Lin-G - I Want You [CatchTheBeat|Taiko]

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Topic Starter
rew0825
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 21 กรกฎาคม 2559 at 17:32:25

Artist: Lin-G
Title: I Want You
Source: DJMAX Portable Clazziquai Edition
Tags: Jay black square House Dance
BPM: 140
Filesize: 3114kb
Play Time: 01:44
Difficulties Available:
  1. Cup (1.4 stars, 157 notes)
  2. Futsuu (2.04 stars, 242 notes)
  3. Kantan (1.31 stars, 146 notes)
  4. Muzukashii (2.7 stars, 348 notes)
  5. Oni (3.47 stars, 469 notes)
  6. Platter (2.64 stars, 229 notes)
  7. Rain (3.76 stars, 320 notes)
  8. Salad (1.96 stars, 209 notes)


Download: Lin-G - I Want You
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Ctb&Taiko Mapset #1
Artist : Lin-G
Title : I Want You
Source : DJMAX Portable Clazziquai Edition
BPM : 140
CTB - Cup
- Salad
- Platter
- Rain
Taiko
  • - Kantan
    - Futsuu
    - Muzukashii
    - Oni
[I]MMoRTal[S]
เอา 1.25 อักแรกออก
ไทโกะ เค้าไม่อนุญาตให้ใช้ kiai time สั้นๆ ให้เป็นการกระพริบ


00:00:270 (1) - เอา spinner ออก แล้วใส่โน๊ตใหม่ เพราะ เอาสปินเนอร์มาแบบนี้มันแปลกๆ สำหรับพี่ ~

00:19:985 (1,1,2,3) - ลด spinner แล้วใส่โน๊ตตามนี้

00:33:270 (1) - ขยับ spinner ไว้ตรงนี้ 00:33:056 (1) จากนั้นลด spinner แล้วใส่โน๊ตตามนี้


00:34:985 (5) - เพิ่มสี ฟ้า ตรงนี้

00:40:128 (25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34) - เปลี่ยนตามภาพ


00:43:663 (42) - ลบทิ้ง

00:44:413 (46) - สี ฟ้า

00:46:342 (54) - แดง
00:46:770 (56) - ฟ้า
00:46:985 (57) - แดง
00:47:199 (58) - ฟ้า
00:47:413 (59) - แดง

00:48:163 (64) - ลบทิ้ง
01:01:878 (117) - ลบ
01:15:592 (170) - ลบ
01:22:556 (198) - ตัวใหญ่
01:43:128 (279) - เปลี่ยน slider เป็น spinner
อย่างแรกเลย โน๊ตไม่ตรงเส้น ขยับให้ตรงซะนะ


เอา 1.25 อักแรกออก
ไทโกะ เค้าไม่อนุญาตให้ใช้ kiai time สั้นๆ ให้เป็นการกระพริบ


00:00:270 (1) - เอา spinner ออก แล้วใส่โน๊ตใหม่ เพราะ เอาสปินเนอร์มาแบบนี้มันแปลกๆ สำหรับพี่

00:09:592 (14) - เพิ่ม แดง ตรงนี้
00:16:449 (13) - เพิ่มสี ฟ้า ตรงกลาง
00:34:344 (113) - ฟ้า
00:46:344 (181,182,183,184,185,186,187,188,189,190,191,192,193,194,195,196,197,198,199) -

00:48:270 (199) - เอาตัวใหญ่ออก ไม่ก็เปลี่ยนเป็นตัวใหญ่สี ฟ้า
01:01:987 (1) - เอาตัวใหญ่ออก ไม่ก็เปลี่ยนเป็นตัวใหญ่สี ฟ้า
01:20:949 (35) - แดง
01:24:056 (5) - ฟ้า
01:24:594 (9) - แดง
01:37:987 (6,7,8,9,10) - แดง แดง ฟ้า ฟ้า แดง
01:38:844 (12,13,14,15,16) - ฟ้า แดง ฟ้า ฟ้า แดง

