Zelos wrote:

Folder:
Everything is alrite. (I think) hope so... i got a reallyslow snaillike connection here

General:
Start your first kiai time at 00:44:126. (this is the part of the song that the kiai time would bring great emphasis too) okay
Start your second kiai time at 01:16:118 (^)okay
End the second kiai time on the white tick.okay

All difficulties should be mapped to the same length. (Its a short song so why not?) (okay, easy now have the same length as the other diff)

Easy:
Nothing here. (a tiny bit boring)
yeah...same here
Normal:
00:09:469 (7) - new combo here please.okay
00:17:467 (1) - move it down slightly. its touching the HP bar slightly. okay... maybe i'll just make the slider straight
00:20:133 (1) - remove new combo here. okay
00:31:797 (1) - remove new combo here. okay ...how can i didn't notice this
00:48:792 (5) - new combo here.okay
00:57:956 (1) - a spinner this short shouldn't really be used in a Normal.okay
01:19:617 (3,4) - this is a really ugly overlap of 2 sliders. Mainly because these sliders are too close for that. oh you're right, i'll rotate it...but it's still close...since the spaing is 0.80.

Hard:
Jeezus this is much more like an Insane then it is a Hard.
00:18:800 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - This pattern right here gets so confusing to look at. It just might be a bit hard for Hard players. okay, fixed the whole pattern
00:23:132 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - this part right here is also really hard for hard players. hmm... maybe i'll just fix the spacing and make it closer (spacing 1.0, before:1,6)
00:28:298 (4,5,6,7) - I don't see why you made this jump. There was no emphasis that lead up to it in the song nor does it make any sense anyway. okay... i'll stack these notes and the notes before it : )
00:39:128 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this part right here is also really confusing and just might be too hard for Hard players.removed the pattern....it just go zig zag and straight forward
00:44:126 (8) - new combo here please.okay
00:48:125 (9) - okay woah this is touching the HP bar way to much. this needs to be changed.ookay
01:01:455 (1,2,3,4) - try to make this triangle symmetrical at the very least.okay...(man i had to do math for this)
01:33:279 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - this star is a really fat star.okay... i make it skinnier
The difficulty factor is not consistent in this difficulty. It goes from somewhat hard - holy poot hard - back to somewhat hard. okay... i removed some of the pattern and make the spacing a little bit closer

Insane:
00:37:462 (5) - new combo here. okay
01:01:455 (6,7,8,9,10) - this star is very very fat. made it skinnier


Star.

poisonchan wrote:

Heeya :3 Modding your map as your request ^-^ ~ Hope it helps

[?] = Suggestions.
[!] = You NEED to change it.
[.] = If possible, change it.

General
The normal Difficulty has a different offset, the currently one is: 43460, it should be: 42460 according to the other diffs.


BPM: 180.00
Offset: 6,810
Remember to change the timing, and to resnap all notes. thanks for the offset

Easy

[Easy] Mod done WITH the changes on timing.
00:20:143 (3) - New combo ? okay
00:21:976 (1) - Move this slider a bit down, so wont touch the sides of the screen. [ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/121834 ] - Don't forget to change the spacing of the following combos.okay
00:24:632 (1) - This beat is too close from the previous one. Try to follow the 0.8x distance spacing. okay
00:27:298 (1) - ^okay
00:29:464 (2) - ^okay
00:32:630 (1) - ^okay
00:35:296 (2) - This beat is too far from the previous one. Try following the 0.8x distance spacing. (You might as well need to change this: 00:36:129 (3) - )okay....(i think all of them is good since the AImod doesn't show any errors)
00:38:461 (1) - ^. You will need to re-space the whole combo. okay
00:40:143 (1) - Remove new combo. Add a slider here till 00:40:476 and remove the 00:40:476 (2) - . okay
00:46:826 (4,5,6) - Follow the distance spacing. oh right...i just noticed it
00:48:809 (1) - This beat is too far from the previous one. Don't forget to change the whole combo.okay
00:57:456 (5) - ^fixed
00:59:456 (1) - ^fixed
01:01:476 (3) - Add a slider here till 01:02:143 (4) - ?i better not do it..i think the pattern of the notes will be harder for easy players to read
01:13:976 - Is this an error in the storyboard? oh well....that's...yeah....i'll fix it : (
01:15:143 (1) - Start this slider at: 01:15:476 okay
01:17:476 (2) - Move this slider to: 01:17:143 and make it repeat once ? Also, careful with the spacing.
Same thing for the whole combo ^.okay
01:20:810 (1) - Try to don't overlap those sliders (4-1), looks odd. Attention to the spacingfixed.

Normal

Normal
00:09:469 (7) - New combo. i already added it : )
00:12:135 (11) - New combookay
00:14:468 (4) - Add a beat on 00:14:468, and start the repeater slider at: 00:14:635 finishing at: 00:15:135.okay
00:20:133 (6) - New combo ?okay
00:23:466 (4) - ^okay
00:35:462 (4) - ^okay
00:45:793 (1) - Remove new combookay
00:46:459 (2) - New combookay
00:47:625 (4) - Add a beat at: 00:47:625 and one slider at: 00:47:792 till 00:48:125 ?okay
00:58:789 (7) - New combo ? okay
01:15:451 - Add a slider here till 01:15:784 ?okay
01:27:782 (4) - New combo ?okay
01:29:114 (6) - ^okay
01:36:778 (4) - New combo.
01:37:112 (1) - Remove new combo.
.01:38:112 (3) - New combo.
01:39:111 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:39:777 (2) - New combo.
01:40:777 (4) - New combo.
01:41:111 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:42:111 (3) - New combo.
01:43:110 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:43:776 (2) - New combo.
01:44:776 (4) - New combo.all new combo fixed, some of new combo i added myself : )

Hard

[Hard]
00:08:136 (1) - Remove new combo.okay
00:09:469 (4) - New combo.okay
00:11:136 (1) - Remove new combookay
00:11:802 (4) - New combo okay
00:12:302 (9) - New combookay
00:12:469 (1) - Remove new combo. okay
00:13:635 (5) - New combookay
00:17:634 (6) - New combookay
00:17:800 (1) - Remove new combo. okay
00:24:799 (7) - New combo.okay
00:39:128 (1) - Don't stack this note, looks odd. Dont forget to change the rest of the combo according to the spacing.okay
00:41:461 (9) - New combo.okay

- Ok, I'm not going to finish the mod in this diff, same as Normal and Easy: try to improve your sliders, also, follow the rhythm with the combo colours. Try remapping all the parts I mentioned, and improving your patterns and sliders, than ask me for a recheck okay. it'll be a while, but the map will be better when i ask you for recheck

Follow the same tips in [Extreme], about the sliders, distance spacing and the combo colours. Also, I recommend AR 7-8, instead of 9.okay, i'll change it into 8, hope its decent emough

Holoaz wrote:

[Timing]
BPM 180 already changed : )

[Easy]
00:17:467 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - this rhythm is hard for easy hmm.. okay.. i'll remove the notes, and change it into sliders then
00:38:461 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^ i'll remove the notes and change it into sliders...oh..i think i better leave only one note behing : )
00:38:794 (2,3) - hard look is due to the 00:36:129 (3) fixed

[Normal]
00:35:296 (x) - add note? (umm.. no..since the pattern of the notes and the rythm pattern did not match if i add the note here)

[Hard]
00:22:299 (4) - 1grid right fixed
00:41:461 (9,10,11,12) - I think this is really bad rhythmwell... at least it's better than adding a long slider, short spinners...or drain section...i think
01:27:448 (4) - add new combo?okay
01:33:446 (6) - ^okay

[Extream]
AR8 , OD7 is better for me i already changed the AR....but...OD 7 isn't it a bit cruel?... okay! i'll gladly change it : D
00:11:885 (x) - add note? (i think i better not... since there are no guitar rythm here)
00:16:134 (5) - remove whistle (umm.. no... it sounds a bit empty)
00:16:467 (7) - remove whistle at end(same)
00:17:467 (11) - remove whistle → add finishokay
00:56:456 (7) - stack on 00:56:123 (6) end?okay
00:57:456 (13) - remove note → 00:57:789 (1) - start at 00:57:456 umm...no...the pattern will be different (harder to predict)
01:01:455 (6) - new combo?okay
01:33:446 (6) - ^okay
01:34:779 - this timing line BPM is 1.0?hmm...you're right

good luck

Index-San wrote:

Mystica wrote:

Hi Hi ~ Here comes my mod

[general]
enable countdown umm. i think it's enabled alread

[Easy]
00:44:126 slider begin from here? i want to(and it's kiai time)...but the vocals didn't support it
01:16:118 ^ same
OD -1 okay

[Normal]
00:15:468 this part add some notes or sliders...Or it makes people feel break okay
00:54:124 you also use s-clap...So this part do so okay
01:02:788 end the kiai here okay (with new kiai time (changed bpm)

[Hard]
00:13:302 put the slider begin from here... okay
00:22:299 to 00:26:131 this part a little too crazy for a hard well, the notes spacing and the stacked notes made it not too hard...(i ve nerfed it too many times : ( ), hope it's not a problem to get this ranked
01:24:282 why use 1.50 here? because it is the last part....and the notes are not many as in the beggining

[extreme]
[color=#FF00FF]00:36:295 break feels bad added 1 note (i want to make here a drain section : D )
Ummm.....This diff you may do a lot 1/1..It makes this diff feels bad...Also Hard and Extreme sounds too noisy....
I think you may find someone to give you a example of the beat... lowered the volume a bit

Starrr for it.

1. The Source have to be 'K-ON!!' (More one '!')
2. Get a better mp3, It's a bit messy.
3. Make all your Preview Points consistent..
   
   Your preview points are..

   
4. Maybe Set Tick Rate 2 on the 2 harder diffs(?)
5. Snap Your timing Sections, that's the mainly reason of bubble pops

Katsuri wrote:

General

1. The Source have to be 'K-ON!!' (More one '!') im 100% positive the ! is just only one... since K-ON!! is for season 2.. and this song is from season 1... the only problem is the caps ... K-On! or K-ON!.....
2. Get a better mp3, It's a bit messy. i want to...but all i can find is Yoko Hikasa version....i was really lucky to find another replacement for the mp3 before this one (before this one is worse than this) : (
3. Make all your Preview Points consistent.. hmm... i thought i already fixed it : (
   
   Your preview points are..

   
4. Maybe Set Tick Rate 2 on the 2 harder diffs(?) okay
5. Snap Your timing Sections, that's the mainly reason of bubble pops

okay.. fixed (hope i didn't miss something)

Easy

00:14:143 (3) - This Kick Slider(Sliders with more than one repeat) is not recomended for the easier difficulty, I suggest you to remove it and add a slider with no repeats and 2 notes after it like.. okay



00:21:976 (1,1,1) - This slider starts on a Really bad point, because newbies will hit it half beat before. maybe i'll add a note one tick before it

00:43:476 (1) - Start the kiai while the slider is going is the worst thing of this difficulty, please do something like...
oh right! thanks

01:15:476 (1) - ^ fixed

Normal

Since, You can map better, these sliders and hidden patterns can really get improved.
Nothing to point as error. okay... remapped : )

Hard

00:34:477 (6) - Stack correctly it's really hard to stack end of sliders and a note : ( ... maybe it's better if i didn't stack it

00:34:810 (8) - New Combo okay

00:40:643 (5) - Stack Correctly it's really hard to stack end of sliders and a note : ( ... maybe i'll stack this note on the note after it

The best diff of your mapset.

Insane

00:10:476 (2) - Stack it with 00:09:476 (2) - ? okay

01:26:310 (3,4,5) - A stream fits here o: oh it works well, thanks...

The spacing makes the diff a bit messy. maybe i'll find something to change after getting mods from other people...even it's not in this diff : )

You have my star~

Katsuri wrote:

Now the Normal was remapped, It is too much better now, Good job but...

