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"Avishay"
Yo.
[Lunatic]
[Hard]
[Lunatic]
- 00:30:927 (1,2,3,4,5) - The first 4 notes are not really complimenting the slider at the end, it felt odd, the angles of the 1/4 slider, the whole 4 note pattern adn the last slider are not going very well together, perhaps because of the 1/4 gap as well, I'd suggest something like this: http://puu.sh/mXSbQ/6908653487.jpg eh, I like this pattern. since I use this structure a lot, I would like to get a few more opinions on this before I consider changing it.
- 00:40:093 (6,1,2) - Pretty sure this could be more interesting like the music, almost linear pattern is not justified here imo, something like this would be nice: http://puu.sh/mXSkF/059f59cb99.jpg It creates a nice pressure on 1 with the direction shift and then it happens again with 2 with bigger distance. did basically the same thing
- 00:44:885 (4,5) - Like before, the angle and gap is quite odd, I realise there's a strong beat on the blue tick but with such tight pattern it's not really fun. same comment
- 00:53:010 (3,1) - I don't recommend that at all, 3/4 gap stacked, pretty unexpected, anything else is preferable imo. I agree it's a little strange, but honestly, I couldn't think of a better rhythm that follows the song. Adding a note on the downbeat made it play worse, so if you have any ideas let me know
- 01:05:718 (2,3) - Muting the sliderends here is great, highly recommended. changed
- 01:14:052 (7,1) - Could add a bit more spacing to support the strong note and give the pattern some room to breath. fixed
- 01:21:552 (3) - Try placing it at x73 y247 to go with the slider shape and movement a bit better. keep, since the sharper angle helps with emphasis imo
- 02:08:843 (6,1) - No 1/4 to follow vocals? I actually had a 1/4 before, but a lot modders complained about it being" overmapped" since there was no drum here so I removed it lol. if more people comment on it I'll change it back
- 02:20:927 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/mXSLg/207701a452.jpg This pattern goes much much better with the vocals, even if you aimed to follow the instruments only, this goes really really well. your idea is perfectly fine, but I prefer constant 1-2-1-2 rhythm here so that it contrasts more with the 1-2-3-1-2-3 rhythm at 02:24:260 (1,2,1,2) -
- 03:07:177 (5) - Some emphasization here would be nice yeah, fixed
- 03:15:718 (1,2) - Two 1/1 circles then 1/2 sliders twice? A bit odd, either make them all the same pattern, or just switch, like circles -> sliders -> circles, or sliders -> circles -> sliders just like at the Hard diff, both are going to be cool. made them 1/2 sliders
[Hard]
- 00:39:260 (1,2,3) - I think that's a bit too much for a Hard, triplet, circle and a triplet works fairly well. eh, I feel this pattern is actually easier than what you suggested since it only has 3 clickable objects and takes advantage of slider leniency
- 00:53:010 (3,1) - Like before, I don't recommend that, especially on a Hard lol. ^
- 01:05:718 (2,3) - Mute the sliderends here as well! yep, changed
- 01:17:385 (5,1,2) - A bit odd, the vocals deserve some better emphasization and the static movement doesn't seem justified, try this instead: http://puu.sh/mXThp/a9c82f7244.jpg yes, you are right. changed
- 01:39:260 (1,2,3) - Like before, I want to ask, why do you ignore so many rhythms but you decided to follow this on that diff? It's kinda weird. Regardless, I won't mention it again. Here, there's no other strong instrument to map to, and I feel this patterns plays much simpler than you think.
- 03:40:093 (3) - Don't ignore the 1/2 here, it's quite significant and unsettling this way. changed slider and added a note. Hopefully it's not too difficult for hard
- 03:55:718 (5,1,2,3) - This looks really really weird lol, might be confusing for some players. yeah, changed this part
- 00:32:593 (3) - Egh.. pretty sure that's not supposed to be snapped to end on the blue tick. I changed the mp3/offset and forgot to check if all my rhythms were snapped properly x.x
- 00:35:093 (2,3) - 1/4 is not suitable for a Normal difficulty. ^
- 00:46:760 (5) - Snapped incorrectly. ^
- 00:50:927 (1) - Remove clap from end, it doesn't fit really well. fixed
- 02:14:260 (1,2) - Gap is pretty big for no reason, I'd suggest mapping 02:15:302 as well. Erm this repeats twice right afterwards, 6/4 gap is really weird especially when there's something in the song to avoid that, so.. good idea, fix all
- 02:24:260 (1) - How about this rhythm instead: http://puu.sh/mXUtP/b8ce6b6c94.jpg did you link wrong image? your rhythm has 1/4 triplet that is not appropriate for normal
- 03:12:177 (4) - Remove clap from sliderend, it's wrong. goes with drum imo
- 03:39:885 (5) - Rhythm is quite odd compared to the other diffs, you can either use this http://puu.sh/mXUCU/11ce4dcccb.jpg or this http://puu.sh/mXUF2/9be457e878.jpg changed