Remember that these are just suggestions, you don't need to use any of them unless you want to.
Also the timing points might be a little weird since i changed the BPM before modding it, look at the pictures if you're not sure. Most (if not all) are in line with the BPM change.
00:17:714 (17714|0,17714|2,17714|1,17852|1,17852|2,17852|3) - Would suggest removing the LNs from patterns like this since they are really awkward to play.
00:21:156 (21156|3) - Should be a jackhammer.
00:22:670 (22670|0,22808|1,22945|2,23083|3) - PR, they're going down.
00:24:597 (24597|1,24735|0) - Should be a 1/2 and not a 1/4.
00:24:735 (24735|3,24735|2) - Should be single not a double since it is too quiet. Maybe even flip it to the left side as well since its paned that way.
00:25:148 (25148|2,25148|3) - ^
00:25:423 (25423|3,25423|2,25423|1,25561|2,25561|1,25561|0,25698|1,25836|0,25836|3,25836|2,25974|2,25974|3,25974|1,26111|0,26111|1,26249|3,26249|2,26387|0) - Really awkward pattern. Suggest removing the LNs and focusing on the drums. Something like this maybe
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/847905500:26:500 (26500|3,26500|2,26775|2,26775|3,26913|3,26913|2,27051|1,27051|0,27326|1,27326|2) - Interesting pattern, though its not placed at the correct timing points. This is how it should be
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8478868 and this note 00:26:868 (26868|2,26868|3) should stop. as the picture show, when the last two LNs start. A suggested pattern that keeps the original feel of your pattern but is more playable:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/847888200:28:176 (28176|3,28176|2,28176|0,28727|1,28727|3,29277|3,29277|1,29277|0,29828|1,29828|0,30378|3,30378|2,30378|1,30929|2,30929|1,31480|3,31480|2,31480|0,32030|3,32030|0,32581|0,32581|2,32581|3,33132|2,33132|1,33682|1,33682|3,33682|0,34233|3,34233|1,34783|2,34783|1,34783|0,35334|3,35472|2,35609|1,35747|0,35885|3,35885|2,35885|1,36022|1,36022|2,36022|3,36160|0,36160|2,36160|1,36435|0,36435|3,36986|2,36986|1,36986|0,37536|2,37536|1,38087|3,38087|2,38087|1,38638|1,38638|3,39188|0,39188|3,39188|1,39739|2,39739|0,40289|2,40289|3,40289|1,40840|3,40840|2,41391|1,41391|2,41391|0,41941|3,41941|1,42492|2,42492|1,42492|0,43043|0,43043|2,43593|3,43593|2,43593|1,44144|2,44144|1,44144|0,44281|0,44281|1,44281|2,44694|3,44694|1,44694|0,44832|3,44832|1,44832|0,45107|0,45107|2,45245|0,45245|3,45245|1) - This whole section is WAY too easy/empty. Please map the synths here. I suggest mapping them with normal notes or a small amount of LNs to differ from the previous section.
00:45:107 (45107|2,45107|0) - Since this note is more quiet than the other notes i suggest you use a single or a double like this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8478008 00:52:953 (52953|0,53022|1,53091|2,53229|3,53298|2,53366|1) - These are 1/6 notes not 1/4 notes. Also consider changing the pattern up a bit to fit PR (pitch relevancy). e.g
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/847818500:53:504 (53504|0,53642|1,53779|3,53917|2) - PR here as well. e.g
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8478197 If used, i suggest:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/847802900:54:605 (54605|3) - Seems kinda empty here, suggest mapping the drums with singles or doubles + adding a note near the end to represent the synth(?)
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8478271 the end note can be a normal note or an LN, you decide.
00:55:124 (55124|0,55170|1,55216|2,55262|3,55308|2,55353|0,55399|1,55445|3,55491|2,55537|0,55675|2,55675|1,55812|3,55812|0,56087|2,56087|1) - (Should start here 00:55:156) This whole section is really wierd to map imo. But there's some ghost notes in there. I suggest making the first "scratch/alien sound" a 1/4 triple and the second one a 1/6 triple /w an LN at the end like this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8478345 this one might be completly wrong, but that's how i would map it atleast.
00:55:812 (55812|0,55812|3) - Not a ghost note nessecerely but think it starts here 00:55:707, I would have mapped this section with an SV instead of LNs, but if you wanna map it with LNs i would suggest something like this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/847837200:59:010 (59010|1,59010|0,59148|2,59286|3,59423|0,59561|1,59698|3,59836|2,59836|0,59974|1,60249|1,60524|1) - Maybe map with LNs since it differs from the previous section?
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/847842301:00:662 (60662|3,60662|2,60937|0,60937|1) - Change to singles?
01:01:454 (61454|1,61454|0,61592|1,61592|0) - Change to singles, because you're already holding a note + its a slightly weaker sound. suggestion:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/847847001:02:864 (62864|1,62864|3) - Shouldn't be a double here, 01:03:140 this is where it should be (since this is where the snare drum is).
(01:03:415 - 01:04:241) - This section could be more creative, something like this could work:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/847852901:04:516 (64516|2,64516|0,64562|3,64562|1,64792|1,64792|3,65067|2,65067|0,65308|3,65342|0,65618|1,65618|2) - This section is kinda weird. Would highly suggest you change the first two notes, the second ones are okey. e.g
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/847857401:06:168 (66168|3,66168|0,66168|2) - Change this to a jack with the prevous note, it's not the same sound as the previous triple. Oh and the LN ends here 01:06:443
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/847869501:06:719 (66719|0,66719|1,66925|2,66925|1,67132|3,67132|2) - Extend these.
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/847920701:08:371 (68371|0,68371|3) - If you're mapping snare this should not be a triple. Same with these 01:09:472 (69472|1,69472|2), 01:10:573 (70573|2,70573|1)
01:12:225 (72225|0,72225|1,72225|3) - This should be a double, same sound as the previous snare.
01:12:775 (72775|3,72775|0,72775|1,73051|0,73051|3,73326|0,73326|3,73326|2,73464|2,73464|0,73464|3,73601|3,73601|2,73601|0) - Same as above w/ the triples. Though i would suggest removing the LN and making something like this to emphezise the snare drums:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8478744 Maybe even a triple at the end, since it sounds diffrent.
01:14:565 (74565|0,74565|3) - Double should be here: 01:14:427
01:17:731 (77731|3,77800|2,77869|1,77937|0,78006|3,78075|2,78144|1,78213|0) - These are 1/3s + PR. Would suggest this pattern
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8478801If you want to use the above pattern i would also suggest ctrl + h on these notes (as the screenshot suggest) 01:18:282 (78282|3,78557|0,78695|2,78832|1,78832|0,78970|3,79107|0,79245|1,79383|0,79383|2,79520|3,79658|2,79796|0,79933|2,79933|1,80071|0,80209|2,80346|1,80484|3,80484|0,80759|1,80897|3,81035|0,81035|2,81172|1,81310|2,81448|0,81585|3,81585|1,81723|2,81861|0,81998|1,82136|3,82136|2,82273|0,82411|2,82549|1,82686|3,82686|0,82686|2)
If i missed something im sorry, you might need to check between some of the mod lines : )