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Normal
00:28:524 (3,4) - in general you should avoid direct 1/2 rythm in a normal. In this case i think it fits better if you play the slider first and then the circle (more consistent rythm for a newer player aswell)
00:30:190 (3) - you can do the same here as above
You use way too many NC in this part try cutting them down
00:36:024 (1) - this straight line looks rly wierd. Mb move the red point a bit to the left. (for that you should first move 00:35:190 (2) - a bit upwards and follow with 00:35:607 (3) - with a higher drop than before 00:36:857 (2,3) - mb change 2 into a repeat slider? As it stand this ~160° edge looks wierd. (so we can lower the amount of "1/2 slider + note" patterns aswell)
00:40:190 (2,3) - first slider then circle feels better fere aswell
00:47:690 (1,2,3) - put those into a circular pattern
00:52:482 - its wierd that you dont play the finish and let a reverse slider do it
00:54:357 (1) - change this to a single note. Works better imo
01:05:607 (4) - i strongly belive this should be changed into 2 clickable notes. 01:05:815 - this needs to be played in order for 01:06:232 - to have an impact. Pls concider this
I remind you here again to work on your NC. I m too suck to help you with NC but sooner or later you ll get them modded away, so you might wanna start now or smth.
01:31:857 (3) - change this to a 1/1 slider so the space between those two 01:31:857 (3,1) - isnt as akward an misleading (there is roughly a 3/2 pause since you dont fully play the sldier end)
01:44:357 (1,2,3) - dont JUST make this a straight line.. You cuold try to tilt it a bit. IN ADDITION: i wouldnt keep it liek that. Again you have this wierd rythm in the background which end on a red tick. i would try to change this pattern to a brown single note (as it is atm) and then put a 1/2 slider followed up by a normal circle and then ofc the great payoff circle on the red tick. Like this guid the player into the red tick smoother since you let them play a slider. 01:47:690 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - I would delete this and map it less dense. WHat i mean by that is: You have this rly chilled part ver here (chill enough to put a pause actually) so you should keep it relativly speaking even more hcill than before even tho its a normal dif. You map would feel more "alaive" aswell since you change up your used pattern aswell (its a gift from the song rly). (tip: dont just full map the vocals.)
02:01:857 (2,3) - same as before
02:07:274 (4) - tillt this slightly to the side and fix this blanket 02:07:690 (1) - . It also adds a better flow to it 02:08:524 (2,3) - same
02:21:857 (2) - personally i wouldnt blanket this.
02:32:690 (1) - now this slider is kinda random. Mb make it smoother, more curvy
i would have put a circle here 02:38:315 - and a 1/1 slider here 02:38:524 -
02:48:107 (2) - uh.. mb change it to curve to the other side ?
03:11:857 (3) - somehow move this a bit mroe away?
03:16:232 (3,4) - change these to a 1/2 slider and a circle
03:22:899 (3,4) - same here
03:24:357 (1) - this doesnt look very pretty
03:38:315 (2) - make this a normal slider, move this 1/2 steps back and add a circle here 03:38:940 (3) -
03:48:940 (3,1,2) - this is kinda wierd aswell :/
03:48:940 (3) - chaneg this to a normal circle, add a 1/1 slider here 03:49:149 - , and a 1/1 slider here 03:49:774 - and ofc remove the 1/2 in this short part
(or change the scond 1/2 slider to a normal circle and follow it up with a 1/2 slider here 03:50:190 - )
03:50:190 - these slider are wierd aswell
Again dont forget to fix NC
Hard
mb increase od to 6 (cause gud map)
01:47:690 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3) - mb map this less dense aswell
03:10:190 (3,4) - mvoe these a bit farther away. they are "nearly touching" eachother
03:24:357 (1,3) - make this blanket a bit smoother on 3 (use 2 white points)
03:47:065 (4,5,6) - is the slightly missmatched triple intentional?
03:55:607 (4) - move this a bit down and to the right mb
this one is pretty nice, i can hardly complain
It look sliek you had fun mapping it !!!
Insane
00:31:649 (4,5) - this is a bit to sharp compared to the rest o the start. Mb move 5 a bit closer?
00:44:982 (4,5) - same (although this one will have to be fixed in another way since you have the whole thing inside a pattern)
Look at the others aswell i wont point all of them out
01:10:086 (4) - (this is just me being picky) You can move this just a square up then you will have this ilusion of a curve in the triple which would look prettier.
