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I'm fine with banning time travel for the same reason we banned god characters that they are too hard to write well with and they can hella mess up the story/lore/whatever
Of course no time travels, it makes the timeline so fucked upDM FOR MUTUAL wrote:
I'm fine with banning time travel for the same reason we banned god characters that they are too hard to write well with and they can hella mess up the story/lore/whatever
While we're here are there any other huge holes that we could fall into that would be good to avoid?Corne2Plum3 wrote:
Of course no time travels, it makes the timeline so fucked upDM FOR MUTUAL wrote:
I'm fine with banning time travel for the same reason we banned god characters that they are too hard to write well with and they can hella mess up the story/lore/whatever
shipping characters that aren't yoursDM FOR MUTUAL wrote:
While we're here are there any other huge holes that we could fall into that would be good to avoid?Corne2Plum3 wrote:
Of course no time travels, it makes the timeline so fucked upDM FOR MUTUAL wrote:
I'm fine with banning time travel for the same reason we banned god characters that they are too hard to write well with and they can hella mess up the story/lore/whatever
It's already written in the rulesB0ii wrote:
shipping characters that aren't yoursDM FOR MUTUAL wrote:
While we're here are there any other huge holes that we could fall into that would be good to avoid?Corne2Plum3 wrote:
Of course no time travels, it makes the timeline so fucked upDM FOR MUTUAL wrote:
I'm fine with banning time travel for the same reason we banned god characters that they are too hard to write well with and they can hella mess up the story/lore/whatever
-If you use a character that someone else created, or interfere in someone's story, and you didn't ask the original creator previously, during the editing process we will ask the original creator to see if they're OK with this.
Also big rule change from the previous book, feel free to share spoilers of your own story if you want
i think that the previosu book and this new book are totally different thingsDM FOR MUTUAL wrote:
Also big rule change from the previous book, feel free to share spoilers of your own story if you want
It's kind of the same thing at it's core but with everything on the surface being differentAnaxii wrote:
i think that the previosu book and this new book are totally different thingsDM FOR MUTUAL wrote:
Also big rule change from the previous book, feel free to share spoilers of your own story if you want
As an editor I assume I'll just be doing more or less the same thing while editing unless we end up getting more specific about writing quality or planning or whatever
So are these going to be filled with non-cannon stories?
let's fucking go OTLibrary won and it's all thanks to me
surely i get a shoutout for this right
surely i get a shoutout for this right
since its Sci-fi, allowing multiversal travel or infinite dimensions. maybe just have one as a possible explanation for ftl travel like in other sci-fi, since ftl in the same universe seems to either use too much energy and/or allows time travel / breaks causality.DM FOR MUTUAL wrote:
While we're here are there any other huge holes that we could fall into that would be good to avoid?Corne2Plum3 wrote:
Of course no time travels, it makes the timeline so fucked upDM FOR MUTUAL wrote:
I'm fine with banning time travel for the same reason we banned god characters that they are too hard to write well with and they can hella mess up the story/lore/whatever
infinite verses means infinite asspulls much of the time, also just makes canon confusing.
whatever the uni/multiverse looks like it should really be finite in some way and agreed on.
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what do you mean by this? everything will be canon in the new universe, what isn't canon is the ot!book 1[ Sebastian ] wrote:
So are these going to be filled with non-cannon stories?
since we have both the OT!Library and the OT!book i say we bundle these two together and call it the "OT!Story Series". why? sounds cool.
the settings don't match upsametdze wrote:
since we have both the OT!Library and the OT!book i say we bundle these two together and call it the "OT!Story Series". why? sounds cool.
I agree, we should ban introducing a multiverse unless we explicitly define it in the initial world building phaseWitherMite wrote:
since its Sci-fi, allowing multiversal travel or infinite dimensions. maybe just have one as a possible explanation for ftl travel like in other sci-fi, since ftl in the same universe seems to either use too much energy and/or allows time travel / breaks causality.DM FOR MUTUAL wrote:
While we're here are there any other huge holes that we could fall into that would be good to avoid?Corne2Plum3 wrote:
Of course no time travels, it makes the timeline so fucked upDM FOR MUTUAL wrote:
I'm fine with banning time travel for the same reason we banned god characters that they are too hard to write well with and they can hella mess up the story/lore/whatever
infinite verses means infinite asspulls much of the time, also just makes canon confusing.
whatever the uni/multiverse looks like it should really be finite in some way and agreed on.
i don't think it's going to be that cool-sametdze wrote:
since we have both the OT!Library and the OT!book i say we bundle these two together and call it the "OT!Story Series". why? sounds cool.
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join the discord thennominomu wrote:
i guess i can help with the worldbuilding
i think it should be allowed but any instances of such should be reviewed before being allowedDM FOR MUTUAL wrote:
I agree, we should ban introducing a multiverse unless we explicitly define it in the initial world building phaseWitherMite wrote:
since its Sci-fi, allowing multiversal travel or infinite dimensions. maybe just have one as a possible explanation for ftl travel like in other sci-fi, since ftl in the same universe seems to either use too much energy and/or allows time travel / breaks causality.DM FOR MUTUAL wrote:
While we're here are there any other huge holes that we could fall into that would be good to avoid?Corne2Plum3 wrote:
Of course no time travels, it makes the timeline so fucked upDM FOR MUTUAL wrote:
I'm fine with banning time travel for the same reason we banned god characters that they are too hard to write well with and they can hella mess up the story/lore/whatever
infinite verses means infinite asspulls much of the time, also just makes canon confusing.
whatever the uni/multiverse looks like it should really be finite in some way and agreed on.
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update: lowered minimum word count per chapter to 600
isnt 600 words kind of short tho?Patatitta wrote:
update: lowered minimum word count per chapter to 600
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look i'm going to kill myselfB0ii wrote:
isnt 600 words kind of short tho?Patatitta wrote:
update: lowered minimum word count per chapter to 600
I said 800
recieve one complaint that it's too much, I say i'm not changing it
I get another complaind that it's too much, I fold and I change it
I change it
"isn't it a little bit short?"
let's say if the chapter is good then we keep it no matter how many words it has lolPatatitta wrote:
look i'm going to kill myselfB0ii wrote:
isnt 600 words kind of short tho?Patatitta wrote:
update: lowered minimum word count per chapter to 600
I said 800
recieve one complaint that it's too much, I say i'm not changing it
I get another complaind that it's too much, I fold and I change it
I change it
"isn't it a little bit short?"
I bet nobody is able to make a good chapter with less than 800 words
I sincerely apologizePatatitta wrote:
look i'm going to kill myselfB0ii wrote:
isnt 600 words kind of short tho?Patatitta wrote:
update: lowered minimum word count per chapter to 600
I said 800
recieve one complaint that it's too much, I say i'm not changing it
I get another complaind that it's too much, I fold and I change it
I change it
"isn't it a little bit short?"
Probably yeah.Corne2Plum3 wrote:
I bet nobody is able to make a good chapter with less than 800 words
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it's not your faultB0ii wrote:
I sincerely apologizePatatitta wrote:
look i'm going to kill myselfB0ii wrote:
isnt 600 words kind of short tho?Patatitta wrote:
update: lowered minimum word count per chapter to 600
I said 800
recieve one complaint that it's too much, I say i'm not changing it
I get another complaind that it's too much, I fold and I change it
I change it
"isn't it a little bit short?"
