he could've gotten a ticket to miku expo (if he converted it into USD) but he bought a gooner game with that money instead. at least he's using the game for good purposes and not professional gooner purposes
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Feedback time:
The chapter itself was all right on the weirdness scale, I didn't get the ending until I read through your explanation, and that's mostly on how fast you transition between scenes and frames. You put in too much information in frames, so there are issues with pacing. You can fit a lot more than simple dialogues within a single frame: some hesitation, reaction and a lot more to have it more presentable and, I guess, personal to the reader?
And you absolutely should use visual space (as shown in my example below) to make the reader read at the exact pace you want him to read to deliver the moment just so it feels more "right". This way conversations flow more naturally.
Well, you do use these and other techniques sometimes, so my advice is to use it more often.
I will try to implement this.
Oh, and the quality is only like that because you had to zoom out to take a screenshot of everything, right?
Since it's a CGDCT, I wasn't planning on having a storyline. Do you think I should?
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If I start a new chapter now (and I will), I'll definitely only finish it after university has already started, and I've never been to university before, so I don't know how difficult it will be or how much dedication is needed at the beginning. In this chapter, and especially in the next ones, expect releases to take much longer than a month. By the way, my course is Information Systems.
cute girls doing brainrot things
That or he's just trying stuff out, perhaps introducing a cast (?), before he gets on to the main story. It's only been 3 chapters after all.
Think of it like this way, since most of the interaction and storytelling happens in dialogues, the dialogues ARE the story. Meaning exposition has to be done there, everything they say has to be said for a reason.
For example, there are two character exposition points. Scyla says she's a large chest enjoyer and has a dream of amassing a harem. Both points go nowhere in the plot. You could have Scyla start his harem adventure by trying to impress Marco due to her having a rather large asset, and then her and samet exploit this by saying Class A is full of cuties. But seeing the principal, Scyla instead becomes her #1 fan and drops the harem idea completely.
Something like that.
looking at MAL it's true that there are anime tagged as CGDCT that I would not consider CGDCT at all
i think this is more a description of general observations in things qualified as cgdct, things that Happen To Define the media described by the genre rather than a commonly recognized necessity
to use something i imagine could be analogous, it might be a bit like how little features of linguistics could be defined within examples that colloquially mean something very loose and simple without necessarily being a complex deliberate Categorization (as in, using specific words that just happen to have a certain social or functional connotation, without trying/intending to identify the subjects/targets of those words as necessarily containing those connotations), except the ways in which those words or phrases are used would correlate with those categorized attributes and functions and effects, so if someone didnt catch onto how "normal" something is to say (as well as why that's "normal") and took something literally in a particular way, you might get a soecific definition of what something does that isn't really necessarily the stated or deliberate intent in saying it
...why am i abstracting this so much? it just doesnt feel direct... but i dont how to make what im thinking/meaning/saying into something more practical and concise;;
what i mean is, this is kind of like a wikipedia article on a thing that might define it by specific attributes, but people colloquially call a slice-of-life adjacent anime (with very similar casual comedic plots and personalities) without those core subjects of interest "cgdct" like how they might label a song's genre as "breakcore" instead of noting the attributes that might make it more historically similar to "jungle"
unsure if my suspicions are correct or applicable here, its more of something i would have intuited without really knowing what the definitive boundaries and qualities of cgdct are for myself, thats up to pata to answer i suppose
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Let's try not to derail the thread, please.
you have nobody to blame but me if this ends up going south
by the time i wake up tomorrow i'm more than sure corne would've deleted everything, so you've got nothing to worry about
by the time i wake up tomorrow i'm more than sure corne would've deleted everything, so you've got nothing to worry about
The threat is gone alreadysametdze wrote:
you have nobody to blame but me if this ends up going south
by the time i wake up tomorrow i'm more than sure corne would've deleted everything, so you've got nothing to worry about
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Chapter 2: community/forums/topics/1998785?n=54
Creation process: community/forums/topics/1998785?n=70
Creation process: community/forums/topics/1998785?n=70
I read thread instead of threat, lol.Corne2Plum3 wrote:
The threat is gone alreadysametdze wrote:
you have nobody to blame but me if this ends up going south
by the time i wake up tomorrow i'm more than sure corne would've deleted everything, so you've got nothing to worry about
Behrauder wrote:
Let's try not to derail the thread, please.
