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bbj0920
>hoping new ranked kiddly map

>huehue dokidoki

btw great!
Flower
操你妈,给我个gd啊,随便啥难度
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kiddly

Flower wrote:

操你妈,给我个gd啊,随便啥难度
好啊,那搞个hard啊,我说真的
Anticloud
简直explo 太精彩了 吃视野给的kd也还不给他了 直接射

这个是专辑selentia里 比BMS的长了一截 就当source吧 tag就BMS bof2011 Liquefied Cyber Punk
Topic Starter
kiddly

Anticloud wrote:

简直explo 太精彩了 吃视野给的kd也还不给他了 直接射

这个是专辑selentia里 比BMS的长了一截 就当source吧 tag就BMS bof2011 Liquefied Cyber Punk
3Q~
Skystar
根據慣例專輯名不用作source
所以這裡要麼用BMS要麼就放空全部放tags吧
Heatherfield
Hi.

[Basic]
00:24:371 (1) - NC a jb?
01:45:705 (1) - ^
01:52:371 (1) - ^
02:24:372 (1) - ^

[Hyper]
00:27:705 (1) - remove NC.
00:34:205 (4) - ^
01:16:038 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - it's hard to read since the streams are similar in shape but different in directions.

[Another]

-gameplay & arrange-

00:06:705 (1,1) - it's too sudden for a starting pattern. I missed many times here.
01:02:371 (5) - NC
01:20:038 (4,5) - stacking seems better.
01:20:288 (6,1) - ^
01:21:371 (4,5) - ^
01:21:621 (6,1) - ^

-hitsound-

00:27:705 (2) - sampleset:normal
00:42:205 (1) - finish at the start.
00:57:371 (3) - clap at the start.
01:04:538 (2) - finish.

我也是醉了
Topic Starter
kiddly

Heatherfield wrote:

Hi.

[Basic]
00:24:371 (1) - NC a jb?
01:45:705 (1) - ^
01:52:371 (1) - ^
02:24:372 (1) - ^ fixed!

[Hyper]
00:27:705 (1) - remove NC.
00:34:205 (4) - ^ fixed!

01:16:038 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - it's hard to read since the streams are similar in shape but different in directions. slightly changed arranging.

[Another]

-gameplay & arrange-

00:06:705 (1,1) - it's too sudden for a starting pattern. I missed many times here.
01:02:371 (5) - NC
01:20:038 (4,5) - stacking seems better.
01:20:288 (6,1) - ^
01:21:371 (4,5) - ^
01:21:621 (6,1) - ^ fixed.

-hitsound-

00:27:705 (2) - sampleset:normal
00:42:205 (1) - finish at the start.
00:57:371 (3) - clap at the start.
01:04:538 (2) - finish. fixed.


我也是醉了
谢谢你!
Low
offset: 377. i keep getting 4~7 ms late, and this fixes it. make sure to resnap notes/timing sections. please apply this AFTER reading and applying the mod, though.

[Basic]
00:51:038 (1,2,3,4,1) - this seems too hard for a basic diff. you should turn 00:51:705 (3,4) into one slider.
01:11:705 (2) - one grid left to avoid the overlap
01:21:705 (3) - NC for consistency with 01:19:038 (1,2)
01:52:371 (1) - remove NC for consistency with 00:24:371 (4)
02:03:038 (1) - ^
02:27:538 (3) - add a soft finish at the end to match the music

[Hyper]
00:27:038 (5) - NC. the combo is really long. also, it is consistent with 00:37:705 (1)
01:00:371 (8) - NC makes sense here
01:40:371 (5) - NC here makes sense. also, it lets the player know of the anti-jumps
01:55:038 (1,2) - this is weird.. you should either add an extra repeat to (1) or space the sliders out so players don't think there's an extra repeat 0.0
02:16:203 (2) - unsnapped
02:16:371 (1,2) - same suggestion from 01:55:038 (1,2)
02:27:038 (1,2) - ^

[Another]
00:50:205 (5) - NC for consistency
00:52:871 (2) - ^
00:57:705 (1) - ^
01:14:538 (2) - the green line at the end of this slider doesn't work properly because it's unsnapped. snap it please
02:05:203 (3) - unsnapped
02:24:705 (3) - put this in line with (1,2). i don't see why you made this a jump
02:27:371 (4) - ctrl+g flows a lot better.
02:27:705 (6) - ^

very clean mapset. starred

Topic Starter
kiddly
:lol:

Low wrote:

offset: 377. i keep getting 4~7 ms late, and this fixes it. make sure to resnap notes/timing sections. please apply this AFTER reading and applying the mod, though.

