499 (1,2,3) - i suggest you increase distance on 00:12:689 (2,3) - than 00:12:499 (1,2) - cuz 00:12:879 (3) - the sound is emphasized by main melodies and upbeat drum imo
  2. 00:17:721 (4,1,2) - i feel they are gimmicky, as there are same distances plus combined with NC. so i couldnt read it accurately. can you change rhythm pattern like your insane diff or adjust placements? 00:15:537 (1,2,3) - same mentions as previous one
  3. 01:08:892 (2) - sry for nazi but it looks nice to move downward 1~2 pixels imo
i do like your insane since im interested of its mapping concept on the whole!
i hope my mod is helpful for you
Good luck~!
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90° rotated bg...?

[General]

[Easy]
00:09:461 (4) - add nc? since you changed another track to follow here
00:21:613 - soft finish fits better imo
00:22:942 (3) - personally I prefer some rounded shapes rather than redticks
01:12:879 - add a note for consistency? although not really necessary for me
01:17:816 (2) - using same rhythm as 01:16:297 (1) - seems not expressive enough imo
01:21:424 (4) - better keep consistent with 01:09:272 (4) - I guess
01:28:449 (1,2) - ds

[Normal]
00:21:234 - add a note maybe
01:18:955 - the drum here sounds louder than 01:18:385 - , using a sliderend here but circle for former one seems strange to me

[Bonsai's Insane]
yeah, nice sr meme
00:04:715 (1) - maybe need to raise ar to about 8.3? in order to avoid stacking reverse arrow
00:51:044 (4,1) - and here

00:26:740 (1,2) - since you didn't use overlap patterns in previous part, avoid overlapping here could be better
01:11:550 (1,2) - blanket need to be improved, especially for this kind of patterns
01:22:373 (2) - flow is kind of awkward compared with other similar patterns. consider rotating 90° or 120°?

[Hard]
00:20:664 (1,2) - should be a 3-notes pattern here imo. move 00:21:044 (3) - closer looks still nice
00:57:689 (1) - raising sv seems not very fit here

btw there may be a difficulty gap between normal and hard :3

[VINXIS' Insane]
00:06:423 (1,2) - this is too off, ctrl+g could be more acceptable
00:46:487 (2,3) - stacking, same for other places if they're not intended to
01:08:512 (1,2) - muted sliderends sounds better
01:29:398 (2) - nc should be set here if you are following vocal imo

[Insane]
01:02:056 (1,2) - may be misread under ar8. try stacking 2 to 01:01:677 (2) - ?
01:03:196 (1,2) - ^
01:22:373 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - spacing seems too large compared with similar patterns

[Extra]
00:18:196 (3) - slider is more consistent with previous rhythm (and fit the song better
00:18:575 (1,1,1,2,1) - you put jumps on strings here, and changed to small spacing for similar sounds on 00:19:904 (2,2,2) - and 00:21:803 (2,2,2) - , which is inconsistent and restrained the effect of the patterns imo.
00:35:854 (4,4) - use slider could be better. rhythms of 1/1 circle doesn't really fit your placement.
00:47:626 (2) - try x171 y331?
00:56:170 (5,6) - stack 5 to 6 and 6 to 00:56:740 (2) - 's end seems more consistent
01:19:145 (3,1) - jump feels a little awkward here. try move 3 to x512 y268?

That's all. Good luck with obtuse angel jumps.
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joker- wrote:

Bonsai's Insane

  1. 00:04:715 - 00:05:094 - can you swap both green lines Volume? i listen previous sound is louder obviously than next one I don't see the problem, it's the same as I did at 00:00:348 and 00:03:385 because I used the normal-hitnormal there which is by default louder than the soft-hitnormal, so I compensated that with turning the volume down
  2. 00:07:753 (1,1) - why you add NC here? i feel kinda NC spamming... I put a NC on every piano-note bc they are changing the harmony, that's why 00:04:715 and 00:10:791 (1,1) are NC'd too!
  3. 01:11:550 (1,2) - kinda blanket off? oops, fixed!

