From my NM/M4M queue.
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General
MP3: PASS
BG: PASS
Video: SKIP
Diff.Spread: PASS
HP & OD: PASS
Hitsound: SKIP
Metadata: MISS
Preview Point: MISS
BG: PASS
Video: SKIP
- Well, up to you.
Diff.Spread: PASS
- Well, to be honest i will like a difficulty that is closer to Insane. Anyway, less difficulties to check lol.
HP & OD: PASS
Hitsound: SKIP
- Add hitsounds. Not now, but is necessary.
- Is intended the volume change in the kiai section: https://puu.sh/wF8S5.png ? Use 45-50%. Also, try to use Soft Sampleset always, you can add custom hitsounds later.
Metadata: MISS
- Let's recheck some things... Link: http://www.vap.co.jp/gokukoku/release/o-s-t.html
- Title and Unicode Title: "BRYNHILDR IN THE DARKNESS -Ver. EJECTED-" (From the ost.)
- Artist: "Tokisawa Nao" (You have the name first and the surname last. Just invert them.)
- Tags: "brynhildr in the darkness ejected" -> "Gokukoku no brynhildr" (Currently is duplicated, the title says the same thing. Replace with romaji translation of the anime name. That's all.)
Preview Point: MISS
- Currently is bad snapped at 00:54:025 . Instead snap it at 00:53:917 - when the crash sounds or 00:56:119 - too.
Mod!
[EZ]
[NM]
[HD]
From start, I think you can follow better the sounds at this section: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8545741
00:17:164 (17164|1,17714|2,18265|3) - You can use Longnotes here to skip the snares: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546016
00:24:322 (24322|2,24322|0,24322|3) - A triple in the EZ? I suggest you remove one note, is too much.
00:24:322 (24322|0,24735|1,25148|2) - Instead of these Longnotes use simple notes, is better since this drums have shorter duration. The Longnotes doesn't fit in my opinion, the drums can be more spread, also snares here... screenshot -extended-: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546058
00:35:885 (35885|0,35885|1,36022|2,36160|3) - I think this is too much difficult, maybe erase one note from the chord, also a bit of rearrange: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546068
00:41:941 (41941|3,42492|0,42492|2,43043|1,43593|2,43593|3) - Can be arranged better in my opinion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546078
00:44:832 (44832|1,45107|1,45245|0) - I think you can skip the last kick using the longnote, is better than current because the left hand have to do some effort there: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546094
00:45:245 (45245|0,47447|2,49650|0,51852|3) - These Longnotes will be better to follow the vocal instead, i think you follow the piano but is too blended for the vocal. Try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546116
00:56:257 (56257|2) - Move to |3| since it gives a better feeling of the crash sound.
00:58:460 (58460|3,58460|0,58735|2,59010|1,59286|0,59561|3,59836|2,60111|1,60387|0) - Is kinda weird to follow this, i think you follow the piano sounds in the background but you could accentuate more the drums and some noises, like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546151
01:02:314 (62314|3,62864|1,63415|2,63966|0,64241|2,64516|1) - There some drums in the middle part that will be represented better using Longnotes, also following the vocal much better: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546169
01:06:168 (66168|1,66168|3,66719|1) - I rather move them like this, also adding a note for that noise and kick: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546194
01:12:775 (72775|2,72775|1,73326|1,73326|2) - Skipping some drums here is a bit odd, for less strain you can reduce the notes used. Try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546214
01:13:877 - This part is really good for roll patterns: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546234
01:16:905 (76905|1,77180|0,77180|2,77456|1,77731|0,78006|1) - I rather kept some roll pattern here too: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546240
01:19:383 (79383|2,79383|1,79658|3,79933|0) - Again: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546244
01:21:035 (81035|3,81310|1,81585|0,81585|3,81861|1,82136|2,82411|0,82686|1) - Last change here: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546251
00:17:164 (17164|1,17714|2,18265|3) - You can use Longnotes here to skip the snares: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546016
00:24:322 (24322|2,24322|0,24322|3) - A triple in the EZ? I suggest you remove one note, is too much.