[Basic]
00:51:038 (1,2,3,4,1) - this seems too hard for a basic diff. you should turn 00:51:705 (3,4) into one slider.
01:11:705 (2) - one grid left to avoid the overlap
01:21:705 (3) - NC for consistency with 01:19:038 (1,2)
01:52:371 (1) - remove NC for consistency with 00:24:371 (4)
02:03:038 (1) - ^
02:27:538 (3) - add a soft finish at the end to match the music all fixed!

[Hyper]
00:27:038 (5) - NC. the combo is really long. also, it is consistent with 00:37:705 (1)
01:00:371 (8) - NC makes sense here
01:40:371 (5) - NC here makes sense. also, it lets the player know of the anti-jumps above fixed.
01:55:038 (1,2) - this is weird.. you should either add an extra repeat to (1) or space the sliders out so players don't think there's an extra repeat 0.0 for a player that can play insane diffs,this is easy to estimate.
02:16:203 (2) - unsnapped fixed.
02:16:371 (1,2) - same suggestion from 01:55:038 (1,2)
02:27:038 (1,2) - ^

[Another]
00:50:205 (5) - NC for consistency
00:52:871 (2) - ^
00:57:705 (1) - ^
01:14:538 (2) - the green line at the end of this slider doesn't work properly because it's unsnapped. snap it please
02:05:203 (3) - unsnapped above fixed.
02:24:705 (3) - put this in line with (1,2). i don't see why you made this a jump it's coooooool 8-)
02:27:371 (4) - ctrl+g flows a lot better.
02:27:705 (6) - ^

very clean mapset. starred

thank you for modding!
Asagiri Mai
[Basic]
00:12:705 (2,3) - 这样的节奏对于新手来说难以把握,不如直接把slider延长到3的位置。
00:27:038 (3,4,1) - 怎么忽然不按照DS了?
01:00:371 (1,2,3,4) - 这样的重叠对新手也是比较难。


[Hyper]

00:42:705 (1) - 在后面的段落里这些相同的地方是没有NC的,为毛这个有……
00:43:371 (1) - ^
02:23:371 (1) - 取消NC。
02:24:704 (3) - ^

[Another]

-gameplay & arrange-

用于减速段的白色和普通段落的灰色颜色过于相近,会造成识别上的困难。
01:28:205 (3) - 这个slider真的sb
01:44:371 (4,1) - 建议把这两个物件的距离稍微分开一点,使之不重合。

-hitsound-

00:17:205 (3) - 丢了个finish
00:17:705 (1) - 滑条尾部已经完全静音了。
00:28:371 (1) - ^
02:27:705 (6) - 哨子在这里比较突兀,不如取消掉。


sb
Topic Starter
kiddly

Asagiri Mai wrote:

[Basic]
00:12:705 (2,3) - 这样的节奏对于新手来说难以把握,不如直接把slider延长到3的位置。
00:27:038 (3,4,1) - 怎么忽然不按照DS了?
01:00:371 (1,2,3,4) - 这样的重叠对新手也是比较难。 我个人感觉是可以玩的,毕竟不是面向初学者的难度。



[Hyper]

00:42:705 (1) - 在后面的段落里这些相同的地方是没有NC的,为毛这个有……
00:43:371 (1) - ^
02:23:371 (1) - 取消NC。
02:24:704 (3) - ^

[Another]

-gameplay & arrange-

用于减速段的白色和普通段落的灰色颜色过于相近,会造成识别上的困难。
01:28:205 (3) - 这个slider真的sb 由于版本的差异你看到的那个slider应该已经不存在了
01:44:371 (4,1) - 建议把这两个物件的距离稍微分开一点,使之不重合。 我感觉稍微分开一点使得互相之间的圈没有重叠就可以了


-hitsound-

00:17:205 (3) - 丢了个finish
00:17:705 (1) - 滑条尾部已经完全静音了。
00:28:371 (1) - ^
02:27:705 (6) - 哨子在这里比较突兀,不如取消掉。