It's art.Behrauder wrote:
I read both back to back again today and didn't notice it at all.Behrauder wrote:
I didn't know if my way of making the shadow on the characters' necks was good, so I decided to remove it and get your feedback on what is better.
Feedback time:
The chapter itself was all right on the weirdness scale, I didn't get the ending until I read through your explanation, and that's mostly on how fast you transition between scenes and frames. You put in too much information in frames, so there are issues with pacing. You can fit a lot more than simple dialogues within a single frame: some hesitation, reaction and a lot more to have it more presentable and, I guess, personal to the reader?
And you absolutely should use visual space (as shown in my example below) to make the reader read at the exact pace you want him to read to deliver the moment just so it feels more "right". This way conversations flow more naturally.
Well, you do use these and other techniques sometimes, so my advice is to use it more often.
Topic Starter
Interesting, I hadn't thought of that. I guess I'm not very good with these things. The first time I read a manga was about 4 days before I started creating chapter 1, just to get an idea of how to do it. In fact, I only read a few random chapters of about 10 random mangas, lol.Kobold84 wrote:
It's art.Behrauder wrote:
I read both back to back again today and didn't notice it at all.Behrauder wrote:
I didn't know if my way of making the shadow on the characters' necks was good, so I decided to remove it and get your feedback on what is better.
Feedback time:
The chapter itself was all right on the weirdness scale, I didn't get the ending until I read through your explanation, and that's mostly on how fast you transition between scenes and frames. You put in too much information in frames, so there are issues with pacing. You can fit a lot more than simple dialogues within a single frame: some hesitation, reaction and a lot more to have it more presentable and, I guess, personal to the reader?
And you absolutely should use visual space (as shown in my example below) to make the reader read at the exact pace you want him to read to deliver the moment just so it feels more "right". This way conversations flow more naturally.
Well, you do use these and other techniques sometimes, so my advice is to use it more often.
I will try to implement this.
Oh, and the quality is only like that because you had to zoom out to take a screenshot of everything, right?
Hire me as an editor to find out more tips and tricks.Behrauder wrote:
Interesting, I hadn't thought of that. I guess I'm not very good with these things. The first time I read a manga was about 4 days before I started creating chapter 1, just to get an idea of how to do it. In fact, I only read a few random chapters of about 10 random mangas, lol.
I will try to implement this.
Yep.Behrauder wrote:
Oh, and the quality is only like that because you had to zoom out to take a screenshot of everything, right?
Also while I was doing the example page I noticed she has her eyes open slightly.
Remids me of this lol
Remids me of this lol
I had a feeling it was 3D from the get go, but that's an interesting style and process. Gives it some good character.
Idk why but abraker reminds me of osaka
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I also don't know why, but I agree.Aireunaeus wrote:
Idk why but abraker reminds me of osaka
how do you know this is my usual day?
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Because it's kind of predictable...- Marco - wrote:
how do you know this is my usual day?
Hey, the
bump
What for? Spare the poor Behrauder, it's been less than two weeks.Corne2Plum3 wrote:
bump
Wasn't it 1 chapter per week at the beginning?Kobold84 wrote:
What for? Spare the poor Behrauder, it's been less than two weeks.Corne2Plum3 wrote:
bump
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How would I do that? It's 8 pages per chapter (plus an extra)... I don't do this 24 hours a day (at most, 12 when time is running out, lol).Corne2Plum3 wrote:
Wasn't it 1 chapter per week at the beginning?Kobold84 wrote:
What for? Spare the poor Behrauder, it's been less than two weeks.Corne2Plum3 wrote:
bump
Topic Starter
I'll release the third chapter in a few minutes.
who here would have a skull as a hairpin e.e are you ripping me off
new characters, interested to see how this develops :>
new characters, interested to see how this develops :>
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The skull represents something else.Achromalia wrote:
who here would have a skull as a hairpin e.e are you ripping me off
new characters, interested to see how this develops :>
then i haven't a clue what or who it's for,,Behrauder wrote:
The skull represents something else.Achromalia wrote:
who here would have a skull as a hairpin e.e are you ripping me off
new characters, interested to see how this develops :>
Topic Starter
The third chapter of the OT! Manga Adaptation is out. Let me know your thoughts! 