00:24:322 (24322|0,24735|1,25148|2) - Instead of these Longnotes use simple notes, is better since this drums have shorter duration. The Longnotes doesn't fit in my opinion, the drums can be more spread, also snares here... screenshot -extended-: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546058
00:35:885 (35885|0,35885|1,36022|2,36160|3) - I think this is too much difficult, maybe erase one note from the chord, also a bit of rearrange: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546068
00:41:941 (41941|3,42492|0,42492|2,43043|1,43593|2,43593|3) - Can be arranged better in my opinion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546078
00:44:832 (44832|1,45107|1,45245|0) - I think you can skip the last kick using the longnote, is better than current because the left hand have to do some effort there: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546094
00:45:245 (45245|0,47447|2,49650|0,51852|3) - These Longnotes will be better to follow the vocal instead, i think you follow the piano but is too blended for the vocal. Try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546116
00:56:257 (56257|2) - Move to |3| since it gives a better feeling of the crash sound.
00:58:460 (58460|3,58460|0,58735|2,59010|1,59286|0,59561|3,59836|2,60111|1,60387|0) - Is kinda weird to follow this, i think you follow the piano sounds in the background but you could accentuate more the drums and some noises, like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546151
01:02:314 (62314|3,62864|1,63415|2,63966|0,64241|2,64516|1) - There some drums in the middle part that will be represented better using Longnotes, also following the vocal much better: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546169
01:06:168 (66168|1,66168|3,66719|1) - I rather move them like this, also adding a note for that noise and kick: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546194
01:12:775 (72775|2,72775|1,73326|1,73326|2) - Skipping some drums here is a bit odd, for less strain you can reduce the notes used. Try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546214
01:13:877 - This part is really good for roll patterns: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546234
01:16:905 (76905|1,77180|0,77180|2,77456|1,77731|0,78006|1) - I rather kept some roll pattern here too: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546240
01:19:383 (79383|2,79383|1,79658|3,79933|0) - Again: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546244
01:21:035 (81035|3,81310|1,81585|0,81585|3,81861|1,82136|2,82411|0,82686|1) - Last change here: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546251
[NM]
00:02:557 (2557|0,2860|0,3163|0) - I rather change this part to this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546258
00:06:345 (6345|0,6497|1,6648|0,6800|2,6951|3,7103|2,7254|3,7406|1) - Also here, some alternation: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546267
Well, i know that you that following the piano here but, the inconsistency with the EZ difficulty is pretty evident: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546276 <- EZ in the right. When in EZ you mapped that Snare with a chord, in the NM you skip it, and here the kick sounds are a chord... well is up to you, but i still thinking that skipping all the Snare sounds seems ankward. Some general suggestion for this part: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546337 , https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546348 , https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546355 , and so on... I think you can improve this part a lot to be honest, so keep it up.
00:27:625 - Using Triples/Hands for NM is also something that i don't recommend. Only for Hard difficulties and above. If you erase the extra note and follow better the piano sounds, you can improve this part too, some suggestions: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546398 , https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546413 , https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546441 , and so on...
The rest is pretty much the same unfortunally. Try to follow a lot more the piano sounds (pretty clear to hear in my opinion), use roll patterns and some alternation and more Longnotes. By the way, the difference of Longnotes between NM and HD is a lot... you need to make a mapset that increases his difficulty gradually.
00:06:345 (6345|0,6497|1,6648|0,6800|2,6951|3,7103|2,7254|3,7406|1) - Also here, some alternation: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546267
Well, i know that you that following the piano here but, the inconsistency with the EZ difficulty is pretty evident: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546276 <- EZ in the right. When in EZ you mapped that Snare with a chord, in the NM you skip it, and here the kick sounds are a chord... well is up to you, but i still thinking that skipping all the Snare sounds seems ankward. Some general suggestion for this part: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546337 , https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546348 , https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546355 , and so on... I think you can improve this part a lot to be honest, so keep it up.
