1. Advanced (2.88 stars, 437 notes)
2. Attraction (3.56 stars, 629 notes)
3. Easy (1.34 stars, 204 notes)
4. Hard (3.13 stars, 579 notes)
5. Normal (1.86 stars, 309 notes)

1. Easy diffs are highly recommended to keep the distance spacing the same throughout the song. eg. 00:12:244 is very hard to read as the distance is the same but the rhythm is not
2. Try and avoid overlapping the objects like at 02:05:436
3. 02:31:744 - Pattern is kinda boring with the vocals. Consider using sliders at this part
4. 02:32:551 - Move to 02:32:667

1. 00:34:744 (1) - Remove NC
2. 00:34:974 (1) - ^
3. 00:45:821 (1) - distance spacing
4. 00:49:974 (6) - doesn't fit the rhythm. Try this
5. 01:42:128 (4) - Try avoid overlapping objects
6. 01:58:513 (1) - Not enough time after spinner. Try end at 02:01:282
7. 02:10:974 (3) - spacing (too close)
8. Too many spinners at 02:15:128 onwards
9. 03:08:667 (1,2,3,4) - don't overdo this pattern, gets boring

[ Rizen ] wrote:

[Easy]

1. Easy diffs are highly recommended to keep the distance spacing the same throughout the song. eg. 00:12:244 is very hard to read as the distance is the same but the rhythm is not
2. Try and avoid overlapping the objects like at 02:05:436
3. 02:31:744 - Pattern is kinda boring with the vocals. Consider using sliders at this part
4. 02:32:551 - Move to 02:32:667

[Normal]

1. 00:34:744 (1) - Remove NC
2. 00:34:974 (1) - ^
3. 00:45:821 (1) - distance spacing
4. 00:49:974 (6) - doesn't fit the rhythm. Try this
5. 01:42:128 (4) - Try avoid overlapping objects
6. 01:58:513 (1) - Not enough time after spinner. Try end at 02:01:282
7. 02:10:974 (3) - spacing (too close)
8. Too many spinners at 02:15:128 onwards
9. 03:08:667 (1,2,3,4) - don't overdo this pattern, gets boring

Gray Veyron wrote:

Hello~ Direct mod!

[> General <]

1. - The background is okay and good quality. You should resize the dimension to a rankable size (since it's 16:9) > 1366x768
2. - Why this "Ore no Imouto ga Konna ni Kawaii Wake ga nai" is together on source and tags? remove on source and the tags will count them on. Fixed.
3. - The volume is too high and loud, you should decrease it to 70%, 60%, or 50%.Fixed. Put hitsound volume to 70%
4. - Timing Check: BPM is okay, but the offset is a bit early, try on 4,080.Fixed. Seems to have solved many problems with beat placement.
5. - Adjust a preview point somewhere on any part. My suggestion > 01:03:128 Fixed. Put timing point at 00:18:849

[> Normal <]

1. - I don't think i can give you mods on this due to overmap or mapping level is too low, but i can help you with some major issues i pointed out.
2. - I can see you mainly focus on vocals in most parts. I perfer to follow the beats more than the vocals.
3. 00:09:359 (1) - I see that this wiggle slider is unrankable, or try to make it's borders visible by splitting the points off.
4. 00:18:821 (1) - You shouldn't add more reverse arrows on a slider. This might bore players when they're playing your map.
5. 00:40:974 (4) - You should add a note here, leaving some strong beats empty would feel awkward.
6. 01:16:051 (4) - Same as 00:09:359 (1) -, but bigger than that.
7. 01:43:974 (4,1) - It's not recommended if a spinner appears really quick. Since some players want to prepare for a spinner, you should bring it up early. Give a little space.
8. 02:07:282 (5,2) - Try to avoid this kind of overlaps, keep the pattern visible and clear for players to notice.
9. 03:28:974 (3) - This slider is sure looks straight, but i think it's too simple and somewhat overmapped. How about curving it? or remove the slider and map a few notes?
10. - I haven't point out others because they have the same issues as the mods above. So try to find some in this diff.
    
    Did a major beatmap redesign which involved all of the changes.

[> Hard <]

1. - Almost the same issues as the previous diff, but some issues here are different than the once i've told.
2. 00:05:436 (4,5,6,7) - This is alike burai flow, which is unrankable. You might need to remap their position to avoid this.
3. 00:41:897 (4,5) - This is quite confusing to players when a slider's arrow overlaps the circle. They might think there are no circles front of it and would get a miss. Try not to do this on other parts.
4. 01:11:667 (1,2,3,4,5) - Pattern is fine, but overmapped. You'll need to listen to the song track instead of vocals or background musics.
5. 01:19:282 (4,5,6,7) - Overlapping circles head and tail. The flow might not be clear to players.
6. 02:46:051 (1,2) - The extended slider here doesn't make sense with the song track neither your own track. So shorten the slider to the red tick.
7. - I've seen some patterns were okay, but i think it's not nessesary if the pattern got worse while playing on. So try to remap some parts nearby the ending. The starting is okay, but few of them needs a 'fix'.
   
   Did a beatmap redesign which involved all of these changes. However 1 or 2 parts I had to use repeating sliders otherwise the patterns would feel repetitive.

I think that's all for me. You'll need to learn more of mapping and rhythm hearing. Or try to ask another modder to help you with this map than just me >_>
Well... Good Luck!

1. There are some things that are really bugging me.
   but, the most important one is your placing style.
   The most notes you placed or focused on the vocals. now, last modder said he prefered to follow the beat,
   but, and dont get me wrong, it is preffered by a lot of people to follow the beat.
   that is because circles place on the beat are easier to predict, while vocals needs to be learned.
   if someone hears the song for the first time, and the beats are placed on vocal lines, then he is going to have some trouble.
   especially playing higher difficulties.
   
   https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?f=56&t=58959
   t/86329
   t/37194
   
   I think if you read these post, especially the first one, it will help you understand what i'm trying to say
   and hope it will make you a better beatmapper.

Fryz3 wrote:

Hi! modder came from: p/3643355/

General

1. There are some things that are really bugging me.
   but, the most important one is your placing style.
   The most notes you placed or focused on the vocals. now, last modder said he prefered to follow the beat,
   but, and dont get me wrong, it is preffered by a lot of people to follow the beat.
   that is because circles place on the beat are easier to predict, while vocals needs to be learned.
   if someone hears the song for the first time, and the beats are placed on vocal lines, then he is going to have some trouble.
   especially playing higher difficulties.
   
   https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?f=56&t=58959
   t/86329
   t/37194
   
   I think if you read these post, especially the first one, it will help you understand what i'm trying to say
   and hope it will make you a better beatmapper.

sorry that i´ve got to end it like this, but I think it needs a lot of work.
I can´t help you, but I hope these post will guide you in the right way

SoGa wrote:

General

1. Why is this complete map has no hitsound ? Histound is also an important facts for this rhythm game tho , without the hitsound , the whole map sound boring .Consider to learn about how to put hitsound

Fixed. Now it sounds really nice. Thanks for showing me the way sir, or madam.


Note: As I did rework a lot of stuff, I made changes but not fully according to what SoGa suggested.

Easyl

1. AR3 or AR4 fit better there than AR2 tho Fixed. Changed to AR3
2. i would use 1.0 for SVNo change. This is aimed at newer players so I would like to make it a nice and chilled.
3. 00:04:080 i think the volume 50-60 is ok for the intro . Fixed. Changed to 60%
4. 00:05:926 (3) - i prefer this
5. 00:07:310 (4) - i would use this rhythm instead
6. 00:09:156 (1) - Not really recommend to put a spinner here ,becuz after a spinner , u have to left 4 gaps of white ticks .look at the image
7. 00:14:695 (1,1) - ^ same as above
8. 00:22:080 Here is clear a sound there , add a note pls
9. 00:23:926 ^ or maybe just turn this into a 1/1 slider 00:23:464 (5) -
10. 00:22:541 (4) - NC Fixed
11. 00:24:387 (6) - NC Fixed
12. 00:28:080 (3) - NC Fixed
13. 00:38:695- Add a note Fixed
14. 00:39:156 (4) - NC here Fixed
15. 00:42:849- Add a note Fixed
16. 00:45:618 (1,1) - same as the top one mentioned
17. 00:48:849 (2) - don't just use red point to draw a slider , it seems bad tho , draw it more smoothly something like this is ok Fixed. Learned my lesson, so I use a lot of blanket sliders. Looks much nicer thanks to you.
18. 00:52:080 (4) - NC Fixed
19. 00:53:926 consider to add a note here
20. 00:54:387 (2) - For this one , is a little bit hard for newby to react tho , i would put something like this instead
21. 00:59:464 (4,5) - ^
22. 01:40:541 (2) - ^
23. 00:55:772 (1) - turn this one into 2 1/1 slider fit better there
24. 01:08:695 (3) - i would put this one following this 01:07:310 (2) - slider-tail . It is more clearly and ez to play
25. 01:42:387 add a note here
26. 01:44:695 ^
27. 01:47:464 (1) - putting here is a little bit weird , i would put it to blanket if i cant , i will probably do this instead
28. 02:02:233 (1,2) - This kind of Overlap is seems bad tho ..hope u can fix it
29. 02:04:080 (2) - NC
30. 02:26:695 (4) - change this in to a 1/1 slider instead ,02:24:387 (1,2,3,4,5) - this part for newb is too hard i think
31. 03:03:156 (2,3,4) - two 1/1 slider fit better than 3 notes instead
32. 03:10:541 (3,4) - ^
33. 03:21:618 (4) - ^
34. 03:25:310 (3) - i will do instead of current placement
35. 03:27:156 (4) - ^

Note: As I did rework a lot of stuff, I made changes but not fully according to what SoGa suggested.