It's sociaty faultPatatitta wrote:
it's not your faultB0ii wrote:
I sincerely apologizePatatitta wrote:
look i'm going to kill myselfB0ii wrote:
isnt 600 words kind of short tho?Patatitta wrote:
update: lowered minimum word count per chapter to 600
I said 800
recieve one complaint that it's too much, I say i'm not changing it
I get another complaind that it's too much, I fold and I change it
I change it
"isn't it a little bit short?"
sociatyManishh wrote:
It's sociaty faultPatatitta wrote:
it's not your faultB0ii wrote:
I sincerely apologizePatatitta wrote:
look i'm going to kill myselfB0ii wrote:
isnt 600 words kind of short tho?Patatitta wrote:
update: lowered minimum word count per chapter to 600
I said 800
recieve one complaint that it's too much, I say i'm not changing it
I get another complaind that it's too much, I fold and I change it
I change it
"isn't it a little bit short?"
join the server guys
don't be shy
it's not as chaotic as ot!neus dw
don't be shy
it's not as chaotic as ot!neus dw
agreesB0ii wrote:
join the server guys
don't be shy
it's not as chaotic as ot!neus dw
Imma join for the sake of being an ot server lelB0ii wrote:
join the server guys
don't be shy
it's not as chaotic as ot!neus dw
it's not as chaotic but it's really inactiveB0ii wrote:
join the server guys
don't be shy
it's not as chaotic as ot!neus dw
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yeah mainly because it's only intended for like these type of things and nothing more, it isn't supposed to be like an actual discord where people talkAnaxii wrote:
it's not as chaotic but it's really inactiveB0ii wrote:
join the server guys
don't be shy
it's not as chaotic as ot!neus dw
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alright, we're moving to the next and LAST stage of the worldbuilding, the idea that was accepted was
"The story takes part in the year 2XXX, all planets in the solar system (or almost all of them) have intelligent life and have developed space travel, this is still kinda primitive, so they cant really go outside of the solar system. In a collaborative effort, a giant artificial satellite resembling has been constructed, this works as the main hub of the solar system. However, not all is good, as conflict is starting to emerge in the galaxy, as two of the planets have started a war between them. To make things worse, there are space pirates that are trying to gain advantage of the situation"
We now need to create the solar system, create all the new species, and set the relationship between them, we're currently doing this over discord, so join in and say suggestions, if not, just say it over here.
So far we've decided:
1- it's not going to be our solar system
2- the solar system has 8 planets, not all of then inhabitable
3- there are humans and a slime species b0ii made
planet 1 (name not decided) is hot mess, no one can live on there
planet 4 (name not decided), is very similar to earth, and that is where the humans reside
alright, we're moving to the next and LAST stage of the worldbuilding, the idea that was accepted was
"The story takes part in the year 2XXX, all planets in the solar system (or almost all of them) have intelligent life and have developed space travel, this is still kinda primitive, so they cant really go outside of the solar system. In a collaborative effort, a giant artificial satellite resembling has been constructed, this works as the main hub of the solar system. However, not all is good, as conflict is starting to emerge in the galaxy, as two of the planets have started a war between them. To make things worse, there are space pirates that are trying to gain advantage of the situation"
We now need to create the solar system, create all the new species, and set the relationship between them, we're currently doing this over discord, so join in and say suggestions, if not, just say it over here.
So far we've decided:
1- it's not going to be our solar system
2- the solar system has 8 planets, not all of then inhabitable
3- there are humans and a slime species b0ii made
planet 1 (name not decided) is hot mess, no one can live on there
planet 4 (name not decided), is very similar to earth, and that is where the humans reside
responding to the second decision: i had thought of adding 10 planets instead for more stories and variety, but also because having 8 planets with some of them inhabitable will actually narrow things down a lot in the future. we already have 8 planets in our current solar system so why not adding more?Patatitta wrote:
So far we've decided:
1- it's not going to be our solar system
2- the solar system has 8 planets, not all of then inhabitable
3- there are humans and a slime species b0ii made
planet 1 (name not decided) is hot mess, no one can live on there
planet 4 (name not decided), is very similar to earth, and that is where the humans reside
also, the most logical thing would be that the nearest and the farthest planets from the sun are uninhabitable due to their nature (which is exactly what you did with "planet 1")
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I don't want to add too many planets because already writing 8 is pretty hard, adding more may be too much, think that the reader must also understand the solar system while reading the storyAnaxii wrote:
responding to the second decision: i had thought of adding 10 planets instead for more stories and variety, but also because having 8 planets with some of them inhabitable will actually narrow things down a lot in the future. we already have 8 planets in our current solar system so why not adding more?Patatitta wrote:
So far we've decided:
1- it's not going to be our solar system
2- the solar system has 8 planets, not all of then inhabitable
3- there are humans and a slime species b0ii made
planet 1 (name not decided) is hot mess, no one can live on there
planet 4 (name not decided), is very similar to earth, and that is where the humans reside
also, the most logical thing would be that the nearest and the farthest planets from the sun are uninhabitable due to their nature (which is exactly what you did with "planet 1")
I like about making the one closest and furthest unhabitable tho
Topic Starter
update: these are the planets we have rn
star 1: burning mess, unhabitable planet
star 2: hot, unhabitable planet
star 3: b0ii slime planet
star 4: totally not earth
star 5: manishh monkey planet
star 6: big planet with moons that are habitable
star 7: cold, unhabitable planet
star 8: cold, unhabitable planet
(Thx for anaxii for writing that for me)
species:
slime species (b0ii said they wanted one)
humans (live in totally not earth)
intelligent monkey species (by manish)
currently, we need at least 1 moon in star 6, but more could be added, if you guys want to also add more species or whatever it's fine, b0ii and manishh will develop their own planets. Ideas on how to make star 2, 7, and 8 would also be appreciated
also we need names
star 1: burning mess, unhabitable planet
star 2: hot, unhabitable planet
star 3: b0ii slime planet
star 4: totally not earth
star 5: manishh monkey planet
star 6: big planet with moons that are habitable
star 7: cold, unhabitable planet
star 8: cold, unhabitable planet
(Thx for anaxii for writing that for me)
species:
slime species (b0ii said they wanted one)
humans (live in totally not earth)
intelligent monkey species (by manish)
currently, we need at least 1 moon in star 6, but more could be added, if you guys want to also add more species or whatever it's fine, b0ii and manishh will develop their own planets. Ideas on how to make star 2, 7, and 8 would also be appreciated
also we need names
What do y'all think that the 8 planets are unhabitable, but the one in the habitable zone is huge and has Earth sized moons, which are habitables?
(also doesn't exclude the possibility to add more planets still in the habitable zones, however they would be more isolated than the others)
1-2-3-4-5-6-7-8 unhabitables
3.1-3.4-3.6.3-7 habitables for example
(also doesn't exclude the possibility to add more planets still in the habitable zones, however they would be more isolated than the others)
1-2-3-4-5-6-7-8 unhabitables
3.1-3.4-3.6.3-7 habitables for example
Topic Starter
I personally just having a solar system like the one I suggested and we decided earlierCorne2Plum3 wrote:
What do y'all think that the 8 planets are unhabitable, but the one in the habitable zone is huge and has Earth sized moons, which are habitables?
(also doesn't exclude the possibility to add more planets still in the habitable zones, however they would be more isolated than the others)
no worries!Patatitta wrote:
update: these are the planets we have rn
star 1: burning mess, unhabitable planet
star 2: hot, unhabitable planet
star 3: b0ii slime planet
star 4: totally not earth
star 5: manishh monkey planet
star 6: big planet with moons that are habitable
star 7: cold, unhabitable planet
star 8: cold, unhabitable planet
(Thx for anaxii for writing that for me)
also, i made a small representation of what the solar system looks like from my head
(the sizes are not accurate + we didn't decide how many moons there's going to be around the big planet)
Hmmm..man why I do think that the world building feels too realistic?