Normal

00:35:476 (1) - It's looking like a one-repeat-slider, because (2) is a jump, remove one repeat sounds good for me. hmm..okay


Hard

01:27:976 - Section unsnapped oh...right...i missed this one

Insane

00:44:143 - Section Unsnapped i think miss that one...
01:16:143 - ^ missed it too : (

1. 00:44:143 - Preview Point?
2. Why Extreme SV1.4? I think that you should change this speed

1. I think this to be name difficulty Insane
2. 00:30:143 (8) -
3. 00:47:143 (6,7,8,9) - I guess Hard read
4. 00:37:476 - like this
   

1. 00:33:477 (4) - remove clap and beginning finish
2. 00:34:810 (1) - ^
3. 00:36:143 (1) - remove whistle and beginning finish
4. 00:44:143 (1) - beginning finish
5. 00:54:809 (1) - ^

1. 00:10:476 (3) - 1grid right (Grid Level 4)
2. 00:21:143 (2,1) - near
3. 00:36:143 (2) - end finish
4. 00:52:143 (4,1) - near
5. 01:01:476 (5) - beginning finish
6. 01:02:476 (6) - end finish
7. 01:24:143 (4) - ^
8. 01:26:810 (2) - beginning finish
9. 01:34:476 (1,1) - spacing far
10. 01:45:143 (2) - move to 01:44:976 -

1. 00:06:810 (1) - beginning finish
2. 00:12:143 (1) - ^
3. 00:36:143 (3) - ^
4. 00:44:143 (3) - ^
5. 00:52:143 (4) - ^
6. 00:57:476 (5) - ^
7. 01:16:143 (3) - ^
8. 01:24:143 (4) - ^
9. 01:26:810 (1) - ^ Also this slider really ugly
10. 01:29:476 (3) - same
11. 01:44:143 (4) - end finish

S o r d a wrote:

hi there
thanks Req~

[overall]:

1. 00:44:143 - Preview Point? it's good...but something seems a bit strange...maybe i shouldn't change it...sorry : (
2. Why Extreme SV1.4? I think that you should change this speed maybe i should think over about it... it's to match the spacing and the slider speed (i don't want it too far, since there are toomany 1/2 hitnotes
   
   [Extreme]:
   
   1. I think this to be name difficulty Insane but-..but i like the name extreme...oh well...Changed the name into Insane XD
   2. 00:30:143 (8) - err... lemme guess.... new combo right : D ?
   3. 00:47:143 (6,7,8,9) - I guess Hard read fixed a bit... hope it's not too hard to read now
   4. 00:37:476 - like this okay
      
   [Hard]:
   
   1. 00:33:477 (4) - remove clap and beginning finish oh it works well.. thanks
   2. 00:34:810 (1) - ^ okay
   3. 00:36:143 (1) - remove whistle and beginning finishokay
   4. 00:44:143 (1) - beginning finishokay
   5. 00:54:809 (1) - ^okay
   [Normal]:
   
   1. 00:10:476 (3) - 1grid right (Grid Level 4) okay
   2. 00:21:143 (2,1) - near fixed
   3. 00:36:143 (2) - end finishokay
   4. 00:52:143 (4,1) - near fixed
   5. 01:01:476 (5) - beginning finishokay
   6. 01:02:476 (6) - end finishokay
   7. 01:24:143 (4) - ^okay
   8. 01:26:810 (2) - beginning finishumm. . . no..since the notes after is are using normals and claps
   9. 01:34:476 (1,1) - spacing farfixed...(how can i miss this : (... )
   10. 01:45:143 (2) - move to 01:44:976 okay-
   [Easy]:
   
   1. 00:06:810 (1) - beginning finish okay
   2. 00:12:143 (1) - ^okay
   3. 00:36:143 (3) - ^okay
   4. 00:44:143 (3) - ^okay
   5. 00:52:143 (4) - ^okay
   6. 00:57:476 (5) - ^okay
   7. 01:16:143 (3) - ^okay
   8. 01:24:143 (4) - ^okay
   9. 01:26:810 (1) - ^ Also this slider really ugly ohh...luckily i just got a new slider making technique...fixed XD
   10. 01:29:476 (3) - same^
   11. 01:44:143 (4) - end finish okay

That's All
Fight~

S o r d a wrote:

ah,sorry
forgot
Extreme
00:30:143 (8) - New combo

nokd Please

Megurine Luka wrote:

Hi. Mod time

[Easy]
I prefer circle size -1 AR -1 okayy..
00:46:810 (6) - try this okay
01:42:476 (3) - the slider looks a lit bit weird.okay. i'll make it less wierd : D

[Normal]
Also I prefer circle size -1okay, then...since the difficulty star is 4+ : (
I think it's noisy to use so many clap it's the normal hitsounds...anyway, i removed some of them (not much)
00:14:643 (5) - move to 00:14:809 and del one return umm.. the position can be fixed with this....but it doesn follow the vocal very well : (
00:22:643 (3) - move to 00:22:809 and short the slider okay
00:39:143 (2) - try this oh..it works well... thanks

[Hard]
00:15:643 (2) - spacing, nearer plz okay
00:17:309 (4) - ^okay
00:21:976 (2) - spacing oh this one i created it in purpose : D (and the anti-jumps to make it a little bit harder)
00:59:143 (1) - move to 00:59:143 err......
00:59:809 (2) - move to 01:00:143 i want it to make a pattern....but the vocals doesn't support it...
01:23:476 (3) - spacingi make it in purpose, since the slider after it had SV changes
01:25:143 (1) - move downokay.. moved down a bit
01:25:976 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - move down okay...
01:27:476 (1) - spacingit was a jump : D
01:29:476 (4) - spacing, move away from 3okay

Do not let your SV change affect your spacing okay

[Insane]
00:13:143 (4) - spacing okay(bend the slider a bit)
00:18:810 (1,2,3,4) - ^umm... it's 1.20-1.25, i don't see anything wrong
00:23:810 (4,5) - ^okay, (made it a bitfarther)
00:25:143 (3,4) - ^i better keep this, since im sure if i make it farther someone will nazi mod this
00:27:476 (2) - ^fixed
00:48:310 (1) - ^okay
00:53:810 (1) - OMG.. this jump is crazyi 'll fix it when i got a new technique XD
01:25:810 (1) - ^ ^
01:00:143 (4) - 2 grid left, 1 grid downFixed
01:26:226 (3,4,5,6,7) - spacing.. makes the stream looks smoothhope it's smoother now
01:32:143 (4) - one grid up, 2 grid rightFixed

It's better to open the distance snap even if you are working with your insane difficulty nooo.. the spacing is reaaaaallllllyyyy boring if i used the distance spacing XD
Star☆.
Good luck

winber1 wrote:

recheck

Insane sorry... im really sorry, but i've just remap it after i read your post.... since this diff got too many mistakes

--Yea many people probably already said this, and i may hav etoo, but you should try to make some shapes and your note placements more aesthetically pleasing, a lot of overlaps are just weird.

00:36:143 (4,5) - a little boring. you could try something like this if you want..:

SPOILER

[attachment=1:74991]screenshot104.jpg[/attachment:74991]

00:36:143 (4) - if you apply the above suggestion, please add a new combo here
00:37:643 (1) - and if you applied the above, remove this new combo
00:38:810 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - could you make better stars please? D:
00:40:143 (4) - new combo?
00:41:143 (7,1) - i wouldn't stack these :/
00:43:643 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - stack the start of the stream on top of combo 4, so it looks better.
00:44:810 (1) - remove combo
00:44:310 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - these stacks really mess up the flow imo. unstack them?
00:45:476 (8) - new combo
00:45:810 (1) - remove cmobo
00:46:143 (4) - stack this a little better (actually, i'd rather you unstack it, but i'm fine if you don't unstack)
00:46:976 (7) - delete note
00:46:810 (6) - new combo
00:47:143 (1) - remove combo
00:47:976 (x) - add note
00:46:810 (1,2,3,4) - after you apply the few above changes, you can turn these four notes into a square shape or something, possibly like this:

SPOILER

[attachment=0:74991]screenshot105.jpg[/attachment:74991]

i make the square shaped...but with sliders, since the speed now is a lot lot faster


00:52:143 (4,5) - stack these better
00:54:143 (2) - ok, so this SV change doesn't really make sense, especially since it's in the middle of the kiai and your slowing down all of a sudden. I would use 1.5x SV through out the song, you should go into the timing menu and change it.
00:53:810 (1,2) - spacing is weird. You should either space it out, or add a note at 00:53:976.
01:01:476 (1,2,3,4,5) - sorry, this is still a little off . if you want to make a perfect star, you can always, copy paste combo 1, Ctrl+r and rotate 72 degrees, copy paste combo 2 and Ctrl+r and rotate 72 degrees, etc. and you then select the five notes and move them around. I don't really use this method all that much, but you can if you want to make the star shape more perfect.
oh thanks a lot, now i can make a star now, XD


01:16:143 (7) - new combo and add a finish
01:16:310 (1) - remove combo and remove finish
01:16:810 (1) - remove combo
01:17:476 (5) - new combo
01:17:810 (1) - remove combo
01:18:810 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - consider using the same pattern as i previously mentioned. it just fits the music more imo. you also use the star shape way too much >_> you should make different shapes.
01:26:226 (3) - add a clap
01:26:643 (8) - add a clap at the beginning and a finish at the end
01:25:976 (2) - i would actually rather this be two notes instead of a slider, but that's up to you.
01:26:976 (9) - new combo
01:27:643 (1) - remove combo
01:28:143 (4) - new combo
01:33:476 (1,2,3,4,5) - more perfect star shape? done
01:45:476 (5) - new combo
01:35:143 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - i feel like this needs to be more epic than it is right now... but you use smaller SV, and smaller spacing, and well it doesn't feel right to end a map like this by making the end easier than the rest.

Hard

--i would seiruosly refrain from using all of these SV changes. i won't, it just like im only copy pasteing anything but the pattern and sound from the first part : (

00:21:643 (1,2) - i don't like spacing very mucuh :/, you should stack them. okay
00:22:143 (1) - delete note.okay
00:22:309 (3) - new combookay
00:27:309 (5) - new combookay
00:27:810 (1) - remove combo okay
00:40:309 (4) - move this note 1/2 tick backokay
00:40:142 (3) - move this note to 00:40:643 and stack on the combo 4 and 5 (sorry if this is unclear, if you want i could add a picture later).okay, i know what'd you mean : D
00:42:310 (2,3) - these two notes don't fit the music very well, they fit better on white ticks.i think the rythm fits...
00:44:059 (x) - add a note okay
00:44:143 (1) - idk why you increased SV here if you didn't do that in insane.increased on insane after insane diff remaped : D
00:53:976 (1) - add clapokay
00:54:643 (8) - add note with clapokay
00:56:809 (4,5) - i don't like the spacing, and well, i want to keep consistency and you never used this in insane, so perhaps you might consider not changin the SV this much.okay, maybe i'll just make it farther, if i didn't slow the speed... it'll be like a super long ugly slider
01:16:143 - wow this kiai just suddenly got as hard as like insane. don't make it that hard.. i'll think about remaping it if there are 2 or more another modder says so : (
01:21:143 (1) - random SV change... doesn't really make sense.noo, it's not, the vocal and rythm suddenly got slow XD
01:25:143 (7) - new combookay
01:30:309 (8) - delete noteumm, no...
01:30:810 (1) - remove combookay
01:31:476 (2) - new combo okay
01:33:310 (4) - delete noteokay
01:34:810 (5,1) - weird spacing, and weird SV change.fixed
01:45:476 (5) - new combo?okay

Normal

00:23:476 (1,2,3,1) - weird note placement. this also can make it a little hard to read for the beginnners.fixed a bit
00:36:143 (2) - unstackokay
00:57:143 (6) - the three repeats seem a little boring :/ you could do somethin else?okay

Easy

00:43:476 (1) - end spinner here?i'll think about it...if fits the rythm, but the recovery time is just too fast for beginner...maybe..
01:26:143 (x) - add noteokay
01:26:476 (x) - add note okay
01:33:476 (3,4,5) - some reason this makes me feel it could be a little confusing, maybe you could change these into a sliderokay
01:35:143 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - this pattern makes more sense later on. however, 01:35:143 (1,2,3) - feels extremely awkward at first.maybe i'll keep this slider for now
01:34:810 (6) - new comboumm...no, since it's the end of the chorus
01:35:143 (1) - remove combo

i will honestly say that although I feel this still needs a little more work before I can star, i don't want to be a mean noob lol >_>
oh, you musn't star if you don't want to
star~

justnobody wrote:

i didn't mod your map some days before because your hard is quite scary at that time...

at least now it's much better and quite fun to play.
but still there are some problems which bother me...

note that i modded your map while you are probably updating. there may be some changes you have made.