Normal

1. Ar4 is ok
2. SV 1.1 is ok ,the current one is a little bit fast maybe
3. 00:04:772 (4,5) - how about move this 2 forward a tick? i mean 00:04:772 (4) - start at 00:05:003 -
4. 00:07:310 (1,2,3,4) - maybe u can try this ? it is not overlap and more aesthetics
5. 00:09:156 (5) - This slider start here 00:09:618 - not here 00:09:156 - and also recommend to change the current pattern , is not smooth tho
6. 00:13:310 (6,7) - Blanket it em more beautiful pls
7. 00:15:618 (2,3) - ^
8. 00:31:772 (1,1) - This is the same as i mentioned as easy , but in normal ,after a spinner , u have to left one instead of four Fixed
9. 00:59:464 (9) - NC
10. 01:10:772 - delete this note
11. 01:47:926 (1) - NC
12. 01:54:156 Add a note here
13. 01:58:080 Add a note here and start the spinner at 01:58:541 end here
14. 02:18:387 (1) - delete the spinner and map it
15. 02:22:079 (2) - This one is not fit the song lmao , change this instead
16. 02:23:464 (5) - delete this one and add a note here if u change the above one 02:23:233
17. 02:28:079 (5) - There is unnecessary to slow this one down and it supposed to end here 02:29:926
18. 02:31:310 (7) - change it into 2 note
19. 02:49:310 (5) - change to a note only
20. 02:52:079 (1) - NC this one just for consistency that ur putting NC following 2 big whiteticks
21. 02:57:156 (1) - 1/1 slider fit here better
22. 03:08:002 (7) - u add a 1/2 slider here and why is here has nothing ？03:09:849 ，do the samething as 03:08:002 (7) - for consistency
23. 03:11:695 ^
24. 03:13:541 ^
25. 03:15:156 a reverse slider here , and delete the following 2 notes
26. 03:18:156 (8) - this one move to here 03:17:695 (6) - and delete , 03:17:696 (6,7) -

I will end my mod here , hope i help u ,if u still don't understand what i've said , feel free to catch me in-game , the rest hards im not going to mod em due to insufficient quality maybe , 其实是我懒,要摸4个full diff搞死我 Try it now. You will be surprised

;w; Good Luck

DahplA wrote:

Hi, DahplA here posting from Jloughman14's and DahplA's Modding team. This is a response in regards to this request. Please be sure to vote here on how helpful our mod was.

General

1. I'm pretty sure you still have default combo colours. There is nothing wrong with default combo colours . However I will change it to something else.

Mecheman's Hard+

1. Circle Size 5 on a <4 star? I'd consider lowering this. (Same with Hard) For the hard diff, as there is nothing crazy in terms of patterns, and the fact that it looks better with cs5 on, along with quite a low od to compensate for small cs, I would not change that. For Mecheman's hard+, I am thinking of getting it reduced to 4<x<5 Circle Size
2. 00:09:628 (11) - Maybe NC here because it follows a different rhythm
3. 00:14:705 (1) - Why not stack this?
4. 00:40:320 (12) - Shouldn't there be NC here?
5. 00:40:551 (13) - Space this out more
6. 00:48:859 (2,3) - Make these sliders the same (as in copy paste)
7. 00:58:782 (1,2) - Maybe curve these out more
8. 01:05:474 (2) - Straighten this out more
9. 01:19:551 (5,6) - This may be too hard to read for that level of difficulty
10. 02:05:128 (1) - Random NC
11. 03:12:166 (1,1,1) - Remove NCs
12. Just a quick note: The NCs need to be more consistent, but because I cannot tell where you want them, I can't suggest where to remove and where to place. I'd recommend just putting them 4 or 8 beats. [b ]I am placing new combo's every 8 beats for every difficulty. [/b]

All of the above is up to Mecheman; he is reworking it now as I speak

Hard

1. 00:11:013 (1) - ^ I am placing new combo's every 8 beats for every difficulty.
2. 00:12:397 (5) - This is placed too close to previous circle Changed. Reverse the starting position and rotated it 40 degrees anticlockwise. Doing that not only fixed your suggestion, but it unexpectedly blankets the next note .
3. 00:22:090 (6) - Stack? That one I will not change. The reason is that I placed note 6 to complete the diamond pattern, and that note is blanketed by the slider (3.)
4. 00:37:551 (1) - ^ Will not change that because that is part of a triangle pattern with note 2 of the previous combo, slider end of slider 1 from the previous combo and slider 1 from this combo. It blankets the next note as well.
5. 00:39:859 (4) - Maybe have the sliderend stack on 00:39:397 (2) - I did not even think about that (thanks for pointing it out ). Fixed and looks better.
6. 00:53:705 (1) - Stack Sadly, no stack as I placed that there for a pattern.
7. 00:55:782 (1) - Blanket Done.
8. 00:56:936 (5) - ^ I use that slider to blanket the next triplet, not the triplet 2,3,4.
9. 00:59:474 (1,2,3) - Doesn't fit the rhythm (There are several more spots this occurs) This one is interesting, I do agree with the change shown in the image at that time, at 01:58:551 and 02:22:230. However, at the chorus, I do use the 1,2,3 pattern but it actually fits in this area. Moreover when I used it at the non vocal parts it does fit and adds a change to the pattern. Thanks for that though.
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 01:03:166 (1) - Blanket Fixed.
11. 01:38:936 (5) - ^ This one makes a diamond pattern and already blankets notes 2 and 3. No change here.
12. 02:05:474 (1) - ^ Fixed.
13. 03:06:859 (1) - Stack No change because I like the current flow of it right now.

FreeSongs wrote:

Hihi^^ as you request!

Because I am pretty bad at modding easy diffs, the mod below is only my personal suggestion ;_;

[Easy]
00:06:397 (4) - 3/4 sliders like this are too hard for beginners imo. Try to avoid using those sliders in easy diffs. I decided that only on very long sliders does it end on a blue tick, but at parts like these, I used 4/4 Sliders
00:17:013 (3,1) - how about making a blanket here? like this:

Fixed
There are a lot of blankets that can be improved. For example, 00:18:859 (1,2) - 00:18:859 (1,3) - 00:26:243 (1,2,3) - , ... Improved some of them but as I use distance snap, at times I cannot get a perfect blanket, so I tried doing as best as I could.
A perfect and pretty blanket is like what you did here: 00:57:628 (3,4) - Yay.
I think thats pretty much all I want to say for easy ;_;

[Normal]
00:35:474 (6) - This is a little bit hard for beginners, and it is not recommended to have multiple reverese on a short slider. Fixed
01:48:628 (4) - 03:21:628 (6) - ^ Fixed for the first one. However, for the second one, as there is a break between the end of the repeating slider and the next note, it should be fine. Therefore I did not change that.
01:03:166 (1,2,3) - Again, it is very rare to put circle at blue tick since its a little bit too difficult. I would do something like this

01:11:013 (2,3,4) - Same as above. consider to use sliders to make it easier to play as suggested above. Fixed. Other places I found out and I fixed them. Thanks for helping me for that.

[Hard]
00:31:090 (5,6,7,8,9) - How about making the pattern symmetrical like this?

Fixed. Thanks so much for pointing that out. I intended for it to be symmetrical. Must have been an oversight.
01:11:243 (3) - Consider to follow the vocal here 01:11:359 - like this

Fixed. It does sound better. At first I thought it will be much harder for the person playing it, but the low overall difficulty should compensate for that.
02:03:166 (4) - 02:10:320 (7) - ^
Fixed for 2:10:320, but the above suggestion did not work for 2:03:166, so I tried a different method which works just as well. :O. Moreover, there are other sections in which I managed to follow the beat to the vocals without raising difficulty by that much.
02:18:974 (10) - Shorten by 1/4 and remove clap at the slider end. Fixed
03:08:243 (10) - This reverse slider is too difficult to read imo. I suggest to shorten it into single reverse slider and add circles at 03:08:705 - 03:08:936 - Fixed. I added circles at 3:08:705 and 3:08:936, but not in between as it felt off if I did that.
03:29:013 (7) - ^ Fixed

Hope this helps!
Good luck!

Gamu wrote:

hello! sorry for the delay... Do not worry about that

[ General]

1. Works In Progress/Help ⇒ Pending Beatmaps When Uploaded I will move it.
   Please move the forum
2. Found unused .wav files: "soft-slidertick3.wav" and "normal-hitwhistle2.wav". You must delete them. Fixed
3. Inconsistency in combo colours: Easy diff is different from other diffs, so you might want to unify this combo colors. Fixed
   
   image

   
4. Source: 俺の妹がこんなに可愛いわけがない。
   I'd like to recommend that you change to Japanese source. It is the correct. Done
5. Tags: Clara Alice Fixed
   Add they name. ClariS is unit name.
6. Disable the "Widescreen Support". It doesn't work in this mapset. Fixed

[ Easy]

1. Difficulty setting is a little low. Please change to HP2 and OD2. Fixed
2. 01:58:551 (1) - Add a soft-hitfinish! Fixed
3. 02:39:166 (1) - Placement and looks is bad. Please try to create like this slider~Fixed
   
   image

   
4. 02:44:705 (3) - You can create a beautiful slider. Fixed
   
   image

   
5. 02:48:397 (3) - ^ Fixed
   
   image

   
6. 03:17:936 (2) - spacing error. It should be 1.06~1.14x Fixed
7. 03:38:233 (T) - this green line is unsnapped. snap to 03:38:243. Also I'd like to recommend that you change the volume to 5%. Fixed and I made the change to every difficulty for consistency. Sounds nicer.