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trust me, this would NOT work IRL, but if it seems realistic enough for you, then it's making the jobMrMcMikey22 wrote:
Hmmm..man why I do think that the world building feels too realistic?
also, update, kobold has claimed a moon
we now need to develop the planets, that means, giving all of them names and deciding how they look like
poopy mayonaise planet O_O
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update:
we've advanced a lot more, we've started writing the chapter itself, developing and naming the planets and stuff
we've advanced a lot more, we've started writing the chapter itself, developing and naming the planets and stuff
I would love to write for this!!Patatitta wrote:
update:
we've advanced a lot more, we've started writing the chapter itself, developing and naming the planets and stuff
THEN JOIN THE SERVER NOW!!MaxIsABigKaiju wrote:
I would love to write for this!!Patatitta wrote:
update:
we've advanced a lot more, we've started writing the chapter itself, developing and naming the planets and stuff
:D
I don't have discord nvmB0ii wrote:
THEN JOIN THE SERVER NOW!!MaxIsABigKaiju wrote:
I would love to write for this!!Patatitta wrote:
update:
we've advanced a lot more, we've started writing the chapter itself, developing and naming the planets and stuff
:D
:(:(damnMaxIsABigKaiju wrote:
I don't have discord nvmB0ii wrote:
THEN JOIN THE SERVER NOW!!MaxIsABigKaiju wrote:
I would love to write for this!!Patatitta wrote:
update:
we've advanced a lot more, we've started writing the chapter itself, developing and naming the planets and stuff
:D
Topic Starter
you can make one, it's freeMaxIsABigKaiju wrote:
I don't have discord nvmB0ii wrote:
THEN JOIN THE SERVER NOW!!MaxIsABigKaiju wrote:
I would love to write for this!!Patatitta wrote:
update:
we've advanced a lot more, we've started writing the chapter itself, developing and naming the planets and stuff
:D
star: 8 planet 9Patatitta wrote:
update: these are the planets we have rn
star 1: burning mess, unhabitable planet
star 2: hot, unhabitable planet
star 3: b0ii slime planet
star 4: totally not earth
star 5: manishh monkey planet
star 6: big planet with moons that are habitable
star 7: cold, unhabitable planet
star 8: cold, unhabitable planet
(Thx for anaxii for writing that for me)
species:
slime species (b0ii said they wanted one)
humans (live in totally not earth)
intelligent monkey species (by manish)
currently, we need at least 1 moon in star 6, but more could be added, if you guys want to also add more species or whatever it's fine, b0ii and manishh will develop their own planets. Ideas on how to make star 2, 7, and 8 would also be appreciated
also we need names
Topic Starter
update on this, we're close to being done, I just need to do the boring stuff lol
have you decided how many moons there will be around the big planet?Patatitta wrote:
update on this, we're close to being done, I just need to do the boring stuff lol
Topic Starter
idk only 1 has been suggested so 1 so farAnaxii wrote:
have you decided how many moons there will be around the big planet?Patatitta wrote:
update on this, we're close to being done, I just need to do the boring stuff lol
actually we can just say that only one moon has been discovered by humans and the rest is still unknown, so we don't know the exact number of moons around planet 6. people can then choose their moon and write whatever they want on it, as long as it's coherent with the universe it's inPatatitta wrote:
idk only 1 has been suggested so 1 so farAnaxii wrote:
have you decided how many moons there will be around the big planet?Patatitta wrote:
update on this, we're close to being done, I just need to do the boring stuff lol
Topic Starter
idk if humankind has gone with a spaceship around it I think they should have spotted all the moonsAnaxii wrote:
actually we can just say that only one moon has been discovered by humans and the rest is still unknown, so we don't know the exact number of moons around planet 6. people can then choose their moon and write whatever they want on it, as long as it's coherent with the universe it's inPatatitta wrote:
idk only 1 has been suggested so 1 so farAnaxii wrote:
have you decided how many moons there will be around the big planet?Patatitta wrote:
update on this, we're close to being done, I just need to do the boring stuff lol
obviously not but they will spot all the moons during the writing process. it will give people a chance to create what they want on each moon, but there will be a limit of coursePatatitta wrote:
idk if humankind has gone with a spaceship around it I think they should have spotted all the moonsAnaxii wrote:
actually we can just say that only one moon has been discovered by humans and the rest is still unknown, so we don't know the exact number of moons around planet 6. people can then choose their moon and write whatever they want on it, as long as it's coherent with the universe it's inPatatitta wrote:
idk only 1 has been suggested so 1 so farAnaxii wrote:
have you decided how many moons there will be around the big planet?Patatitta wrote:
update on this, we're close to being done, I just need to do the boring stuff lol
I'd like to claim a moon on planet 6 where humans attempted to colonize itAnaxii wrote:
actually we can just say that only one moon has been discovered by humans and the rest is still unknown, so we don't know the exact number of moons around planet 6. people can then choose their moon and write whatever they want on it, as long as it's coherent with the universe it's inPatatitta wrote:
idk only 1 has been suggested so 1 so farAnaxii wrote:
have you decided how many moons there will be around the big planet?Patatitta wrote:
update on this, we're close to being done, I just need to do the boring stuff lol
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that's kinda fair but it may break things, we may have to speak about itAnaxii wrote:
obviously not but they will spot all the moons during the writing process. it will give people a chance to create what they want on each moon, but there will be a limit of coursePatatitta wrote:
idk if humankind has gone with a spaceship around it I think they should have spotted all the moonsAnaxii wrote:
actually we can just say that only one moon has been discovered by humans and the rest is still unknown, so we don't know the exact number of moons around planet 6. people can then choose their moon and write whatever they want on it, as long as it's coherent with the universe it's inPatatitta wrote:
idk only 1 has been suggested so 1 so farAnaxii wrote:
have you decided how many moons there will be around the big planet?Patatitta wrote:
update on this, we're close to being done, I just need to do the boring stuff lol
Just adding stuff that should have always been here doesn't work. It's like if someone decided to add a whole continent in the middle of an already established world without explanation.Patatitta wrote:
that's kinda fair but it may break things, we may have to speak about itAnaxii wrote:
obviously not but they will spot all the moons during the writing process. it will give people a chance to create what they want on each moon, but there will be a limit of coursePatatitta wrote:
idk if humankind has gone with a spaceship around it I think they should have spotted all the moonsAnaxii wrote:
actually we can just say that only one moon has been discovered by humans and the rest is still unknown, so we don't know the exact number of moons around planet 6. people can then choose their moon and write whatever they want on it, as long as it's coherent with the universe it's inPatatitta wrote:
idk only 1 has been suggested so 1 so farAnaxii wrote:
have you decided how many moons there will be around the big planet?Patatitta wrote:
update on this, we're close to being done, I just need to do the boring stuff lol
join the discord!reinosk wrote:
okay, very interesting and i'll join you
done "Accept Invite"Anaxii wrote:
join the discord!reinosk wrote:
okay, very interesting and i'll join you
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the worldbuilding stage will finish tomorrow, meaning, you can start writing your stories tomorrow
ngl i feel like the discord wasn't really active these last few days...Patatitta wrote:
the worldbuilding stage will finish tomorrow, meaning, you can start writing your stories tomorrow
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it def wasn't, that is why I gave a deadlineAnaxii wrote:
ngl i feel like the discord wasn't really active these last few days...Patatitta wrote:
the worldbuilding stage will finish tomorrow, meaning, you can start writing your stories tomorrow
so to summarize the planets:Patatitta wrote:
it def wasn't, that is why I gave a deadlineAnaxii wrote:
ngl i feel like the discord wasn't really active these last few days...Patatitta wrote:
the worldbuilding stage will finish tomorrow, meaning, you can start writing your stories tomorrow
- planet 1, 2, 6, 7 and 8 are uninhabitable
- planet 1 has diamonds and other minerals
- planet 2 is a giant desert with water
- planet Yab (3) is the house of slimes with water and the sun as an energy source
- planet Yoony (4) is basically earth
- planet Harmonia (5) is the house of monkeys with jungles and savannas
- planet 7 is entirely covered in a thick layer of carbon and appears black from outer space
- planet 8 is a frozen wasteland
- planet 6 has 3 moons that are inhabitable
- moon Leafroll (6-1) is attacked by a virus that turns vegetation red and the inhabitants are still in the medieval age
- moon Awoomun (6-2) is the same as planet Yoony (4) but smaller with more diversity and species
- moon Denera (6-3) is the same as planet Yoony (4) but smaller and the atmosphere is more unstable
- there's a giant space station between planet Yoony (4) and planet Harmonia (5) that serves as a hub for all species
For Awoomun it's almost only forest, there are no deserts or ice continent like YoonyAnaxii wrote:
so to summarize the planets:Patatitta wrote:
it def wasn't, that is why I gave a deadlineAnaxii wrote:
ngl i feel like the discord wasn't really active these last few days...Patatitta wrote:
the worldbuilding stage will finish tomorrow, meaning, you can start writing your stories tomorrow
- planet 1, 2, 6, 7 and 8 are uninhabitable
- planet 1 has diamonds and other minerals
- planet 2 is a giant desert with water
- planet Yab (3) is the house of slimes with water and the sun as an energy source
- planet Yoony (4) is basically earth
- planet Harmonia (5) is the house of monkeys with jungles and savannas
- planet 7 is entirely covered in a thick layer of carbon and appears black from outer space
- planet 8 is a frozen wasteland
- planet 6 as 3 moons that are inhabitable
- moon Leafroll (6-1) is attacked by a virus that turns vegetation red and the inhabitants are still in the medieval age
- moon Awoomun (6-2) is the same as planet Yoony (4) but smaller with more diversity and species
- moon Denera (6-3) is the same as planet Yoony (4) but smaller and the atmosphere is more unstable
- there's a giant space station between planet Yoony (4) and planet Harmonia (5) that serves as a hub for all species
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updated the OP
Now that the worldbuilding is done, we're actually starting the writing process now, I await your chapters!, just to clarify, you can now write WHATEVER you want as long as it takes part in the world that we have created
The world
how to write a chapter
Yoony
💯
LET'S GOOOOO
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added to the threadAnaxii wrote:
i redid what i draw previously respecting what is written in the google documentAnaxii wrote:
also, i made a small representation of what the solar system looks like from my head
(the sizes are not accurate + we didn't decide how many moons there's going to be around the big planet)
/in
/in
/in
Why are you guys saying that?