[Hard]
00:11:976 (6,7,1) - finish at (6) should be at (7). also the new combo at (1) should be moved at (7).after updating, the number changes ....so idk what i sould do now XD
00:21:643 (1,2) - i thought they are somewhat confusing.fixed
00:22:143 (1,2,3,4,5) - i can't read them properly...fixed
00:23:309 (1) - i guess this new combo should be at 00:23:476 (2).okay
00:25:976 (1,2) - i think making them one slider would be much better (to follow the vocal)oh, you're right
00:27:810 (1,2,3,4,5) - just don't like the whistles here.added clap
00:43:476 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - wow 1/4 * 7. may be too hard for a hard. btw don't you think add an (8) here would be slightly easier?.
and the superspeed sliders are killing me.added, but it'll be boring if there wasn't any different feel XD
from here the finish hitsound is not appropriate... maybe i'll keep it for now
00:57:476 (5) - a superslow slider in the crowd of superfast sliders....i don't know how to say.....me too...but it's better than a long superspeed ugly slider
01:33:476 (1,2,3,4,5) - this star is... sexy... Fixed : D

without the 1/4*n streams and the superfast/superslow sliders this is a good hard.

[Normal]
00:13:809 (4) - why clap at middle?!oh, the clap fixed after update : D
00:18:809 (3) - why clap again?!removed the clap
00:22:643 (x) - add note?okay
00:23:476 (1,2,3) - ugly overlapfixed
00:38:476 (1,2,3,4) - i think you should follow the vocals here...i think i better now...there'll be many1/2 notes
00:56:476 (5) - why clap?removed clap
01:28:476 (5) - ^^
01:44:143 (1,1,2,3) - i think puting the beats as same as you put in the hard would be much better.but i think i'll better avoid red ticks

[Easy]
i found i can't mod this well...

[General]
please reconsider the use of new combos and claps on all diffs.
i'm serious.
it's quite messy.

no star for now but you can ask for recheck and star after one or two weeks. okay

P.S. i forgot to use the post before lol.

Wiinter wrote:

First of all.. right after downloading, in the selection menu it appeared to me a link to update the map to latest version, uhn.. dunno why exacly that happens, but well, a full sub should fix it.

General
In other maps from ho-kago tea time, I see the artist being "HO-KAGO TEA TIME" and the souce being "K-ON!" soo.. consider changing them on your map. For that, check this thread so you don't make a mistake such as submitting it as a new map. okay then, i'll full submit later...

[Easy]
claps in all notes? o.o fixed XD
some other thing that I noticed is that the spacing wasn't consistent at all. since it's the easier diff, you should make the spacing consistent so fixed some...around 0.96-1.06.....really, if im too consistent, i'll be swarmed with nazi's
00:43:476 (x) - add a note here? oor if you prefer, you could make a slider at this point, that finishes at 00:43:809 - removing the note there right after, ofc - really... i want to, but i think the recovery time for easy is too quick...(i'll change it if there are one more modder to tell me so)
01:25:476 (3,1) - uhnn.. this blank here sounds a bit awkward for me :v for that, i'd add a 1/2 slider at 01:26:143added notes..

[Normal]
Same issue found on [Easy] in relation to the irregular spacing same answer : D
00:24:476 (3) - this note is a bit hard to see. change the spacing? >_<fixed
00:54:810 (2,3,4) - since you have symmetrical sliders.. use symmetrical spacing?i think i'll better keep it that way...if i use symmetrical spacing, it just too high to be placed
00:59:476 (2) - start new combo here instead 00:58:810 (1) ?okay
01:30:810 (1) - remove new combo?okay

[Hard]
00:57:476 (5) - this slowdown doesn't fit much iimo, but well rather than ugly looking long sliders XD, i hate using it too, and using notes in middle of it feels ankward, since the note before it didn't had much 1/2 note
01:24:476 (6) - I don't really agree with this anti-jump, buuut.. if you wanna keep it, place it in the same place of 01:23:643 (4)?since many modder told me this maybe now i'll just make the note farther : (
01:35:143 and 01:36:976 - this slowing timing sections are a bit silly here, since the song doesn't go slower >.< keep 1,0 velocity?umm, maybe i'll make the notes farther, i'll think about it then

[Insane]
00:19:476 (4,5,6) - this anti-jump doesn't fit imo. it's like.. totally not expected due to the rhythm of the song
00:27:809 (6,7,8) - ^
00:29:476 (7,8,1,2) - ^
00:42:643 (1) - stack it correctly D:
00:56:143 (5) - remove claps?
01:20:476 (2,3,4) - again the anti-jump thing
01:28:143 (5) - remove the claps in here? >_< they're a bit off
01:44:476 (1) - stack it to the reverse on 01:43:810 (2) ? looks better imo (if you change this, don't forget to ajust the other notes)

So, yeah.. It's not a bad map, but you still have some things to improve. Call me for a recheck later if you want. ^^

Sallad4ever wrote:

Hi Index

[General]
- Baca thread ini kalo kamu mau tau caranya bikin slider yg bagus
- Kamu masih kurang hit0.png. Ambil dari default skin jg gpp ok
- Ukuran BG nya udah pas cuma terlihat agak aneh. Gambar original ukurannya bukan 4:3 ya?bukan..sekitar 1000x600an(ngepas sih ama letterbox, trus skarang dipasin jadi 4:3
- Mio kakinya kepotong dikit, bisa cari yg full body image kayak Yui g?moga2 aja sih ada..., kalo ktemu di full submit langsung : D

[Easy]
Naikin HP & OD 2 tick. HP & OD 0 itu terlalu kecil ok
Ada beberapa overlap yg terlihat sangat tidak bagus:
00:29:476 (1) - fixed...moga2 nga separah tadi
00:36:143 (4) - fixed
01:26:143 (1,2,3) - fixed
Bagian awal ama akhirnya ga konsisten dengan bagian tengahnya. Mulai dari 00:17:476 (1) sampai 01:25:476 (3) hampir setiap 1/1 beat ada notenya. G ada salah sih cuma tidak terlalu menarik. Saran wa supaya kamu kurangin kepadatan objectnya. Contohnya kyk bagian
00:06:809 (1) ~ 00:14:809 (4) objectnya dikit tapi ritmenya tetap bagus fixed....sebagian (note pas kiai time nga difix dulu)

[Normal]
00:13:143 (3) - Wa pengen bilang nih jump ok2 aja tapi karena sama sekali bukan symmetry yg bagus mending pake normal spacing ajaok
00:22:476 (2,3) - Overlapnya gak bagus coba di pindah ke tempat lainok
00:35:476 (1) - Overlapnya g separah di Easy tapi tetap g kelihatan bagusok
00:46:809 (2,3,4) - Terlalu byk clap. Mungkin di hapus beberapaok
01:18:809 (2,3,4) - ^ok
00:55:476 (3) - Lebih baik kalau circle ini di mundurin 1/2 beat ke 00:55:309. Alasan wa sebagian besar ritme sebelum dan sesudah ini lebih cendrung ngikutin vokal jadi alangkah lebih baik kalau ini juga ikutin vokalnyasebelom ini emang ikutin vokal, tapi kalo ini dimundurin tar timingnya bisa lebih susah diprediksi
01:27:476 (3) - ^ mundurin 1/2 beat ^
01:35:143 (1) - Jump yg sangat2 jauh khususny buat normal diff. Lebih baik pake spacing normal saja
01:44:476 (2) - Hapus circle ini. Karena drumnya lebih dominan di beat sebelum ini dan sesudahnya, circle ini g di butuhkan lagi
01:44:143 (1,2,3) - Mungkin ini di spread aja daripada di stack

[Hard & Insane General Stuffs]
Sayang sekali tapi wa ga suka sama penggunaan slider speed di 2 diff ini. Untuk Hard bagian awal nya bagus tapi pas masuk kiai time slider speed yg lebih cepat betul2 nggak mengalir dengan bagus. Masalahnya transisi slider speed mu g bagus dari x1 ke x1.5 itu terlalu besar dan x1.5 ke x0.5 itu terlalu kecil. Ini bisa bikin player bingung okee, da banyak modder yang bilang gini juga X(, fix dulu XD
Mending g usah pake slider speed yg berbeda, tapi kalau kamu masih mau make, saran wa pake slider speed x1.2 atau x1.3 dan konsisten pakai speed tersebut selama kiai dan ketika selesai kiai timenya kembali ke speed normal aja
Dan usahakan hanya memakai 3 slider speed, di 2 di tersebut kamu memakai 4 slider speed

[Hard]
00:14:643 (3,4) - Di unstack aja biar flownya lebih bagusok
00:17:810 (2,3) - Overlap yang tidak bagus lagi fixed
00:22:309 (1) - Anti-jump yg tidak bagus, Normal spacing jauh lebih baik ok
00:23:309 (6,1) - Ritmenya lebih enak didengar kalau kamu CTRL+R kedua object ini. Jgn lupa buat di atur ulang posisinya kalau kamu ngikutin mod iniok
00:25:976 (5) - NC (new combo) objek iniok
00:28:810 (6) - Beat ekstra yg tidak bagus menurut wa. Mungkin di hapus ajaok
00:30:893 (8) - ^nga kalo yg ini, soalnya rythmnya jadi rada aneh
00:35:310 (1,2,3) - Ikutin vokalnya dan ganti ketiga circle ini menjadi satu slider?ok
00:43:976 (7,8,1) - Yup stacknya berantakan. Ini karena 7,8, & 1 distack di posisi yang sama coba kamu liat baik2eh iy, ga keliatan soalna terlalu atas
01:25:143 (1,2,3) - Uahhhh anti jump yg bikin kesel fixed

[Insane]
Seperti yg wa paparkan di atas slider speed nya sangat tidak masuk akal (00:20:143 (6) - ga mungkin ada yg tau kalau ini x2 speed kecuali miss sekali). Itu salah satu masalah besar di insane ini. Satu lagi yaitu stream yg sepertinya tidak menghiraukan musik atau vocal dari lagu ini. Pakai stream stream boleh2 aja tapi kalau asal pake malah bisa bikin map tambah jelek :< hmm... mungkin tar gw liat dari comment2 modder lain dl, kalo emang da parah langsung gw remap ulang ini diff

Maaf kalau wa terkesan kasar tapi cuma Easy ama Normal yg pantas di kasih star karena walau masih ada yg bikin wa bingung ritme nya cukup bagus.
Sekian aja dulu kalau butuh bantuan g usah ragu PM aja pasti wa bantu d. Semoga Beruntung dan star

gina91189 wrote:

Hi

[Easy]
-AR1 is really slow for this song, AR+1. Then, OD3 is totally too high imo, OD-1.okay
01:02:798 – this green line should be exactly at 01:02:809 since it’s for kiai changefixed
00:40:143 – empty feels weird, add a note ?okay
01:45:476 (5) – remove clap, keep finish onlyokay

[Normal]
-HP doesn’t really make sense here (lower than Easy), HP goes up to 3 please.okay
00:36:143 (2) – this overlapping with (1) is really ugly; Ctrl+H then adjust your spacing. Also, you slow down right here, so this slider should be more far from the previous one.
I set the Distance Snap for 1.6x (don’t forget to set it back to 1.0x after), like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/126322 (Of course it doesn’t need to be that far, is up to you).oh, thanks a lot, i forget to ajust my spacing since this sloder is slower
01:32:143 (4) – add finish ?okay
01:45:476 (3) – this should be finishokay

[Hard]
-Hitsound volumes in this diff are too low, make them like other diff.
-OD+1 ?
00:15:643 (2) – move this down a little, this is just suggestion.umm.. no, it won't fit with circle (1)
01:21:143 (1) – the end of this slider is not snappingfixed
01:21:810 (3) – ^fixed XD
01:22:476 (5) – ^^
01:45:476 (1) – just finishokay

[Insane]
00:22:310 (1) – the end of this slider is not snappingokay
-I can’t really mod this diff, sorry, some of the streams don’t even fit the song.
-You should try the hitsounds just like other diffs, this one just annoying me.maybe, i'll think about fixing the streams rather than remapping it

Joshua Lost wrote:

Hi ~ Storyboard mod request by kanpakyin ~

[Skin]
●Why is "hit50.png" 256*256 and the others 100*100 ? Although they looks the same in game , But I still suggest you to unify them (that...looks like i missed it when i resize it). And by the way , the "hit300.png" , "hit300k.png" and "hit300g.png" look terrible cutting on the top of the image . Try to remake one ? i'll try...

edit:i forget to swap them when i full upload..D:

[Storyboard]
●It's okay to show several sentences in one image.. But it's not a good idea to cover the character with lyrics imo ... space problem(only half of the screen X()....i can make the image appear in the upper part and the character below them... but it doesn't look good...especially with the animated text
●Here is the osb code after I deleted the useless codes and made some codes more accurate . You can compare it with your old one and find where you can do better next time .thanks, oh... and i made some changes to the code a little bit

CODE

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Star ~ And good luck

OzzyOzrock wrote:

Which mix is this anyways...