[ Normal]

1. Difficulty setting is a little low. Please change to OD4. Fixed
2. 01:55:551 (3) - Arrow is hidden. Readability is important in normal diff, so please change the placement. Fixed. Redesigned that area and the beats after that to make it more clean.
3. 02:07:551 (4,5) - This rhythm is difficult to understand. Please try changing the slider (5) to circle (02:08:243) Fixed
4. 02:37:090 (4,5) - ^Fixed
5. 02:44:243 (2,3) - ^Fixed
6. 02:51:859 (3,4) - ^Fixed
7. 02:53:474 (1,2) - ^Fixed
   
   image

   

[ Hard]

1. Difficulty setting is a little high. Please change to HP5 and CS4. Changed HP Drain to 5. CS will be at 5 for the time being, because when I put it to CS4, it does not feel right; it does not clean and it looks too compressed.
2. 01:09:859 (X) - Add a circle! Fixed
3. 02:38:474 (X) - ^ Fixed
4. 03:01:320 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - It is so difficult to read the rhythm in hard level. Don't stacking!Fixed and only stacked notes 1 and 5.

[ Mecheman's Hard+]

1. 01:03:166 (1) - Add a soft-hitfinish at the start point! Fixed on behalf of Mecheman
2. 02:02:243 (1) - ^ Fixed on behalf of Mecheman
3. 02:29:936 (1) - Maybe this slider is not permitted. It is not possible to read the flow of the slider ball...Fixed by Mecheman.

Sorry for short modding ;w; Either that means that you did not find anything wrong with the rest of the beatmaps, or there were a lot of problems and it would have been a pain to go through all of them. I hope it is the former lol.
Good luck! Thanks.

rhalp10 wrote:

Sorry My Queue For STDHas Been Closed I Can't Handle That Mode Anymore ..

hanyuu_nanodesu wrote:

Hey, I got bored xD
originally coming from your modding Q...
Maybe you can mod my map in return : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/322414

[General]

1. I don't think you really need to add kiai here 03:16:090 maybe if you want, you just have to turn the kiai on and turn it off again after that so the stars would just pop up to avoid too much kiai. I did quick bursts of kiai for that moment. Thanks for that.
2. Maybe you better put the audio preview before the chorus like here 01:02:705 or here 02:01:782 but it's up to you. Changed to the former time.

[Easy]

1. There's a DS problem, maybe you can fix it.
2. 00:09:166 (2,5) - Stack them? for neater look. For easy difficulties, there is no stacking
3. 00:11:474 (1) - Actually, ending this slider on blue tick causing a polarity problem... I think it can't be helped since you are following the vocal, but maybe you can change it by following the background sound instead... Fixed
4. 01:34:551 (2) - Adjust the shape more so the tick would fall on the pointy part...
5. 02:11:936 (3) - Same polarity problem, maybe just end it on white tick just like what you did on the previous part, like this 01:05:474 (3) - or 01:12:859 (4) - will do just fine. Fixed
6. 02:12:859 (1,4) - Stack the heads properly, again for neater looks. For easy difficulties, there is no stacking
7. 02:55:782 (3) - Again, just end it on white tick Fixed
8. Basically a good map, almost nothing to mod because you actually follow the rhythm well. But I think you must improve your blanket for neater looks, use approach circle as a guide. Most of your blankets, like this 00:20:243 (2,3) - or 00:27:628 (2,3) - or 03:21:628 (2,1) - and many more are imperfect, so you better fix them. Fixed

[Normal]

1. Almost look like Hard in first glance o-o maybe this should be Normal+ I do not know why this difficulty is rated so high.
2. Still, a DS problem, fix it. Fixed
3. 00:07:320 (1) - Why the lonesome combo? You don't change the SV right? don't need to NC right after. Oversight. Fixed
4. 00:11:474 (1,2) - Switch these two places. http://puu.sh/ilK73/7b29deb6eb.jpg Would follow the rhythm better. Fixed
5. 00:29:936 (1) - Extend the spinner here 00:33:166 and add a clap hitsound maybe? According to a previous modder [SoGa], he said that there should be at least a break of 2 beats for a spinner. Therefore there is no change.
6. 00:39:397 (5) - Move this to behind 00:40:090 (7) - so it looks like this http://puu.sh/ilKfR/c70daf142e.jpg it'll follow the vocal better. Fixed
7. 00:44:936 (2,3) - Switch place again, follow the vocal. http://puu.sh/ilKiT/7cd32ebd1c.jpg Fixed
8. 00:45:859 (4) - Move this behind 00:46:551 (6) - http://puu.sh/ilKlR/d8790dcb2e.jpg Fixed
9. 01:44:936 (1) - Unnecessary spinner, kinda out of place, just map this part.
10. 03:03:166 (5,6) - Delete (5), move (6) 1/2 tick forward and add a reverse, will fit better I think. http://puu.sh/ilKys/fd56340700.jpg
11. 03:09:859 (5) - Add a reverse? there's a pretty big sound here 03:10:320 Fixed that area. This area is probably the reason why my star difficulty is overrated.
12. Pretty good as well ^^, just need some improvement, again, in placing. Ah, and some note: I know it's better to start a slider on white tick, but if there's vocal that support, you can add slider at red tick to follow it; there are plenty in this song.

[Hard]

1. Circle size from 3 (in Normal) to 4.5 is a pretty big jump in diff, why don't just use CS 4? It's not comfortable to play with too small CS as well. I started with cs 5, because with cs4 it felt too cluttered and really easy. Cs 5 was too much of a hassle so I decided to settle on cs 4.5.
2. 00:06:859 Add a note here for better polarity? :3 Does not fit
3. 00:20:936 (8,12) - Stack properly~ Changed in remake. There is no stack there.
4. 01:25:320 (1,2,3) - This don't seem to fit well at the part, just keep the notes on white and red tick for this instrumental part. Changed in remake.
5. No break? A break here is actually pretty good 02:17:013 You need some break to adjust position, especially for mouse player (like me x-x) Did a break at 01:17:936. I did not put a break at 02:17:013 because this is mapped differently to the rest of the song, and I really wanted to map it.
6. Yeah, you're right, this is almost like old map, but better. I don't really like this kind of map so I can't really mod it; but that doesn't mean your map is bad, it's good, I have to say but you need to improve your placement, again ^^ Fixed a lot of stuff.
   I did a full remake of hard, so most of the stuff you mentioned does not apply here .

I'll end my mod here, I think the other Hard is not my type as well xD
Good luck~ :3

Damn score

uhh, dat misses >.<

1. I don't like small circles (CS>4)
2. I can see that sometimes the blankets are imperfect and there are some overlaps, it looks untidy
3. I don't really like double triplets. Like this http://puu.sh/iqDwV/09cab373a9.jpg got a lot of 100 there.
4. A slider like this 00:58:321 (8) - don't seem to fit the vocal. Use it for wiggle sound.
5. 01:02:243 (7) - This slider sounds weird... A note here 01:01:090 followed by a spinner would be better...
6. And I don't like this kind of rhythm 02:17:705 (5,6) - nothing wrong, just disliked it. Missed there.
7. And damn that speed up at end >.< Missed a lot there xD
8. 02:54:743 (5,6,7,8) - Combo breaker for me. The rhythm is kinda weird, four time stream, tricky for me. Plus the shape make it even harder.

hanyuu_nanodesu wrote:

Hi, requested test play

Damn score

uhh, dat misses >.<

Asking me to testplay is like telling me to mod according to my taste, so this is what I think

1. I don't like small circles (CS>4) I like small circles. The return of CS4+ Hard difficulties are imminent.
2. I can see that sometimes the blankets are imperfect and there are some overlaps, it looks untidy Fixing that at the moment.
3. I don't really like double triplets. Like this http://puu.sh/iqDwV/09cab373a9.jpg got a lot of 100 there.
4. A slider like this 00:58:321 (8) - don't seem to fit the vocal. Use it for wiggle sound. Extended the slider by 1 tick and it seems to be better than before.
5. 01:02:243 (7) - This slider sounds weird... A note here 01:01:090 followed by a spinner would be better... Fixed and applied it at another location. Amazingly all my difficulties have the same amount of sliders now.
6. And I don't like this kind of rhythm 02:17:705 (5,6) - nothing wrong, just disliked it. Missed there. Tried to employ variety between double notes and the slider.
7. And damn that speed up at end >.< Missed a lot there xD I did that on purpose, since I like to speed up the slider velocity around 40% from the finish.
8. 02:54:743 (5,6,7,8) - Combo breaker for me. The rhythm is kinda weird, four time stream, tricky for me. Plus the shape make it even harder. Changed Shape

That's all, no kudos. Thanks for testplay. It seems to me that the rework has worked.
Good luck

1. 00:06:397 (4) - copy paste next slider shape, doesnt really look that good with two sliders side by side with different shapes. would also blanket which looks cleaner.
   00:07:320 (5) - nc
2. 00:11:474 (1) - I don't think it's any different from previous verse, I think you should map this instead
   00:14:705 (2,1) - swap nc to follow vocals, I think thats better because easy-normal generally map after vocals over percussion so might aswell nc accordingly. there are more like these but you can find them
3. 00:26:243 (1,3) - these are curved a bit too much, the blanketing is weird because of it and i think it'd look better straightened out just a little little bit
4. 00:39:628 (5) - fix like this http://puu.sh/iNMwk.jpg
5. 00:46:090 (3) - also excessively curved, you should try to make the borders of the circle have equal distance to the sliderborders http://puu.sh/iNMyZ.jpg
6. 00:56:705 (2) - might be hard to play for newer players, sliders that pushes the flow so much like this is generally only used in insane or higher
7. 01:05:013 (2) - move up one box (4 pixels)
8. 01:06:397 (4) - move this one up a bit looks better imo
9. 01:14:705 (1) - unnecessary nc
10. 01:56:243 (3) - clap