because they want to write their chapter?Karmine wrote:
Why are you guys saying that?
That doesn't exactly answer my question, there's no registration for writing.Anaxii wrote:
because they want to write their chapter?Karmine wrote:
Why are you guys saying that?
/inKarmine wrote:
That doesn't exactly answer my question, there's no registration for writing.Anaxii wrote:
because they want to write their chapter?Karmine wrote:
Why are you guys saying that?
Topic Starter
there is no need to /in, you just write, and when it's finishbed, you dm me the chapter. Corne should known as i've explained how this works to him like 4 times already
I'm just showing to other people that this is not a dead project and there's a substantial interest towards it. Naturally, as an on-looker, if you see some people gathering around something, you're more likely to join.Karmine wrote:
That doesn't exactly answer my question, there's no registration for writing.Anaxii wrote:
because they want to write their chapter?Karmine wrote:
Why are you guys saying that?
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yeah this makes senseKobold84 wrote:
I'm just showing to other people that this is not a dead project and there's a substantial interest towards it. Naturally, as an on-looker, if you see some people gathering around something, you're more likely to join.Karmine wrote:
That doesn't exactly answer my question, there's no registration for writing.Anaxii wrote:
because they want to write their chapter?Karmine wrote:
Why are you guys saying that?
I was just copying what Manishh was doing :3Patatitta wrote:
there is no need to /in, you just write, and when it's finishbed, you dm me the chapter. Corne should known as i've explained how this works to him like 4 times already
hope the first ever chapter isn't going to be too hard to read.
You bet it will be. I will be the first!Anaxii wrote:
hope the first ever chapter isn't going to be too hard to read.
OMG IT WILL BE SO EPIC THENManishh wrote:
You bet it will be. I will be the first!Anaxii wrote:
hope the first ever chapter isn't going to be too hard to read.
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two chapters will be released sometime tomorrow
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this week we have 2 chapters, there are 3 more people that want to write chapters but either they haven't started it or haven't finished it in time for this week, but anyways, here we have the first chapter from manishh and corne!
manishh chapter:Chapter 1: Sowing Seeds of Strife
20/4/2310
In the heart of Harmonia, where vines and bridges connect lives, there lived a Normal Monkey named Kairo, born in an average house. Kairo only had his mother, both lived together in a tree house. He was not rich by any standard but he had plenty of food to eat since the production of consumables is very high in Harmonia. It’s so high that Harmonia is the biggest exporter of consumables in the solar system. Kairo’s life was ordinary with his mother Elara waking him up every morning.
Elara: Kairo Kairo wake up! Take out the new SparkleMist, it’s in that supply box.
SparkleMist Oral Cleanser is a revolutionary dental hygiene product in the world of Harmonia. Instead of the traditional toothpaste and brush, it comes in the form of a bioluminescent mist. The mist is stored in a sleek, eco-friendly container made from recycled materials, aligning with the planet's commitment to sustainability.
Kairo: Morning Harmony(Morning/goodmorning)
Elara: Morning Harmony! The breakfast is ready, What study did you get assigned today.
Kairo: Teacher told us to explore the jungle to see different plants and how their energy production changes with lower light. I will be going into the jungle in the north.
Elara: 'Us'? So you are not going alone?
Kairo: Me and Kaya got assigned the same task.
Elara: How sweet, you really like Kaya don't you?
Kairo: Blush No that's not it, she is the one who asked to get the same task.
Elara: So you don't like kaya?
Kairo: I didn't say that!
Elara: giggles
Kairo: giggles I will go now, thanks for the breakfast.
Elara: Alright but be careful, the jungle in the north is very dense.
Kairo, with his bag and equipment, begins his journey to the jungle but first he will meet Kaya. The primary mode of transport in the heart of Harmonia is eco-friendly hovering buses, which run without a driver due to modern technology. The bus taken by our main character has 5 stops. Kairo's house is near Stop 2, and Kaya's house is near Stop 3. Stop 5 is the closest you can get to the north jungle. The bus arrives at Stop 3, and Kaya boards the bus, meeting Kairo.
Kairo: Morning Harmony!
Kaya: Morning Harmony!
Kairo: You are looking beautiful, How was your morning?
Kaya: Thanks but do I? It was a rush morning ;-;
Kairo: You do you do. I hope you didn't miss any equipment.
Kaya: Yup!, So, it’s a date.
Kairo: Um ah it’s a study task... Besides a date in a jungle...
Kaya: I thought it was a date o-o
Kairo: Ohh we arrived at our destination
Kaya: Don't change the topic...
Both Kairo and Kaya get off the bus and begin their journey to the North Jungle, which is still quite far away...
Kairo: Did we board the wrong bus? I don't see a dense jungle here...
Kaya: Calling this a jungle would be too much, let alone a dense one.. Oh there is a sign here
"--This Path leads to North jungle--"
"--10km--"
Kairo: ......
Kaya: ......
Kairo: ... Give me the map I want to make sure this is the shortest path.
Kaya: Map?
Kairo: Dont tell me... You said you will bring the map...
Kaya: Haha oops I think I forgot 😅
Kairo: ... Let's just follow the path
Kaya: Lets gooo
Kairo: Don’t runnn
Kairo and Kaya begin their journey with excitement, however, as time passes, that excitement is replaced with exhaustion.
Kaya: Are we... there... yet... I am dying...
Kairo: We haven’t... even covered half... Thanks to your idea of running, we are exhausted.
Kaya: I didn’t... know... 10km is that... big of a distance.
Kairo: Now you know... Wait the path splits into 2 paths... and pieces of a broken sign... Hmm Lets collect them and see what is written on it.
Kaya: It says
"En/a.ce "
"Ma(n"
"B-ck E-tran(e"
Kairo: Main Entrance and Back Entrance hmm, I don't think the back Entrance is safe...
Kaya: Yeah, the words are painted red.
Kairo: We have no way of identifying which is which.
Kaya: Yeah... Looks around Look, the path on the right looks shorter.
Kairo: Yeah it does.
Kaya: Why would the main entrance be made far away and the back one closer? We should go to the right.
Kairo: You have a point, although you chose the right path just because it’s shorter, right?
Kaya: Of course not! Let's go, we don't have a lot of time. Runs
Kairo: Not again!! Wait for me!!!