Link <===============
Did you like it? I’m thinking of creating an anonymous Google poll so people can give feedback without any hesitation.
Behrauder wrote:
⚠ IMPORTANT THINGS, read carefully: ⚠
To see the manga, access it on a computer (not a cell phone), and set the zoom to 100% (it is not 100% by default). You should take these preventive measures to avoid the moire effect.
If you don't know what the moire effect is, it's when there is a strange unwanted pattern due to something to do with pixel overlap or something like that (which makes several manga look strange at some zooms other than 100%), but it is better explained here: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Moir%C3%A9_pattern
The manga reading order is from right to left, and top to bottom.
Link <===============
Did you like it? I’m thinking of creating an anonymous Google poll so people can give feedback without any hesitation.
ONLY CLICK HERE IF YOU HAVE ALREADY READ CHAPTER 3:
My main challenge in this chapter was trying to make Scyla unfunny, but in a funny way.
There's a skull on Scyla's head to represent death/bad things (locked threads, shitposts, etc.).
Scyla is wearing pajamas and a magical girl bow because this is something I could definitely imagine Scyla wearing in real life, lol.
My main challenge in this chapter was trying to make Scyla unfunny, but in a funny way.
There's a skull on Scyla's head to represent death/bad things (locked threads, shitposts, etc.).
omg the blue hair... it's her isn't she?
What innocent talented Brazilian we got here, unlike that dirty crime doing cartel over there named Polyspora
scyla oh god
wwhy is scyla more brainrotted than me in this
and what was with that looney tunes "get moved to A class trick" lol
and what was with that looney tunes "get moved to A class trick" lol
Nice, I can clearly see the improvement over the last chapters. Has it already been a month?
Would there be a storyline?
Also, two sighs sighted.
Would there be a storyline?
Also, two sighs sighted.
yay very cool
oh
wait it's already chapter 3 ?????
Topic Starter
Thank you! It was all thanks to your feedback here: community/forums/topics/1998785?n=84Kobold84 wrote:
Nice, I can clearly see the improvement over the last chapters. Has it already been a month?
Would there be a storyline?
Also, two sighs sighted.
Since it's a CGDCT, I wasn't planning on having a storyline. Do you think I should?
Thanks, I guess...Reyalp51 wrote:
i lost braincells
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If I start a new chapter now (and I will), I'll definitely only finish it after university has already started, and I've never been to university before, so I don't know how difficult it will be or how much dedication is needed at the beginning. In this chapter, and especially in the next ones, expect releases to take much longer than a month. By the way, my course is Information Systems.
is it CGDCT?, they're not doing any specific cute thing. This is more a comedy school manga
What they're doing is inherently cute because they're cute girls.
not how it works, for a manga to be CGDCT the girls must be heavily invested on a specific subject, most often than not joining the school club for that niche activityYmir wrote:
What they're doing is inherently cute because they're cute girls.
I'm not refuting because I don't watch that genre
@Behrauder do something
@Behrauder do something
oh yeah lol it is in the op then it is actually a mistake or there was a change of plans somewhereYmir wrote:
I'm not refuting because I don't watch that genre
@Behrauder do something
I'm assuming he also didn't really get the criteria for CGDCT.Patatitta wrote:
oh yeah lol it is in the op then it is actually a mistake or there was a change of plans somewhereYmir wrote:
I'm not refuting because I don't watch that genre
@Behrauder do something
That or he's just trying stuff out, perhaps introducing a cast (?), before he gets on to the main story. It's only been 3 chapters after all.
