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Rie Kugimiya, Eri Kitamura & Yui Horie - Orange (TV Size)

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Weez
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Weez
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on July-06-11 at 12:08:40 PM

Artist: Rie Kugimiya, Eri Kitamura & Yui Horie
Title: Orange (TV Size)
Source: Toradora!
Tags: medi-chan net45291 Saten-san
BPM: 140
Filesize: 7407kb
Play Time: 01:24
Difficulties Available:
  1. Ami-Hard (4.62 stars, 185 notes)
  2. Medi's Minori-Taiko Oni (4.83 stars, 394 notes)
  3. Net's Kitamura-Normal (3.68 stars, 142 notes)
  4. Ryuji-Easy (2.27 stars, 93 notes)
  5. Saten's Taiga-Insane (4.97 stars, 231 notes)
Download: Rie Kugimiya, Eri Kitamura & Yui Horie - Orange (TV Size)
Download: Rie Kugimiya, Eri Kitamura & Yui Horie - Orange (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Suki dayo~~<3 ORANGES!
My 7th beatmap!
OP-1 | OP-2 | ED-1 | ED-2 | ED-Holy Night

Taiga-Insane done by Saten-san
Kitamura-Normal done by net45291
Minori-Taiko Oni done by Medi-chan

Redownload if you got this before July 1. Added a new skin Added new hitcircles and a brand new orange spinner-circle!!!
Parts of the Toradora skin by xxheroxx, ziin, and GonzvloThanks :D
Thanks to everyone that helps with this map :D
Last edited by Weez , edited 53 times in total.
Saten
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Saten
Suki dayo~~♥
net45291
net45291
Done <3~
lol

Download: Rie Kugimiya, Eri Kitamura & Yui Horie - Orange (TV Size) (Weezy) [net45291's Kitamura-Normal].osu
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Medi-chan_old
80 posts
Joined February 2011
Medi-chan_old
Done~

I bookmarked the only spot that I can tell mods might say something about.

Download: Rie Kugimiya, Eri Kitamura & Yui Horie - Orange (TV Size) (Weezy) [Medi's Taiko].osu
Frostmourne
osu! Alumni
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Frostmourne
[net45291's Kitamura-Normal]
try my .osu

if it's work :(
ririco
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ririco
;)
Backstep
1,007 posts
Joined September 2009
Backstep
Star ~ ;)
net45291
net45291
add sound and change little things

Download: Rie Kugimiya, Eri Kitamura & Yui Horie - Orange (TV Size) (Weezy) [net's Kitamura-Normal].osu
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Weez
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Topic Starter
Weez

net45291 wrote:

add sound and change little things , pls add my BG to my Diff :|
I'm keeping the one BG, I'm not a fan of multiple BG images for my maps :/
net45291
net45291

Weezy wrote:

net45291 wrote:

add sound and change little things , pls add my BG to my Diff :|
I'm keeping the one BG, I'm not a fan of multiple BG images for my maps :/
Ok weezy X3
Saten
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Saten
Orange~~~~~~~ :3

Download: Rie Kugimiya, Eri Kitamura & Yui Horie - Orange (TV Size) (Weezy) [Saten's Taiga-Insane].osu
Kamure
735 posts
Joined August 2009
Kamure
Ha, I didn't get to ask for a guest diff so I really should mod this... Or shoulod I take the Easy diff off of your hands....

General
  1. The video offsets aren't the same. Make them in the proper time. Or is it just net's?
  2. Fade out in the end?
[Ryuji-Easy] so far
  1. 00:03:271 (5,1) - a jump in an easy mode? Don't even reconsider this. Remove the repeat.
[net's Kitamura-Normal]
  1. 00:28:343 (6) - new combo
  2. 00:30:700 (1) - remove combo
  3. 00:31:771 (3) - new combo
  4. 00:37:771 (8) - ^
[Ami-Hard]
  1. 00:37:986 (2,4) - I think it's more preferable to have it end on the white tick
  2. 00:50:843 (2) - You can either place like this or remove the note and add a repeat
  3. 01:03:914 (3) - add combo
  4. 01:04:343 (1) - remove combo
[Saten's Taiga Insane
  1. 00:08:843 (1) - set it parallel to the combo before and change the (2) as well
  2. 00:57:271 (2,5) - hmmm, spread it more farther?
Go go!!
Saten
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Saten
Changed the second one you mentioned, I didn't really get the first :P

Edit: Look below~~ Next page
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Kamure
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Kamure

Saten-san wrote:

Changed the second one you mentioned, I didn't really get the first :P

Like this I guess, but it's a suggestion.

net45291
net45291
Fixed

Download: Rie Kugimiya, Eri Kitamura & Yui Horie - Orange (TV Size) (Weezy) [net's Kitamura-Normal].osu
Saten
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Saten

chamelepeace710 wrote:

Saten-san wrote:

Changed the second one you mentioned, I didn't really get the first :P

Like this I guess, but it's a suggestion.

Thanks~ Fixed, looks better like this :3

Download: Rie Kugimiya, Eri Kitamura & Yui Horie - Orange (TV Size) (Weezy) [Saten's Taiga-Insane].osu
bufo
43 posts
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bufo
Star~~~ *0*
pieguyn
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Joined May 2009
pieguyn
net's Kitamura-Normal:

-I think you should change the normal hitsounds to soft ones

00:31:771 (6) - New combo
00:34:343 (1) - Spacing is too far, but it should be fine since the note is far away on the timeline
01:09:271 (7) - New combo?