This path was indeed not the main path. After a short run, they finally arrived at the entrance.
Kaya: See we are here so fast.
Kairo: exhausted Yeah Yeah didn't take starts coughing
Kaya: Are you fine?? Sit down, drink some water!
Kairo: Thanks I am fine, oof I didn't run for this long for a long time.
Did I say Normal Monkey in the beginning? He is below average when it comes to fitness.
Kairo: Let’s enter the jungle.
Kaya: As you wish.
Kairo: Ohhhh
Kaya: This is so scary but amazing at the same time. The blue light emitting from plants is so beautiful!!
Kairo: Yeah definitely, this is so amazing!!
Kaya: すばらしい!!
Kairo: huh? Subha what?
Kaya: Subarashī. It’s from a human language. It means amazing.
Kairo: I see, -_-
Kaya: I know you don't like Humans but you should let go of the past Kairo. Look, they even helped us in the past.
Kairo: How could I forget all of this? They invaded us, I even... um We lost the greatest and most powerful king of our history. Only because of him Harmonia was saved.
Kaya: I know but ground cracking sound
Kairo: Oiii pushes Kaya shit
Kairo falls into a big cavity, taking a lot of hits on the way down. The cavity opened a big tunnel underground which our character fell into.
Kairo: This hurts so badly!! Ouch, where am I? Everything is so dark. It was definitely a good idea to bring a torch with me. pushes the button Hmm? Why isn't this working? Don't tell me this broke. Why was this so expensive?!
While exploring in the pitch darkness, Kairo notices a dim but noticeable light coming from far away. Kairo thinks it is an exit and slowly walks towards the dim light. After reaching for the object:
Kairo: What is this? A plant? Wait, this is an item.. It's a relic.. Why is it glowing though? Picks the item Hmm This feels expensive and warm. Did it start glowing more? Oh wait No NO NO NO THIS IS GOING INSIDE MY HAND WHAT WHAT. SHIT MY BODY IS RELEASING SO MUCH ENERGY. I AM ABOUT TO EXPLODEEEE
To be continued
20/4/2310
In the heart of Harmonia, where vines and bridges connect lives, there lived a Normal Monkey named Kairo, born in an average house. Kairo only had his mother, both lived together in a tree house. He was not rich by any standard but he had plenty of food to eat since the production of consumables is very high in Harmonia. It’s so high that Harmonia is the biggest exporter of consumables in the solar system. Kairo’s life was ordinary with his mother Elara waking him up every morning.
Elara: Kairo Kairo wake up! Take out the new SparkleMist, it’s in that supply box.
SparkleMist Oral Cleanser is a revolutionary dental hygiene product in the world of Harmonia. Instead of the traditional toothpaste and brush, it comes in the form of a bioluminescent mist. The mist is stored in a sleek, eco-friendly container made from recycled materials, aligning with the planet's commitment to sustainability.
Kairo: Morning Harmony(Morning/goodmorning)
Elara: Morning Harmony! The breakfast is ready, What study did you get assigned today.
Kairo: Teacher told us to explore the jungle to see different plants and how their energy production changes with lower light. I will be going into the jungle in the north.
Elara: 'Us'? So you are not going alone?
Kairo: Me and Kaya got assigned the same task.
Elara: How sweet, you really like Kaya don't you?
Kairo: Blush No that's not it, she is the one who asked to get the same task.
Elara: So you don't like kaya?
Kairo: I didn't say that!
Elara: giggles
Kairo: giggles I will go now, thanks for the breakfast.
Elara: Alright but be careful, the jungle in the north is very dense.
Kairo, with his bag and equipment, begins his journey to the jungle but first he will meet Kaya. The primary mode of transport in the heart of Harmonia is eco-friendly hovering buses, which run without a driver due to modern technology. The bus taken by our main character has 5 stops. Kairo's house is near Stop 2, and Kaya's house is near Stop 3. Stop 5 is the closest you can get to the north jungle. The bus arrives at Stop 3, and Kaya boards the bus, meeting Kairo.
Kairo: Morning Harmony!
Kaya: Morning Harmony!
Kairo: You are looking beautiful, How was your morning?
Kaya: Thanks but do I? It was a rush morning ;-;
Kairo: You do you do. I hope you didn't miss any equipment.
Kaya: Yup!, So, it’s a date.
Kairo: Um ah it’s a study task... Besides a date in a jungle...
Kaya: I thought it was a date o-o
Kairo: Ohh we arrived at our destination
Kaya: Don't change the topic...
Both Kairo and Kaya get off the bus and begin their journey to the North Jungle, which is still quite far away...
Kairo: Did we board the wrong bus? I don't see a dense jungle here...
Kaya: Calling this a jungle would be too much, let alone a dense one.. Oh there is a sign here
"--10km--"
Kairo: ......
Kaya: ......
Kairo: ... Give me the map I want to make sure this is the shortest path.
Kaya: Map?
Kairo: Dont tell me... You said you will bring the map...
Kaya: Haha oops I think I forgot 😅
Kairo: ... Let's just follow the path
Kaya: Lets gooo
Kairo: Don’t runnn
Kairo and Kaya begin their journey with excitement, however, as time passes, that excitement is replaced with exhaustion.
Kaya: Are we... there... yet... I am dying...
Kairo: We haven’t... even covered half... Thanks to your idea of running, we are exhausted.
Kaya: I didn’t... know... 10km is that... big of a distance.
Kairo: Now you know... Wait the path splits into 2 paths... and pieces of a broken sign... Hmm Lets collect them and see what is written on it.
Kaya: It says
"Ma(n"
"B-ck E-tran(e"
Kairo: Main Entrance and Back Entrance hmm, I don't think the back Entrance is safe...
Kaya: Yeah, the words are painted red.
Kairo: We have no way of identifying which is which.
Kaya: Yeah... Looks around Look, the path on the right looks shorter.
Kairo: Yeah it does.
Kaya: Why would the main entrance be made far away and the back one closer? We should go to the right.
Kairo: You have a point, although you chose the right path just because it’s shorter, right?
Kaya: Of course not! Let's go, we don't have a lot of time. Runs
Kairo: Not again!! Wait for me!!!
This path was indeed not the main path. After a short run, they finally arrived at the entrance.
Kaya: See we are here so fast.
Kairo: exhausted Yeah Yeah didn't take starts coughing
Kaya: Are you fine?? Sit down, drink some water!
Kairo: Thanks I am fine, oof I didn't run for this long for a long time.
Did I say Normal Monkey in the beginning? He is below average when it comes to fitness.
Kairo: Let’s enter the jungle.
Kaya: As you wish.
Kairo: Ohhhh
Kaya: This is so scary but amazing at the same time. The blue light emitting from plants is so beautiful!!
Kairo: Yeah definitely, this is so amazing!!
Kaya: すばらしい!!
Kairo: huh? Subha what?
Kaya: Subarashī. It’s from a human language. It means amazing.
Kairo: I see, -_-
Kaya: I know you don't like Humans but you should let go of the past Kairo. Look, they even helped us in the past.
Kairo: How could I forget all of this? They invaded us, I even... um We lost the greatest and most powerful king of our history. Only because of him Harmonia was saved.
Kaya: I know but ground cracking sound
Kairo: Oiii pushes Kaya shit
Kairo falls into a big cavity, taking a lot of hits on the way down. The cavity opened a big tunnel underground which our character fell into.
Kairo: This hurts so badly!! Ouch, where am I? Everything is so dark. It was definitely a good idea to bring a torch with me. pushes the button Hmm? Why isn't this working? Don't tell me this broke. Why was this so expensive?!