01:43:130 (42) - เปลี่ยน slider เป็น spinner แทน

ขอให้โชคดี ~ :)
Soldsaga KunG
Taiko Moddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd ~ // จะยาวไปไหน

d = don
D = Big Don
k = kat
K = Big Kat

00:12:699 (11) - k
00:16:128 (18) - k
00:21:270 (27) - k
00:27:699 (39) - d
00:28:556 (41) - k
00:31:985 (47) - k
00:33:270 (49) - k
00:34:128 (51) - d
00:35:413 (54) - k
00:36:699 (56) และ 00:37:128 (57) - สลับกัน
00:48:270 (78) ถึง 01:15:699 (142) ไม่รู้จะ Mod ยังไง เอาง่าย ๆ คือหาช่องว่างให้ผู้เล่นใหม่พักบ้าง lol
01:18:699 (147) - k
01:20:842 (151) - d
01:24:270 (157) - d
01:29:413 (166) ถึง 01:42:699 (197) กรณีเดียวกันกับ 00:48:270 (78) ถึง 01:15:699 (142)
00:10:556 (13) - d
00:14:413 (24) - k
00:17:842 (36) - k
00:19:556 (42) - k
00:19:985 (1) - สปินจบ 00:20:842
00:21:270 (1) - ใส่ Note k
00:23:842 (10) - k
00:33:270 (1) - สปินจบ 00:34:556
00:34:985 (1) - ใส่ Note k
00:37:342 (9) และ 00:37:556 (10) สลับกัน
00:37:985 (11) และ 00:38:199 (12) - ^
00:40:985 (22) - k
01:15:699 (131) ถึง 01:28:985 (162) อย่าก็อปวางเยอะ เดียวคน mod คนอื่นจะด่าเอา (รวมถึง bat ด้วย)

Muzukashii กับ Oni // ชาติหน้าค่อย Mod // กำโทด
Topic Starter
rew0825
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Change all diff note [CTB]
Add hitsound [Rain CTB]
Kurokami
Mod requested. o/

[Cup]

AR/OD5 is the common for Cup. Its your choice tho, I'm fine with this.

00:11:842 (3) - Move this note a lot to left.
00:28:985 (3,4) - Since no dashes are allowed on Cup I suggest you to lower the distance a lot. (I'm fine with easy dashes during kiai but this is not there.)
01:00:699 (6,7) - Again a really big distance. Lower it a bit.
01:35:413 (5,6,7,8,1) - This pattern looks a bit ugly. How about moving (7) between (6) and (8)? x:256 can work well.
01:42:270 (2,3) - Big distance again.
01:44:199 (1) - This spinner is too short. I think you should delete it and just separate 01:43:128 (3) into two slider. The first one should be same as (2) in mirrored position (just for fun) and the second should start at 01:43:985 with w/e end you want tho I prefer 01:44:628.

As I mentioned a good Cup shouldn't contain jumps. And most maps going according to this. I'm fine with really easy ones during kiai, but other modders will mention them anyways. So I think you should remove them now.

[Salad]

00:39:056 (2,3) - I don't want to see 1/2 jumps with this distance on Salad. Please move them closer to each other.
00:42:485 (2,3) - Same.
00:44:413 (7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - First of all, I want to jump at 00:44:842 but you mapped a sliderend there. And second, I think this pattern maybe too hard for Salad. Especially 00:45:913 (5,6) this jump at the end.
00:57:270 (6) - Move this in the middle of (5) and (7)? x:304 looks nice.
01:01:128 (5,6) - Big distance again.
01:04:128 (7,8) - ^
01:12:270 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern is way too hard for Salad. It requres a very good timing and aiming skill. Please try out something else.
01:25:985 (1,2,3) - This is again a very wild pattern with too big distance.
01:43:128 (1) - Better spinner than the one on Cup but I want this to be end at 01:44:413. The vocal is end there after all.

You used 1/2 rhythm mainly which I think don't really good on Salad. Yes, you can use 1/2 but not on the whole song. It requires high precision which should not be needed on this level yet. But try to avoid 1/2 jump with higher than 2,5x distance (upper right corner).