[Easy]
A lot of ugly sliders here, and spacing problems.

Ugly sliders could be confusing to beginners the way you make them here. The way you curve them could baffle them in a way.
And the spacing is just bad to do, as it's an element of reading maps.

00:23:143 (1) - First example, this isn't even distance snapped, you put it too far away from the last slider. uhh..right...i wonder why AImod didn't show this
00:41:476 (1) - End this slider at 00:42:809?maybe i better not... im not rally good at making long spinning sliders
00:49:809 (2) - Even though you force a skin with not too bad hitbursts, this note could be hidden.hmm..maybe i'll stack it for now... since it's reverse slider...it'll be ugly if i placed it in other place
01:01:976 (3,4) - People will try to hit this as OoOoO, and not the OooOooO you mapped it as. (hmm...maybe 1.50spacing will do)

The sliders make me sad. i make the straight slider with curve at the end in purpose...to trick some new players....hope it's allowed : (, for the strange elbows......i dunno what to do since i don't have any idea...maybe i'll fix it..but not changing the slider structure
[Normal]
This is badly structured, but generally good. maybe i'll reposition some of it...after i've done remapping insane...edit:i'll do it next time maybe...i feel like i wanna take a rest after remapping insane XD

Some sliders with more than one repeat you had here didn't seem to fit very well though.
And the sliders again aaah.
[Hard]
Lots of covering here. Feels crowded.

00:14:643 (3) - This slider gets covered by (1)'s hitburst. Of course, it's more noticeable with your skin, but if someone were to decide to delete it, it'd cover it, and generally, a rule is the it shouldn't be covered using the default osu! skin.maybe i'll better stack the (3) with (1)...hope it's more noticeable now
00:17:643 (1) - My gosh you can hardly hear thisoh right... added whistle : D

There are some other sllight ones, but they're noticeable, but you may be told about them in other mods.
I actually enjoyed playing some parts of this lol.
[Insane] maybe i'll get something from your mod and other mod... thanks a lot XD
00:11:643 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Rather than o o ooooo just do a ooo ooo, fits better. okay thanks : D
00:15:643 (4) - Too close to (3)

My God, this diff is all over the place... the x2 is horribly unfitting most of the time, circles are everywhere, rhythms don't fit, mix that with ugly looking sliders and you have a pretty bad diff...

The kind of spacing you used for streams is more of a thing you do if you wanna make a stupidly hard diff, which really doesn't fit here.
Hell, most streams didn't even fit the song, it's just very over-mapped. edit:remapped after i see this...the 3rd person who said this XD

00:53:976 (2,3,4,5,6) - Too close to (1), looks like it's part of the stream. uh oh... looks like it's time to remap this diff

Really, just watch where you place notes, try to keep a flow, space things correctly using a sense of symmetry, basically make it nice.
I'm sure you can make this good if you try and get more help from other mappers/other maps.

Good luck. Oh, and use this please: viewtopic.php?f=56&t=37194

Raging Bull wrote:

Hi.

General:
Make a hit0 skin so it will be consistent with your other hit50 hit100 etc etc skin. yes.. i forget to add it it last time
Mp3 sounds rather low :< Maybe find another mp3? i want to...but, the good quality all is dominated by Yoko Hikasa version, it's the best Aki Toyosaki short version i can find : (
Reeeaaaalllllyyy don't think you need a break in the middle. Just map it. many modders says it's strange last time i map this part
And what does the SB say? Can't read japanese :< it's the lyrics : D
Use consistent tickrate for all diff. Use tickrate 2. maybe i'll think about it....
Easy:
00:21:143 (5) - Shorten slider so it lands on red tick? no.. i must avoid red ticks on easy as much as possible : (
00:21:809 (1) - Slider sounds better if you move it to 00:21:976. ^
Seems to me you are mapping both the music and vocals. Please choose one as it can be confusing like
00:24:143 (2,1,2) - is different from 00:27:143 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4). I think mapping to the vocals would be good for easy, but it's my an idea :L umm.. mapping the music is my priority, but i make the notes match, like outting the end of the slider where there are some vocals

Normal:
+2 OD?maybe i'll think over it
00:36:143 (2) - I don't recommend a slider change for a normal, especially during the middle of a song and the sliders before and after are 1x. Just remove timing section and adjust slider. changed into a slider

Hard:
00:18:143 (3) - Rather hard to see that this is a slider because that particular area will be filled with slider/combo splat. Move this slider?okay
00:53:810 (8,1) - Not rather sure about this. It's a jump+stream in hard. Maybe move 1 closer and make the stream a curvy one? (bad) example XD okay

Insane:
00:31:476 (8) - Uhhhhh. You have one wacky slider. I can't move the anchor points at all.... But fix return arrow. It looks ugly. (Just delete slider and remake slider if you can't move it like me.) hope it's fixed now
00:50:143 (1) - Combo burst partially blocks reverse arrow. Move 1 please.okay
01:22:143 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I find this stream really unnecessary.changed into star
01:38:476 (3,4,5,6,1) - Don't know if you're trying to make a star, but if you are, fix it. Looks ugly.eh..it's atar...(i actually didn't intend to make a star...but now i fixed it XD)
01:44:476 (1,4) - Move these two so they don't have ugly overlap with 01:43:143 (1)okay

Nice map.

Kiddo-Kun wrote:

[Easy]
00:43:809 (1) - Works better without this circle here IMO. But that circle is not a problem. the empty space will become the problem... maybe i shouldn't remove the circle
00:23:143 (2) - Remove the new combo. It matches the vocals better and that is what you did up ahead at 00:26:476 (2) okay

[Normal]
-Bump up the AR by 1 or 2. maybe i'll increase it by 1

00:06:810 (1,2,3) - I don't think a stack is a good way to start off. I'm not a fan of stacks on easier diffs. well.. for the beginning i think i'll stack it for now
00:10:809 (1) - Remove new combo, like you did here 00:08:143 (4).okay
01:33:809 (1) - I expected this to be on the red tick since you were following the lyrics here: 01:31:476 (1,2,3). It would sounds better/play better IMO if you delete Move (1) to the next red tick and delete (2). Fix up the spacing of coursei think i better not do this since most of start of the note before this start at white tick (only some sliders that end at red tick), and the note after this is not following the vocals
01:29:143 (2,3,4,5) - You are abusing the finishes here.uh..okay..i'll fix it
01:44:143 (1,2,3) - Boring stacks. Change it up.okay

[Hard]
00:41:476 (1,2,3) - This here sounds really strange. Try fixing it up and making it sound better.okay
01:23:810 (5) - Sounds better ending on the white tick ahead.ehhh... i didn't notice it was unsnapped

[Insane]
00:57:143 (1,2,3) - These finishes sound like they're out of place.fixed

Here is where I would give a overall on the map...But I'm tired.
NICE, STAR, GOOD NIGHT.

karenying wrote:

8-) hi
General
I don't sure but I think the size of hit50.png~hit300k.png use 256*256 bettermaybe i'll use smaller than 256*256, since i can't use 256*256 because it'll result in unused transparency
and see this

SPOILER

see the rim of this,ugly
then I think the number is too small
I suggest you remake them
[attachment=0:0ac2d].png[/attachment:0ac2d]

i'll try my best (to resize it, so it doesn't pixelate)...since the skin maker rarely online now

Easy
00:15:809 (5,1) - don't overlap is looks better okay
00:17:476 (1) - add finish and no clapokay
00:21:809 (1) - ^okay
00:33:476 (1) - ^okay
00:38:476 (1) - ^okay

lazy to mod

tutuhaha wrote:

Easy
01:01:976 (3,4) - Bad jump, need distance snap uhh... i got confused in this...since if i use distance snap new players will hit it too quickly...maybe i'll change into normal spacing for now

Normal
00:44:143-01:34:809 Volume 65%okay
00:37:809 (X) - add clap used finish instead
00:44:474 (X) - add clap^
00:46:809 (2) - add clapadded, and i add clap in (3)too
......why you choose the soft Sampleset I think in KIAI time you can just choose the nomel Sampleset
then you don't need any clap....finishes in normal sampleset just not suit this song, i need normal sound from softsampleset(i forgot to add whistle in easier diffs, but i need whisltle from soft sampleset, so i need finishes, normal, and whistle from softsampleset)

It is find
but why you use lot for point to construction one short slider like 00:16:809 (3) or 00:29:476 (1)
or 00:30:809 (3)?sorry for that, i still can't make good slider curves with 2-3 points, so i used 5or6 points : (
so ugly I think....
you need change

Hard
00:07:976 (X) - add circle add clap umm..no...it fits the song well...but i just feel it doesn't fit for this diff
00:09:976 (X) - add circle add clap^
00:45:976 (3) - ....no goodoh..okay then i'll move it
01:02:809 (4) - spacingokay
01:33:476 - 01:34:809 (X) spacingi cant fix it since it's a star pattern
01:44:143 - 01:45:476 (X) spacingokay then..i'll move it a bit closer

:< I think you have lot for spacing problem in there
New mapper best use distance snap i can't make any jumps : (, and if i use distance snap, i'll be yelled that i didn't organize the pattern very well, (really, i remapped this map once using distance snap, it was like i place random notes with well spacing, but the placement are ugly, so i remapped again without distance snap)
you can change Slider Velocity to help you make a good spacing
and I don't like you use lot for point to construction one short slider either :< (i'll try my best to change it)
and why you did not choose Nomel Sampleset?????????????????? i already do that, replacing the whistle from normal sampleset into normal softsampleset sound , and the result is the sound of normal sampleset overrides the whistle..
and Slider Tick Rate need 1 no 2 because easy and normal is 1 i'll change the normal and easy into 2 then

Insane
00:21:143 (4) - too hard i won't make it decent hard : D,and i think 2.30 spacing is still good, well... i'll change it if someone says the same thing
00:25:809 - 00:26:809 spacing and too hard to read this, you can change the new combookay.
00:28:476 (5) - new combookay
00:48:309 (123) - no good :< umm...why : ( ?

need more work, New mapper can use some like Filp Horizontally or Filp Vertically improve difficulty
you can try (thanks for the info )

GO GO Star~

UnderminE wrote:

Hey~

Make sure about all diffs start at the same point and also end in the same point I think.

Looks good, star

• 
  I strongly recommend you to use normal hitsound.
  Now, you use normal-hitsound.wav as custom soft-hitclap.wav.
  That's not good.
  Try to play or watch auto-play it with Taiko mode.
  Most of sounds are "k". There is no "d" sound.
  In addition, what all notes are clap is nonsense.

1. 01:45:976 (1) - Too short as easy-diff.

1. 00:35:976 (T) - Remove this green-line.
2. 00:37:643 (T) - ^
3. 00:36:143 (1) - Finish this spinner at 00:37:476.
4. 01:33:809 (1,2,3) - Wide spacing doesn't suit as normal-diff.

1. 00:21:809 (x) - Add a note.
2. 00:53:976 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This formation prevents flow of play imo.
3. 01:02:476 (3) - Remove finish.
4. 01:28:643 (3,5,6) - Narrow spacing.
5. 01:34:810 (T) - I can't see why you use 0.5x SV.