While exploring in the pitch darkness, Kairo notices a dim but noticeable light coming from far away. Kairo thinks it is an exit and slowly walks towards the dim light. After reaching for the object:
Kairo: What is this? A plant? Wait, this is an item.. It's a relic.. Why is it glowing though? Picks the item Hmm This feels expensive and warm. Did it start glowing more? Oh wait No NO NO NO THIS IS GOING INSIDE MY HAND WHAT WHAT. SHIT MY BODY IS RELEASING SO MUCH ENERGY. I AM ABOUT TO EXPLODEEEE
To be continued
corne2plum3 chapter:Chapter 1: Native student from a wild moon
Moon 6.2: Awoomun / Villeloup-Sur-Mer / Fluffy’s hut
2310/04/21 18:43 UTC+2 (Yoony’s time converted)
It’s been 2 hours since I've been doing my homework for tomorrow, doing mathematics, studying functions with several variables and integrating functions, getting weirder and weirder as I do my exercises. In my head, it was like “how am I supposed to get the antiderivative of this function” or “what are the boundaries? Why the integration is on a fucking sphere…?” I’m a young adult already, but my studies aren’t over. Anyways I think I worked enough, I’m almost done with my homework but right now I'm hungry, and I need to move.
I look at the window. Despite living in an immense tree, above the majority of the foliage, my personal hut (which is quite modern thinking about it) is about 80 meters above the floor, and I can see the sun in the distance about to set, and also the immense planet, Kepler, that our moon, Awoomun, rotates around. I think it’s time for me to go outside and get my food.
I decide to leave my hut, climb down the stairs which are just wooden boards or platforms stuck on the large truck of the tree. I go down to reach the floor and walk across the pathway. The pathway is surrounded by immense trees with huts attached to these, either against the trunk or hidden in the foliage, which hide a large part of the sky, but still let some sunlight go through. There are also some wooden platforms that link some huts between them, allowing us to move between trees without having to go down then up, which is kinda annoying as some trees can reach 100 meters tall here. Some trunks have entire buildings attached to their trees, with apartments on them. Clearly the constructions are adapted to the trees, which are almost untouched. At the end, from the ground up, it’s like a giant forest with huts of various sizes attached to the trees and platform. It’s kinda easy to get lost, I admit it…
I walk alone across the pathway, which is just some rocky pavement and grass, and see a few humans, next to a much larger number of fellow grosloups. We’re basically furred creatures, with a muzzle, triangular ears, large teeth, long claws that we can expand and partially hide, and a big and fluffy tail. We’re both bipedal and quadrupedal at the same time. With our very long arms (the same size as our legs), we can move on both 2 and 4 paws in ease. And next to the humans… we’re dwarfing them a bit: we’re almost twice their size on average, and we have overall a stronger and more intimidating build. Personally I often see humans that are the same size as me when I stand on all fours. I’m 3.36 meters tall when standing on 2 paws, which is relatively tall, knowing that the average height for adults is 3.10 meters for males and 2.80 meters for females. Humans often compare us to their wolves on their planet, Yoony, but much bigger and more dangerous… I’ve seen some pictures of wolves from Yoony and I agree they kinda look like us.
I walk for a few hundred meters, seeing on my left the sun falling with a large view of the ocean, only about 200 meters away, and on my right the other large trees of the forest spreading for dozens of kilometers. Then I reach the border of the city, which is just some fences and a large door which is currently wide open. There are 2 grosloups next to the door, to ensure no wild animals enter the city. Because I’m still in the middle of the forest. I’m getting more and more hungry, but I keep walking to get my food.
And how do I get my food? In the old fashion way which is hunting. I didn’t bring any weapons with me, because this is unnecessary. Like other grosloups, my body is literally made for hunting and killing. We’re in fact the apex predator of the whole planet, at the top of the food chain, and we don’t have any natural predators. We mostly need to eat meat every day so that’s why we hunt down some prey. Yes, we have some farms, I could just go to a shop and buy some food, but we’re attached to a lot of our traditions and environment, and as predators, hunting is part of our culture. Even with the technology that the humans brought with them when they entered our planet 200 years ago, we still prefer hunting using our body only, and eventually with a few primitive weapons, such as bows or slingshots. Even the kids learn to hunt at a very young age.
As I get more and more away from the city, I’m now in an area where I could get some prey to feed myself. I smell the air around, and detect an isolated prey about 200 meters away from me. I get on all fours and let my senses guide me to my prey. I don’t hesitate to smell the air, the ground, and be careful of every sound around me. I walk at a slower and quieter pace as I get closer to my prey, until I finally spot it. It’s a quadrupedal animal with 2 pairs of horns, brown and white fur, and about 1.8 meters in length. It’s currently drinking water from a small river, clearly not aware of my presence. It looks really delicious, I’m about to drool if I keep looking at it.
Hidden behind bushes and trees, I slowly approach the drinking animal, completely unaware of my presence. Once it finishes drinking, I’m behind it. Then in a sudden, I charge towards the prey to catch it and kill it. As it hears the sound of my footsteps approaching it at a very fast pace, it starts to run away, but I won’t let my meal escape me that easily of course, so I chase it. It is quite agile and can easily pass over through small bushes, but I keep it in my sight. It runs quite fast but I’m even faster. About 50 seconds of running and avoiding the obstacles, I managed to hit one of his rear legs with my very sharp claws, making it collapse on the floor. And finally, while the poor prey is trying to get up, I pounce on him, digging my claws deeply in his skin and biting his neck. I even feel my teeth breaking some of his bones. I pull with my maw some of his flesh, and give it a final blow, ending his suffering.
I take a deep breath, happy that I managed to get my food for tonight, and in my first try too! This isn’t usually that easy everyday, it’s common for me, like everyone, to miss their prey. As my belly growls again, I start eating the animal I’ve just killed, swallowing chunks of its flesh. I know it’s raw, but my species can digest uncooked meat with ease. It’s literally the base of our alimentation. The blood combined with the fresh meat is just delicious, I like it. I fill my stomach with all of this meat until I’m full.
When I’m done, I’ve not even eaten half of the available flesh. I decide to use my claws to tear more meat, and put it in a bag, I’ll consume it later. It’s common to do that, taking as much as we can with a killed prey, to limit the amount of animals we kill. We take the respect of nature very seriously, and we know killing too much will bring nothing but problems.
Finally full, I go back home, to put the 20 kilograms of meat I collected into the fridge. It's almost the night. But I’d like to drink something before going to sleep. I put on my dark cloak that covers my upper body and my thighs, and go outside.
Walk across the city, still in the middle of the forest, and in a few minutes, I end up in a street, with still immense trees and buildings attached to it, and some places inside the trunks, as the tree trunks are very thick. In this street, there are several shops and restaurants. The lights from those plus the yellow and orange spheres in the middle of the street light up this place. The bar I want to visit is called “La Lune Bleue”, inside a gigantic tree, where the bottom of the trunk looks like a peer. It’s also wide open, there are a few tables and chairs outside. It provides in my opinion very good drinks, and I can’t believe it has been 2 weeks since I last visited this place.
I recognize this place with this large wooden plate with the bar name, and below, the name of the owner and the bartender, Jericho ‘Ricard’ Lunebleue, a quite muscular and a bit old grosloup. We have quite an original way to name people by the way: first you have your first name, given at your birth, at the end your last name, which is the same as your parents, and at the middle, the surname, which we can choose when we reach 16 years old. It can be whatever you want (as long it’s appropriate), you can even use objects name, or a random sequence of letters and numbers, but the most important is, the combination first name + surname + last name must be unique, if it’s already taken, even if the grosloup is dead, you can’t pick it and have to choose something else. In usage, the surname is mostly used to call each other, although in more formal conversation we use first + last name, and below 16 years old (when you don't have a surname) you're called by your first name.
The furred bartender looks at me while cleaning a glass, then recognizes me:
Ricard: “So is it you, Lykaon ‘Fluffy’ Clairdelune, that student with gray fur and with that dark cloak?”
Fluffy: “Yes,” I reply.
Ricard: “It’s been quite a long time since the last time I saw you, Fluffy. So tell me, what do you want?”
Fluffy: “An mangorange juice without alcohol please.”
Ricard: “I'm making you a glass mangorange juice for you right now.”