1. 00:09:166 (3,4) - doesnt flow well from previous slider, try this 00:09:166 (3,4) -
2. 00:11:474 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this whole rhythm is too difficult compared to previously imo, you had mostly 1/1 and 3/4 before and now theres a lot of 1/2 which can be overwhelming, or map the beggining with this rhythm, as long as its consistent
   00:14:705 (7,1) - excessively curved
3. 00:16:551 (2,3,4) - try placing like this, flows nicer and (2) isnt so close to previous slider http://puu.sh/iNNc3.jpg
4. 00:53:705 (6) - can place 1/1 slider here instead to follow held sound of vocal
5. 00:24:628 (4,5,6) - ctrl+h flows better, but you need to adjust next objects a bit
6. 00:34:782 (4) - center red anchor point and curve less looks better
7. 00:53:705 (6) - can place 1/1 slider here instead to follow held sound of vocal
8. 01:08:705 (4) - curve less
9. 01:12:397 (4) -
10. 01:56:243 (4) - clap
11. 02:57:166 (7,1) - swap nc
12. 03:21:628 (6) - you should never have more than one repeat unless its 1/4 sliders in hards or higher, no one ever uses more than 1 for longer slider in modern maps, so players naturally move away from the slider after the first repeat and so they will break.
13. 03:27:859 (4) - previous pattern doesnt flow well into this, you can just ctrl+h 03:27:859 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) -

1. 00:03:628 - I think you should map this whole section with a slower sv, and slightly smaller spacing, because right now its keeping the same momentum as 00:18:859 - even though is a lot calmer.
2. 00:08:243 (2) - curve less
3. 00:13:320 (6) - not very good blanket
4. 00:14:705 (9) - copy paste 00:15:628 (2) - slider shape and ctrl+h+j
5. 00:21:166 (9) - curve less
6. 02:09:166 (10) - kinda confusing stacked under triplet, easier to read if you stack under previous slider
7. 02:17:705 (5,6) - stack looks better and more comfortable to play, i dont think there should be movement like this on doubles. doubles are actually difficult enough to play because its harder to keep rhythm on them, and doubles are pretty new to people playing hard diffs, so make them moving only makes them more annoying. there are more like these that i think you should fix.
8. 02:17:013 - same as first point, this section is a breakdown and should be slower
9. 02:54:166 (2,4,5) - overlap, move up 02:54:628 (4,5) -
10. 03:12:397 (1,2,3) - theres too much momentum in this pattern, notice how your cursor moves at pretty constant speed until you come to this where it has to speed up a lot without any change in music I think you should just follow the rhythm and melody.
11. 03:19:782 (1) - stack sliderend on previous slider looks better
12. 03:29:705 (10) - move this to x413 y122 and it flows better, move everything else down with it.

Hendrix89 wrote:

Hi from your mod queue,

Removed Kiai Times on the last parts of the map.

Easy:

00:07:320 (5) - NC
00:09:628 (8) - shorten the slider by a half note
02:02:243 (1) - change your slider to look more like this
02:59:474 (3) - change the slider to this Today's rules dictate that you cannot use multiple repeats in a slider. I actually like your idea though.
03:05:013 (1) - change the slider to this Same as above
get rid of the kiai times at 03:16:090 (1) - 03:19:782 (1) - 03: 23:474 (1) - 03:27:166 (1)


Normal

I did a full remap of this so most of the stuff you wrote does not apply. Sorry about that.
02:11:474 (5) - extend the slider by a quarter note
02:26:243 (3) - ^
get rid of the short kiai times at the end

Hard

00:20:705 (1) - NC
00:25:090 (10) - shorten the slider by a quarter note
00:26:936 (4) - ^
00:30:628 (4) - ^
00:31:551 (1) - NC
00:32:474 (11) - shorten the slider by a quarter note
00:32:820 (12) - add a single
00:38:936 (1) - NC
00:48:166 (13) - NC
00:48:397 (1) - delete NC
00:51:859 (1) - NC
00:52:090 (3) - delete NC
00:54:166 (1) - NC
00:56:820 (3) - delete note
00:58:321 (8) - shorten slider by a quarter note
01:03:166 (1) - ^
01:03:859 (3) - ^
01:05:474 (7) - ^
01:05:936 (8) - add a note
01:08:474 (1) - NC
01:08:705 (2,3,4) - change this section like this
01:11:243 (3,4,5,6,7) - change this section like this
01:13:551 (1) - NC
01:13:782 (2) - delete NC
01:34:782 (1) - NC
01:39:859 (1) - NC
01:40:090 (3) - delete NC
01:41:936 (1) - NC
02:09:166 (1) - NC
02:09:628 (1) - delete NC
02:11:243 (1) - NC
02:18:859 (1) - NC
02:37:666 (8) - delete slider
02:37:782 - add single
02:39:974 (3) - delete slider
02:40:090 - add single
02:44:705 (1) - NC
02:44:936 (2) - delete single
02:45:051 (3) - move the slider left a quarter note
02:45:282 - add a single
02:46:551 (7) - delete NC
02:46:782 (1) - NC
02:47:243 (2) - shorten the slider by a quarter note
02:54:628 (4) - delete note
02:54:743 (5) - move the slider left a note quarter note
03:03:166 (1) - NC
03:06:859 (1) - NC
03:10:551 (9) - NC
03:12:743 (2) - delete slider
03:12:859 - add a single
03:14:243 (8) - NC
03:15:628 (7,8) - delete notes
03:15:628 - add a half note slider
03:18:166 (7) - NC
03:20:474 (3) - shorten the slider by a quarter note
03:21:628 (7) - NC
03:22:782 (11,12) - delete these notes
03:22:782 - add a half note slider
03:24:166 (3) - shorten the by a quarter note
03:25:320 (8) - NC
03:25:666 (9) - delete note
03:25:782 - add a single
03:29:705 (10) - shorten by a quarter note

Change CS to 4, 4.5 doesn't fit the difficulty I like CS 4.5 so I will keep it.
Get rid of the kiai times at the end Removed
The map doesn't have many patterns, everything is basically in a line. You should add some patterns like zig zags or stars or doubles or something. I wanted the hard map to be a linear style. I did add zig zags though. I will perhaps add stars and stuff.




Overall the two Hard difficulties are over mapped and feel awkward to play . I don't like all of those sliders that end on the blue ticks, they feel really awkward and out of place. Even though there may be a beat on some of those blue ticks it feels much better when you end on a red or white tick.

Based on your hard mod I decided to make a Hard- Diff. It is much simpler than the current hard diff and involves a lot more patterns. I am making a few changes to the current hard diff so its more fun to play.

Good luck with the map

1. 00:53:936 (1) - nazi blanket things
2. 01:45:166 (1,2) - you can move the 01:47:936 (2) - to avoid overlaps.
3. 02:36:859 (1) - blanket

1. 01:09:859 - missing clap note?
2. 01:16:782 (2) - better pattern.
3. 03:05:013 (1,2,3,4) - convert it to two 1/2 sliders, this may too extreme for normal which is more than 4 1/2 circles in a row with this diff (2 star below).
4. 03:08:705 (1,2,3,4) - ^
5. 03:10:551 (1,2,3,4) - ^ and so on...
6. and maybe remove some spinners like 00:29:936 (1) - and 02:14:705 (1) - that can obviously map by 1/1 and 1/2 beats.

1. 00:09:397 (3,2) - nazi stack.
2. 01:15:397 (1) - you can map this part ;w;
3. 01:46:436 (1) - I can understand about following the vocals but there's stronk beat like 01:46:782 - and 01:47:013 - so ye consider to remove spinner
4. 02:02:474 (2) - remove it or add note in 01:03:397 -
5. 02:06:397 (3) - Slider's curve is out of the area.
6. 02:11:013 (2) - nazi parallel
7. 02:17:013 - you can add note here already since it's hardddd

1. 00:29:705 (6,7,1) - unstack it from 00:29:474 (5) - since beat-gap is changing
2. 03:14:936 (3,4,5,6,7) - polish the zig-zag
3. 03:19:320 (7,1,2,3,4) - polish the star

1. 00:10:320 (3,5) - you can avoid touching them.
2. 01:00:397 (1) - remove this? previous finish sound was covered and it's hard to hit
3. 01:16:782 (4) - not snapped in white tick
4. 01:32:243 (12,2) - stack them may better.
5. 01:47:243 (1) - convert it into two circles since 01:47:474 - as slider-end is weird
6. 01:54:628 (1,2) - swap NC
7. 02:17:013 - you can add circle here ;w;

[-AKiTOSHi-] wrote:

w
Nazi, warning and suggestions.

[Easy]

1. 00:53:936 (1) - nazi blanket things Fixed
2. 01:45:166 (1,2) - you can move the 01:47:936 (2) - to avoid overlaps. Fixed. The new position is not supposed to blanket the previous slider
3. 02:36:859 (1) - blanket Fixed

[Normal]

1. 01:09:859 - missing clap note? There is nothing there since the prev. slider ends on vocal, I give a break so the player can start on vocals.
2. 01:16:782 (2) - better pattern. A lot better. Thanks
3. 03:05:013 (1,2,3,4) - convert it to two 1/2 sliders, this may too extreme for normal which is more than 4 1/2 circles in a row with this diff (2 star below).
4. 03:08:705 (1,2,3,4) - ^
5. 03:10:551 (1,2,3,4) - ^ and so on...
   The reason I won't change that is after the final chorus, the rhythm represents what you may expect in the next difficulty. This is preparation for that.
6. and maybe remove some spinners like 00:29:936 (1) - and 02:14:705 (1) - that can obviously map by 1/1 and 1/2 beats. Every diff of mine has 7 spinners. Osu needs more spinners

[Hard-]

1. 00:09:397 (3,2) - nazi stack.
2. 01:15:397 (1) - you can map this part ;w; Did not do that, but I did map 01:17:936 to compensate. Also 444 hitobjects kek
3. 01:46:436 (1) - I can understand about following the vocals but there's stronk beat like 01:46:782 - and 01:47:013 - so ye consider to remove spinner 7 spinners.
4. 02:02:474 (2) - remove it or add note in 01:03:397 - I did not change that, because this is a progressive increase in the difficulty.
5. 02:06:397 (3) - Slider's curve is out of the area. Damn. Well fixed that and changed successive pattern after that.
6. 02:11:013 (2) - nazi parallel Fixed it
7. 02:17:013 - you can add note here already since it's hardddd. Reason for not adding the note is because I wanted to start the break there and then I could drag the green thing to have an effect.