[Platter]

00:19:985 (9,10,11) - Avoid this jumps. Its almost impossible with the current dash behaviour to move back to (11) after a HDash.
00:36:699 (5,6) - I don't think this Hdash is fit. There is nothing which requires is except a small drum. Remove it please.
00:48:056 (3,4) - Why no HDash? You even used finish on (4) and having HDash on the first note in the "kiai" is almost always a good choice.
00:51:485 (11,1) - Missing Hdash.
00:54:913 (12,1) - ^
00:59:413 (3,4) - Remove HDash.
01:01:770 (8,1) - Again needs a Hdash. Yes, this will be hard, but if you curve the stream in the direction of the jump it won't be a problem. Just keep trying.
01:08:413 (7,8,9,10,1) - This doesn't look good with that sudden distance change in the middle. Please change the distance equal between them.
01:08:735 (10,1,2) - Also (10,1) needs a HDash. Merge (1,2) into a slider and do the same what I told you before at the stream.
01:13:128 (3,4,5) - This distance is too big. Almost impossible to fc this pattern. (3,4) needs a Hdash but even if you won't add it please move (5) in the middle of (4,6). It will be better.
01:22:342 (4,1) - Maybe HDash?
01:27:270 (5,6,7,8,1) - Again a weird stream.
01:28:128 (3,4,5,6,1) - ^
01:29:199 (4,1) - Hdash.
01:38:842 (6,7) - Remove HDash.
01:43:556 (2,3) - Move these a bit to the left. The jump between (1,2) is kinda sudden at first play.

I need to mention one more thing what I didn't wanted to point out one by one above. 01:10:342 (6,7) - This rhythm is useless and follows nothing. CtB is still a rhythm game and you still need to follow it while playing or during mapping. Just try to imagine a jump where you need to follow nothing while using Hidden. It will be hard to time isn't it? Its the same with this rhythm too. The song is clearly works well with 1/2 (some 1/4 can be used, but not here). Please remove them.

[Rain]

00:12:270 (1,2,3,4) - No. This is not fun. It is just annoying when this is your 30th try and still can't catch one of these. They are not that hard but at this speed the distance is a bit high. How about trying the move (3,4) a bit to the middle to create smaller jump there?
00:19:556 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - No. Not because its hard but instead (5,6) looks ugly. I moved (6) to x:0 and its way better.
00:20:413 (7,8,9,10,11,1) - Same here. But I suggest you to move these two a bit closer to each other since the pattern is hard enough and after the high right dash its annoying to catch the second pattern too.
00:22:985 (2,3,4) - Nope. Move (3) or (4) closer to the previous note. Tho I prefer (4) since having HDash on (3) is good. x:304 is working well, wild but nice.
00:23:842 (5,1,2,3) - Here too. Move (1) to x:336 and (3) to x:416. I SS'd this pattern at first try. :3
00:27:270 (4,5,6,7,1,2) - Again a big nope. If you want a distance change please increase it continuously between notes. You need to be careful with streams. (6) to x:224, (7) to x:288, (1) to x:368 and (2) to x:256.
00:30:699 (4) - Just a simple short slider?
00:33:699 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - I see you like this pattern. Well I fc'd at first try but how about a nice Z pattern instead? This is kinda hard for this AR.
00:35:842 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - The jumps are starting to be harder at this point which is not bad but catching triplets with this distance is really annoying. Move (1,2,3) two grid towards the centre, same with (4,5,6) and instead of (7,8,9,10,11,12) just use two 1/4 repeat slider at x:144 and x:168. This will keep your symetry and easier to read.
00:39:699 (4,1) - Please Hdash. It is fitting and very hard w/o it.
00:49:128 (2) - Move this one closer a bit. Its very hard to handle it. x:416 is working well.
00:52:556 (3) - Same here.
00:55:556 (2) - After a few retry I was able to handle it but still I suggest you to move it closer.
01:00:056 (6) - This should be HDash. I know you like symetry but for CtB it rarely works well and after some time it becomes annoying. Move this to x:416.
01:01:128 (9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Weird stream again.

I need to stop pointing these out. There is plenty more up ahead but you should fix them for yourself from now on.

01:10:342 (5,6,7) - This pattern is boring for CtB since you only see vertical sliders. (5) x:208, (6) x:96, (7) x:320.
01:22:128 (5) - 01:22:556 is a good point for HDash. How about separate this slider into a slider and circle then add a HDash between them?
01:24:163 (6) - x:448
01:24:592 (2) - x:64
01:35:735 (8) - Middle?
01:44:092 (1) - Delete this please. Its useless and too short.