sb
除了有红字标注的地方都改正了,感谢
Jenny
16:11 Jenny: 00:15:871 (8) -
16:11 Jenny: pls balance ;a;
16:11 Jenny: 00:18:705 (1,2) - weird shapes ;a;
16:11 Jenny: 00:18:871 - feels weird having those strong hitsounds on no click
16:12 kiddly: -0-
16:12 Jenny: pls
16:12 Jenny: I like your maps
16:12 Jenny: but they could be betterrrrrrrrrr ;a;
16:12 kiddly: let me see
16:13 Jenny: 00:36:371 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - this is wronggg
16:13 Jenny: the new pattern starts 00:37:038 (2) - here, not 00:36:871 (1) - here
16:16 kiddly: I do this just for visual consistency
16:17 Jenny: http://puu.sh/aQLCT/e2e845b8df.osu
16:17 Jenny: look . 3.
16:17 Jenny: ~ didn't really hitsound the alternative part, but you get the idea?
16:18 kiddly: I get from the original BMS
16:18 Jenny: hm?
16:19 Jenny: 00:35:955 (2) - also sliders like this one are meh because you only click the weak beat >:
16:19 kiddly: hitsounds
16:21 kiddly: yr right
16:23 kiddly: let me make some changes
16:27 Jenny: I feel like a lot of people (..just about everyone) need to look out for the actual beatgrouping/musical patterning more often
16:36 kiddly: why don't you post this log to my page for a kd?(and add a mod post for me
16:37 kiddly: you can save it to your mapping notebook lol
16:37 Jenny: notebook? :V
16:37 Jenny: iunno I feel like
16:37 Jenny: all I could mention in mods
16:37 Jenny: is already on my userpage
16:37 Jenny: well not all, the beatpatterning part is hard to describe in a general theme..
16:39 Jenny: 00:08:371 (1) - http://puu.sh/aQBah/443c5fa13d.png
16:40 Jenny: 00:11:121 (4) - this one I find okay because the sliderend is on one of the strong beats and you mapped the clicks onto the hihat (?) here
16:40 Jenny: 00:11:871 (4) - this one not
16:41 Jenny: 00:18:871 (2,4) - should be more accentuated, maybe ctrl-G them or do [http://puu.sh/aQMVV/392bd65040.png this] (though you should put a jump towards 5 because that's also a strong beat)
16:42 Jenny: 00:23:038 (3,4,1,2) - this is actually one strong soundpattern and should be mapped in like, one shape (because 2 is a kind of finishing beat, I would say you should make it a triangle with 2 being in the center, the strong angle should accentuate it)
16:45 kiddly: hm
16:45 Jenny: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1922506 or this
16:45 Jenny: like, breaking the shape into the opposite direction gives a strong finish to it
16:46 Jenny: 00:25:705 (1,2,3,1,2,1) - this is patterned in pairs of two againb
16:47 kiddly: sometime we should work more on the visual jobs
16:47 Jenny: http://puu.sh/aQNhe/8bdd5cdcc9.png
16:47 Jenny: 00:25:705 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) -
16:48 Jenny: the 1/4 sliders would have silenced/softsample endings
16:49 Jenny: 00:26:871 - 00:27:205 - 00:27:371 - 00:27:538 - 00:27:705
16:49 Jenny: that's just such a strong soundpattern
16:50 Jenny: so yeah, beat patterning
16:50 Jenny: and strong hitsounds shouldn't be on sliderends because, well, you don't click them, so the entire pressure goes away from the playing >:
16:51 Jenny: basically it's the same principles that repeat throughout the map (..and every map)
Harold Miner
Basic:
00:36:372 (1,2) - 02:04:372 (1,2) - 02:25:706 (1,2) - 没包好 可以把2往上移一点
00:52:371 (1,3) - 可以考虑把这两个叠在一起


Standard:
02:09:038 (2,3,4) - 间距?

Hyper:
00:54:705 (7,1) - 这两个做成完全平行?
01:55:705 (3,1) - 3的尾和1的头没叠好

Another:
00:22:705 (1,2,3) - 间距?

盯着看了半天啥都没看出来 真是自卑
Topic Starter
kiddly

Harold Miner wrote:

Basic:
00:36:372 (1,2) - 02:04:372 (1,2) - 02:25:706 (1,2) - 没包好 可以把2往上移一点
00:52:371 (1,3) - 可以考虑把这两个叠在一起


Standard:
02:09:038 (2,3,4) - 间距?

Hyper:
00:54:705 (7,1) - 这两个做成完全平行?
01:55:705 (3,1) - 3的尾和1的头没叠好

Another:
00:22:705 (1,2,3) - 间距?

盯着看了半天啥都没看出来 真是自卑
All fixed

感谢!
Garven
[Easy]
00:14:038 (4,2) - Easily avoidable overlap
00:27:705 (4,1) - Considering 00:27:038 (3,4,1) - are all the same timing, this isn't a well-placed jump for an Easy.
01:02:371 (4,1,2) - Considering all of the big direction changes and overlapping going on, I think this pattern isn't very fitting for an Easy - especially with these more complex rhythms. It looks like you mapped yourself into a corner - you might want to consider redesigning the part before it too.
01:55:705 (4,1) - Same thing as the copypaste from before. It'd be nice if you at least did a ctrl + h or something instead of having the exact same thing again.
It'd be nice to have a spinner somewhere so that scores aren't stagnant.