• 
  Why do you set StackLeniency 1?
  It shuld be 0.7(default) unless there are any problems.

1. 00:19:309 (x) - Add a note.
2. 00:21:143 (4,5) - Too wide spacing. Make them nearer or add new combo at (4).
3. 00:26:310 (3) - Remove finish.
4. 00:26:809 (3) - ^ at end of slider.
5. 00:38:476 (2) - Add finish at start of slider.
6. 00:38:976 (3) - Remove finish.
7. 00:39:809 (3) - ^ at start of slider.
8. 01:44:476 (1,4) - Delete these notes because there is no back-sound here.

Suzully wrote:

Thank you for mod request~

[General]

• 
  I strongly recommend you to use normal hitsound.
  Now, you use normal-hitsound.wav as custom soft-hitclap.wav.
  That's not good.
  Try to play or watch auto-play it with Taiko mode.
  Most of sounds are "k". There is no "d" sound.
  In addition, what all notes are clap is nonsense.ahh..okay then......fixed : D

[Easy]

1. 01:45:976 (1) - Too short as easy-diffi'll change it into slider then.

[Normal]

1. 00:35:976 (T) - Remove this green-line.umm..no
2. 00:37:643 (T) - ^no...it just...don't fit the vocals
3. 00:36:143 (1) - Finish this spinner at 00:37:476.okay
4. 01:33:809 (1,2,3) - Wide spacing doesn't suit as normal-diffokay.

[Hard]

1. 00:21:809 (x) - Add a note.umm..no,
2. 00:53:976 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This formation prevents flow of play imo.hmm... i'll fix it then
3. 01:02:476 (3) - Remove finish.okay
4. 01:28:643 (3,5,6) - Narrow spacing.moved 6 a bit farther
5. 01:34:810 (T) - I can't see why you use 0.5x SVerr...i'll take it in notes...i'll change it if another modder say something about this : (.

[Insane]

• 
  Why do you set StackLeniency 1?
  It shuld be 0.7(default) unless there are any problems. err...fixed, dunno why i set it into 1

1. 00:19:309 (x) - Add a note.okay
2. 00:21:143 (4,5) - Too wide spacing. Make them nearer or add new combo at (4).okay..
3. 00:26:310 (3) - Remove finish.removed
4. 00:26:809 (3) - ^ at end of slider.^
5. 00:38:476 (2) - Add finish at start of slider.added
6. 00:38:976 (3) - Remove finish.removed
7. 00:39:809 (3) - ^ at start of slider.okay
8. 01:44:476 (1,4) - Delete these notes because there is no back-sound here no, this part had a small guitar sound.

That's all.
Your hitsound lacks consistency.
Please keep work more.
If so, I believe you will be good mapper.
Good luck~

poisonchan wrote:

Heeya :3
Rechecking your map as your request. Hope it helps :3

[General]
- Remove 'Afterschool Light Fluffy' from the tags. no it's from Afterschool Tea Time, and the English name for the song is Light and Fluffy time
- Add Mio Akiyama and Yoko Hikasa in the tags.okay

[Easy]
00:17:476 (1) - Extra point in the slider. Delete it. okay
00:35:143 (1) - Remove new combo.okay
00:36:143 (3) - New combo.okay
01:13:476 - Drag the ending of the break here.okay
01:23:143 (1) - Remove new combo.okay
01:35:143 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - It kinda sounds out of rhythm >< okay, maybe i'll change something here
01:45:976 (1) - This is spinner is too short for an Easy, change it >< changed!

[Normal]
00:20:143 (1) - Remove new combo.okay
00:29:476 (1) - ^okay
00:31:809 (4) - New combo.uhh...no...it seems off to add new combo in here
00:32:476 (1) - Remove new combo.okay
00:33:143 (2) - New combo.okay
00:33:809 (1) - Remove new combo.for this part, maybe i better go without removing..since it'll be colorful if i remove it(maybe. it's because i didn't apply your mod in notes before it)
00:35:476 (1) - ^^
00:46:476 (1) - ^umm...no, it got a new pattern and the vocals support it
00:51:809 (1) - ^okay
00:56:476 (1) - ^okay
01:13:476 - Drag the ending of the break here ? okay
01:18:476 (1) - Remove new combo.umm...no, same like 46476
01:23:809 (1) - ^okay
01:28:476 (1) - ^okay
01:33:809 (1) - ^okay
01:45:643 (1) - ^it's a spinner...but okay..

[Hard]
00:11:476 (1) - Remove new combo.okay
00:22:309 (1) - ^okay
00:23:309 (6) - New combo.okay
00:23:809 (1) - Remove new combo.okay
00:30:810 (7,8,9) - This spacing is odd >< Fix it :T ?okay
00:35:309 (5) - New combo.okay
00:38:143 (1) - Remove new combo.okay
00:39:143 (4) - New combo.okay
00:39:810 (1) - Remove new combo.okay
00:45:310 (1) - ^okay
00:47:309 (1) - ^okay
00:48:809 (4) - New combo.okay
00:55:976 (1) - Remove new combo.okay
01:00:476 (3) - Weird spacing.okay, i'll make it triangle
01:01:476 (1) - ^ , Don't stack it. okay
01:13:476 - Drag the ending of the break here ? okay
01:17:476 (1) - Remove new combo.okay
01:18:643 (6) - New combo.okay
01:19:809 (1) - Remove new combo.okay
01:20:810 (4) - New combo.okay
01:21:143 (1) - Remove new combo.okay
01:27:976 (1) - ^okay
01:29:143 (5) - New combo.okay
01:30:309 (8) - Wrong spacing.err.. maybe i'll just move it 1 grid left
01:31:476 (1) - Too close to the previous beat.i make it in purpose
01:36:809 (4) - New combookay
01:37:809 (1) - Remove new combookay
01:42:143 (6) - New combookay

Check AIMod, there is a few spacing issues to fix there. (Others you can ignore)

[Insane]
Ok, you have serious new combo issues here ;_; Try following the rhythm with them, like I told you in the other diffs.
When you finish that, take a look at the spacing.
Don't stack too much, don't overlap and try to make the flow 'clean'. If you need help with that, poke me in game, and I will come here to recheck one more time. okay...but i can't be sure about the part dont stack too much XD, since i like stacking notes even it's not 1/4


You have improved alot I'm impressed. Deserves a star. :3

fanzhen0019 wrote:

Hi there
From Kanon's queue

-Easy-
00:32:476 (1,2) - err I think align 1&2 looks better (just push shift and move 2--->http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/129212) okay
00:38:809 (X) - Add finsh? okay
Claps on the first KIAI part sounds weird.. err.. it's...part that i missed last time
01:44:143 (4) - I recommend not to stack it with 3okay
01:45:976 (1) - Decrease the volume?okay

-Normal-
00:16:809 (X) - Add clap?okay
00:17:476 (X) - Add finish?okay
00:22:809 (X) - ^okay
01:21:809 (2) - Move up 1grid and right 1grid (grid level 3 okay
01:26:809 (X) - Add finish?okay
01:45:643 (1) - Decrease the volume?okay

-Hard-
00:43:476 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Such stream is harder than a hard diff IMO..Use something instead plz uhh...t'll take it into my note...i'll consider changing it if there are another 2 modders says so X ( ...this part doesn't look really good without streams
00:53:976 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^^
And so on..
01:23:143 (1,2,3,4,5) - try this? --> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/129225err... isn.t it already like ...that.... ......... ..oh, the (2) is off... fixed...
01:33:476 (1,2,3,4,5,1) ---> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/129228okay
01:45:643 (1) - Decrease the volume?okay

-Insane-
00:31:476 (8) - Bad spacing...And,what's wrong with the slider...↓okay, the slider...that's............ fixed......
[attachment=1:afc9f]....er.png[/attachment:afc9f]
↑Fix it plz..
00:42:309 (3,4,5,6,1) - Stream here sounds strange. try this? ↓ umm..no
[attachment=0:afc9f]rhythm2.png[/attachment:afc9f]
01:45:476 (5) - Add a finishokay
01:45:643 (1) - Decrease the volume?okay

Though hitsounds sounds a bit..err,I have no idea about how to describe it lol yeah..it's becoming more epic after i started using fixing the hitsounds.
Still need more work about hitsounds :3
Good luck
STAR \:D/

1. Could you please change a better BG? This one has a obvious kink mark there,I feel charactor's face has a little deformation
2. Are you sure turn on countdown? I personally think it doesn't fit this song

1. 00:43:809 (1) - Delete this note seems better, or remove the finish sound
2. 00:58:809 (4) - This clap sounds werid, remove would be better IMO
3. 01:45:976 (1) - Maybe last 01:45:476 a slider to 01:46:809 would better, or use a spinner instead

1. 01:34:809 - I just confused why here start 0.5xBPM, well, maybe you feel music here is slow down, that's no a big deal anyways

I hate jump maps since I can't FC

1. 01:44:809 (2,3,4) - I feel this jump is too large

Breeze wrote:

Hi there

[General]

1. Could you please change a better BG? This one has a obvious kink mark there,I feel charactor's face has a little deformation uh...i'll think about that.. since it's part of the SB : (
2. Are you sure turn on countdown? I personally think it doesn't fit this song i think it fits...since many maps of this song use countdown...(not the Osu! countdown..but from the video countdown)

[Easy]

1. 00:43:809 (1) - Delete this note seems better, or remove the finish soundokay.. finish added
2. 00:58:809 (4) - This clap sounds werid, remove would be better IMOT-..that's missed part again... (oh well) removed the clap XD
3. 01:45:976 (1) - Maybe last 01:45:476 a slider to 01:46:809 would better, or use a spinner insteadoh.. you're right...maybe i'll make the slider longer

[Normal]

1. 01:34:809 - I just confused why here start 0.5xBPM, well, maybe you feel music here is slow down, that's no a big deal anyways maybe you mean in hard diff...oh well... since you're the second person said that maybe i'll fix it into 1.0

[Insane]
I hate jump maps since I can't FC

1. 01:44:809 (2,3,4) - I feel this jump is too largeokay

nice map
star

1. 01:34:809 (4) - Start a new combo here, and remove this new combo: 01:35:143 (1).
2. 00:21:809 (1) - Add finish at the end.
3. 00:32:476 (1) - ^
4. 00:33:809 (2) - Remove finish in the beginning and replace it for a clap.
5. 01:17:476 (1) - Add finish in the beginning.
6. 01:18:476 (2) - Remove finish.
7. 01:18:809 (3) - Add finish in the beginning.
8. 01:20:476 (4) - Remove finish.
9. 01:20:809 (1) - Add finish at the end.
10. 01:21:809 (2) - Remove finish.
11. 01:26:809 (1) - Add finish in the beginning.
12. 01:45:809 - In this Inherited point reduce volume to 15%.