00:27:625 - Using Triples/Hands for NM is also something that i don't recommend. Only for Hard difficulties and above. If you erase the extra note and follow better the piano sounds, you can improve this part too, some suggestions: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546398 , https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546413 , https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546441 , and so on...
The rest is pretty much the same unfortunally. Try to follow a lot more the piano sounds (pretty clear to hear in my opinion), use roll patterns and some alternation and more Longnotes. By the way, the difference of Longnotes between NM and HD is a lot... you need to make a mapset that increases his difficulty gradually.
[HD]
From start, is pretty much the NM again. You can add Longnotes for vocals and the noise: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546519 , https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546523 , https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546525 , https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546527
00:12:208 (12208|3,12208|0,12208|2) - For kicks, i rather use two notes. These are three, the Longnotes counts as well.
00:17:714 - Add a note on |1| for snare, is well suited since is the Longnote end... hm Screenshot: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546557
00:21:018 (21018|1,21018|0,21018|2) - Is a Kick use two notes instead, Skipping from now on...
00:25:423 (25423|3,25423|1,25561|2,25561|0) - Snares, you can use three notes since is the Longnote end and not between them.
00:25:836 (25836|0,25836|2,25974|3,25974|2) - ^.
00:27:350 - You can cut the Longnote before it reaches the end to use the triple note for cymbal: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546577
For this difficulty, i think it needs more longnotes, is somewhat odd that the start has more longnotes than here when the piano sounds are more clear.
00:35:334 - Suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546605
00:36:435 (36435|3,36435|0) - I think the cymbals also needs triple notes... Skipping from now on...
00:51:852 - ...Why is so similar to NM? If HD is the hardest, don't refrain: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546629
00:55:156 - Same case as above: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546655 <- The note on |3| in the right side is 1/8: 00:56:085
00:59:010 (59010|0,59010|1,59836|0,59836|2) - Snares... use Triples. Skipping too...
01:13:326 (73326|0,73464|0,73601|0) - More fun in my opinion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546668
01:17:731 - Suggestion2: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546672
I expected a more dense Longnote difficulty here... Well, up to you.
00:12:208 (12208|3,12208|0,12208|2) - For kicks, i rather use two notes. These are three, the Longnotes counts as well.
00:17:714 - Add a note on |1| for snare, is well suited since is the Longnote end... hm Screenshot: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546557
00:21:018 (21018|1,21018|0,21018|2) - Is a Kick use two notes instead, Skipping from now on...
00:25:423 (25423|3,25423|1,25561|2,25561|0) - Snares, you can use three notes since is the Longnote end and not between them.
00:25:836 (25836|0,25836|2,25974|3,25974|2) - ^.
00:27:350 - You can cut the Longnote before it reaches the end to use the triple note for cymbal: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546577
For this difficulty, i think it needs more longnotes, is somewhat odd that the start has more longnotes than here when the piano sounds are more clear.
00:35:334 - Suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546605
00:36:435 (36435|3,36435|0) - I think the cymbals also needs triple notes... Skipping from now on...
00:51:852 - ...Why is so similar to NM? If HD is the hardest, don't refrain: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546629
00:55:156 - Same case as above: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546655 <- The note on |3| in the right side is 1/8: 00:56:085
00:59:010 (59010|0,59010|1,59836|0,59836|2) - Snares... use Triples. Skipping too...
01:13:326 (73326|0,73464|0,73601|0) - More fun in my opinion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546668
01:17:731 - Suggestion2: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8546672
I expected a more dense Longnote difficulty here... Well, up to you.
I think you can improve more this mapset. Keep it up! Also as you requested, the reminder Any help will be appreciated!
Good Luck!