Long mod and my hands are hurting. o.o I would like to test some patterns here for you but due to my hands I can't. q.q Just take some pattern from already ranked or bubbled CtB diff and keep you style along with them.
[]

Nice spread. There are some weird things which needs to be corrected but the spread itself is good. I'm looking forward for your next work. Good luck and star. o/
Topic Starter
rew0825
Thank you for all mods ^^
roufou
00:19:985 k
00:20:842 d k d (1/1)
00:33:699 d
00:29:842 k
00:45:270 k
01:16:770 add a k here
01:17:842 k
01:18:270 d d k
01:21:699 k d k[/box

00:23:842 kdk
01:03:378 k
01:06:699 dkkkd
01:10:128 dkdkk

for some reason I can't quite figure the muzu mod doesn't show up in the mod, but it should when you quote the post
Topic Starter
rew0825
Agu wrote:

00:19:985 k ok
00:20:842 d k d (1/1) ok
00:33:699 d ok
00:29:842 k ok
00:45:270 k ok
01:16:770 add a k here ok
01:17:842 k ok
01:18:270 d d k ok
01:21:699 k d k ok
00:37:235 remove ok
01:03:699 dkk ok
01:10:770 dkk ok
00:23:842 kdk I think this kdd
01:03:378 k No,But I think add 1:03:592 d
01:06:699 dkkkd ok but It's dkk d
01:10:128 dkdkk ok but It's dkd k

Thank you :)
ts8zs
-5ms? offset 7123?
[Oni]
volume 70%?
00:20:413 (36,37,38,39,40) - kkddk
00:23:842 (55,56,57) - kdk?
00:27:485 (75) - k
00:34:199 - 1/6
00:37:663 (135,137,139) - del
01:24:699 (10) - k
01:28:985 (19) - k
[Muzu]
I couldn't help._.
Topic Starter
rew0825

ts8zs wrote:

-5ms? offset 7123? No
[Oni]
volume 70%? Ok
00:20:413 (36,37,38,39,40) - kkddk Ok
00:23:842 (55,56,57) - kdk? Ok
00:27:485 (75) - k Ok
00:34:199 - 1/6 Ok
00:37:663 (135,137,139) - del Ok
01:24:699 (10) - k Ok
01:28:985 (19) - k Ok
[Muzu]
I couldn't help._. No ploblem ^^
Keleron
✖I only correct sound's errors , but isn exist sounds
http://puu.sh/aLUqi/7f59ffceb0.rar Use this .mp3

Cup
✖Really needs sounds
✖Please add sounds
✖Really needs NewCombos ;-;

00:07:985 (5) - non-existent note
00:44:199 (80) - non-existent note
00:48:270 (89) - This "kai" is innecesary
00:49:985 (91) - move 1/2 to before
00:50:842 (92) - non-existent note
Salad
✖Really needs sounds too :l
✖Really needs NewCombos too D:<

00:16:556 (20) - non-existent note
00:58:556 (53,54,55) - Use normal sliders ( not dobles repeats )
01:12:270 (78,79) - the same
01:34:985 (118) - non-existent note
Platter
✖Really needs sounds too :l´
✔Have combos
00:07:770 (3,4) - slider
00:11:199 (2,3) - slider
00:14:842 (5) - non-existent note
00:37:770 (9,10,11) - A little more separated
00:42:485 (2,3,4) - the same
00:48:270 (1) - This innecesary time ... must be delete in all diff's
00:53:199 (4) - ctrl+g
00:58:556 (1,2,1) - re-make with simple sliders
01:12:270 (1,2,1) - The same
Rain
✖What! ... overdose of sounds.
00:12:485 (2,3,4) - more separate among themselves
00:13:342 (7,8,9) - the same
00:20:413 (7,8,9) - and the same
00:23:413 (8) - ctrl+g
00:42:485 (2,3,4) - separate~
01:01:556 (5) - here begin to move to left
01:12:270 (1,2) - really dont like this sliders repeated
01:17:413 (1,2,3) - +distance among themselves
01:19:556 (2,3,4) - +distance too
01:28:128 (6) - reduce the lenght of this slider in 1/4
01:35:628 (2,3,4) - +distance again
01:39:699 (1,2) - if you want in thats part a slider repeater use only 3 repeats :C NO 4!
Topic Starter
rew0825

Keleron wrote:

✖I only correct sound's errors , but isn exist sounds
http://puu.sh/aLUqi/7f59ffceb0.rar Use this .mp3

Cup
✖Really needs sounds
✖Please add sounds
✖Really needs NewCombos ;-;