1. 00:14:976 (7) - Remove clap.
2. 00:19:476 (5) - ^ in the beginning.
3. 00:21:976 (1) - ^ and replace it for a finish.
4. 00:22:809 (4) - Remove finish.
5. 00:24:643 (1) - Add finish in the beginning.
6. 00:29:143 (4,6) - Replace these two finishs for claps. It sounds really really "weird".
7. 00:31:809 (8) - Remove finish and replace it for a clap.
8. 00:33:309 (1) - Remove clap.
9. 00:34:809 (3) - ^
10. 00:35:643 (4) - ^
11. 00:52:643 (6) - Remove clap at the end of the slider.
12. 01:18:476 (1) - Add clap at the end.
13. 01:18:809 (2) - Add clap in the beginning.
14. 01:19:309 (3) - ^
15. 01:20:809 (1) - Add finish at the end.
16. 01:21:809 (2,4) - Remove these finishs, it sounds really bad D:
17. 01:45:643 - The same as Easy, reduce volume to 15%

1. 00:23:809 (2,3) - Add a clap in these two notes.
2. 00:25:143 (2,3) - ^
3. 00:25:976 (1) - Add a clap at the end and (2) too.
4. 00:34:476 (2,3) - Add a clap.
5. 00:35:809 (2,3) - ^
6. 01:44:309 (2) - Add whistle.
7. 01:44:809 (3) - ^
8. 01:45:643 - As Normal and Easy, reduce volume to 15%

1. 00:18:976 (6) - New combo, then, remove this new combo: 00:21:143.
2. 00:26:476 (1) - Why there are new combo?... Remove it.
3. 00:37:809 (1) - Remove new combo.
4. 00:38:476 (8) - Add a new combo.
5. 00:41:643 (8) - ^
6. 01:36:476 (1) - Remove new combo.
7. 01:45:643 - As in Hard, Normal and Easy... Reduce volume to 15%

eldnl wrote:

[General]

- The background is really bad, because you turn a photo that was larger sideways.err... okay then... i'll fix it in the next full upload
- Disable countdown in all difficulties, is not necessary. since you're the second person said that... okay then
- In the break, MioAkiyama.png the first two times appears very early in my opinion.uhh... yes... i'll fix it in the next full upload

[Easy]

Tick rate 1. The sliders looks weird because the sliderspeed is too slow.okay..but is it allowed to have different sliderticks in different diffs?)
00:44:143 - Many random finish and claps, this sounds really bad, I suggest to use this pattern: http://puu.sh/4hFQ i'l lconsider it using it in hard of insane... since in easy diffs 95% the notes are in white tick..
01:45:476 (1) Reduce 1/2 the slider, I think sounds better. Add a finish at the start and whistle at the end.ehh...i make the slider too far...okay fixed

[Normal]

00:23:476 (1) Remove new combo, for be consistent with the previous one.okay
00:26:143 (1) ^ Same, there are just (1) and (2).okay
00:29:476 (5) New combo here.okay
00:32:476 (9) New combo here too, and remove in the next note.okay
00:38:476 - The finish here sounds noisy .... follow the pattern.okay
01:01:809 (4) Remove finish, sounds strange.okay
01:33:809 (4) ^ Same.okay

[Hard]

00:22:643 (5,6,7) Change these three notes for a slider?okay
00:43:476 - I think that a stream like this is for an insane difficulty, is very difficult for a [Hard] difficulty.uhh.. now let's see if there are one more modder says about this stream... i'll change it
00:53:976 - ^ Same, also you need a new combo in (9).okay.. and ^
00:55:976 (1) If you apply the previous changes, remove new combo here.okay
00:59:143 (1) Remove new combo here too.okay
01:02:809 (4) I can't feel a jump here, please put the (4) In the center of the triangle. http://puu.sh/4hIMokay
01:15:476 (1) This stream feels very good. I don't have problem with this.
01:21:476 (4) Stack it perfectly.okay, really.. i had really hard time stacking this
01:25:976 - But the long stream does not seem very good for me.same like stream above
01:40:809 (3) This note is very close to the previous slider.ehh.. i didn't notice it
01:45:643 (1) Use a soft-sound for the spin.okay

[Insane]

The spacing in this diff don't follow the song I think. But is fine anyways.
00:21:143 (1,2,1) Considering the spacing between (1,2) the space between (3,1) is too close.hmm.. i think it's fine with it
00:44:143 - Please follow the hitsound pattern mentioned previously. http://puu.sh/4hFQokay, i messed up a bit in the middle....(in purpose)
00:51:476 (8) New combo here, this combo is very long.okay
01:22:809 (8) ^ Sameokay
01:27:143 (1) Remove new combo here and add in (3).okay
01:41:809 (7) This note is too close to the previous slider.i didn't notice it
01:44:476 (1) Remove this note, don't follow anything.umm no... on a sec... maybe i'll think about it
01:45:143 (4) ^ Same.^

Star and good luck (:

vivere wrote:

Hi there.

[Easy]:

1. 01:34:809 (4) - Start a new combo here, and remove this new combo: 01:35:143 (1).umm.. no
2. 00:21:809 (1) - Add finish at the end.okay
3. 00:32:476 (1) - ^okay
4. 00:33:809 (2) - Remove finish in the beginning and replace it for a clap.okay
5. 01:17:476 (1) - Add finish in the beginning.okay
6. 01:18:476 (2) - Remove finish.okay
7. 01:18:809 (3) - Add finish in the beginning.okay
8. 01:20:476 (4) - Remove finish.okay
9. 01:20:809 (1) - Add finish at the end.okay
10. 01:21:809 (2) - Remove finish.okay
11. 01:26:809 (1) - Add finish in the beginning.okay
12. 01:45:809 - In this Inherited point reduce volume to 15%okay.

[Normal]:

1. 00:14:976 (7) - Remove clap.okay
2. 00:19:476 (5) - ^ in the beginning.umm.. no..
3. 00:21:976 (1) - ^ and replace it for a finish.okay
4. 00:22:809 (4) - Remove finish.okay
5. 00:24:643 (1) - Add finish in the beginning.okay
6. 00:29:143 (4,6) - Replace these two finishs for claps. It sounds really really "weird".okay
7. 00:31:809 (8) - Remove finish and replace it for a clap.removed
8. 00:33:309 (1) - Remove clap.err.. no..sounds ... a bit strange to me
9. 00:34:809 (3) - ^okay
10. 00:35:643 (4) - ^err.. no..
11. 00:52:643 (6) - Remove clap at the end of the slider.okay
12. 01:18:476 (1) - Add clap at the end.okay
13. 01:18:809 (2) - Add clap in the beginning.no...
14. 01:19:309 (3) - ^^
15. 01:20:809 (1) - Add finish at the end.okay
16. 01:21:809 (2,4) - Remove these finishs, it sounds really bad D:okay
17. 01:45:643 - The same as Easy, reduce volume to 15%okay

[Hard]:

1. 00:23:809 (2,3) - Add a clap in these two notes.okay
2. 00:25:143 (2,3) - ^okay
3. 00:25:976 (1) - Add a clap at the end and (2) too.
4. 00:34:476 (2,3) - Add a clap.okay
5. 00:35:809 (2,3) - ^okay
6. 01:44:309 (2) - Add whistle.okay
7. 01:44:809 (3) - ^okay
8. 01:45:643 - As Normal and Easy, reduce volume to 15%okay

[Insane]:

1. 00:18:976 (6) - New combo, then, remove this new combo: 00:21:143.no...
2. 00:26:476 (1) - Why there are new combo?... Remove it.to make the note more noticeable... oh well.. removed the new combo now
3. 00:37:809 (1) - Remove new combo.okay
4. 00:38:476 (8) - Add a new combo.okay
5. 00:41:643 (8) - ^okay
6. 01:36:476 (1) - Remove new combo.umm.no
7. 01:45:643 - As in Hard, Normal and Easy... Reduce volume to 15%okay

Well, that's all...

Good luck and Star :3

kurohana wrote:

kimi wo miteru to itsumo haato dokidoki ~ ♫
my mooood ♫

[General]
- storyboard folder is unused... or is it a mistake by me? if not, delete the folder i think i already deleted it...
- looks better, if the lyrics don't hide the charas it's....oh nvm... i am planning to recreate a new lyrics storyboard for this map
- silenced sliderticks are unrankable, delete this w-wha...okay then... i just know it's unrankable

[Easy]
- 00:43:809 (1) delete this note, because its easier for beginner okay

[Normal]
- 00:21:976 (1,2,3,4) a bit hard for normal, or not? err.. maybe i change the (2) and (3) into slider will make it better and easier
- 00:24:476 (7,1,2,3) ^changed a bit
- 00:46:476 (1,2,3,4) ^^
- 01:18:476 (1,2,3,4) ^^

[Hard]
- 00:43:476 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) this kind of strem is too hard for hard oh...you're the third person who said it...... okay.. i'll remove all the stream in this diff XD
- 00:53:976 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) ^changed into jump XD
- 01:15:476 (1,2,3,4,5) ^changed
- 01:25:976 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) ^changed

[Insane]
- i like this diff °^° good

thanks for let me mod this song ~ ♫
star and good luck let me know, if you map another k-on ong sure : D

Leorda wrote:

Halo

General
* Don't put some random hitsounds. Use the clap if the object is place in 2nd and 4th white ticks. And use finish hitsound for long white tick iokay
* Try find some good BG? okay
* Where is the SB in outro of the song? it's..i remapped the storyboard while you're modding this map : D

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Easy
00:23:809 (x) - Add note here? umm..no, since the note after this has the rythm like this
00:23:809 (x) - ^^
01:24:143 (5) - Overlapped by previous slider is ugly (Nazi)okay
01:26:809 (3,4) - Please fill the object between this object. The gap feels weirdi-it's not.....uhh... i'll think about it

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Normal
01:00:476 (x) - Add note here, to prevent of pause notes for average player okay
01:01:809 (4) - Move to 01:01:976? no....the rythm...sound a bit off...

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Hard
00:21:809 (x) - Add note here? no...can't tell why : (
01:21:476 (4) - Not stack perfectly with tail slider (Nazi) wahh... really....i really had a hard hard time stacking this : (, hope it's better now
01:22:143 (6) - ^ ^
01:22:810 (8) - ^^

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Insane
00:16:143 (10) - The sliderbody is almost offscreenoh right...fixed
00:22:310 (1) - Can you make this slider more curve? Like other slider?okay
00:40:976 (6) - New combo for jump patternokay

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That's all

IceBeam wrote:

Hello.

First of all I have to agree with Leorda's issues.
What's about hitsounds - you really should add them in some order,for example,as Leorda suggested - claps at 2-nd/4-th white tick and finishes at downbeats(long white tick).I'd suggest to add finish at every 4-th downbeat.i'll fix the hitsound after a while...my head wanna explode after remapped the storyboard X(


Example:
00:06:809 -
00:12:143 -
00:17:476 -
00:22:809 - and etc.

Though it's minor,cause custom claps fit well,but missing SB after 01:34:809 is a heavy issue,cause lyrics continue.So..you should probably continue storyboarding as well.

And one thing about the map's folder - why .osb file's name differs from the rest? I mean the most of the letters aren't capitalized,as they should be.
Though it doesn't really affects anything,cause storyboard works well,but looks a bit weird.
okay... i'll fix the names

[Easy]
00:17:143 - Rhytm sounds incomplete without this note.hmm.. you're right
00:19:809 (3) - Clap.okay
00:21:143 (5) - I'd shorten this slider to previous red tick.okay
00:24:809 (1) - It finishes a bit late,I'd shorten to 00:25:476 and add another note with clap to 00:25:809.okay
00:28:476 (2,3,4) - Remove (3)-rd note and add claps to (2) and (4).okay
00:30:809 (2) - As it's Easy difficuly,maybe add a reverse instead of a circle at 00:31:809 (3)?okay
00:31:809 (3) - Clap.okay
00:35:143 (3,4) - Change clap from (4) to (3).okay
00:46:810 (2) - Again,reverse is easier to read.okay
01:00:143 (2,3,4) - Like this would be much easier to play:okay

SPOILER

01:40:809 (2) - Shorten to 01:41:476.okay

[Normal]
Raise HP Drain a bit,it's Normal after all. okay

00:21:809 - Note with finish is missing.hmm.. i'll add it then
00:44:476 - Clap.okay
01:44:309 - I'd add a note.okay
01:44:976 - ^okay

Hitsounds could be improved,but otherwise it looks fine.

[Hard]
00:48:809 (1) - Fix distance,it looks a bit closer then it should be.okay
01:01:476 (1,2,3,4) - Doesn't looks/plays so good,I'd unstack.okay then..
01:15:476 (1,2) - Stack them,otherwise distance between 01:15:809 (2) and 01:16:143 (1) looks wrong.
Or make like this: i think i'll keep with stacking for now..