[Hard]

1. 00:29:705 (6,7,1) - unstack it from 00:29:474 (5) - since beat-gap is changing Fixed.
2. 03:14:936 (3,4,5,6,7) - polish the zig-zag Fixed
3. 03:19:320 (7,1,2,3,4) - polish the star I used ctrl+shift+d as a guide so it should be perfect. Moved some notes a bit anyway.

I need more ClariS aaaaaaaaaaaa I like ClariS, not ClareN imo. ClariS were ying and yang but with ClareN there is no balance. In addition songs in the past had meaning and emotion.

1. Unused files.
   
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   2. chibi_kousaka_kirino_anime_ore_1920x1200_animemay.com.jpg
   3. hit100g.png
   4. hit50g.png
   5. kirino-anime-ore-no-imouto-1501106-1920x1200.jpg
   6. solidblack.png
   7. images.akamai.steamusercontent.com
2. Unsnapped inherited points in Hard and Mecheman Loves Meruru Now.
   
   1. 01:15:171 - snap to 01:15:166
3. The "Combo 2" in Easy didn't have exactly the same colour as the other diffs.
4. You used different BGs. Try having the same size for all BGs. And the recommended size is either 1024*768 or 1366*768.

1. 00:34:551 (1,2) - 00:39:628 (2,1) - 02:53:936 (1,2) .
2. 02:58:782 (1) - I think the spinner should have started here 03:00:166 and ended here 02:58:782 (1) instead.
3. The diff overall looks fine, but sometimes you just emphasized the patterns and blankets so much that it ruins the flow, not that's a big deal but it would be very nice if you can do sth about them. Like 00:26:243 (1,2,1) for example, in my opinion you're trying too much to make this a pattern, so this ruins the flows on 00:27:628 (2) . Also you can see that the flow here 00:25:320 (2,1) isn't perfect compared to 00:28:090 (1,2) . So my opinion is sometimes you just have to give up the pattern and focus on the flow for the sake of beginners, like what you did in Normal.

1. 00:24:859 (3,4) - Stacked objects here would ruin the flow imo. Same applies to 00:27:859 (5,1) -
2. 00:59:474 (1) - Change this into a 1/2 slider so it would fit the rhythm.
3. 01:14:705 (2,3) - Weird flow imo.
4. 03:12:397 (1,2,3,4) - LOL this will confuse beginners, try some easier patterns please.
5. 03:16:551 (3,4) - These should be unstacked so they would emphasize the strong sound better. Same applies to 03:29:474 (3,4) .

1. 01:07:320 (2,3) - Weird flow. Mainly because you're trying for a symmetry on 01:06:397 (1,2) .
2. 01:08:705 (1) - Try rotate this a bit(anti-clockwise) for a better flow.
3. 01:59:473 (3,4,5,6) - LOL, feels weird because you mapped these 01:59:705 (4,5,6) on vocal but I'm not sure if 01:59:473 (3) matches anything. Similar case applies to 02:01:782 (1,2,1,2) . When you're trying to do a pattern, make sure that every objects in that pattern are emphasizing the same thing to avoid confusion.
4. 02:24:628 (2,3) - Weird overlap lol, try spaced them more because it's almost stacked.
5. 02:40:782 (4,1) - I would suggest something similar to this for a better flow.
6. 02:56:243 (3) - I wouldn't recommend to end this on the blue tick because it can cause a confusion to players.

Electoz wrote:

Sry Mathew I was inactive recentlyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

[General]

1. Unused files.
   
   1. 332727.jpg
   2. chibi_kousaka_kirino_anime_ore_1920x1200_animemay.com.jpg
   3. hit100g.png
   4. hit50g.png
   5. kirino-anime-ore-no-imouto-1501106-1920x1200.jpg
   6. solidblack.png
   7. images.akamai.steamusercontent.com
2. Unsnapped inherited points in Hard and Mecheman Loves Meruru Now.
   
   1. 01:15:171 - snap to 01:15:166
3. The "Combo 2" in Easy didn't have exactly the same colour as the other diffs.
4. You used different BGs. Try having the same size for all BGs. And the recommended size is either 1024*768 or 1366*768.

All of things above were last checked on 31 December (9:00 UTC) . I'm mentioning this just in case you already changed something after I checked all those things.

For now I am still thinking about BG choices, whether I go with one or many. Most likely my new upload will only have 1 background, because in case I do go for a storyboard it is much easier to design everything when you only consider 1 background.
[Easy]

1. 00:34:551 (1,2) - 00:39:628 (2,1) - 02:53:936 (1,2) . Is this about distance snap?
2. 02:58:782 (1) - I think the spinner should have started here 03:00:166 and ended here 02:58:782 (1) instead. I do not understand.
   
   The diff overall looks fine, but sometimes you just emphasized the patterns and blankets so much that it ruins the flow, not that's a big deal but it would be very nice if you can do sth about them. Like 00:26:243 (1,2,1) for example, in my opinion you're trying too much to make this a pattern, so this ruins the flows on 00:27:628 (2) . Also you can see that the flow here 00:25:320 (2,1) isn't perfect compared to 00:28:090 (1,2) . So my opinion is sometimes you just have to give up the pattern and focus on the flow for the sake of beginners, like what you did in Normal.

I do agree with the above part. Made it into a different pattern that should be a lot easier to read.

Also fixed missing hitsounds and did some touchups.

[Normal]

1. 00:24:859 (3,4) - Stacked objects here would ruin the flow imo. Same applies to 00:27:859 (5,1) - Fixed, but at the same time the map looks nicer with stacks. I will leave some stacked notes and fix others.
2. 00:59:474 (1) - Change this into a 1/2 slider so it would fit the rhythm. How did I not catch that? Thanks. It sounds better.
3. 01:14:705 (2,3) - Weird flow imo. Fixed, rotated the previous slider because
4. 03:12:397 (1,2,3,4) - LOL this will confuse beginners, try some easier patterns please. Easier Pattern
5. 03:16:551 (3,4) - These should be unstacked so they would emphasize the strong sound better. Same applies to 03:29:474 (3,4) Done.

[Hard-]

1. 01:07:320 (2,3) - Weird flow. Mainly because you're trying for a symmetry on 01:06:397 (1,2) . I understand your point. Even if the note is distance snapped, because there is a beat at 01:08:013 it would be much smoother to have a note at 01:08:013. I made 3 into a 1/2 slider because I want 444 objects.
2. 01:08:705 (1) - Try rotate this a bit(anti-clockwise) for a better flow. Edited the shape so it flows better
3. 01:59:473 (3,4,5,6) - LOL, feels weird because you mapped these 01:59:705 (4,5,6) on vocal but I'm not sure if 01:59:473 (3) matches anything. (3) is mapped to a beat and without 3 I do not have a star pattern. I know that may not hold well, so I have added hitfinishes to 4 5 and 6 to make the vocal bit more prominent.Similar case applies to 02:01:782 (1,2,1,2) . When you're trying to do a pattern, make sure that every objects in that pattern are emphasizing the same thing to avoid confusion. I do see where you are going with this. If I make 1 2 into a 1/2 slider I do lose the pattern and (444) hitobjects. However if someone else picks up on this then I will fix both points.
4. 02:24:628 (2,3) - Weird overlap lol, try spaced them more because it's almost stacked. That is due to slow slider velocity and distance snap. And the vocal bit is at the blue tick, so you have to play it as a double.
5. 02:40:782 (4,1) - I would suggest something similar to this for a better flow. Fixed
6. 02:56:243 (3) - I wouldn't recommend to end this on the blue tick because it can cause a confusion to players. I did that same pattern throughout the song, so I assume players would be used to that.

Well, I guess I will stop here because I'm not good with CS4.5 / 5 things. I will come back to mod higher diffs later tho.

Nathan Kiss wrote:

You modded electoz's map which had a gd of mine so I will mod your map since we all know each other We have our own modding circle now

[easy]

1. 00:12:859 (1) - I think this would play better as a 1/1 slider, for an easy diff anyways Fixed. It makes sense considering it is the beginning of the song as well.
2. 00:47:013 (2,3,4,1,2) - I feel like 2 of these circles should be made into a slider, but thats just me I do understand that sliders would be good for an easy diff, but I will lose the pentagon.
3. 00:56:705 (2) - copy and paste this slider 00:55:782 (1) and rotate 180 degrees. I copied the slider and flipped vertically already, so there will be no change here.
4. 02:12:859 (1) - would play better if you made into 2 1/1 sliders like you did here 01:13:782 (1,2) . If you choose not to do this then I recommend you change the shape since isnt the prettiest one imo Did the former. 2 1/1 sliders are much better
5. 02:15:166 (1) - extend to 02:17:013 ? I lose that green bar, but extending the spinner is much better as newer players will probably not spin that fast, and may fail if the spinner is too short.
6. 03:21:628 (1) - ds How did I not catch that?
7. 03:21:628 (1) - I recommend extending this to 03:22:320 and deleting 03:22:320 (2) See the below point. Will keep this in mind though.
   
   you started using more complicated rhythms towards the end of the map, I think it would be better to stick with the rhythms youve used before since there isnt really a need to make it harder than it needs to be, I mean after all, it is an easy diff. A true beginner wont get bored of playing the same rhythm if thats all hes capable of.
   
