Hello, M4M from my queue.
Huh, that background looks kinda weird in the editor because of the tartan pattern on the skirt behind the gridlines.
Normal
- 00:36:024 (4) - Minor: Pretty nazi thing but the slider point isn't exactly in the middle of the slider. The best way to fix this is to use the default skin, place the time cursor on 00:36:232 and move the red point down until the slider ball just changes direction.
- 00:42:690 (4) - You have the slider going over the entire slider here instead of just the head. I'm not sure if it's intentional, but it doesn't sound it.
- 00:54:357 (1) - I think a single circle would make a better finale beat before the break than a slider, since a circle will put more emphasis on the downbeat and doesn't start the break late. The same goes for the other difficulties.
- 01:24:357 (1) - Minor: Blanket seems a little off (view the slider follow circle from (01:23:940]).
- 02:08:524 (2,3) - It makes more sense if you kept the consistency through what you've mapped and keep this as a slider-circle rhythm rather than reversing it to try and add variety. Rhythmically, the white ticks should have more emphasis on them anyway (especially 02:08:940 for the snare drum).
- 03:54:357 (1,2,3) - I feel like you could choose a better rhythm here to follow the music better here. You're missing out on beats such as 03:54:774 with a vocal, and 03:55:190 with a cymbal crash. 03:55:815 is also a fairly strong vocal note, which could use something better than a slider end. You can go with whatever here, but I might aswell throw a random suggestion. - 04:01:024 - It could be nice if you added a default soft-whistle to the end of this slider for the finale. Same goes for the other difficulties.
Hard
- 00:49:357 (1) - 02:03:732 (4) - Unintentional full whistles on these sliders?
- 00:54:357 (1) - It would be nicer if this was stacked directly beneath 00:53:732 (4) rather than 00:53:107 (3). If you don't have View->Stacking toggled on, here would be a good place to so you can see how the stack is made ingame.
- 01:09:149 (5,1) - I'd say you should either make the spacing consistent here or make the jump more prominent, since right now it just looks kind of unpolished.
- 01:23:940 (5,1) - Similar thing here.
- 01:52:482 (1) - 01:59:149 (3) - These would sound nice with a whistle on the head in my opinion.
- 02:43:315 (3,4,5) - Minor: The stack is a little off.
- 03:12:274 (4,5) - Similar thing as before about spacing.
- 03:51:440 (2,3,4) - Minor: Slightly uneven spacing through this.
Lunatic
- 01:15:399 (6,7,8,9) - I'm not too sure about these patterns, since it can be a little confusing to get the timing of the stream right. It should be fine, but you could play around with kick sliders to see if you could make this rhythm more intuitive to play.
- 01:17:170 (5,6) - Minor: The stack is slightly off.
- 01:41:753 (3,4) - It's probably better if you followed the rhythm closer than slightly overmap this by having a beat on the white tick. I feel this plays better with this rhythm: - 01:52:482 (1) - Place the whistle on the head rather than the tail since that is where the vocal note is.
- 01:59:149 (3) - Whistle on this head as before.
- 02:08:836 (6) - This feels unnecessary in my opinion, since I don't hear anything significant on this beat.
- 02:14:357 (1,2,3) - I feel it might be better to have these sliders overlap during this section of the music. The intensity drops and a lower spacing feels more suitable (you could also lower SV if you wanted to).
Pretty nice map. Good luck!
Huh, that background looks kinda weird in the editor because of the tartan pattern on the skirt behind the gridlines.
Normal
- 00:36:024 (4) - Minor: Pretty nazi thing but the slider point isn't exactly in the middle of the slider. The best way to fix this is to use the default skin, place the time cursor on 00:36:232 and move the red point down until the slider ball just changes direction.
- 00:42:690 (4) - You have the slider going over the entire slider here instead of just the head. I'm not sure if it's intentional, but it doesn't sound it.
- 00:54:357 (1) - I think a single circle would make a better finale beat before the break than a slider, since a circle will put more emphasis on the downbeat and doesn't start the break late. The same goes for the other difficulties.
- 01:24:357 (1) - Minor: Blanket seems a little off (view the slider follow circle from (01:23:940]).
- 02:08:524 (2,3) - It makes more sense if you kept the consistency through what you've mapped and keep this as a slider-circle rhythm rather than reversing it to try and add variety. Rhythmically, the white ticks should have more emphasis on them anyway (especially 02:08:940 for the snare drum).
- 03:54:357 (1,2,3) - I feel like you could choose a better rhythm here to follow the music better here. You're missing out on beats such as 03:54:774 with a vocal, and 03:55:190 with a cymbal crash. 03:55:815 is also a fairly strong vocal note, which could use something better than a slider end. You can go with whatever here, but I might aswell throw a random suggestion. - 04:01:024 - It could be nice if you added a default soft-whistle to the end of this slider for the finale. Same goes for the other difficulties.
Hard
- 00:49:357 (1) - 02:03:732 (4) - Unintentional full whistles on these sliders?
- 00:54:357 (1) - It would be nicer if this was stacked directly beneath 00:53:732 (4) rather than 00:53:107 (3). If you don't have View->Stacking toggled on, here would be a good place to so you can see how the stack is made ingame.
- 01:09:149 (5,1) - I'd say you should either make the spacing consistent here or make the jump more prominent, since right now it just looks kind of unpolished.
- 01:23:940 (5,1) - Similar thing here.
- 01:52:482 (1) - 01:59:149 (3) - These would sound nice with a whistle on the head in my opinion.
- 02:43:315 (3,4,5) - Minor: The stack is a little off.
- 03:12:274 (4,5) - Similar thing as before about spacing.
- 03:51:440 (2,3,4) - Minor: Slightly uneven spacing through this.
Lunatic
- 01:15:399 (6,7,8,9) - I'm not too sure about these patterns, since it can be a little confusing to get the timing of the stream right. It should be fine, but you could play around with kick sliders to see if you could make this rhythm more intuitive to play.
- 01:17:170 (5,6) - Minor: The stack is slightly off.
- 01:41:753 (3,4) - It's probably better if you followed the rhythm closer than slightly overmap this by having a beat on the white tick. I feel this plays better with this rhythm: - 01:52:482 (1) - Place the whistle on the head rather than the tail since that is where the vocal note is.
- 01:59:149 (3) - Whistle on this head as before.
- 02:08:836 (6) - This feels unnecessary in my opinion, since I don't hear anything significant on this beat.
- 02:14:357 (1,2,3) - I feel it might be better to have these sliders overlap during this section of the music. The intensity drops and a lower spacing feels more suitable (you could also lower SV if you wanted to).
Pretty nice map. Good luck!