SPOILER

01:31:476 (1) - Too close to previous object.okay

[Insane]
00:25:976 (1,2,3,4,5) - Could you clear up this pattern a bit? Cause they all overlap and hidden by hitbursts.okay
00:37:143 (6,7,1) - Not a good idea =| These stack break the flow so much..okay..
00:43:310 (5) - Again,clear up it a bit,this note is almost invisible.okay..
01:36:810 (1) - Remove NC?that's...how can is miss it....
01:43:810 (4,5,1) - Could you reduce a jump to (1) a little? It'd help to read 01:44:476 (1,2,3,4) jumps better.okay

Nice mapset overall.
If you'll improve hitsounds a bit more,it'd be really solid mapset!
Good luck to you and have my star~

SamiPale wrote:

Hello, request from Team Chunbi Modding Queue

[Easy]
00:14:809(4,5) - These slider, make them parallel okay
00:29:476(1) - Remove this clap?okay
00:44:143(1) - ^hmm.. it didn't had any clap cnymore
00:49:143(1) - Add finish?...no

[Normal]
00:19:809(5) - Remove clapsince many suggested this i guess i'll remove it now : (
00:30:143(1) - Finish instead of clapno since there are finish 2 notes after it
00:38:476(1) - Clapokay
00:44:143(1) - Remove clap on the start and the end, add finish at the start?okay
01:20:809(1,2,3,4,5,6) - All using clap sounds not that good, rearrange them?okay

[Hard]
I don't know if you did it on purpose. If no, delete those sliderslide whistles like 00:13:809/00:28:143 etc. since they sounds weird, except 01:21:309(3,5,7) oh..i missed that part
00:11:976(6) - Finish sound move to 00:12:143okay
00:57:476(1,2,3) - Remove these claps or using clap by "oxoxx"(x means clap)maybe i better remove the clap
01:02:976(4) - 3 grid down on grid lv3okay
01:17:976(10) - Add whistle?okay
01:26:476(4) - Add finish?no..
01:25:809(3) - Use spacing like 01:25:976(1,2) and align with 01:25:976(1)i think i better not for this one..

[Insane]
00:12:309(9) - Finish sound move to 00:12:143okay
00:13:309(3) - Use clap instead of finishi removed the claps in this section : (
00:22:809(3) - Add finish?okay
00:23:643(1) - This clap sounds lonely, you can try to add clap on 00:24:476, 00:27:143, etc. now i don't use any claps in this section
00:29:143(7) - Add clap?^
00:35:143(6) - Clap instead here and add finish at 00:35:309?finish added
00:43:143(4,5) - Weird spacing, or you can add newcombo herei make that in purpose...maybe i shouldnt add the new combo... since i'll be asked by another modder to remove it again : (
00:55:809(1,4,7) - Add clap?okay...i better add clap in 2 4 7
01:27:976(1) - Finish sound move to 01:28:143?i-i forgot to remove that finish
01:35:976(4) - 1 grid down on grid lv4okay
01:44:476(1) - Remove newcombookay
01:44:809(2) - Newcombookay
01:45:643(1) - Using 40%-50% volume is betteri think..it's fine with 15% now

I haven't modded SB yet since it is not finished it's okay
Normal and Hard diff are a bit hard, thinking the diff spread is important (...i aciddentallyended up making the normal a bit hard ....so i make the hard and insane a bit had too XD)

pieguy1372 wrote:

General:

-I like how the note colors fit with the SB~

Easy:

00:14:809 (4) - New combo?no since the vocal still goes on...
01:24:143 (5) - ^^
01:29:143 (4) - ^^

Normal:

-tick rate 1?~2 is better i think since this mapset is dominated by sliders

00:21:976 (2) - this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/130923 mm.. okay...rotate the slider a bit right?
01:13:476 - break ends too early o.o reinsert it?okay then
01:23:809 (6) - New combo?i'll take this suggestion then...maybe if there are 2 modder says this... i'll change it (there's new combo here last time)
01:29:143 (6) - ^^

Hard:

-tick rate 1

00:07:476 (3) - This slider looks really weird... perhaps this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/130931 (Since you use this slider multiple times throughout the map, please change them all if you change this one~) i won't since the middle of slider reaaally fits with the circles XD
00:41:476 (1,2,3,4,5) - This? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/130927okay... hope it looks better now
00:42:809 (2,3) - Move these 1 level 3 grid upokay
00:44:143 (1) - Too close to (4)no it doesn't....it's because i increased the SV in this time
00:47:309 (8) - New combo?umm.. no
00:50:809 (6) - This slider hangs off the edge of the playfield err.. that's accident XD... okay fixed
01:13:476 - This break ends too early again okay,..
01:23:143 (1,2,3,4,5) - This? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/130930 y-yes...that's it...but i make the spacing farther...hope i didn't mess up

Insane:

00:15:643 (9) - New combo?no...
00:20:143 (10) - New combo, then remove it from 00:21:143 (1)?okay
00:42:810 (1,2,3,4,5) - These notes seem randomly placed in the playfield, maybe it might be nicer if you made a pattern out of them such as a diamond? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/130936i-it's not...well... i make it like that so players can be ready for the streams and SV changes (my experience)...maybe i'll take it into my notes and change it if another modder says so : (
00:54:976 (5) - New comboumm..no
00:57:643 ~ 01:01:476 - I really think you should increase the pace in this section, the map suddenly slows down with no real change in the song i know...but maybe it's better this way...(maybe i'll just make the slider more farther)
01:44:310 (5) - This break ends too early again okay..
01:22:643 (7) - (nazi) Move 1 level 4 grid left and 1 level 4 grid up?00:59:809 (2) -
01:26:976 (6) - New comboumm.no
01:28:143 (2) - Make this a mirrored version of (1)?01:27:809 (1) -
01:41:143 (6) - This? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/130941 okay..
01:43:810 (4) - This? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/130947 (if you do this, it might look nice if you place (5) at x: 208, y: 192~)color=#0000FF]okay..[/color]
01:44:810 (1,2,3,4) - Place these around the center? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/130943color=#0000FF]okay..[/color]

Nice map and SB~ I'd star but I can't there'll be no white stars anymore X( ...anyway thanks XD

Elly-chan wrote:

[General]
what pieguy said, very good~

[Easy]
01:22:809 (3) - Finish.umm no
01:33:476 (3) - Add finishes on this slider? umm no because i aplied your mod below this
01:34:809 (4) - Finish.okay
01:37:809 (3) - New combo? if so remove the new combo on the one after it and make 01:40:809 a new combo
Great~okay

[Normal]
.. Perfect ;_; What an amazing normal~

[Hard]
00:27:809 (2, 3) - Remove the whistles from these notes so they are only claps.umm. i think there aren't any claps alreadyokay
00:51:476 (1) - Remove new combo?okay

I usually can only mod patterns on easy and normal most of the time so that's why theres gonna be no pattern mods on hard or insane (Easy and normals were fine) but to let you know the patterns are very good~ some sliders can use some work though like right here http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/132064 . the sliders are kinda un-even.that slider i ise it mostly 75% since it really fits it you place a note in middle of it...even there aren't any notes i just like to use it because it's strange XD

[Insane]
ohboy too hard to mod for me ;o;

Anyways GOOD MAP! one of the best i've modded so far XD thats why such a little mod..~ if they weren't useless i'd give you a star ;3

The 08 team_Bourdon wrote:

ello~ xD

General
you got a cute SB

Easy
*- i don't feel it is easy, try to make it easier? no. if i make it easier... i must make normal hard and insane remapped too....i tried my best to make the diff spread good as possible.... i really hate the 1 star easy 3star normals..and the insane got ridicolously harder hard...it's better that i make easy that is not easy. normal that is not normal...because my center point of my diff spread is the insane diff edit: maybe i'll reposition easy without changging the difficulty too much
00:06:809 (1) - add a finish at beginning?okay
00:21:143 (5) - at behind, it is finish, instead of clapokay
01:13:476 - delete this Drag Breakeh i forgot this one
01:33:476 (3) - at middle add a finish?umm no
01:39:143 (1) - at behind, finish instead of clapno..

Normal
*- try to make it below 3 star, and same as 'EASY', i dont feel it is Normal same answer as above : (
00:06:810 (1) - add a finish?okay

Hard
00:14:143 (2) - make it more beautiful noooooo...... looks how this note fits with the slider http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/132579 : (
00:39:810 (5) - up 3 grid? okay
00:46:143 (7) - make it more beautifulokay
00:48:809 (1) - ^i'll change that ufo pattern if there's another mod says this XD
00:51:476 (1) - delete this New Combookay
01:40:143 (2) - at beginning add a finishumm.. no
01:42:143 (5) - at behind add a finish^

Insane
00:15:643 (9) - add a New Combo?ummm.. no
00:32:143 (11) - up+right 5 grid ?okay 2up and 5 right might be good
00:46:143 (7,8,9,10,11) - make them close a bitokay
00:57:143 (7) - left 1 grid ?okay
00:57:476 (9) - up 2 or 3 grid ?2grid may be good
01:13:480 - delete this Drag Breakokay

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Good Luck to you~

Esupanitix wrote:

Hello.

I will not mod Insane since my limit is 3 and Insane requires the most patience.

Easy
00:06:809 Combo
2,3,4 - Misspaced.okay2, i'll reposition it since you're the 3rd person who said this

00:12:143 Combo
Entire Combo - Misspaced. Remember that this is an easy map. I.E. DON'T use jumps. Even if they're tiny, DON'T use them.^

00:17:427 Combo
Entire Combo - Misspaced. Please don't go against the distance snap. Use the wheel on your mouse while holding Alt to adjust the distance snap.^

Pretty much, go over your map with distance snap ON, and check which beats need to be replaced.

Normal
Let's just say go over your map with distance snap and leave it at that (UNLESS YOU WANT A GIGANTIC FUCKING WALL OF TEXT)i'll think of some of the beats so i didn't get a wall of nazi

Hard
Same problem. a big no for this... i never want to use distance snap on hard and insane

Insane
Nothing wrong to be exact.



Main line: I can't mod maps correctly if you don't abide to the distance snap.

Index-San wrote:

Esupanitix wrote:

Hello.

I will not mod Insane since my limit is 3 and Insane requires the most patience.

Easy
00:06:809 Combo
2,3,4 - Misspaced.okay2, i'll reposition it since you're the 3rd person who said this

00:12:143 Combo
Entire Combo - Misspaced. Remember that this is an easy map. I.E. DON'T use jumps. Even if they're tiny, DON'T use them.^

00:17:427 Combo
Entire Combo - Misspaced. Please don't go against the distance snap. Use the wheel on your mouse while holding Alt to adjust the distance snap.^

Pretty much, go over your map with distance snap ON, and check which beats need to be replaced.

Normal
Let's just say go over your map with distance snap and leave it at that (UNLESS YOU WANT A GIGANTIC FUCKING WALL OF TEXT)okay, i'll think of some of the beats so i didn't get a wall of nazi

Hard
Same problem. a big no for this... i never want to use distance snap on hard and insane

Insane
Nothing wrong to be exact.



Main line: I can't mod maps correctly if you don't abide to the distance snap.

i ll finish the repositioning later
PS:I never ever use distance snap for hard and insane.... seriously... i hate that distance snap thingy : (

MoodyRPG wrote:

Easy
OK

Normal
00:22:809 (4) - Maybe new combo?umm no, since the vocal still goes on
01:45:476 (5) - ^?umm...no

Hard
OK

Insane
01:45:476 (4) - Maybe new combo?no...

Good Map

Raging Bull wrote:

Distance snap isnt a bad thing on a hard/insane. It still helps us read clearer. Though I do disable distance snap when I want to make a jump/pattern. So yea, I wouldn't really just throw out distance snap out the window for hard/insane.

Ruish wrote:

Just increase the distance snap thing for hard and insane and then increase it even more for jumps. Of course, it won't work for the bigger jumps. =P

Shulin wrote:

Everything I point out is a suggestion/opinion based on playing your map ^_^

General:

-- Try to develop a consistent hitsound pattern, it's a bit weird when all the diffs use a completely different pattern xD
-- Try to reduce some overlapping, it can look messy sometimes!

Easy:

-- Add a spinner?