   My idea is that for the last part of each of my difficulties, I use a pattern that the person might expect in the the next difficulty. The 1/2 sliders you see at the end are what you are going to see in the normal difficulty; this prepares the person for the next difficulty. If someone else picks up on this I will just revert to an easier rhythm.

[Normal]

1. 00:11:013 (2,3) - have the 2 patterns shaped this way?
   
   Looks a lot better
2. 00:18:859 (1) - curve this slider a bit like you did for 00:12:282 (2) Did a small curve.
3. 00:23:936 (1,2,3,4) - this would flow better if you changed the positions slighty
   
   I understand what you mean; the current one looks too cramped. Spaced that out a bit, while still having 0.9x distance snap.
4. 01:42:397 (2) - tilt the slider this way maybe?
   
   Fixed
5. 02:14:705 (1) - same as easy - extend to 02:17:013 ? Fixed
6. 02:35:936 (2) - would look prettier if you moved it up a bit imo
   
   Fixed
7. 02:55:320 (3) - I really think the overlap looks sloppy; rotate it this way (or somewhere similar)?
   
   Tilted it in a different way.

Thats all from me for now. I just finished watching the anime and visual novels to this song and I must say, Ayase is best girl! Mecheman also likes Ayase as well, though he rotates between Kanako (Meruru), Kirino and Ayase. I say Ayase is a close 2nd and Kirino is bae.

GL going for ranked! Thanks

Taeyang wrote:

• General

1. Inconsistency in [ComboColours]
   { Easy} :
   Combo1 : [85,190,0] Combo2 : [255,100,255] Combo3 : [255,153,55] Combo4 : [73,131,255]
   { Hard-} :
   Combo1 : [85,190,0] Combo2 : [255,100,255] Combo3 : [255,153,35] Combo4 : [73,131,255]
   { Hard} :
   Combo1 : [85,190,0] Combo2 : [255,100,255] Combo3 : [255,153,35] Combo4 : [73,131,255]
   { Mecheman Loves Meruru Now} :
   Combo1 : [85,190,0] Combo2 : [255,100,255] Combo3 : [255,153,35] Combo4 : [73,131,255]
   { Normal} :
   Combo1 : [85,190,0] Combo2 : [255,100,255] Combo3 : [255,153,35] Combo4 : [73,131,255]
   
2. Missing skin files in [Playfield] set
   play-skip.png
   play-warningarrow.png
   
3. Unused hitsounds:
   normal-hitwhistle2.wav
   
4. Wave hitsounds with possible delay >5ms:
   soft-hitfinish.wav
   normal-hitfinish.wav
   
5. Files unused:
   comboburst-2.png
   
6. Use one slidetick; sound better
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   I used slider tick rate 2 before, but the reason why I used tick rate 4 was because as my hitsounding involves adding a clap every 2 ticks, and sometimes they land in the middle or just after the middle of a slider. That means I have to use the tick method for having a clap sound. The problem with that though is that with slider rates of 2 or less, is that there is no tick for me to make a clap sound on. This only happens in 4-5 instances, but I cannot accept that.
   
   If someone else has a complaint with this then I will fix it.
   
7. this mapset why need 'hard-' diff? i think spread fine

A modder named Hendrix89 played my Hard and Mecheman's difficulty, and he/she said that the map felt quite overmapped. Rather than destroying the rhythm which I liked in my difficulty (this was 3-4 months ago), I decide to to make a Hard- (you guys will probably call this hard actually) difficulty which has fewer hitobjects, a slower slider velocity and much more player friendly. I also use rhythm patterns that you will find in the Hard difficulty, so people are prepared in advance for the much harder difficulty on hand.

• Easy

1. Use 2downbeat NC term Fixed
2. 00:22:551 (1) - this slide end here 00:23:474 - and put in 00:23:936 - here
3. 00:41:013 (1) - ^same 00:41:936 - end here 00:42:397 - here put in circle
4. 02:07:782 (1,2,1) - blanket you can be better Removed blanket
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 02:26:243 (1) - red anchor move on tick Fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 02:32:243 (2) - just make curve slide Fixed
7. 02:36:859 (1,1) - avoid stack

Shortened the blanket slider so I will have to place the blanketed note elsewhere. This will fix the stacking problem.

• Normal

1. i dont agree not same DS ;w; 00:15:628 (2,3) - like here Probably will make a change in DS for the whole map.
2. and try drum mapping because your vocal rhythm something part so hard Here when vocals are more prominent it seems like a waste not to map them. However, I do map to the rhythm part as well.
3. 00:20:243 (4) - put in circle ;00:18:859 (1,2,3,4) - 00:20:705 (1,2,3,4) - that's same music so just use same rhythm Problem is that slider 4 links up with the next pattern, and so changing it to a circle will destroy the flow.
   - Case 1: I keep it - Improves flow and sounds nice, but is not consistent.
   - Case 2: I do not keep it - I lose some flow and when that is a strong beat, why waste it? However it is consistent.
   If I do a huge change in distance snap, then I may apply case 2
   
   
4. 00:41:013 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - rhythm train too long; empty something point Removed 43:782
5. 01:05:013 (1) - suggest ;like this
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 02:39:974 (2,3,4,1) - avoid square flow and 02:39:974 (2,1) - here overlap too Yes it looks really cramped.

So 0.9x distance snap will still be fine, but I need to fix up the patterns.

• Hard

1. Do not triple spam that's strange to me
2. Inherit (green) timing line is unsnapped:
   01:15:171 {75171}
3. 00:31:551 (6) - this note 00:31:782 (1) - stack here ;that's flow better
4. 00:44:936 (2,3,4) - that's overmapping;00:45:051 (3) - here is no sound You are right, although the triplet sounds nice.
5. 01:53:359 (3,6) - ^ Applied.
6. 02:44:705 (1,2,3) - do not stack 02:37:320 (1,2,3) - i recommend like here Ok
7. 02:58:782 (1) - avoid 3reverse Avoided
8. 03:16:090 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - add some slide Sure.
9. 03:24:628 (5,2) - stack I think I did that, probably the stacking thing is osu makes it look weird.

Thanks mod my map Well 2 maps when combined have a higher drain time than my map. However this is a small thing.
but i think this mapset need so many work
First,improve your mapping skills, and find mapping teacher
second, see more BNs,QATs,best mapper's map that's help for your mapping ability
Good luck~!

A nice chat with Taeyang

15:52 RVMathew: Hello Taeyang. How are you doing?
15:52 Taeyang: fine Thanks
15:53 RVMathew: do you do m4m's and stuff? By the way here is a small gift to you: p/4820131#p4820131
15:53 RVMathew: 4 more to go.
15:53 Taeyang: i only take M4M atm :3
15:54 Taeyang: oh
15:54 Taeyang: you already did it
15:54 Taeyang: ok i'll mod soon
15:54 RVMathew: well 4 more to go
15:55 RVMathew: buy my map is 3:30 *5 diffs, (well 4) so drain time is uneven
15:55 Taeyang: which map?
15:55 *RVMathew is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/506023 ClariS - Kokoro no Inryoku]
15:56 RVMathew: it has a custom skin, I was going to add more but my main computer died and it will only be operational tmmrw.
15:56 Taeyang: ok~! i'll mod soon!
15:56 RVMathew: You can ignore the final diff, as it has some pending mods
15:56 Taeyang: ok
15:56 RVMathew: Thanks. And i will mod another map to make the drain time fair
01:34 RVMathew: Hi again, thanks for modding my map. I do have a question though. What was the biggest thing you did not like about my map?
01:36 Taeyang: when i
01:36 Taeyang: t/359381
01:37 Taeyang: automod used,
01:37 Taeyang: find to easy your map problem
01:38 Taeyang: Easy: New combo
01:38 RVMathew: I mean that when you played it yourself, without any tool or such, was there something that you did not like or angered you?
01:38 Taeyang: http://puu.sh/mxZzm/0e2b1fa64c.jpg
01:39 Taeyang: here is NC point
01:39 Taeyang: hmm...
01:40 Taeyang: not Logical maps
01:40 Taeyang: i like this map
01:40 *Taeyang is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/523532 Akiyama Uni - Odoru Mizushibuki]
01:40 *Taeyang is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/433005 Halozy - Genryuu Kaiko]
01:40 Taeyang: that's really logical and fun
01:40 RVMathew: Ah. The reason may be is that I map with a ruler, also known as the distance snap tool.
01:41 RVMathew: In terms of rhythm it is logical, but then it may take away the fun.
01:42 Taeyang: come here
01:42 *Taeyang is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/506316 ClariS - Kokoro no Inryoku [Normal]]
01:42 RVMathew: here
01:43 Taeyang: 00:09:628 (1) -
01:43 Taeyang: like this really fine
01:44 Taeyang: BUT!
01:44 Taeyang: 00:17:013 (1) - 00:09:628 (1) -
01:44 Taeyang: that's same music
01:44 Taeyang: but not consistency
01:46 RVMathew: Ah. So you feel that because it is not consistent, people will not be used to the rhythm and may break?
01:46 Taeyang: hmm...
01:46 Taeyang: maybe
01:46 Taeyang: but rhythm term and pattern also important
01:47 Taeyang: you know what is it consistency?
01:47 *Taeyang is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/475440 GARNiDELiA - grilletto (TV Size Ver.)]
01:47 RVMathew: yeah.
01:47 Taeyang: see his map
01:47 *Taeyang is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/611261 SawanoHiroyuki[nZk]:mizuki - &Z (TV size-English ver.-)]
01:47 *Taeyang is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/797131 SPYAIR - I'M A BELIEVER]
01:47 *Taeyang is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/374730 SPYAIR - Sakura Mitsutsuki]
01:47 Taeyang: his pattern really not fun
01:47 Taeyang: But rhythm and map really logicality
01:48 *Taeyang is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/496830 StylipS - MIRACLE RUSH feat. Ogura Yui]
01:48 *Taeyang is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/556634 Wakeshima Kanon - world's end, girl's rondo]
01:48 RVMathew: Oh ok.
01:48 RVMathew: Thanks. How do I save this chat?
01:49 Taeyang: ./savelog
01:49 Taeyang: if you need question about mapping
01:49 Taeyang: poke me ingame chat and send PM
01:50 Taeyang: when i not busy ,answer you
01:50 Taeyang: Good luck have fun mapping~!
01:51 RVMathew: Sure. Remember though that we have two very different mapping styles (I look at older style maps, but have the rhythm you find in todays maps).
01:51 RVMathew: Take care