Single chapter stories would work well. Both chapters 2 and 3 had the right idea to tie everything with the ending, but there's still not enough substance to plot itself.Behrauder wrote:
Thank you! It was all thanks to your feedback here: community/forums/topics/1998785?n=84Kobold84 wrote:
Nice, I can clearly see the improvement over the last chapters. Has it already been a month?
Would there be a storyline?
Also, two sighs sighted.
Since it's a CGDCT, I wasn't planning on having a storyline. Do you think I should?
Think of it like this way, since most of the interaction and storytelling happens in dialogues, the dialogues ARE the story. Meaning exposition has to be done there, everything they say has to be said for a reason.
For example, there are two character exposition points. Scyla says she's a large chest enjoyer and has a dream of amassing a harem. Both points go nowhere in the plot. You could have Scyla start his harem adventure by trying to impress Marco due to her having a rather large asset, and then her and samet exploit this by saying Class A is full of cuties. But seeing the principal, Scyla instead becomes her #1 fan and drops the harem idea completely.
Something like that.
Topic Starter
Interesting, I had thought about doing something like this but ended up not thinking any further about the idea.Kobold84 wrote:
Single chapter stories would work well. Both chapters 2 and 3 had the right idea to tie everything with the ending, but there's still not enough substance to plot itself.Behrauder wrote:
Thank you! It was all thanks to your feedback here: community/forums/topics/1998785?n=84Kobold84 wrote:
Nice, I can clearly see the improvement over the last chapters. Has it already been a month?
Would there be a storyline?
Also, two sighs sighted.
Since it's a CGDCT, I wasn't planning on having a storyline. Do you think I should?
Think of it like this way, since most of the interaction and storytelling happens in dialogues, the dialogues ARE the story. Meaning exposition has to be done there, everything they say has to be said for a reason.
For example, there are two character exposition points. Scyla says she's a large chest enjoyer and has a dream of amassing a harem. Both points go nowhere in the plot. You could have Scyla start his harem adventure by trying to impress Marco due to her having a rather large asset, and then her and samet exploit this by saying Class A is full of cuties. But seeing the principal, Scyla instead becomes her #1 fan and drops the harem idea completely.
Something like that.
I've watched some CGDCTs, and I think it fits the genre (there are similar animes marked as CGDCT on MyAnimeList). Maybe I'm wrong, but I don't think so. But yes, the main focus is comedy.Patatitta wrote:
oh yeah lol it is in the op then it is actually a mistake or there was a change of plans somewhereYmir wrote:
I'm not refuting because I don't watch that genre
@Behrauder do something
I'm sure you're wrongBehrauder wrote:
Interesting, I had thought about doing something like this but ended up not thinking any further about the idea.Kobold84 wrote:
Single chapter stories would work well. Both chapters 2 and 3 had the right idea to tie everything with the ending, but there's still not enough substance to plot itself.Behrauder wrote:
Thank you! It was all thanks to your feedback here: community/forums/topics/1998785?n=84Kobold84 wrote:
Nice, I can clearly see the improvement over the last chapters. Has it already been a month?
Would there be a storyline?
Also, two sighs sighted.
Since it's a CGDCT, I wasn't planning on having a storyline. Do you think I should?
Think of it like this way, since most of the interaction and storytelling happens in dialogues, the dialogues ARE the story. Meaning exposition has to be done there, everything they say has to be said for a reason.
For example, there are two character exposition points. Scyla says she's a large chest enjoyer and has a dream of amassing a harem. Both points go nowhere in the plot. You could have Scyla start his harem adventure by trying to impress Marco due to her having a rather large asset, and then her and samet exploit this by saying Class A is full of cuties. But seeing the principal, Scyla instead becomes her #1 fan and drops the harem idea completely.
