General
--If you going to put "Yui" as a tag, you might as well put "Hirasawa" as well lol. Also, "K-On!" should be all caps if I recall correctly (e.g. "K-ON!")
--hitsounds are really loud... you should lower the volume a bit
--Set Preview point
--I wuold rather map all difficulties to the same place... easy and normal end a little earlier..
--Please use Distance snapping before you randomly place jumps. It just makes it really hard to read if so many jumps and anti-spacings are just so unpredictable.
--also, try not to overlap so much..
Extreme
--I would really rather you stack notes better and spend a little more time on the shapes that you make :/ it looks kinda ugly right now. However, i do praise you for your spacing, for it is actually fun to play imo (K-ON!! <3)
--SV Changes are a little weird
00:11:969 (3,4,5,6,7) - i don't like this cluster of notes very much. I'd rather have it in a curve or a straight line
00:36:629 (1,1,2,3,4,5) - this was actually a little hard to read at first because i was exactly sure when that note came after the spinner, and then i just get disoriented, espeically since it doesn't follow anything in the music
00:38:795 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - space out more?
00:41:127 (10,1) - i would space out a little more
01:01:455 (6,7,8,9,10) - i would rather follow vocals more here..
01:23:116 (6) - new combo
01:29:447 (x) - add note
01:33:446 (6,7,8,9,10) - i would rather follow vocals more :/
01:45:443 (8) - new combo
01:45:110 (7,8) - space out a little more.
Hard
--I would refrain from using so many spacing changes in the easier difficulties, even in this "hard" diff
--the hitsounds start to seem kinda random later on in the song...
--SV changes are a little odd too in this diff.
00:13:968 (x) - add a note stacked on top of combo 7
00:15:135 (12,1,2,3,4) - I would much rather you stick with your spacing, this sudden spacing change doesn't make sense.
00:20:800 (2,3,1) - ^
00:23:132 (1) - i wouldn't really change SV here
00:28:797 (7,1) - spacing
00:29:797 (2,3,4,5,6) - i would folow vocals more rather than making your own drum beat.
00:34:629 (x) - add note
00:40:128 (7) - new combo
00:40:461 (1) - remove combo
00:44:460 (x) - add note
00:47:459 (9,10) - space out a little better?
00:50:791 (5,1) - ^
00:54:790 (1,2,3) - spacing
00:55:498 (4,5) - these notes are snapped very oddly. put them on the red/white ticks
00:55:832 (5,6,7) - i would space out more equally :/
00:56:831 (1,2) - ^ also, these notes are snapped on 1/8, which is just like no.
00:57:789 (4) - new combo
01:01:288 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - folow vocals a little more?
01:03:121 - why did you map this part?? no other diff has this part mapped, either you map this in all diffs or delete this. it doesn't really make much sense to me being there.
01:12:910 (1,2,3,4) - the snapping is weird.. and the notes don't really follow the music very well... idk what this is even trying to follow
01:13:743 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this stream of six is just weird, and the first three notes are not snapped properly... streams usually come in odd numbers, this is just awkward and the music does provoke something like this (you shuold just delete that whole section... since no other diff has it mapped..)
01:37:778 (5) - new combo?
01:40:444 (5) - new combo?
Normal
--try no to overlap. some of the overlaps looks a little weird and could make it hard for beginners to read.
00:18:300 (1) - remove combo
00:18:300 (1,2,3,4,5) - all of these 1/2 tick notes are very weird and don't follow the music very well. THey fit better on white ticks.
00:29:464 (4) - you can do something a lot more interesting rather than repeating this so many times >_>
Easy
00:27:298 (1,2) - spacing
00:35:296 (x) - add note
00:55:790 - why is an awkward space here...? lol
00:56:956 (3) - start slider at 00:57:456 and end in the same place as before
01:15:118 (1,2) - spacing
01:26:781 (5) - new combo
01:29:447 (2) - you should start the slider here and add a note at 01:29:114 -
sorry, i can't star this at the moment. feel free to post on my queue if you want a recheck.
hope this helps~
--If you going to put "Yui" as a tag, you might as well put "Hirasawa" as well lol. Also, "K-On!" should be all caps if I recall correctly (e.g. "K-ON!")