Ricard makes the fruit juice for me. It tastes like what humans call in their planet “orange” and “mango” fruits at the same time, that’s why it’s called like this. Then I pay him and get my glass of 1.5 liters of juice. Then I begin to drink it. I missed this fruity taste, so unique and so delicious. While drinking, Ricard wants to talk with me for a bit:
Ricard: “Tell me Fluffy, how are things going in your studies at the science academy of Villeloup-Sur-Mer? I guess it must be quite difficult…”
Fluffy: “It’s fine. I admit it, this isn’t easy. It’s different from high-school, you have to study complex systems and do complicated math. It’s much harder than learning to hunt for meat.”
Ricard: “I don’t even understand what you're doing at the science academy by just looking at your books, so I can't really help you if needed… Anyways, something new has happened or is going to happen?”
I think for a second.
Fluffy: “Oh yes, last week I learned that with my group, we’re going to be transfer students, at the Space Station No. 9.”
He doesn't seem to trust me at first.
Ricard: “The Space Station No.9, really? The huge station in the stars that a lot of humans are talking about, and in a way the hub of the whole solar system?”
Fluffy: “Yes. I don't know when exactly, it should be within the next week. I’ll leave Awoomun for the first time of my life, I can't wait!”
Ricard: “I can understand. I discussed it with a small human - they’re all small not gonna lie - and he said that life is far from Awoomun. You see, our moon is mostly forest with a big ocean in the middle? In the space station, everything is enclosed in large walls, there aren't too many plants, and the wildlife is almost nonexistent…”
Fluffy: “I’ve seen some pictures, I know. It’s not a place you would expect ‘wild’ creatures like us living in, but I don't think it won't be really a problem for me…”
Ricard: “Really? You know you’ll have to keep your instincts because you can’t hunt?”
Fluffy: “I know. We’re the only intelligent species that still hunt for food thinking about it…”
Ricard: “And what you're going to do once here?”
Fluffy: “I’m going to study like other students at the Space Station No.9, with some other interplanetary species and some local students, in a science and technology related school. At my school at Awoomun, they think an experience outside of our moon would greatly benefit us.”
Ricard: “I agree. We’re clearly not into technological stuff here, really, when I see clients that aren't grosloups, it looks like they’re coming from the future…”
I finished drinking my fruit juice.
Fluffy: “Yeah. Anyways, it’s almost night now so I’m going to leave. Thank you for the juice, it was delicious.”
Ricard: “I knew you would love it, Fluffy.”
Fluffy: “True lol. Seeya.”
I leave the bar and I walk towards my hut. I don't want to go to sleep too late as I have classes tomorrow, and tomorrow they start really early. Nothing interesting really happens when moving across the pathways, or climbing the wooden boards and platforms to reach my home.
My hut looks like a small wooden house, at the higher levels of the tree, so I have a nice view of the sky ; however I barely see what’s below the foliage… If I look very far to the west, I can see the ocean. The sky is clear, no clouds around, and the light from the huts around doesn’t ruin the view. We can see a very large blue circle that covers a large part of the sky. This is Kepler, the 6th planet of the solar system (from the closest to the furthest to the sun), an immense gas planet, at least 10 times the size of Awoomun. It has dozens of moons, including a very few habitables. Some of them are even visible. I don’t see the Space Station No.9, it is a relatively small object compared to the immensity of the solar system, and it’s several millions kilometers away. After looking at the sky, I go back to my bed, and slowly start to fall asleep.
Moon 6.2: Awoomun / Villeloup-Sur-Mer / Fluffy’s hut
2310/04/21 18:43 UTC+2 (Yoony’s time converted)
It’s been 2 hours since I've been doing my homework for tomorrow, doing mathematics, studying functions with several variables and integrating functions, getting weirder and weirder as I do my exercises. In my head, it was like “how am I supposed to get the antiderivative of this function” or “what are the boundaries? Why the integration is on a fucking sphere…?” I’m a young adult already, but my studies aren’t over. Anyways I think I worked enough, I’m almost done with my homework but right now I'm hungry, and I need to move.
I look at the window. Despite living in an immense tree, above the majority of the foliage, my personal hut (which is quite modern thinking about it) is about 80 meters above the floor, and I can see the sun in the distance about to set, and also the immense planet, Kepler, that our moon, Awoomun, rotates around. I think it’s time for me to go outside and get my food.
I decide to leave my hut, climb down the stairs which are just wooden boards or platforms stuck on the large truck of the tree. I go down to reach the floor and walk across the pathway. The pathway is surrounded by immense trees with huts attached to these, either against the trunk or hidden in the foliage, which hide a large part of the sky, but still let some sunlight go through. There are also some wooden platforms that link some huts between them, allowing us to move between trees without having to go down then up, which is kinda annoying as some trees can reach 100 meters tall here. Some trunks have entire buildings attached to their trees, with apartments on them. Clearly the constructions are adapted to the trees, which are almost untouched. At the end, from the ground up, it’s like a giant forest with huts of various sizes attached to the trees and platform. It’s kinda easy to get lost, I admit it…
I walk alone across the pathway, which is just some rocky pavement and grass, and see a few humans, next to a much larger number of fellow grosloups. We’re basically furred creatures, with a muzzle, triangular ears, large teeth, long claws that we can expand and partially hide, and a big and fluffy tail. We’re both bipedal and quadrupedal at the same time. With our very long arms (the same size as our legs), we can move on both 2 and 4 paws in ease. And next to the humans… we’re dwarfing them a bit: we’re almost twice their size on average, and we have overall a stronger and more intimidating build. Personally I often see humans that are the same size as me when I stand on all fours. I’m 3.36 meters tall when standing on 2 paws, which is relatively tall, knowing that the average height for adults is 3.10 meters for males and 2.80 meters for females. Humans often compare us to their wolves on their planet, Yoony, but much bigger and more dangerous… I’ve seen some pictures of wolves from Yoony and I agree they kinda look like us.
I walk for a few hundred meters, seeing on my left the sun falling with a large view of the ocean, only about 200 meters away, and on my right the other large trees of the forest spreading for dozens of kilometers. Then I reach the border of the city, which is just some fences and a large door which is currently wide open. There are 2 grosloups next to the door, to ensure no wild animals enter the city. Because I’m still in the middle of the forest. I’m getting more and more hungry, but I keep walking to get my food.
And how do I get my food? In the old fashion way which is hunting. I didn’t bring any weapons with me, because this is unnecessary. Like other grosloups, my body is literally made for hunting and killing. We’re in fact the apex predator of the whole planet, at the top of the food chain, and we don’t have any natural predators. We mostly need to eat meat every day so that’s why we hunt down some prey. Yes, we have some farms, I could just go to a shop and buy some food, but we’re attached to a lot of our traditions and environment, and as predators, hunting is part of our culture. Even with the technology that the humans brought with them when they entered our planet 200 years ago, we still prefer hunting using our body only, and eventually with a few primitive weapons, such as bows or slingshots. Even the kids learn to hunt at a very young age.
As I get more and more away from the city, I’m now in an area where I could get some prey to feed myself. I smell the air around, and detect an isolated prey about 200 meters away from me. I get on all fours and let my senses guide me to my prey. I don’t hesitate to smell the air, the ground, and be careful of every sound around me. I walk at a slower and quieter pace as I get closer to my prey, until I finally spot it. It’s a quadrupedal animal with 2 pairs of horns, brown and white fur, and about 1.8 meters in length. It’s currently drinking water from a small river, clearly not aware of my presence. It looks really delicious, I’m about to drool if I keep looking at it.
Hidden behind bushes and trees, I slowly approach the drinking animal, completely unaware of my presence. Once it finishes drinking, I’m behind it. Then in a sudden, I charge towards the prey to catch it and kill it. As it hears the sound of my footsteps approaching it at a very fast pace, it starts to run away, but I won’t let my meal escape me that easily of course, so I chase it. It is quite agile and can easily pass over through small bushes, but I keep it in my sight. It runs quite fast but I’m even faster. About 50 seconds of running and avoiding the obstacles, I managed to hit one of his rear legs with my very sharp claws, making it collapse on the floor. And finally, while the poor prey is trying to get up, I pounce on him, digging my claws deeply in his skin and biting his neck. I even feel my teeth breaking some of his bones. I pull with my maw some of his flesh, and give it a final blow, ending his suffering.