00:14:143 (3) - End with clap? okay
00:15:809 (4) - End at 00:16:476?okay
01:01:309 (2) - Sounds weird. You might want to start it at 01:01:476 remove a return and add a beat at 01:02:809 - just a suggestion =P
hmm... okay

Normal:

01:24:476 (7,8) - The rhythm here is strange. I think it would be better to follow 1/1 pattern. okay
01:45:476 (5) - New combo? err..since you're the second person that said this...maybe i'll add NC here

Hard:

-- Imo remove all normal whistle from the map, it sounds bad. well... i removed some of them... but not all of them XD

00:21:643 (1) - move to 00:21:809? no...
00:22:143 (3) - Delete? Map plays better without it imo =P okay
01:25:976 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing?! It plays weird. i'll take it into my note...i'll change it if there are 1 more modder that says about this part : (
01:30:476 (5,6) - Looks ugly, it doesn't stack under the slider properly.oh right...fixed

Insane:

-- Be careful with the spacing changes, some parts feel really close and then jump really quickly often in the same combo like 01:21:976 (3,4,5,6,7) -

00:21:976 (4,5,6) - I think this jump is a little awkward. I think it would play better if the triple went from left to right. i want to do something about this part...but if i change something here it'll make the pattern after this become messy
00:42:309 (5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - This is really messy. The jumps before 00:43:643 (1,2,3,4,5) - don't play very well and the difference in stream spacing between 00:42:309 (5,6,7,8,9) - and 00:43:643 (1,2,3,4,5) - is odd. Also some of the notes get partially hidden by the streams like 00:42:976 (2) - and 00:43:476 (5) - I think you could map this part better and make it clearer, just my opinion okay then.
00:45:976 (6,7) - Spacing? Feels too close.okay
00:57:143 (7,8,9) - Spacing change doesn't make sense imo.fixed
01:15:726 (x) - Note? You'll have to change your spacing a little if you add this though.okay
01:16:059 (x) - ^ I keep hearing the drum roll and expect notes xD^
01:16:643 (3,4,5) - This is a bit awkward with such a high slider velocity.i'll fix it then
01:45:143 (3,4) - Spacing? Too close.okay
01:45:476 (4) - New combo?^

Some of the jumps are fun, but definitely work on your spacing more and try to reduce overlapping. Good luck!

192,256,59809,2,0,B|192:296|256:312|320:296|320:256,1,168.000004005432,8|0
192,128,60476,2,0,B|152:128|136:192|152:256|192:256,1,168.000004005432,8|0

Raging Bull wrote:

Hard:
00:29:143 (1,2,3,4,5) - Your star is slightly off. If you rotate your star by like -9, you can see it isn't properly placed. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/134330
00:59:809 (5,6) - Your arcs need some work. I see you're trying to stack 6's end on 5 but it's rather hard. Try this.

192,256,59809,2,0,B|192:296|256:312|320:296|320:256,1,168.000004005432,8|0
192,128,60476,2,0,B|152:128|136:192|152:256|192:256,1,168.000004005432,8|0

If you want, you can replace some of your arcs with this.
No kds just checking.

justnobody wrote:

late recheck @^@
.
great improvements.
but...

[Hard]
00:11:976 (6) - remove this note? maybe i better no to do that this time....i still can't place note good enough to make it predictable (it's a reason why this mapset is dominated-by-sliders)
00:21:643 (1,2) - it's still confusing...i GUESS de-stacking the notes would be better.okay (maybe flower pattern is a good idea)
00:32:643 (1,2) - i think they should be two 1/2 sliders not 1 note + 1 slider...hmm.. you're right
00:41:476 (1,2,3,4,5) - remove all whistles?ookay
00:57:476 (1,2,3) - no finishes but claps? since i feel too noisy and a bit weird...i'll take it into note...i'll change it if there are another modder says so : (
01:01:143 (x) - i expected a note here...yes...but...it didn't follow the vocal...so maybe i better not add it
01:25:810 (3,1,2,3,4) - this is somewhat crazy spacing. ah you're the 2nd modder that said that : (...okay then.fixed
using this spacing in (1,2,3,4) means 1/4 * 4 streams...so please space them well.

[Normal]
00:12:143 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i don't know how to say it professionally...
please put hitsounds like 00:17:476 (1,2,3,4,5,6). i think i already make them same....
00:52:476 (5,6) - spacing told by AIMod. man... even i was too lazy to open AIMod xD

[Easy]
00:26:143 (3,1) - sounds strange with the gaps between them. fixed
except that everything looks fine.

well i got too lazy to check the insane...
i can't mod insane well and your insane "sounds" okay...

you can ask for my recheck once more after a week...

-Sekai- wrote:

New combo mod~ :3

[Easy]
00:51:143 (4) - new combo okay
01:23:143 (4) - ^okay
01:29:143 (4) - ^okay
for some reason i got confused because you stuck with 3 combo and and suddenly changed into four or more i think you better keep it just 3 combos :3

[Normal]
00:17:476 (1) - remove the new combomaybe not...since there are beggining finish and the vocals start here
00:18:143 (2) - start new combo here~
00:46:476 (1) - remove the new combothe vocals...didn't support it
00:46:809 (6) - new combo
00:57:143 (6) - ^okay
01:22:809 (5) - ^okay
01:29:143 (6) - ^okay

[Hard]
00:11:976 (6) - new combon-no..really....i got mod to change like this and after i change it...there are another modder says to change it back....(really, i've changed this part more than 2 times already)
00:12:310 (1) - remove the new combo
00:50:809 (6) - new combookay
01:17:476 (7) - ^okay
01:26:643 (1) - remove the new combookay
01:26:809 (2) - new combo here~okay

[Insane]
00:52:143 (9) - new combookay
01:41:810 (7) - ^okay
01:42:143 (1) - remove the new combookay
lol nice nothing much i guess =w=

nice map and good luck with it <3

Index-San wrote:

thanks.... man...i was really bad at new combos...

Keilara wrote:

Hi! From my queue c:

Easy

This difficulty looks like a Normal imo >.>

Suggestions only~

00:25:820 (2) - Deleteokay
00:28:476 (2) - ^no... but i changed this part
00:28:643 (x) - Add note^
00:29:143 (3) - Delete^
00:30:809 (2) - Delete repeat and delete note (3).okay
00:37:476 (2) - Replace with circle?no..
00:44:143 (1) - Repeat slider and delete the slider (2).umm..no..it sounds not match the vocal
00:46:809 (1) - ^^
00:49:809 (2) - Delete.okay
00:51:143 (3) - Delete.no...
00:51:476 (x) - Add note.
00:53:809 (5) - Delete.okay
00:54:143 (1) - Replace with a longer slider with endpoint at 00:54:809 with 1 repeat.okay
00:57:143 (2) - Delete?okay
01:01:309 (2) - Move 1 tick forward.okay
01:15:809 (2) - Deleteno...
01:16:143 (2) - Repeat this slider.no...maybe because the new combo colour....sorry that's ridicolous answer...but i really don't like it when there are something makes the notes color did not match the SB
01:17:476 (1) - Delete this.no...
01:20:476 (5) - Delete.okay
01:21:809 (2) - ^okay
01:22:143 (2) - Repeat this slider, and delete slider (3).okay
01:26:476 (2) - Delete.no...
01:29:143 (3) - Maybe NC?already fixed
01:32:809 (2) - Replace this note with a slider with endpoint in 01:33:476 (3) and 1 repeat. (delete (3))maybe i better not...it's confusing for easy to have a note that start at red tick

Normal

And this one looks hard too >.> Make it easier .-. n-noo...i have make it easier already : ( i don't want to make it easier again

Hard & Insane

Ok to me ^u^

That's all!

Good beatmap and nice SB.
Good luck~!

-Sekai- wrote:

Index-San wrote:

thanks.... man...i was really bad at new combos...

and I'm a girl xD
haha~

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Makar8000 wrote:

Hello from the challenge thread :3

Sorry if it feels like I am demanding you to change something. I just don't feel like thinking of a way to make it sound like its only a suggestion and not being rude about it, so I will had a "?" at the end if its meant this way and doesn't really need to be changed even if it doesn't make sense grammatically

NOTE: I started this mod in the morning before some of the previous mods were posted. If some things were updated in the previous mods and is not there anymore please ignore. I wanted to help my roommate move-in today lol.

[General]
-Nice theme and SB : D

[Easy] i remaped it....sorry : (
00:10:810 (4,1) - (nazi) make more symmetrical?
00:14:143 (3) - ^?
00:15:809 (4) - ^?
00:21:809 (1) - Would be nice if you could get this to blanket the end of the previous slider. It's fine how it is though. Could use better symmetry I guess but I will tell you right now I might nazi a lot because this difficulty seems great how it is.
00:24:809 (1) - (nazi) Better symmetry (and get rid of the red point at the end too :s) ?
00:27:143 (1) - ^?
-Okay I don't wanna be a nazi modder so I will try to stop pointing these out orz
00:57:143 (2) - Remove finish?
01:01:309 (2) - Shift right so it starts on the white tick and don't forget to fix spacing http://puu.sh/4Ctd
01:02:809 - I don't really think this break fits here. the song is only 1:45 so I think its safe to map here if you want to even though it is Easy.
01:42:143 (2) - (nazi) Blanket the start of the next slider better?
Nice difficulty

[Normal]
-I'll avoid being a symmetrical nazi this time orz but consider making the sliders more symmetrical and stuffz
00:19:476 (5) - (nazi asdf) Copy 00:18:143 (2) - and do a horizontal flip ? i like my super strange slider for this one xD
00:23:476 (5) - Blanket (6)?okay
00:30:809 (3) - Use a copy of 00:29:476 (1) - instead?i want to... but the way i make the points doesn't support it xD ( it got 5 points, and when i rotate it, the slider instantly become a mess)
00:31:809 (4) - Stack under 00:30:476 (2) - ?okay
00:52:476 (5) - Add the custom clap at the start of this slider? It seems weird because you can't really hear the soft hitsoundokay
00:57:143 (6,7) - Don't sure red slider points in these sliders?err...that's made because accident xD, anyway fixed
01:00:476 (3) - Finish?i-im sure i had finish here before....oh well, added xD
01:02:809 - As said before I don't really think this break fits?im confused now : (, when i map this part some modder says strange place to map...but when i remove it i got mod to add it : (, maybe i'll do something about this part when a flying bats told me to do so
01:25:143 (8) - Make this blanket the end of (7) better?umm..no... (because im a bit confused because i change the combo xD)
01:30:143 (7) - Stack with the end of 01:28:476 (5) - okay
01:41:809 (3) - Blanket the next circle better?okay, but it's hard because the slider is short

[Hard]
00:12:476 (2) - Rotate anti-clockwise so it blankets the previous circle? i perfer to continue the zigzag pattern for this one
00:15:643 (2) - (nazi) Please fix the symmetry on this slider. Remove the red point at the end before doing it to make it easier.okay
00:23:309 (1) - Rotate/adjust so it blankets (2) okay
00:25:476 (4) - Rotate/adjust so it blankets (3)okay
00:26:809 (3) - ^ for (2)i think no for this...because it breaks the spacing and pattern
00:27:309 (1) - (nazi) fix so the blanket is better?okay
00:31:310 (1) - Make the body of this slider stretch more so the path is clear. http://puu.sh/4D7Y use copy and paste for the sliders after it?okay
00:34:810 (4) - Blanket (1)?no because spacing and pattern
00:38:476 (6) - Use more slider points so the curve isn't as sharp (or just use a redpoint? that slider...error xD, fixed
00:53:809 (10) - New Combo?i'll take it into my note, since it's a bit ankward because the part hasn't ended yet...but still acceptable
01:02:809 - This break orz
01:18:143 (11) - You could blanket (7), then stack 01:18:809 (2) - on (7) and make it blanket 01:18:643 (1) - changed some

[Insane]
-Slider velocity is a little high ._. ohhhhh.... there are some trick....it's more easier than hard if you know the secret xD....there are some reason i make some of sliders had shaped like doghnut and had a blank parts that has the same shape as the cursor)
00:08:143 (2) - Move this here - http://puu.sh/4D91 ?okay
00:08:809 (2) - Move here - http://puu.sh/4D97 ?okay
00:09:309 (3) - Move here - http://puu.sh/4D9d ?okay
00:09:476 (4) - Move here - http://puu.sh/4D9i ?okay
00:34:809 (6) - Move here - http://puu.sh/4D9t ?okay
00:35:309 (1) - (nazi) one grid down?okay
00:51:476 (7) - If you fix the symmetry and made the curves "bigger" you could stack this under the slider before with (6) in the middle yes, but there a pattern that makes me must make this slider
01:02:809 - This break really shouldn't be here for insane :s

So overall this map just needs better looking sliders, everything else is fine imo. Sorry for all the nazi mods ;-;