Something like that.I've watched some CGDCTs, and I think it fits the genre (there are similar animes marked as CGDCT on MyAnimeList). Maybe I'm wrong, but I don't think so. But yes, the main focus is comedy.Patatitta wrote:
oh yeah lol it is in the op then it is actually a mistake or there was a change of plans somewhereYmir wrote:
I'm not refuting because I don't watch that genre
@Behrauder do something
looking at MAL it's true that there are anime tagged as CGDCT that I would not consider CGDCT at all
Topic Starter
Ok, I think I'll need to change the OP then.Patatitta wrote:
I'm sure you're wrongBehrauder wrote:
Interesting, I had thought about doing something like this but ended up not thinking any further about the idea.Kobold84 wrote:
Single chapter stories would work well. Both chapters 2 and 3 had the right idea to tie everything with the ending, but there's still not enough substance to plot itself.Behrauder wrote:
Thank you! It was all thanks to your feedback here: community/forums/topics/1998785?n=84Kobold84 wrote:
Nice, I can clearly see the improvement over the last chapters. Has it already been a month?
Would there be a storyline?
Also, two sighs sighted.
Since it's a CGDCT, I wasn't planning on having a storyline. Do you think I should?
Think of it like this way, since most of the interaction and storytelling happens in dialogues, the dialogues ARE the story. Meaning exposition has to be done there, everything they say has to be said for a reason.
For example, there are two character exposition points. Scyla says she's a large chest enjoyer and has a dream of amassing a harem. Both points go nowhere in the plot. You could have Scyla start his harem adventure by trying to impress Marco due to her having a rather large asset, and then her and samet exploit this by saying Class A is full of cuties. But seeing the principal, Scyla instead becomes her #1 fan and drops the harem idea completely.
Something like that.I've watched some CGDCTs, and I think it fits the genre (there are similar animes marked as CGDCT on MyAnimeList). Maybe I'm wrong, but I don't think so. But yes, the main focus is comedy.Patatitta wrote:
oh yeah lol it is in the op then it is actually a mistake or there was a change of plans somewhereYmir wrote:
I'm not refuting because I don't watch that genre
@Behrauder do something
Where exactly is it stated that the girls must focus on a specific niche? Is it just a personal take or something generally agreed upon?
i would probably guess neither, in a sense... i do think you could argue for either, more likely the former, but i say "neither" because "personal take" seems like a very imprecise picture with some omissions of contexts that i imagine could justify how that definition of cgdct is being usedYmir wrote:
Where exactly is it stated that the girls must focus on a specific niche? Is it just a personal take or something generally agreed upon?
i think this is more a description of general observations in things qualified as cgdct, things that Happen To Define the media described by the genre rather than a commonly recognized necessity
to use something i imagine could be analogous, it might be a bit like how little features of linguistics could be defined within examples that colloquially mean something very loose and simple without necessarily being a complex deliberate Categorization (as in, using specific words that just happen to have a certain social or functional connotation, without trying/intending to identify the subjects/targets of those words as necessarily containing those connotations), except the ways in which those words or phrases are used would correlate with those categorized attributes and functions and effects, so if someone didnt catch onto how "normal" something is to say (as well as why that's "normal") and took something literally in a particular way, you might get a soecific definition of what something does that isn't really necessarily the stated or deliberate intent in saying it
...why am i abstracting this so much? it just doesnt feel direct... but i dont how to make what im thinking/meaning/saying into something more practical and concise;;
what i mean is, this is kind of like a wikipedia article on a thing that might define it by specific attributes, but people colloquially call a slice-of-life adjacent anime (with very similar casual comedic plots and personalities) without those core subjects of interest "cgdct" like how they might label a song's genre as "breakcore" instead of noting the attributes that might make it more historically similar to "jungle"
unsure if my suspicions are correct or applicable here, its more of something i would have intuited without really knowing what the definitive boundaries and qualities of cgdct are for myself, thats up to pata to answer i suppose
my reference for CGDCT is k-on, koisuru asteroid, DIY, hoshikuzu telepath, bocchi the rock, etc. It's something generally agreed uponYmir wrote:
Where exactly is it stated that the girls must focus on a specific niche? Is it just a personal take or something generally agreed upon?
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Basically, because of university, I'm moving to another city soon. My computer is there now, but I'm not. Because of that, I can't work on chapter 4 for about 3 weeks. Sorry... 
np
damn sucks, moving can be tough
It's common for manga to be on hiatus.
o7