PinkHeart wrote:

[Bonsai's Insane]
yeah, nice sr meme :c
00:04:715 (1) - maybe need to raise ar to about 8.3? in order to avoid stacking reverse arrow should be fine, the previous slider is already completely faded out before the next needs to be clicked, + the rhythm should be kinda expected there anyways
00:51:044 (4,1) - and here that's even more time between those ^^

00:26:740 (1,2) - since you didn't use overlap patterns in previous part, avoid overlapping here could be better I didn't find a way to avoid it nicely, but it should be fine too since 00:16:867 (1,3) is the same kind of thing, there's perfect stacks everywhere
01:11:550 (1,2) - blanket need to be improved, especially for this kind of patterns yup, already did that with the previous mod ^^
01:22:373 (2) - flow is kind of awkward compared with other similar patterns. consider rotating 90° or 120°? imo that highlights the downbeat very well, compared to 01:10:031 there is a note instead of a pause, so I slightly emphasized it that way to make up for that
Thanks! :D uguu~
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osu file format v14

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 63
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[Metadata]
Title:Natsukoi Hanabi
TitleUnicode:夏恋花火
Artist:chano & 40mP
ArtistUnicode:シャノ & 40mP
Creator:Lasse
Version:Bonsai's Insane
Source:
Tags:Shano 40meterP Panorama Note VINXIS Bonsai
BeatmapID:1384505
BeatmapSetID:650427

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CircleSize:4.5
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:8
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posted
sdafsf

sdafsf wrote:

[ Insane]
  1. 00:20:284 (5) - since theres no piano on this slider it might be more fitting to make it circles for consistency with these 00:18:575 (1,2,3,4) - current works better to follow the strings with sliders
  2. 00:27:310 (2,1) - ctrl g? idk why
  3. 00:35:094 (1,2,3,4) - you follow the instruments in this section so these sliders feel odd. the piano rhythm is more interesting anyway imo 00:34:335 (2,3,4) - transitions to vocals which the sliders follow too
  4. 00:51:993 (1) - cute bezier all sliders in this diff are lol
  5. 01:31:582 (1) - i get the idea but kinda sad considering how cute the rhythms are here

    how to mod this T_T its too cute
[ Normal]
  1. 00:22:563 (4,5) - ds fixed
[ Easy]
  1. 01:28:449 (1,2) - ds error fixed
tfw hard is harder than insane

cant really mod the topdiff since i dont really understand that "emphesis with antijumps concept... its really fun though

gl!!
joker-

joker- wrote:

Hello~ sry for kinda delay ;w;
moe bg :eyes:

Easy

  1. i find inconsistently NC patterns on some part. you would be nice to unify them to 2 measure on all sections in my view.
    think they double length combos are better in these parts
  2. 00:33:765 (1,2,3) - vs. 00:45:917 (1,2,3) - there are not consistently rhythm patterns. on precious one, you are following mainly vocal however you are following drum and different vocal on the next one in my thought. why dont you unify them to one side? both follow piano
  3. 01:28:449 (1,2) - closer ds ;w; yea

Normal

  1. 00:00:348 - 00:09:461 - 00:10:791 - 3 green lines SV are kinda low compared with next green line SV(00:12:499 - ) since i feel that the gap(x0.2) is large a bit for beginners imo 0.2 is fine imo, real new players can play the easy and it fits the song too
  2. 00:38:702 (5,6) - why dont you stack them like 00:31:866 (3,4) - since they are in calm part.think it fits the piano there better as music builds up a bit

Insane

  1. 01:03:955 (1,2,3) - can you put objects to be same straight line for easy to play? i am care of slightly out of alignment. 01:04:525 (1,2,3) - maybe you can unify with that not supposed to be easy to hit
  2. 01:06:044 (2,3) - there is questionable distance for me since in your other diffs you emphasized this 01:06:234 (3) - sound to gain distance.changed

Expert

  1. 00:12:499 (1,2,3) - i suggest you increase distance on 00:12:689 (2,3) - than 00:12:499 (1,2) - cuz 00:12:879 (3) - the sound is emphasized by main melodies and upbeat drum imo I decided to use lower ds for all clickable snares in this part to make them stand out from the other things
  2. 00:17:721 (4,1,2) - i feel they are gimmicky, as there are same distances plus combined with NC. so i couldnt read it accurately. can you change rhythm pattern like your insane diff or adjust placements? 00:15:537 (1,2,3) - same mentions as previous one should be fine
  3. 01:08:892 (2) - sry for nazi but it looks nice to move downward 1~2 pixels imo fixed
i do like your insane since im interested of its mapping concept on the whole!
i hope my mod is helpful for you
Good luck~!
PinkHeart

PinkHeart wrote:

90° rotated bg...?