1. A silent sliderslide is better than a silent slidertick on this music, try this out... (if you adjusted slidertick to 1)

1. 00:04:090 (1,2,1,2) - You should use less frequent new combos on this diff. I see on some parts that you use NC on every 4 white ticks. It should be on every 8 white ticks. Frequent NCs defeat the usage itself.
2. 00:12:859 (1) - This is Ez and you shouldn't be using 1/2 sliders and makes it complex...
3. On most part of the song, there is only 1/1 breaks and it is tiring for players who can't handle this. You should "leave plenty of recovery time."
4. 02:58:782 (1) - Spinner too short on this part (and also the recovery time)

1. 00:16:551 (3) - Delete note, there is no beat.
2. 00:24:628 (2) - Delete note, because of the high piano note at 00:23:936 (1)
3. 00:43:782 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 1/2 notes are very spammy on this part. Adjust some to 1/1
4. 01:53:936 (2,3,4) - Too hard imo. Make 01:54:166 (3,4) into a slider or something similar to that.
5. 03:08:705 (1,2,3,4), etc - ^

1. The diff name should be Average, Medium or something like that. I'll be asking BN regarding this.
2. 00:23:936 (1) - A slider point is out of the editing screen.
3. 01:49:090 (1,2,3) - This slider needs to be blanketed
4. 02:44:705 (1,2,3) - Stacked sliders this way are very confusing for some.
5. 02:58:782 (1) - Two 1/2 sliders would be better on this part imo.

1. Circle size should be 4.5 or 4 for the diffivulty spread (Mecheman Loves Meruru Now has CS of 4.5)

Neil Leo wrote:

[Hard-]
The diff name should be Average, Medium or something like that. I'll be asking BN regarding this.

Okoratu wrote:

Neil Leo wrote:

[Hard-]
The diff name should be Average, Medium or something like that. I'll be asking BN regarding this.

I wasn't even asked by Neil, but yeah I agree that there are more meaningful ways to label an easier hard
Average, Medium, Advanced, Intermediate are probably going to be all right.

RVMathew wrote:

Taeyang wrote:

• General

1. Inconsistency in [ComboColours]
   { Easy} :
   Combo1 : [85,190,0] Combo2 : [255,100,255] Combo3 : [255,153,55] Combo4 : [73,131,255]
   { Hard-} :
   Combo1 : [85,190,0] Combo2 : [255,100,255] Combo3 : [255,153,35] Combo4 : [73,131,255]
   { Hard} :
   Combo1 : [85,190,0] Combo2 : [255,100,255] Combo3 : [255,153,35] Combo4 : [73,131,255]
   { Mecheman Loves Meruru Now} :
   Combo1 : [85,190,0] Combo2 : [255,100,255] Combo3 : [255,153,35] Combo4 : [73,131,255]
   { Normal} :
   Combo1 : [85,190,0] Combo2 : [255,100,255] Combo3 : [255,153,35] Combo4 : [73,131,255]
   
2. Missing skin files in [Playfield] set
   play-skip.png
   play-warningarrow.png
   
3. Unused hitsounds:
   normal-hitwhistle2.wav
   
4. Wave hitsounds with possible delay >5ms:
   soft-hitfinish.wav
   normal-hitfinish.wav
   
5. Files unused:
   comboburst-2.png
   
6. Use one slidetick; sound better
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   I used slider tick rate 2 before, but the reason why I used tick rate 4 was because as my hitsounding involves adding a clap every 2 ticks, and sometimes they land in the middle or just after the middle of a slider. That means I have to use the tick method for having a clap sound. The problem with that though is that with slider rates of 2 or less, is that there is no tick for me to make a clap sound on. This only happens in 4-5 instances, but I cannot accept that.
   
   If someone else has a complaint with this then I will fix it.
   
7. this mapset why need 'hard-' diff? i think spread fine

A modder named Hendrix89 played my Hard and Mecheman's difficulty, and he/she said that the map felt quite overmapped. Rather than destroying the rhythm which I liked in my difficulty (this was 3-4 months ago), I decide to to make a Hard- (you guys will probably call this hard actually) difficulty which has fewer hitobjects, a slower slider velocity and much more player friendly. I also use rhythm patterns that you will find in the Hard difficulty, so people are prepared in advance for the much harder difficulty on hand.

• Easy

1. Use 2downbeat NC term Fixed
2. 00:22:551 (1) - this slide end here 00:23:474 - and put in 00:23:936 - here
3. 00:41:013 (1) - ^same 00:41:936 - end here 00:42:397 - here put in circle
4. 02:07:782 (1,2,1) - blanket you can be better
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 02:26:243 (1) - red anchor move on tick
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 02:32:243 (2) - just make curve slide
7. 02:36:859 (1,1) - avoid stack

• Normal

1. i dont agree not same DS ;w; 00:15:628 (2,3) - like here
2. and try drum mapping because your vocal rhythm something part so hard
3. 00:20:243 (4) - put in circle ;00:18:859 (1,2,3,4) - 00:20:705 (1,2,3,4) - that's same music so just use same rhythm
4. 00:41:013 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - rhythm train too long; empty something point
5. 01:05:013 (1) - suggest ;like this
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 02:39:974 (2,3,4,1) - avoid square flow and 02:39:974 (2,1) - here overlap too

• Hard

1. Do not triple spam that's strange to me
2. Inherit (green) timing line is unsnapped:
   01:15:171 {75171}
3. 00:31:551 (6) - this note 00:31:782 (1) - stack here ;that's flow better
4. 00:44:936 (2,3,4) - that's overmapping;00:45:051 (3) - here is no sound
5. 01:53:359 (3,6) - ^
6. 02:44:705 (1,2,3) - do not stack 02:37:320 (1,2,3) - i recommend like here
7. 02:58:782 (1) - avoid 3reverse
8. 03:16:090 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - add some slide
9. 03:24:628 (5,2) - stack

Thanks mod my map
but i think this mapset need so many work
First,improve your mapping skills, and find mapping teacher
second, see more BNs,QATs,best mapper's map that's help for your mapping ability
Good luck~!

I map with a ruler, also known as the distance snap tool.
Once my main computer is fixed I will apply these.

A nice chat with Taeyang

15:52 RVMathew: Hello Taeyang. How are you doing?
15:52 Taeyang: fine Thanks
15:53 RVMathew: do you do m4m's and stuff? By the way here is a small gift to you: p/4820131#p4820131
15:53 RVMathew: 4 more to go.
15:53 Taeyang: i only take M4M atm :3
15:54 Taeyang: oh
15:54 Taeyang: you already did it
15:54 Taeyang: ok i'll mod soon
15:54 RVMathew: well 4 more to go
15:55 RVMathew: buy my map is 3:30 *5 diffs, (well 4) so drain time is uneven
15:55 Taeyang: which map?
15:55 *RVMathew is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/506023 ClariS - Kokoro no Inryoku]
15:56 RVMathew: it has a custom skin, I was going to add more but my main computer died and it will only be operational tmmrw.
15:56 Taeyang: ok~! i'll mod soon!
15:56 RVMathew: You can ignore the final diff, as it has some pending mods
15:56 Taeyang: ok
15:56 RVMathew: Thanks. And i will mod another map to make the drain time fair
01:34 RVMathew: Hi again, thanks for modding my map. I do have a question though. What was the biggest thing you did not like about my map?
01:36 Taeyang: when i
01:36 Taeyang: t/359381
01:37 Taeyang: automod used,
01:37 Taeyang: find to easy your map problem
01:38 Taeyang: Easy: New combo
01:38 RVMathew: I mean that when you played it yourself, without any tool or such, was there something that you did not like or angered you?
01:38 Taeyang: http://puu.sh/mxZzm/0e2b1fa64c.jpg
01:39 Taeyang: here is NC point
01:39 Taeyang: hmm...
01:40 Taeyang: not Logical maps
01:40 Taeyang: i like this map
01:40 *Taeyang is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/523532 Akiyama Uni - Odoru Mizushibuki]
01:40 *Taeyang is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/433005 Halozy - Genryuu Kaiko]
01:40 Taeyang: that's really logical and fun
01:40 RVMathew: Ah. The reason may be is that I map with a ruler, also known as the distance snap tool.
01:41 RVMathew: In terms of rhythm it is logical, but then it may take away the fun.
01:42 Taeyang: come here
01:42 *Taeyang is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/506316 ClariS - Kokoro no Inryoku [Normal]]
01:42 RVMathew: here
01:43 Taeyang: 00:09:628 (1) -
01:43 Taeyang: like this really fine
01:44 Taeyang: BUT!
01:44 Taeyang: 00:17:013 (1) - 00:09:628 (1) -
01:44 Taeyang: that's same music
01:44 Taeyang: but not consistency
01:46 RVMathew: Ah. So you feel that because it is not consistent, people will not be used to the rhythm and may break?
01:46 Taeyang: hmm...
01:46 Taeyang: maybe
01:46 Taeyang: but rhythm term and pattern also important
01:47 Taeyang: you know what is it consistency?
01:47 *Taeyang is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/475440 GARNiDELiA - grilletto (TV Size Ver.)]
01:47 RVMathew: yeah.
01:47 Taeyang: see his map
01:47 *Taeyang is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/611261 SawanoHiroyuki[nZk]:mizuki - &Z (TV size-English ver.-)]
01:47 *Taeyang is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/797131 SPYAIR - I'M A BELIEVER]
01:47 *Taeyang is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/374730 SPYAIR - Sakura Mitsutsuki]
01:47 Taeyang: his pattern really not fun
01:47 Taeyang: But rhythm and map really logicality
01:48 *Taeyang is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/496830 StylipS - MIRACLE RUSH feat. Ogura Yui]
01:48 *Taeyang is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/556634 Wakeshima Kanon - world's end, girl's rondo]
01:48 RVMathew: Oh ok.
01:48 RVMathew: Thanks. How do I save this chat?
01:49 Taeyang: ./savelog
01:49 Taeyang: if you need question about mapping
01:49 Taeyang: poke me ingame chat and send PM
01:50 Taeyang: when i not busy ,answer you
01:50 Taeyang: Good luck have fun mapping~!
01:51 RVMathew: Sure. Remember though that we have two very different mapping styles (I look at older style maps, but have the rhythm you find in todays maps).
01:51 RVMathew: Take care

Neil Leo wrote:

Hi, ordinary modding from my queue
[Overall]

1. A silent sliderslide is better than a silent slidertick on this music, try this out... (if you adjusted slidertick to 1) I actually like the slider slide. Anyways if I change slider tick, it will be to slidertick rate 2 (still fine) and then add sliderslide.