01:16:649 (3,4) - have this slightyl curbed aswell so it "harmonizes" with 01:17:482 (7,8,1,2,3,4) - ( i m not even sure what i m saying, just dont have them blantly linear or smth)
01:19:149 (6) - emphasis should be on this and not on 01:18:940 (5) - . Try to space 6 more and 5 less (swap the spacings in a way or smth)
01:22:690 (1,2) - i think a higher spacing on 2 would be cooler :^)
01:47:690 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - again the same. Tryto tune it down. (although its kinda ok..ok nvm its ok)
01:49:045 (5,1,2) - i played this and i got rly surprised. The 172 repeat slider doesnt flow well into the low spaced 1/2 single notes imo
03:21:857 (4) - move this a TINY bit away so its slide rend has more space inside the blanket
03:24:357 (1) - those are usually kinda meh btu ok
map looks nice overall, the normal needs some work doe
good luck :O
Normal
00:28:524 (3,4) - in general you should avoid direct 1/2 rythm in a normal. In this case i think it fits better if you play the slider first and then the circle (more consistent rythm for a newer player aswell)
00:30:190 (3) - you can do the same here as above
You use way too many NC in this part try cutting them down
00:36:024 (1) - this straight line looks rly wierd. Mb move the red point a bit to the left. (for that you should first move 00:35:190 (2) - a bit upwards and follow with 00:35:607 (3) - with a higher drop than before 00:36:857 (2,3) - mb change 2 into a repeat slider? As it stand this ~160° edge looks wierd. (so we can lower the amount of "1/2 slider + note" patterns aswell)
00:40:190 (2,3) - first slider then circle feels better fere aswell
00:47:690 (1,2,3) - put those into a circular pattern
00:52:482 - its wierd that you dont play the finish and let a reverse slider do it
00:54:357 (1) - change this to a single note. Works better imo
01:05:607 (4) - i strongly belive this should be changed into 2 clickable notes. 01:05:815 - this needs to be played in order for 01:06:232 - to have an impact. Pls concider this
I remind you here again to work on your NC. I m too suck to help you with NC but sooner or later you ll get them modded away, so you might wanna start now or smth.
01:31:857 (3) - change this to a 1/1 slider so the space between those two 01:31:857 (3,1) - isnt as akward an misleading (there is roughly a 3/2 pause since you dont fully play the sldier end)
01:44:357 (1,2,3) - dont JUST make this a straight line.. You cuold try to tilt it a bit. IN ADDITION: i wouldnt keep it liek that. Again you have this wierd rythm in the background which end on a red tick. i would try to change this pattern to a brown single note (as it is atm) and then put a 1/2 slider followed up by a normal circle and then ofc the great payoff circle on the red tick. Like this guid the player into the red tick smoother since you let them play a slider. 01:47:690 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - I would delete this and map it less dense. WHat i mean by that is: You have this rly chilled part ver here (chill enough to put a pause actually) so you should keep it relativly speaking even more hcill than before even tho its a normal dif. You map would feel more "alaive" aswell since you change up your used pattern aswell (its a gift from the song rly). (tip: dont just full map the vocals.)
02:01:857 (2,3) - same as before
02:07:274 (4) - tillt this slightly to the side and fix this blanket 02:07:690 (1) - . It also adds a better flow to it 02:08:524 (2,3) - same
02:21:857 (2) - personally i wouldnt blanket this.
02:32:690 (1) - now this slider is kinda random. Mb make it smoother, more curvy
i would have put a circle here 02:38:315 - and a 1/1 slider here 02:38:524 -
02:48:107 (2) - uh.. mb change it to curve to the other side ?
03:11:857 (3) - somehow move this a bit mroe away?
03:16:232 (3,4) - change these to a 1/2 slider and a circle
03:22:899 (3,4) - same here
03:24:357 (1) - this doesnt look very pretty
03:38:315 (2) - make this a normal slider, move this 1/2 steps back and add a circle here 03:38:940 (3) -
03:48:940 (3,1,2) - this is kinda wierd aswell :/
03:48:940 (3) - chaneg this to a normal circle, add a 1/1 slider here 03:49:149 - , and a 1/1 slider here 03:49:774 - and ofc remove the 1/2 in this short part
(or change the scond 1/2 slider to a normal circle and follow it up with a 1/2 slider here 03:50:190 - )
03:50:190 - these slider are wierd aswell
Again dont forget to fix NC
Hard
mb increase od to 6 (cause gud map)
01:47:690 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3) - mb map this less dense aswell
03:10:190 (3,4) - mvoe these a bit farther away. they are "nearly touching" eachother
03:24:357 (1,3) - make this blanket a bit smoother on 3 (use 2 white points)
03:47:065 (4,5,6) - is the slightly missmatched triple intentional?
03:55:607 (4) - move this a bit down and to the right mb
this one is pretty nice, i can hardly complain
It look sliek you had fun mapping it !!!
Insane
00:31:649 (4,5) - this is a bit to sharp compared to the rest o the start. Mb move 5 a bit closer?
00:44:982 (4,5) - same (although this one will have to be fixed in another way since you have the whole thing inside a pattern)
Look at the others aswell i wont point all of them out
01:10:086 (4) - (this is just me being picky) You can move this just a square up then you will have this ilusion of a curve in the triple which would look prettier.
01:16:649 (3,4) - have this slightyl curbed aswell so it "harmonizes" with 01:17:482 (7,8,1,2,3,4) - ( i m not even sure what i m saying, just dont have them blantly linear or smth)
01:19:149 (6) - emphasis should be on this and not on 01:18:940 (5) - . Try to space 6 more and 5 less (swap the spacings in a way or smth)
01:22:690 (1,2) - i think a higher spacing on 2 would be cooler :^)
01:47:690 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - again the same. Tryto tune it down. (although its kinda ok..ok nvm its ok)
01:49:045 (5,1,2) - i played this and i got rly surprised. The 172 repeat slider doesnt flow well into the low spaced 1/2 single notes imo
03:21:857 (4) - move this a TINY bit away so its slide rend has more space inside the blanket
03:24:357 (1) - those are usually kinda meh btu ok
map looks nice overall, the normal needs some work doe
good luck :O