[General]

[Easy]
00:09:461 (4) - add nc? since you changed another track to follow here not sure, I kinda like the longer combos in the calmer parts
00:21:613 - soft finish fits better imo sounds too much to me
00:22:942 (3) - personally I prefer some rounded shapes rather than redticks I decided to map this part and 01:25:411 - only with such sharp sliders to make the parts stand out
01:12:879 - add a note for consistency? although not really necessary for me would rather have a little gap here since it's so much continuous rhythm before
01:17:816 (2) - using same rhythm as 01:16:297 (1) - seems not expressive enough imo agreem but it seems to be the best solution to handle rhythm here for easy :c
01:21:424 (4) - better keep consistent with 01:09:272 (4) - I guess actually it relates to 01:12:310 (4,1) -
01:28:449 (1,2) - ds fixed

[Normal]
00:21:234 - add a note maybe would be weird cause I skipped the snares before too
01:18:955 - the drum here sounds louder than 01:18:385 - , using a sliderend here but circle for former one seems strange to me yea but it fits melody better imo

[Hard]
00:20:664 (1,2) - should be a 3-notes pattern here imo. move 00:21:044 (3) - closer looks still nice current works better with the melody
00:57:689 (1) - raising sv seems not very fit here this and 00:51:613 (1) - work well to emphasize the end finish imo

btw there may be a difficulty gap between normal and hard :3 should be fine since normal already uses lots of 1/2 rhythms and also not only stacked ones

[Insane]
01:02:056 (1,2) - may be misread under ar8. try stacking 2 to 01:01:677 (2) - ? should be fine
01:03:196 (1,2) - ^
01:22:373 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - spacing seems too large compared with similar patterns works well to build up a bit towards the intense end

[Extra]
00:18:196 (3) - slider is more consistent with previous rhythm (and fit the song better stop seems much better for the transition here to me
00:18:575 (1,1,1,2,1) - you put jumps on strings here, and changed to small spacing for similar sounds on 00:19:904 (2,2,2) - and 00:21:803 (2,2,2) - , which is inconsistent and restrained the effect of the patterns imo. mh thhe first two don't really seem to be part of that main melody with how much weaker they are
00:35:854 (4,4) - use slider could be better. rhythms of 1/1 circle doesn't really fit your placement. whole part was mapped without any filler rhythm so I don't think that fits well
00:47:626 (2) - try x171 y331? stand out too much with such a huge jump from 00:47:246 (1) -
00:56:170 (5,6) - stack 5 to 6 and 6 to 00:56:740 (2) - 's end seems more consistent changed this in some way lol
01:19:145 (3,1) - jump feels a little awkward here. try move 3 to x512 y268? kills emphasis on 01:19:335 (1) - imo

That's all. Good luck with obtuse angel jumps.


thanks!

updated bonsai's diff and added https://osu.ppy.sh/s/556208 lol
posted
deetz
-00:15:158 - missing some hs
-00:18:385 - the finish here doesnt really fit the slow slider/pause you do
-adding finish to 00:21:613 (1) - but not to 00:18:575 - uh ;;
-00:22:942 (1,2,1,2,1) - combos like http://puu.sh/xc0Aq/1a2ef50d50.jpg looks better, or keep the 1-2 thing before the stream idk xd
-00:25:031 (1) - something about this nc aaa
-00:38:892 (3,4) - every 1/4 during a verse is a bit spaced but this one isn't.. uhm
-00:45:537 - clap like 00:33:385 -
-01:01:107 - hitsounds xd
-01:25:031 (9) - nc like the others before
ok
posted
henlo

Milan- wrote:

-00:38:892 (3,4) - every 1/4 during a verse is a bit spaced but this one isn't.. uhm i wanted to make this one feel more sudden
i made some kinda change to everything else

thx

http://puu.sh/xcN42/502c7d42cc.rar

edit: use the one below, not this one
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