1. Easy (1.86 stars, 98 notes)
2. Hard (4.88 stars, 233 notes)
3. Insane (4.98 stars, 232 notes)
4. Normal (3.71 stars, 119 notes)

Selee wrote:

Timing:
BPM: 180.050
Offset: 6721

Ekaru wrote:

'K, you look like you need some guidance with the Approach Rates. Try setting them to these:

Extreme: 9 or 8
Hard: 7 or 8
Normal: 5 to 6
Easy: It's fine as it currently is

I'm going to do a full-fledged mod in the morning, but I feel that you must correct this issue first; as it stands, your approach rates for Normal and above are just too much. Like, way too much. But again, don't worry; I'll do a better, full mod in the morning.

spboxer3 wrote:

[General]
bpm is not fit in this song? or...you change song and didn't remember change offset?

oh right!
i forgot to change the offset..

and I don't accept WIP map...
you need change your offset and if you need. post in my mod queue again!
offset:6804
oh!
thanks a lot...
now i don't have any trouble finding and changing offsets again : D

[Easy]
BPM also 180.5 don't change it! changed (at first i think it's okay to keep half bpm.... thanks for telling me)

[Hard]
because you have false offset so...I just mod your note (remapped nearly 3/4 of the map..)

00:06:706 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - look like random. fix it(so hard...)
00:20:147 (10,1) - not good
00:22:147 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
00:28:312 (5,2) - stack
00:31:477 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ... you need let it stright
00:43:807 (13,14,15,16,17,18) - ...rhythm problem
00:46:140 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - what's this w(ﾟﾛﾟ;w(ﾟﾛﾟ)w;ﾟﾛﾟ)w?
00:56:845 (1,2) - ...rhythm problem
you have many big problem... you should need have more experience mapper to help you.

Ruish wrote:

Overall: Why is the timing on easy not the same as the other difficulties?
- Use AImod. You should have almost no spacing errors in easy and normal.
- Looks like you forgot to move some stuff after changing the offset

-oh thanks..... (really, i never know there are things like AImod)
-much worse than that... i forgot to change the offset after i fixed the mp3 : (


Easy
- Please no 1/4 in easy should be gone when you change bpm
- lots of spacing problems through out the map. Please use distance snap and I usually use level 4 grid to fix the problem.
- don't change the spacing in easy
00:29:300 (1) - move it somewhere so it's not behind the slider (done)
00:20:729 (7) - repeat? (i make a new note at (00:21:299)
00:22:048 (1) - extend this one until white line?(done)
00:24:355 (2) - start on next white line?(moved into the red line instead)
00:29:300 (1) - move please (done)
00:32:597 (5) - i would extend this to white to match the length of the previous sliders (didn't do it.. sorry)

00:34:905 (6) - i think it's hard to time this beat (deleted the notes)
00:38:366 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - white tick?(done)
00:43:147 (1) - start on red tick?(done)
01:19:081 (4) - feels like it should start on the white tick before. Maybe end on 2nd blue tick and use a return arrow?(done)


Normal
- This is actually a hard difficulty
- no jumps or blue ticks in normal (oh man... i was hoping i can make even a short and few of them)
- I will try to mod this as a hard
- fix spacing please
eg. 00:44:886 (3), 00:52:053 (7), 01:16:052 (1),
(there are still jumps left... nearly done)

00:23:882 (4) - put on same grid as 1?(done)
00:27:053 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - this pattern here is really off(maybe i'll make another flower pattern)
00:35:553 (2) - move somewhere more visible please(i rotated the (3) so it becomes visible)
00:43:219 (1) - Not enough recovery time (shortened the spinner)
01:01:386 (3,4,5,6) - i think they should be moved right starting on the red tick(it becomes white tick after i changed the offset : D)
01:31:364 (1) - recovery (moved the next note two ticks ahead)

Hard(i remapped almost 3/4 of this map..)
- increase circle size a bit? :/
- soooo many jumps..feels like an insane lol
- lots of spacing problems
- suggest decreasing slider velocity a bit
eg. 00:12:219 (13),

- 00:37:712 (1) - spinner recovery time...





I'm going to sleep right now..I'll finish modding this tomorrow. Fix your spacing then i'll give you a star .