[Normal]
Really? AR 6.5 and OD 4? Fix that.
00:04:371 - Make the volume increase more gradual. It's suddenly louder here and it sounds weird.
00:27:705 (1) - Please don't use such drastic speed changes in a Normal
You know, I think I'll stop here on this difficulty. This is really high velocity/beat density for a normal... It's really iffy for a fair spread. It really needs to be toned down to still be called a Normal. I think the problem is that you mapped to this larger grid size so that snapping is really high. There's also a lot of lone hitobjects in consecutive new combos. Please don't do that.

You know, after glancing at the Hard and Insane, I think you should fix the spread from the Easy -> Normal -> Hard. It might be best to make the Normal easier velocity-wise then make a map that's between that and the current Hard since it's pretty much an easier Insane.
Topic Starter
kiddly

Garven wrote:

[Easy]
00:14:038 (4,2) - Easily avoidable overlap Fixed.
00:27:705 (4,1) - Considering 00:27:038 (3,4,1) - are all the same timing, this isn't a well-placed jump for an Easy. Fixed.
01:02:371 (4,1,2) - Considering all of the big direction changes and overlapping going on, I think this pattern isn't very fitting for an Easy - especially with these more complex rhythms. It looks like you mapped yourself into a corner - you might want to consider redesigning the part before it too. So I replaced the sliders before to make a clear pettern.
01:55:705 (4,1) - Same thing as the copypaste from before. It'd be nice if you at least did a ctrl + h or something instead of having the exact same thing again. same above.
It'd be nice to have a spinner somewhere so that scores aren't stagnant. Added a spinner at the end same as the others.

[Normal]
Really? AR 6.5 and OD 4? Fix that.
00:04:371 - Make the volume increase more gradual. It's suddenly louder here and it sounds weird. Fixed.
00:27:705 (1) - Please don't use such drastic speed changes in a Normal Increased it to 75%.
You know, I think I'll stop here on this difficulty. This is really high velocity/beat density for a normal... It's really iffy for a fair spread. It really needs to be toned down to still be called a Normal. I think the problem is that you mapped to this larger grid size so that snapping is really high. There's also a lot of lone hitobjects in consecutive new combos. Please don't do that.

You know, after glancing at the Hard and Insane, I think you should fix the spread from the Easy -> Normal -> Hard. It might be best to make the Normal easier velocity-wise then make a map that's between that and the current Hard since it's pretty much an easier Insane.
In fact, I wanted to do a normal-hard-insane-extra spread,but I had a mistake on diff naming,so it's misleading everyone.Hoping renaming them can make them more clear to see.

thank you.
Garven
The problem is that your "Normal" still plays like an Easy. It's the spread by how it plays that I am worried about, not how they are labeled. Also Hyper = Hard, so it's a little redundant in that sense.
Topic Starter
kiddly
communicated on irc,will be working!
Garven
[Standard]
OD +1 or 2
00:41:705 (1) - This entire section feels so empty without hitsounds :(
Hm overall the map feels really light on the hitsounds compared to the other difficulties.

[Hard]
OD +1 or 2
00:06:371 - Makes more sense to end the spinner here, musically.
00:38:371 (3,4) - I still think the jump feels off compared to the rest of the mapping. It just comes umprompted considering the context of the rest of the mapping up until this point.
01:09:538 (1,2,3,4) - This doesn't feel hard-angled enough compared to the rest of the overall pattern construction.

[Hyper]
OD +2 or 3
00:06:371 - Makes more sense to end the spinner here, musically.
01:02:371 (5,1) - I wish there was larger spacing between these considering the musical cue
01:51:038 (1,2,3,4) - Evil evil trap

[Another]
00:31:705 (2,3) - I'd reverse these so that the circle is first. That or stack the circle on the end of the slider, not the start.
01:00:371 (1) - These make much more sense if you set the new combos like this:

01:45:038 (1) - Yeah, I 100'd on this. Going from .25x (which is questionable) to 2x is way too much of a different. 1.5x or 1.75x aren't so large that you'll break.

I got a second opinion on this since it's kinda iffy and I've already asked a lot of you, but the Hyper -> Another is also a pretty big jump in difficulty. not as bad as the easier difficulties, mind you, but it's still present. The second opinion was about the same as mine - it's close, but maybe okay. If you think you could make the Hyper a little bit harder without breaking what you've done so far, please do so. Otherwise, reducing the difficulty of the Another wouldn't work. It's great as it is.

Anyway, let me know what you think about that final thought along with the other mods.
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