00:07:985 (5) - non-existent note
00:44:199 (80) - non-existent note
00:48:270 (89) - This "kai" is innecesary
00:49:985 (91) - move 1/2 to before
00:50:842 (92) - non-existent note
Salad
✖Really needs sounds too :l
✖Really needs NewCombos too D:<

00:16:556 (20) - non-existent note
00:58:556 (53,54,55) - Use normal sliders ( not dobles repeats )
01:12:270 (78,79) - the same
01:34:985 (118) - non-existent note
Platter
✖Really needs sounds too :l´
✔Have combos
00:07:770 (3,4) - slider
00:11:199 (2,3) - slider
00:14:842 (5) - non-existent note
00:37:770 (9,10,11) - A little more separated
00:42:485 (2,3,4) - the same
00:48:270 (1) - This innecesary time ... must be delete in all diff's
00:53:199 (4) - ctrl+g
00:58:556 (1,2,1) - re-make with simple sliders
01:12:270 (1,2,1) - The same
Rain
✖What! ... overdose of sounds.
00:12:485 (2,3,4) - more separate among themselves
00:13:342 (7,8,9) - the same
00:20:413 (7,8,9) - and the same
00:23:413 (8) - ctrl+g
00:42:485 (2,3,4) - separate~
01:01:556 (5) - here begin to move to left
01:12:270 (1,2) - really dont like this sliders repeated
01:17:413 (1,2,3) - +distance among themselves
01:19:556 (2,3,4) - +distance too
01:28:128 (6) - reduce the lenght of this slider in 1/4
01:35:628 (2,3,4) - +distance again
01:39:699 (1,2) - if you want in thats part a slider repeater use only 3 repeats :C NO 4!
Thank you for mods :)
MidSoul
hi/ from taiko modding queue

but before modding,

[General]



THIS OFFSET CORRUPT
plz set +40ms all difficulty.

No kds. I'll modding later.
Topic Starter
rew0825

MidSoul wrote:

hi/ from taiko modding queue

but before modding,

[General]



THIS OFFSET CORRUPT
plz set +40ms all difficulty.

No kds. I'll modding later.
ok ^^ :)
Charlotte
Hi from Charlotte's Taiko Modding Queue

d
k
D(big d)
K(big k)

Gene

offset is not correct?

Ctrl + Shift + A=AI mod

*preview point = all unified

*Song Set up→Design→Widescreen Support& Display epilepsy warning (uncheck)

*Audio bit rate 192kbps↑. but I do not know.

Song Setup→Audio→soft ×→Normal ○

00:48:304 - add kiai line

Speed ​​change is not needed? (all diff)

Kantan

SV1.4→1.2

00:14:025 (14) - delete
00:27:739 (38) - ^
00:34:596 (50) - ^

Futsuu

SV1.4→1.2

1/2 triple pattern is often.

00:35:458 - 00:44:456 - Does not match. think again
00:44:882 (34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42) - 1/2 long. change short pattern.

for examle

00:59:025 (78) - move to 00:59:242 -
00:59:453 (79) - delete

Muzukashii

1/2 pattern long~ :(

00:56:873 - 01:01:382 - 1/2 very long.change short pattern.
01:38:031 - 01:42:531 - 1/2 very long.change short pattern.

Oni

1/4 kkkdK→change kkd K
1/4 kdkdK→change kdk K

Good luck :)
Topic Starter
rew0825

Charlotte wrote:

Hi from Charlotte's Taiko Modding Queue

d
k
D(big d)
K(big k)

Gene

offset is not correct?

Ctrl + Shift + A=AI mod

*preview point = all unified

*Song Set up→Design→Widescreen Support& Display epilepsy warning (uncheck)

*Audio bit rate 192kbps↑. but I do not know.

Song Setup→Audio→soft ×→Normal ○

00:48:304 - add kiai line

Speed ​​change is not needed? (all diff)

Kantan

SV1.4→1.2

00:14:025 (14) - delete
00:27:739 (38) - ^
00:34:596 (50) - ^

Futsuu

SV1.4→1.2

1/2 triple pattern is often.

00:35:458 - 00:44:456 - Does not match. think again
00:44:882 (34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42) - 1/2 long. change short pattern.

for examle

00:59:025 (78) - move to 00:59:242 -
00:59:453 (79) - delete

Muzukashii

1/2 pattern long~ :(

00:56:873 - 01:01:382 - 1/2 very long.change short pattern.
01:38:031 - 01:42:531 - 1/2 very long.change short pattern.