Mithost wrote:

From my modding queue.

Easy difficulty
Some sliders started early. This is probably an easy fix, just move them down so they land on the beat the syllable starts on. There was a really quick spinner that was too quick and hard to determine for an easy diff. A few little spacing errors that would get picked up by a nazi mod, but nothing huge. It's a good difficulty, but some variation in the hitsounds and some timing fixes could make this map even better.
hmm.. i just noticed... anyway.. thanks for telling me this : D

Normal Difficulty
My usual advice for normal maps is that they are 3 1/2 stars to 4 stars, simply because of the difficulty jump. If this was someone's favorite song, they would want to play it from the time they start to the time they quit, and the difficulty jump here makes it hard for players to step up to. Assuming the player is at the level to play this, there are major spacing issues that when combined with the fast approach and slider speeds, make this chart hard to sightread (I failed this 3 times spite being able to do some insanes well). Lower the difficulty a bit to match the normal title, and fix some of your spacing issues. Use a finer grid level and use distance snap to resnap offsync notes.
oh well... maybe it's time to remap
hope not... maybe i'll remap this if there are another modder that asked this map to be remapped

Hard Difficulty
I can't stress how important proper spacing is with beatmaps. The hitsounds on the stacks made it hard to tell the other note even existed, and having my mouse speed changing from normal to super fast on what seemed to be a repeat of the melody is NEVER a good thing. Jumps and bad spacing are two different things, and it doesn't seem like you figured out when jumps are usually well placed.
now im changing it into some accelerated spacing : ) so no instant jump...

Extreme Difficulty
Hitsounds are important because it places an impression on the player that he or she has hit that note and did not miss it. The light cymbal hitsound was too quiet, that anyone playing at a lower volume or lower quality headphones (that don't pick up everything) would be deaf to the hitsounds. The chart itself was pretty good spacing wise, some nifty jumps, but some patterns had unnecessarily hidden stacks that made this chart a devil to read.
yes... im working on this to replace the inhuman jumps


Nice BG graphics, nice MP3 quality, and the charts got better as the difficulty rose. You don't have to listen to my advice, and I may be dead wrong, but I feel as if this needs a lot of work with spacing, hitsounds, and difficulty.

[Shalon] wrote:

Easy

00:18:800 (4) - New combo (done)
00:24:632 (2) - ^ (done)
00:27:298 (3) - ^(done)
00:29:297 (1,2,3,4) - Is this notes are really fit on song? (hmm.. maybe i better change it into long slider)

00:29:297 (1,2,3,) - move it one tick with 1/2(changed into slider : D)
00:31:463 (4) - move it at 00:31:297(done<-end of slider now)

00:32:630 (5) - new combo (done)
00:32:630 (5) - How about end this at 34:296? (since there are many long sliders maybe i think i better not do this)

00:36:212 (1) - replace it with slider. or make it more longer.(done)

00:40:128 (5) - new combo(done)

00:48:125 (5) - move it small upward. (View - grid level - 4) (done)
00:48:792 (1) - ^(done)

00:55:623 (3,4,5,6) - Out of sound.(oh sorry.. i forgot to remove that note)

01:15:118 (1) - make it more shorten.(done)

01:27:115 (5) - new combo(done)
01:28:947 (6) - make it more longer.(done)

01:31:280 (1) - move it at 01:31:447(done)
01:32:613 (2) - move it at 01:32:780(done)

Normal (<---remapped...everything...)
*AR is too fast for normal.
*How about use more bigger circle?
00:09:469 (5) - new combo
00:29:464 (4) - ^ , and end it at 00:30:797

about kiai time, so many notes are out of sound, and patterns are so irregular for normal diff.
Sorry for say like that, but in my opinion, it need remapping.
(remapped now : D)

Hard
00:08:136 (5) - new combo(done)
00:20:133 (10) - delete it.(done)
00:20:300 (1) - start it at 00:20:133(done)
00:22:299 (4,5) - ..well,.. delete it.(umm..i didn't do it... sorry)
and.. don't use 1.5x speed at hard. since this map's bpm is not low. (i think if i keep 1.0 it will be boring)
and, use more regular patterns. (i use jumps to make this map is less boring : ) and a little challenge...maybe..)
this map should be more complete to mod. so I'll and my mod at here.

