hi there
from ur q
cereal things
are there any hitsounds? I hear some finishes sometimes, but the claps are missing all the time?
I guess you are going to add them later lol.
Extra
ar and od seem like a gimmick thingy, but when it comes to playability ar 9.2 seems like the best, since the jumps are sometimes quite huge.
od would fit better into spread with 8 or sth since your insane and hard only have 1 od gap between each other.
Hmm.. aside from the occasional overmaps the map in its current state is i think alright,
however what should be a bit at least be a touched a little bit is the spacing in 00:16:179 - this part where objects are spaced out the same like in the more intense part before. By the way, the intense part of the beginning is over but this part now has the same slidervelocity.
The only difference this part has to the intense part is the occasional 1/1 sliders. How about make it more distinct with lower slider velocity OR lower spacing.
Also some kicks are sometimes emphasized more than the downbeat or the snares: 00:18:346 - 00:29:013 - like these. I suppose 00:17:346 (4) - these are spaced this way for the vocal? But even if they are mapped to the vocal,
I kinda suggest you to overmap these as triplets on the downbeat as they emphasize the vocal and piano at the same time and since you sometimes overmap anyway for certain sounds I don't see a reason to not map them like this. It also plays much more natural.
00:32:096 (7) - minor thing, but you could emphasize the actual drums more than the overmaps even its just tiny spacing, just to seperate them effectively.
01:22:846 (1,2) - another minor thing, but for consistency it should be added: These should be swapped in NC's since you combo to the vocal which you do 01:24:513 (1) - here as well.
00:39:846 - i mean I understand you want to undermap parts with a drumroll where a vocal is occuring like 00:58:013 (5) - but this kinda should be emphasized or at least mapped.
00:47:513 - this is the same thing.
^these two points are just my personal taste, but seemed also abit out of place with the concept of the drumroll, or I just don't see what you're doing, lol.
Insane
Rhythm is about the same as extra, but hp is higher there. Shouldn't it be the other around when it comes to difficulty?
Spacing here in the same part as I mentioned in Extra is better here, but could still need some improvements. The spacing is quite okay now so there's no need to make up for it with
Slider Velocity or sth like this, but some notes are emphasized which just shouldn't be emphasized like 00:12:846 (4) - this note has no sound at all, but is emphasized.
Rhythm things
00:07:013 (2,2) - hmm.. its a minor thing, but prior you didn't emphasize these kicks at all and the ydon't follow the vocal to well either, which is your main concept in the first place. It makes it a nice pattern tho, but yeah should kinda fit the concept too.
00:09:513 (1) - would fit more as a 1/2 slider to line up with the vocal like 00:09:846 - which emphasize the same sounds.
Gameplay wise:
00:13:513 (1) - this jump pattern is the hardes tpart in the entire map, the rest plays really not difficult and almost like a light insane, when it comes to spacing. Can you maybe tone this jump pattern down?
HMMM i guess its good, mainly due to the better spacing here in the one place i mentioned. aaaaa
Hard
00:20:179 - wouldn't fit here a 1/1 slider better to the vocal and a single circle at 00:20:679 - ? Current emphasizes the the snare on th white, but not the vocal like prior mapping. Same thing happens 00:30:846 - here.
00:25:513 (1) - no problem here, but more gameplay oriented. These feel a bit stagnant as they play the same as 00:22:846 (1) - this, but they emphsize different things. HOw about introdcuing some stacks here? Would fit the piano nicely imo.
00:34:846 (1) - not sure theres enough time to react to these sliders at this level. Probably need some testplays from players around this level. I had no problems with these, but im certainly above this level right. Maybe to save some time. Overlap these and be save instead?
01:07:679 - should be emphasized as its a vocal, the snare is not as important in your concept.
offtopic - 01:23:179 - lol this is nc'd like i suggest in the higher diffs xd
this is actually executed nicely with the spacing here, no problems here.
normel
00:00:180 - for simplicity which is still important in a normal, the spinner should be mapped like the easy difficulty.
00:10:846 (5) - rhythm error here, as this is emphasized not to the vocals, but is mapped the same as the consecutive circles 00:09:513 (1) - here. Since you introdcued already that sliderends can end on downbeat how about mapping 00:10:513 (4) - as an 1/1 slider instead? Would fit with consistency as well.
00:37:513 - COOL, wow someone introducing slower slider velocity in normals? Need to mark the day in my calendar. Hey, but i still have a concern here, can you chose a different spacing here? the almost overlapping things 00:38:846 (2,3) - look imo not really pleasing. I know this is a personal thing, but yeah. You already have seperated this part from the others, by adding different slider velocity. Spacing similar to what you have done before makes up for it imo.
00:50:846 (1) - can you map at least in the lower diffs, to snares here? It's abit difficult otherwise. Red tick barely is noticeable also following vocal, it should end at last white tick in that spot. Uhm how about adding ah 3/1 slide rhere instead? It matches both drumming and vocal the best here.
01:03:846 - this sound is stronger than 01:03:679 - this sound both vocal and snare are here, but head emphasizes the red tick instead. Seems more or less imo here, that you didn't know how to map this differently here xd.
How about adding a 1/1 slider here and adding a note at the whit tick? you won't lose your priority on vocals and additionally have emphasize on the white as well.
01:06:179 (4,3) - minor thing and personal taste, but this is kind dense here, plus 01:06:179 (4,4) - these are barely touching but its noticeable. Could move this abit down, so it doesn't look so cramped.
01:27:846 - this will 100% confuse players since its mapped to vocal here, but you don't map neither of the vocals before. The timing of the note here is unpredictable unless you just watch the approachcircle.
Mapping it to the cymbal would make more sense here as its on 01:28:179 - the downbeat or red tick, for simplicity its better to have it on the downbeat i think.
You might realize i don't quite like vocal mapping in lower diffs, unless i absolutely have to :/
einfach
hi od1 we meet again after 300 years
ok my main issue on this is that you want to force the vocal mapping here to much. You obv have in mind to map them judging from the ncing you chose here and when they start, but you just don't map to the vocals very often which makes skips on the 00:06:846 - 00:08:179 - downbeats very very awkward. What I mean with you skipping the vocal when you try to emphasize them. Here are some spots: 00:07:846 (2,2) - these both have no vocals on it, but snares and this would be fine if you would focus on all drumming parts instead.
Right now you just partly map both things not very effectively. This mapping kinda worked in Normal since you were able to map 1/2 sounds, but its impossible here. BUT! If you really want to force the vocal rhythm here. You really need to consistently do that. For a part alike 00:05:513 - this it would forced to vocal look like
https://feb.s-ul.eu/8bFMiC05 this which is really meh and skipping lot of beats.
I guess this is only in the beginning the case since, alot of vocals happen on the white tick afterwards and don't seem to much problem then, but this rhythm is irritating.
yea not sure if you should use stacks in an easy difficulty, probably not, but who cares.
00:10:846 - since you don't introduce that sliderends can end on downbeats like you did with the normal diff, this downbeat should be emphasized. Also I con't understand why you jsut don't map it like
https://feb.s-ul.eu/shebiiNP this. The new combo here on 1 is the exact same thing as 00:05:513 (1) - here.
Besides that one point I've talked about alot I don't have much to mention here!
I wish you good Luck with the mapset!
Here's my map:
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/634140
Add one please <3 
all the part has been mapped in this way to fill the vocal and increase at the same time the base as well, i think it's nice in this way tho