Oni

1/4 kkkdK→change kkd K
1/4 kdkdK→change kdk K

Good luck :)
Thank you very much
[I]MMoRTal[S]
มายิงดาว ~ :D
Topic Starter
rew0825
ขอบคุณมากพี่ = ="
qoot8123
hi :) requested via queue

[ Kantan]

  1. 00:12:739 (11,13) - compare the vocal's accent and pitch, i prefer to reverse these notes
  2. 00:24:310 (31) - how about move this note to 00:23:882 - ? because the vocal and instrument are pretty powerful on 00:23:882 -
  3. 00:50:882 (78,79) - reverse? i think it is more suitable for song
  4. 01:32:025 (148,149) - ^
  5. 01:08:025 (108) - change to k? also more suitable for vocal imo
  6. 01:15:310 - add note here because only have 2/1 pattern on 01:12:310 - ~ 01:15:739 - is a bit boring for me



[ Futsuu]

General
:idea: Although this song only have 140 bpm, but i still feel this futsuu is a bit hard, because of continuous 1/2+1/1 pattern try to reduce some notes and then make some 2/1 break would be better
:idea:00:07:167 - ~ 00:48:310 - , the notes are as intense as kiai,you might reduce continuous 1/2+1/1 notes




[ Muzukashii]

  1. 00:07:810 (4,5) - move to 00:10:382 - to make 1/4+1/2 pattern more short and let player play 1/4 notes more easier
  2. 00:11:239 (18,19) - move to 00:13:810 - if you fixed the above one
  3. 00:14:668 (31,32) - remove , the reason is same as above
  4. 00:16:382 (40,41,42,43,44,45) - try this? it is better to reflect the song imo
  5. 00:21:096 (2,1) - remove? to make a consistency with 00:24:310 (13,14,15) -
  6. 00:22:596 (5) - remove and change 00:23:025 (7) - to k to make the pattern shorter
  7. 00:25:489 (17,20) - remove, 1/4+1/2 pattern is a bit hard for muzu, and if you remove them the diff spread will be more even
  8. 00:28:918 (33) - ^
  9. 00:29:453 (36) - ^
  10. 00:29:668 (37) - change to k if you fixed the above one
  11. 00:30:739 (43) - change to k? to make a consistency with 00:23:882 (12) - and 00:27:739 (29) -
  12. 00:36:846 (8,9) - remove, the reason is same as 00:25:489 (17,20) -
  13. 00:39:203 (19,22) - ^
  14. 00:42:632 (35,38,39) - ^
  15. 01:08:025 (132) - change to k? more fit for vocal




[ Oni]

  1. 00:09:096 (11) - remove this note, you use too many continuous 1/4+1/2 pattern ,make a break might be better
  2. 00:17:668 (21) - ^
  3. 00:19:168 (28,31) - ^
  4. 00:19:596 (30,36) - change to k if you fixed the above one
  5. 00:20:560 (37,38,39) - remove, same as 00:09:096 (11) -
  6. 00:22:596 (48) - ^
  7. 00:24:525 (59) - ^
  8. 00:26:025 (66) - ^
  9. 00:26:453 (68,69) - reverse if you fixed the above one
  10. 00:27:953 (77) - remove, same as 00:26:025 (66) -
  11. 00:29:453 (84) - ^
  12. 00:32:882 (102) - ^
  13. 00:33:310 (104,105) - reverse if you fixed the above one
  14. 00:38:239 (133) - remove to make a consistency with 00:34:810 -
  15. 00:43:168 (154,155) - remove and change 00:42:953 (153) - to k , the reason is same as 00:09:096 (11) -
  16. 00:44:453 (161) - change to k to follow the vocal's accent
  17. 00:48:203 (187) - remove, big note on the end of 1/4 pattern is too hard to play
  18. 00:52:810 (3) - remove , to make a consistency with 00:49:382 -
  19. 00:56:239 (4,5) - ^
  20. 01:06:846 (5) - i know you follow the electronic sound, but you didn't follow it on other part, it is a bit unconsistent ,so i suggest you remove it
  21. 01:10:275 (5) - ^
  22. 01:15:739 - ~ 01:22:596 - make some break to differ the next part 01:22:596 - ~01:29:453 -