Good luck.

Snowy Dream wrote:

[General]
choose a distance spacing, and use it in different diffs
every diff needs a normal distance spacing
Remember to turn this on


thanks...
easy and 85% of normal diff spacing has been fixed using distance spacing now

but i do some error spacing in hard and extreme in purpose



[Easy]
00:29:297 (2) - move to 00:29:464 (done)
00:41:461 (1) - reduce an arrow (done)
00:43:293 (1) - move to 00:43:460 (done)
00:47:126 (4) - move to 00:46:792 (done)
01:27:115 (1) - move to 01:26:781(done)
01:28:114 (x) - add a note added a slider
01:28:947 (3) - move to 01:29:447 added a slider
01:32:613 (2) - move to 01:32:780 (done)
01:33:613 (3) - move to 01:33:446 (done)
-------------------------------------------------
Spacing is a big problem
Now plz fix it first

Broetchen8441 wrote:

General/Overall: Use another sound-volume, 100% is too much - try like 40-70% ones.
Use Normal-hitsounds, sounds better at this.
Try using some more hitsounds when switching to normal-sampleset

Easy:

Broetchen is useless on easy-modding

I'm no good at easy-modding...
00:56:956 (3) - feels like beginning and ending in nothing... (hmm.. right.... i've changed the length of slider to make it follow the rythm)
01:27:115 (5) - ^ (same)
01:28:947 (6) - ^ (same)
01:33:613 (3) - move to 01:33:446 (done)

Normal:

Broetchen is pretty sure about that

00:17:634 (1) - redesign to 1/2-length-slider with one reverse-arrow (i've done it before... tested with vocal and drum rythm... and i think the drum rythm is better with this one)
00:46:459 (2) - add 1/2-length slider with one reverse-arrow(added)
00:47:126 (3) - add 1/2-length slider without reverse-arrow(added)
00:47:625 (4) - add 1/2-length slider with two reverse-arrows(added)
01:18:284 (2) - ^ (added)
01:19:117 (3) - add 1/2-length slider with one reverse-arrow(added)
01:19:617 (4) - add 1/2-length slider without reverse-arrow(added)
01:19:950 (5) - ^(added)
01:20:116 (which is the ending point of 5) - add finish (normal sampleset)(added)

Hard:

Broetchen feels so empty about this...

00:12:968 (3,4) - why silenced? sounds empty (umm... i add the whistle sound maybe... since the normal hitsoft sounds really low volume)
00:20:800 (2) - add note (added)
00:23:632 (3) - use kind of a 1-time-reverseslider with 1/4 (hmm..thanks a lot! works well with the song... maybe some of the slider i'll change it into small streams)

00:23:965 (4) - ^(added)
00:24:965 (8) - ^(added)
00:25:298 (9) - add note(added)

00:25:465 (10) - 1-time-reverseslider with 1/4(added)
00:30:297 (4) - add note(added)
00:30:464 (5) - ^(added)
00:30:630 (6) - ^(added)
00:30:797 (7) - ^(added)
00:30:880 (8) - ^(added)
00:30:963 (9) - place it under the last 2 added notes, so it's a tripplet-slider-combo(added)

- This feels so empty at too many parts, i think Normal sampleset will help alot (with like 40-70% volume), but you got to place more notes at some points... -

01:26:448 (8) - add note
01:26:615 (9) - ^(added)
01:44:276 (1) - ^(added)
01:44:610 (3) - ^(i didn't add it... but i added jump)
01:44:776 (1) - ^(same)
(Use the last ones as kind of row-minijump-row-combo)
Please notice for the not-mentioned parts: Try to make them feel less empty, using normal-sampleset and adding some notes here and there - guess other modders will tell you the same.

To the extreme one: Use Normal-sampleset for that aswell, like ~70% overall-volume and in the sections which aren't that loud like the rest is, reduce to ~30-40% instead of soft-sampleset or silencing.
Try using more hitsounds : x (hmm, the easiest way maybe is using custom hitsounds.... maybe i'll try working on it.. if not then i'll just go with volumes)

Stared anyway, this can result in a good map if you follow modders who know what they're talking about.