I take a deep breath, happy that I managed to get my food for tonight, and in my first try too! This isn’t usually that easy everyday, it’s common for me, like everyone, to miss their prey. As my belly growls again, I start eating the animal I’ve just killed, swallowing chunks of its flesh. I know it’s raw, but my species can digest uncooked meat with ease. It’s literally the base of our alimentation. The blood combined with the fresh meat is just delicious, I like it. I fill my stomach with all of this meat until I’m full.
When I’m done, I’ve not even eaten half of the available flesh. I decide to use my claws to tear more meat, and put it in a bag, I’ll consume it later. It’s common to do that, taking as much as we can with a killed prey, to limit the amount of animals we kill. We take the respect of nature very seriously, and we know killing too much will bring nothing but problems.
Finally full, I go back home, to put the 20 kilograms of meat I collected into the fridge. It's almost the night. But I’d like to drink something before going to sleep. I put on my dark cloak that covers my upper body and my thighs, and go outside.
Walk across the city, still in the middle of the forest, and in a few minutes, I end up in a street, with still immense trees and buildings attached to it, and some places inside the trunks, as the tree trunks are very thick. In this street, there are several shops and restaurants. The lights from those plus the yellow and orange spheres in the middle of the street light up this place. The bar I want to visit is called “La Lune Bleue”, inside a gigantic tree, where the bottom of the trunk looks like a peer. It’s also wide open, there are a few tables and chairs outside. It provides in my opinion very good drinks, and I can’t believe it has been 2 weeks since I last visited this place.
I recognize this place with this large wooden plate with the bar name, and below, the name of the owner and the bartender, Jericho ‘Ricard’ Lunebleue, a quite muscular and a bit old grosloup. We have quite an original way to name people by the way: first you have your first name, given at your birth, at the end your last name, which is the same as your parents, and at the middle, the surname, which we can choose when we reach 16 years old. It can be whatever you want (as long it’s appropriate), you can even use objects name, or a random sequence of letters and numbers, but the most important is, the combination first name + surname + last name must be unique, if it’s already taken, even if the grosloup is dead, you can’t pick it and have to choose something else. In usage, the surname is mostly used to call each other, although in more formal conversation we use first + last name, and below 16 years old (when you don't have a surname) you're called by your first name.
The furred bartender looks at me while cleaning a glass, then recognizes me:
Ricard: “So is it you, Lykaon ‘Fluffy’ Clairdelune, that student with gray fur and with that dark cloak?”
Fluffy: “Yes,” I reply.
Ricard: “It’s been quite a long time since the last time I saw you, Fluffy. So tell me, what do you want?”
Fluffy: “An mangorange juice without alcohol please.”
Ricard: “I'm making you a glass mangorange juice for you right now.”
Ricard makes the fruit juice for me. It tastes like what humans call in their planet “orange” and “mango” fruits at the same time, that’s why it’s called like this. Then I pay him and get my glass of 1.5 liters of juice. Then I begin to drink it. I missed this fruity taste, so unique and so delicious. While drinking, Ricard wants to talk with me for a bit:
Ricard: “Tell me Fluffy, how are things going in your studies at the science academy of Villeloup-Sur-Mer? I guess it must be quite difficult…”
Fluffy: “It’s fine. I admit it, this isn’t easy. It’s different from high-school, you have to study complex systems and do complicated math. It’s much harder than learning to hunt for meat.”
Ricard: “I don’t even understand what you're doing at the science academy by just looking at your books, so I can't really help you if needed… Anyways, something new has happened or is going to happen?”
I think for a second.
Fluffy: “Oh yes, last week I learned that with my group, we’re going to be transfer students, at the Space Station No. 9.”
He doesn't seem to trust me at first.
Ricard: “The Space Station No.9, really? The huge station in the stars that a lot of humans are talking about, and in a way the hub of the whole solar system?”
Fluffy: “Yes. I don't know when exactly, it should be within the next week. I’ll leave Awoomun for the first time of my life, I can't wait!”
Ricard: “I can understand. I discussed it with a small human - they’re all small not gonna lie - and he said that life is far from Awoomun. You see, our moon is mostly forest with a big ocean in the middle? In the space station, everything is enclosed in large walls, there aren't too many plants, and the wildlife is almost nonexistent…”
Fluffy: “I’ve seen some pictures, I know. It’s not a place you would expect ‘wild’ creatures like us living in, but I don't think it won't be really a problem for me…”
Ricard: “Really? You know you’ll have to keep your instincts because you can’t hunt?”
Fluffy: “I know. We’re the only intelligent species that still hunt for food thinking about it…”
Ricard: “And what you're going to do once here?”
Fluffy: “I’m going to study like other students at the Space Station No.9, with some other interplanetary species and some local students, in a science and technology related school. At my school at Awoomun, they think an experience outside of our moon would greatly benefit us.”
Ricard: “I agree. We’re clearly not into technological stuff here, really, when I see clients that aren't grosloups, it looks like they’re coming from the future…”
I finished drinking my fruit juice.
Fluffy: “Yeah. Anyways, it’s almost night now so I’m going to leave. Thank you for the juice, it was delicious.”
Ricard: “I knew you would love it, Fluffy.”
Fluffy: “True lol. Seeya.”
I leave the bar and I walk towards my hut. I don't want to go to sleep too late as I have classes tomorrow, and tomorrow they start really early. Nothing interesting really happens when moving across the pathways, or climbing the wooden boards and platforms to reach my home.
My hut looks like a small wooden house, at the higher levels of the tree, so I have a nice view of the sky ; however I barely see what’s below the foliage… If I look very far to the west, I can see the ocean. The sky is clear, no clouds around, and the light from the huts around doesn’t ruin the view. We can see a very large blue circle that covers a large part of the sky. This is Kepler, the 6th planet of the solar system (from the closest to the furthest to the sun), an immense gas planet, at least 10 times the size of Awoomun. It has dozens of moons, including a very few habitables. Some of them are even visible. I don’t see the Space Station No.9, it is a relatively small object compared to the immensity of the solar system, and it’s several millions kilometers away. After looking at the sky, I go back to my bed, and slowly start to fall asleep.
jeez long but great chapter. Being so good that you are getting send on a spaceship damn
The fact there isn't any comments from non-writers nor editors for 21 hours kinda concerns me about the interest about this project...
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probably 0 like the ot!book but it's still fun for me at leastCorne2Plum3 wrote:
The fact there isn't any comments from non-writers nor editors for 21 hours kinda concerns me about the interest about this project...
iirc at the OT!Book you often got comments after each chapter release...Patatitta wrote:
probably 0 like the ot!book but it's still fun for me at leastCorne2Plum3 wrote:
The fact there isn't any comments from non-writers nor editors for 21 hours kinda concerns me about the interest about this project...
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from other people who also wrote chaptersCorne2Plum3 wrote:
iirc at the OT!Book you often got comments after each chapter release...Patatitta wrote:
probably 0 like the ot!book but it's still fun for me at leastCorne2Plum3 wrote:
The fact there isn't any comments from non-writers nor editors for 21 hours kinda concerns me about the interest about this project...
Haven't read yours yet so I don't have much to say xDCorne2Plum3 wrote:
The fact there isn't any comments from non-writers nor editors for 21 hours kinda concerns me about the interest about this project...
I liked Manishh's first chapter, waiting for chapter 2 now
i wish this project had more visibility and hype because, even though the thread is pinned therefore highlighted in OT, it doesn't seem to attract many people at all. nevertheless i want to see where this OT!Library will go because it looks like a promising project, but for now, i'm afraid of what's going to happen in the next few months.Corne2Plum3 wrote:
The fact there isn't any comments from non-writers nor editors for 21 hours kinda concerns me about the interest about this project...