[Easy]

1. 00:04:090 (1,2,1,2) - You should use less frequent new combos on this diff. I see on some parts that you use NC on every 4 white ticks. It should be on every 8 white ticks. Frequent NCs defeat the usage itself. Fixed in Taeyang's mod.
2. 00:12:859 (1) - This is Ez and you shouldn't be using 1/2 sliders and makes it complex... That is a 1/1 slider I am using it currently. It does look short so I understand why someone may think it is 1/2 slider.
3. On most part of the song, there is only 1/1 breaks and it is tiring for players who can't handle this. You should "leave plenty of recovery time." The settings should compensate for that, and if I tried doing 2/1 or 1/1 everything goes upside down.
4. 02:58:782 (1) - Spinner too short on this part (and also the recovery time) Will map that bit.

[Normal]

1. 00:16:551 (3) - Delete note, there is no beat. Fixed
2. 00:24:628 (2) - Delete note, because of the high piano note at 00:23:936 (1) That ruins the rhythm. However, you mentioned about the piano note, which is a strong beat; I changed that area into 2 1/2 sliders, instead of a 1/2 slider with a repeat and a note. It sounds a lot better.
3. 00:43:782 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 1/2 notes are very spammy on this part. Adjust some to 1/1 Instead, changed the rhythm to 2x 1/2 sliders with 1 repeat and removed 2 notes.
4. 01:53:936 (2,3,4) - Too hard imo. Make 01:54:166 (3,4) into a slider or something similar to that. Fixed.
5. 03:08:705 (1,2,3,4), etc - ^ Prepares you for the next difficulty.

[Hard-]

1. The diff name should be Average, Medium or something like that. I'll be asking BN regarding this.
2. 00:23:936 (1) - A slider point is out of the editing screen. Removed the repeat so I could do a different pattern and avoid this problem.
3. 01:49:090 (1,2,3) - This slider needs to be blanketed I did do that, but refined it more. It does introduce new problems though such as overlap, but some sacrifices have to be made.
4. 02:44:705 (1,2,3) - Stacked sliders this way are very confusing for some. Will fix it.
5. 02:58:782 (1) - Two 1/2 sliders would be better on this part imo. Fixed to 1 1/2 slider and 2x notes from Taeyang's mod.

[Hard]

1. Circle size should be 4.5 or 4 for the diffivulty spread (Mecheman Loves Meruru Now has CS of 4.5)
   I will probably keep cs5; if I do 4, it will be cramped. I have tried 4.5 but not in this iteration before. I only kept 4.5 until Hendrix89's mod, in which I redid everything and used cs5 while reworking it.

That's all I can mod for now. I recommend that you look for some BN-made or recently ranked beatmaps for you to have a guide on mapping. I did this on my 1st beatmap.
MLMN diff should have neat slider placements btw. Good luck on mapping!

1. SKINNING ELEMENTS: While skinning, try to use the whole elements which belong to the nature of each element. This means if you skinned hitcircle.png, then add all the elements that relates to it. Here's a list of them. Please, refer to this for further information.
   1. approachcircle.png
   2. hitcircleoverlay.png
   3. hitcircleselect.png
   4. followpoint.png
   5. lighting.png
   The same goes for section-fail.png there are few elements which must be added too:
   
   1. play-skip.png
   2. play-warningarrow.png
   There's a problem with naming your combobursts because comboburst-2.png isn't appearing anywhere. This is because your first comboburst doesn't refer to "one" so the second comboburst would never appear unless you rename it to:
   
   l comboburst.png must be renamed to comboburst-1.png (In this way, comboburst-2 will appear naturally while playing.)
   
2. BG FOLDER SIZE: It's not a bid deal but it would be better if you convert Stardust_Witch_Meruru.png into .jpg for reducing the overall weight of the set. Since you added some .png images, it would hurt no one if the file were .jpg instead of .png.

1. 00:47:013 (4,5,6,1,2) Over Easy difficulties, placing many circles together would get hard for beginners to click them properly because of the density of them. It would be better if you change some of them for 1/1 sliders which would fit awesomely in this part.
2. 01:36:859 (2) Please, remove the whistle of the slider-head to let the clap sound stronger here, just as well as you did here 01:35:013 -
3. 02:37:320 (4,5) Here I was waiting the double clap you used in the previous kiais which sound greatly here. Please, consider doing the same here too 02:44:705 (4,5)

1. 00:06:743 (2) Add a note here for consistency with the following patterns.
2. 00:36:628 (5) Ctrl + G here to develop a more readable flow. Consider doing the same here 01:48:628 (3)
3. 02:10:090 (1) Remove NC here. It's not necessary.
4. 03:08:474 (5,6,1) Oh please, don't do this kind of triplets on this diff because they would make more sense if you replace them for 1/4 sliders with one reverse. Consider doing the same here 03:23:243 (5,6,1) - 03:27:051 (4,1) -

HappyRocket88 wrote:

Hai from modreqs. I liked the song so here I am.

POSITIVE ASPECTS I can't deny how awesome the hitsounds fit with the song over all the difficulties, even in the easiest one. You did a great job there and seems you improved since the time you submitted the map. I love the first comboburst.png so bad so you should teach me to use transparent images like that on my maps. Keep working on it and never give up! Thanks. I have renewed vigor for completing this map.

[General]

1. SKINNING ELEMENTS: While skinning, try to use the whole elements which belong to the nature of each element. This means if you skinned hitcircle.png, then add all the elements that relates to it. Here's a list of them. Please, refer to this for further information.
   1. approachcircle.png
   2. hitcircleoverlay.png
   3. hitcircleselect.png
   4. followpoint.png
   5. lighting.png
   The same goes for section-fail.png there are few elements which must be added too:
   
   1. play-skip.png
   2. play-warningarrow.png
   
   I am currently thinking about what I want for my play warning arrows and stuff. I also want to do a complete skin so there is a lot more I have to do.
   
   There's a problem with naming your combobursts because comboburst-2.png isn't appearing anywhere. This is because your first comboburst doesn't refer to "one" so the second comboburst would never appear unless you rename it to:
   
   l comboburst.png must be renamed to comboburst-1.png (In this way, comboburst-2 will appear naturally while playing.)Ah I see.
   
2. BG FOLDER SIZE: It's not a bid deal but it would be better if you convert Stardust_Witch_Meruru.png into .jpg for reducing the overall weight of the set. Since you added some .png images, it would hurt no one if the file were .jpg instead of .png.

Changed. I manged to reduce the size from around 1.63mb to at least 468kb. That should help a lot with download.

[Easy] No major issues find. This diff is really great. Thank you.

1. 00:47:013 (4,5,6,1,2) Over Easy difficulties, placing many circles together would get hard for beginners to click them properly because of the density of them. It would be better if you change some of them for 1/1 sliders which would fit awesomely in this part. Changed 2 notes to a 1/1 slider. Also managed to make it symmetrical with 00:47:474 (5) - so it looks a lot better.
2. 01:36:859 (2) Please, remove the whistle of the slider-head to let the clap sound stronger here, just as well as you did here 01:35:013 - Fixed
3. 02:37:320 (4,5) Here I was waiting the double clap you used in the previous kiais which sound greatly here. Please, consider doing the same here too 02:44:705 (4,5) Fixed. I agree that we should make use of the claps.

[Hard-] First at all, this diff plays well but should be renamed to Advanced because of the overall patterning you manage. Thank you. Regarding the name, this has been the subject of controversy, but the reason why I put Hard- is because this is the hard difficulty, just with most of the hit objects simplified.

1. 00:06:743 (2) Add a note here for consistency with the following patterns. After asking Happyrocket for clarification, this is regarding a different note which I have added.
2. 00:36:628 (5) Ctrl + G here to develop a more readable flow. Consider doing the same here 01:48:628 (3) I like the current one for now.
3. 02:10:090 (1) Remove NC here. It's not necessary. Oversight. Fixed
4. 03:08:474 (5,6,1) Oh please, don't do this kind of triplets on this diff because they would make more sense if you replace them for 1/4 sliders with one reverse. Consider doing the same here 03:23:243 (5,6,1) - 03:27:051 (4,1) Removed those triplets because it does not make sense to have it. Even if I did your 1/4 slider with repeat, it does not make the music sound any better.-

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Overall not a bad map, but consider asking for more mods. There are still issues which could improve in all difficulties. Good luck!

Reditum wrote:

Now that the map is actually complete and not pending major changes, I can go ahead and mod it

Let's hope it was worth the wait