--hitsounds are really loud... you should lower the volume a bit
--Set Preview point
--I wuold rather map all difficulties to the same place... easy and normal end a little earlier..
--Please use Distance snapping before you randomly place jumps. It just makes it really hard to read if so many jumps and anti-spacings are just so unpredictable.
--also, try not to overlap so much..
Extreme
--I would really rather you stack notes better and spend a little more time on the shapes that you make :/ it looks kinda ugly right now. However, i do praise you for your spacing, for it is actually fun to play imo (K-ON!! <3)
--SV Changes are a little weird
00:11:969 (3,4,5,6,7) - i don't like this cluster of notes very much. I'd rather have it in a curve or a straight line
00:36:629 (1,1,2,3,4,5) - this was actually a little hard to read at first because i was exactly sure when that note came after the spinner, and then i just get disoriented, espeically since it doesn't follow anything in the music
00:38:795 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - space out more?
00:41:127 (10,1) - i would space out a little more
01:01:455 (6,7,8,9,10) - i would rather follow vocals more here..
01:23:116 (6) - new combo
01:29:447 (x) - add note
01:33:446 (6,7,8,9,10) - i would rather follow vocals more :/
01:45:443 (8) - new combo
01:45:110 (7,8) - space out a little more.
Hard
--I would refrain from using so many spacing changes in the easier difficulties, even in this "hard" diff
--the hitsounds start to seem kinda random later on in the song...
--SV changes are a little odd too in this diff.
00:13:968 (x) - add a note stacked on top of combo 7
00:15:135 (12,1,2,3,4) - I would much rather you stick with your spacing, this sudden spacing change doesn't make sense.
00:20:800 (2,3,1) - ^
00:23:132 (1) - i wouldn't really change SV here
00:28:797 (7,1) - spacing
00:29:797 (2,3,4,5,6) - i would folow vocals more rather than making your own drum beat.
00:34:629 (x) - add note
00:40:128 (7) - new combo
00:40:461 (1) - remove combo
00:44:460 (x) - add note
00:47:459 (9,10) - space out a little better?
00:50:791 (5,1) - ^
00:54:790 (1,2,3) - spacing
00:55:498 (4,5) - these notes are snapped very oddly. put them on the red/white ticks
00:55:832 (5,6,7) - i would space out more equally :/
00:56:831 (1,2) - ^ also, these notes are snapped on 1/8, which is just like no.
00:57:789 (4) - new combo
01:01:288 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - folow vocals a little more?
01:03:121 - why did you map this part?? no other diff has this part mapped, either you map this in all diffs or delete this. it doesn't really make much sense to me being there.
01:12:910 (1,2,3,4) - the snapping is weird.. and the notes don't really follow the music very well... idk what this is even trying to follow
01:13:743 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this stream of six is just weird, and the first three notes are not snapped properly... streams usually come in odd numbers, this is just awkward and the music does provoke something like this (you shuold just delete that whole section... since no other diff has it mapped..)
01:37:778 (5) - new combo?
01:40:444 (5) - new combo?
Normal
--try no to overlap. some of the overlaps looks a little weird and could make it hard for beginners to read.
00:18:300 (1) - remove combo
00:18:300 (1,2,3,4,5) - all of these 1/2 tick notes are very weird and don't follow the music very well. THey fit better on white ticks.
00:29:464 (4) - you can do something a lot more interesting rather than repeating this so many times >_>
Easy
00:27:298 (1,2) - spacing
00:35:296 (x) - add note
00:55:790 - why is an awkward space here...? lol
00:56:956 (3) - start slider at 00:57:456 and end in the same place as before
01:15:118 (1,2) - spacing
01:26:781 (5) - new combo
01:29:447 (2) - you should start the slider here and add a note at 01:29:114 -
sorry, i can't star this at the moment. feel free to post on my queue if you want a recheck.
hope this helps~