Kantan is well done futsuu and muzu need to make it easier, and oni uses too many continuous pattern so that needs some break to enhance some emphasis.
Good Luck :)
Topic Starter
rew0825

qoot8123 wrote:

hi :) requested via queue

[ Kantan]

  1. 00:12:739 (11,13) - compare the vocal's accent and pitch, i prefer to reverse these notes
  2. 00:24:310 (31) - how about move this note to 00:23:882 - ? because the vocal and instrument are pretty powerful on 00:23:882 -
  3. 00:50:882 (78,79) - reverse? i think it is more suitable for song
  4. 01:32:025 (148,149) - ^
  5. 01:08:025 (108) - change to k? also more suitable for vocal imo
  6. 01:15:310 - add note here because only have 2/1 pattern on 01:12:310 - ~ 01:15:739 - is a bit boring for me



[ Futsuu]

General
:idea: Although this song only have 140 bpm, but i still feel this futsuu is a bit hard, because of continuous 1/2+1/1 pattern try to reduce some notes and then make some 2/1 break would be better
:idea:00:07:167 - ~ 00:48:310 - , the notes are as intense as kiai,you might reduce continuous 1/2+1/1 notes




[ Muzukashii]

  1. 00:07:810 (4,5) - move to 00:10:382 - to make 1/4+1/2 pattern more short and let player play 1/4 notes more easier
  2. 00:11:239 (18,19) - move to 00:13:810 - if you fixed the above one
  3. 00:14:668 (31,32) - remove , the reason is same as above
  4. 00:16:382 (40,41,42,43,44,45) - try this? it is better to reflect the song imo
  5. 00:21:096 (2,1) - remove? to make a consistency with 00:24:310 (13,14,15) -
  6. 00:22:596 (5) - remove and change 00:23:025 (7) - to k to make the pattern shorter
  7. 00:25:489 (17,20) - remove, 1/4+1/2 pattern is a bit hard for muzu, and if you remove them the diff spread will be more even
  8. 00:28:918 (33) - ^
  9. 00:29:453 (36) - ^
  10. 00:29:668 (37) - change to k if you fixed the above one
  11. 00:30:739 (43) - change to k? to make a consistency with 00:23:882 (12) - and 00:27:739 (29) -
  12. 00:36:846 (8,9) - remove, the reason is same as 00:25:489 (17,20) -
  13. 00:39:203 (19,22) - ^
  14. 00:42:632 (35,38,39) - ^
  15. 01:08:025 (132) - change to k? more fit for vocal




[ Oni]

  1. 00:09:096 (11) - remove this note, you use too many continuous 1/4+1/2 pattern ,make a break might be better
  2. 00:17:668 (21) - ^
  3. 00:19:168 (28,31) - ^
  4. 00:19:596 (30,36) - change to k if you fixed the above one
  5. 00:20:560 (37,38,39) - remove, same as 00:09:096 (11) -
  6. 00:22:596 (48) - ^
  7. 00:24:525 (59) - ^
  8. 00:26:025 (66) - ^
  9. 00:26:453 (68,69) - reverse if you fixed the above one
  10. 00:27:953 (77) - remove, same as 00:26:025 (66) -
  11. 00:29:453 (84) - ^
  12. 00:32:882 (102) - ^
  13. 00:33:310 (104,105) - reverse if you fixed the above one
  14. 00:38:239 (133) - remove to make a consistency with 00:34:810 -
  15. 00:43:168 (154,155) - remove and change 00:42:953 (153) - to k , the reason is same as 00:09:096 (11) -
  16. 00:44:453 (161) - change to k to follow the vocal's accent
  17. 00:48:203 (187) - remove, big note on the end of 1/4 pattern is too hard to play
  18. 00:52:810 (3) - remove , to make a consistency with 00:49:382 -
  19. 00:56:239 (4,5) - ^
  20. 01:06:846 (5) - i know you follow the electronic sound, but you didn't follow it on other part, it is a bit unconsistent ,so i suggest you remove it
  21. 01:10:275 (5) - ^
  22. 01:15:739 - ~ 01:22:596 - make some break to differ the next part 01:22:596 - ~01:29:453 -


Kantan is well done futsuu and muzu need to make it easier, and oni uses too many continuous pattern so that needs some break to enhance some emphasis.
Good Luck :)
Thank you very much :)
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