Ami-Hard:

-The first part doesn't have any hitsounds, I think some whistles would fit

00:12:271 (6) - Move two level 4 grids up and one level 4 grid right
00:20:628 (1) - Make it symmetrical
00:33:271 (4) - ^
00:34:343 (2) - ^
00:35:200 (1) - Align with 2
00:41:200 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:52:557 (7) - Make it symmetrical?
01:23:628 (1,2,3,4) - Center this and move 4 1 level 4 grid right

Medi's Taiko Oni: Fine

Saten's Taiga-Insane: Interesting map :)

-The claps don't fit with the song, I recommend changing them
-Those long sliders at the end cause a bit of a problem due to the HP drain. It's not major though, so feel free to keep it.

Nice map :) *stars*
net45291
net45291

pieguy1372 wrote:

net's Kitamura-Normal:

-I think you should change the normal hitsounds to soft ones No :o

00:31:771 (6) - New combo Fixed
00:34:343 (1) - Spacing is too far, but it should be fine since the note is far away on the timeline No
01:09:271 (7) - New combo? Fixed
Download: Rie Kugimiya, Eri Kitamura & Yui Horie - Orange (TV Size) (Weezy) [net's Kitamura-Normal].osu
artpiggo
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artpiggo
Ami-Hard
00:00:486 (1) - add whistle
00:01:771 (4) - add clap at end of it
00:03:486 (8) - add clap
00:05:200 (4) - ^
00:05:843 (6) - add whistle at start of it
00:06:700 (8) - add finish
00:07:343 (3) - add clap at repeat
00:08:843 (5) - add clap
00:09:700 (7) - add whistle
00:10:771 (2) - add whistle at start , add clap at end
00:11:843 (4) - add clap
00:12:700 (1) - add finish
00:13:128 (2) - add whistle
00:13:771 (4) - add finish at end of it
00:15:914 (4) - add whistle
00:19:986 (6) - ^
00:20:628 (1) - add finish at end
00:22:128 (3) - add whistle
00:22:771 (4) - add finish at start
00:23:414 (6) - add whistle
00:25:343 (2,3) - add (2)whistle and (3)clap
00:26:200 (1) - add finish
00:27:914 (1) - ^ at start
00:28:986 (3) - add whistle
00:29:414 (4) - add clap
00:30:914 (3) - ^
00:31:128 (4) - add finish at end
00:32:414 (2) - add clap
00:32:843 (3) - add whistle
00:33:914 (1) - add clap
00:34:343 (2) - add finish at end
00:35:628 (2) - add whistle at end
00:36:700 (4) - add clap
00:37:986 (2) - ^ at end
00:39:271 (3) - ^ ^
00:39:700 (4) - ^ ^
00:42:700 (1) - add whistle at end
00:43:343 (1) - add finish
00:45:057 (1) - add clap
00:45:486 (3) - add whistle
00:47:200 (3) - add clap at end
00:47:843 (4) - ^ at repeat
00:48:914 (2) - add clap
00:49:771 (5) - ^ at start
00:50:200 (1) - ^ at end
00:50:843 (2) - add finish
00:51:700 (4) - ^
00:52:557 (7) - add clap at end
00:54:271 (4) - add finish
00:54:700 (5) - add clap at repeat , add whistle at the other points
00:55:557 (1) - add clap at end
00:56:200 (3) - add clap at end
00:57:486 (2) - add clap
00:58:128 (4) - add finish
00:58:771 (1) - add clap at end
01:00:057 (4) - add finish at end
01:01:128 (2) - add clap
01:01:557 (3) - add whistle at end
01:02:628 (2) - add clap
01:03:057 (1) - ^ at end
01:04:343 (3) - add clap
01:04:986 (5) - add clap at repeat
01:06:271 (7) - add clap at end
01:07:986 (2) - add finish
01:08:414 (3) - add clap at repeat
01:09:486 (5) - add clap
01:10:343 (8) - ^
01:10:771 (1) - add clap at end
01:12:271 (4) - add whistle at start, add clap at end
01:13:343 (1) - add clap at end
01:13:986 (2) - add finish
01:16:343 (1) - add clap
01:17:414 (4) - add finish
01:17:521 (1) - add whistle
01:19:771 (1) - add clap
01:20:843 (4) - add finish
01:20:950 (1) - add whistle
01:23:200 (1) - add clap
01:24:271 (4) - add finish
01:24:378 (1) - ^

This time section (01:14:200 - 01:23:628) should be 50% volume cuz the low-volume vocal
and add new time section at 01:23:628 till end of song to be 30% volume

net's Kitamura-Normal
I think in all soft timing points(except in 5% volume, it's ok) should be 100% volume, but in normal ones are fine.
00:00:485 (1) - add whistle
00:17:628 (2) - add finish
00:19:343 (1) - add whistle
00:25:557 (4) - add clap
00:26:200 (1) - add whistle
00:37:986 (2) - ^ in slider body
00:39:700 (4) - ^ ^
00:41:628 (2) - ^ ^
00:45:485 (1) - ^
00:46:343 (3) - ^
00:58:128 (4) - add clap
01:09:271 (1) - add new combo
01:11:414 (3) - add clap
01:11:843 (4) - add clap at the repeat and add whistle at the start and end of it
01:13:986 (8) - add finish
01:17:414 (4) - ^
01:20:843 (4) - ^

By the way, it's just my suggestion about sound patterns. I'm not sure if you like it or not.
If you don't like the way I suggest, feel free to ignore mine.
PS, I'll star it when it's a pending beatmap.
Weez
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Topic Starter
Weez

artpiggo wrote:

random
Ami-Hard
00:00:486 (1) - add whistle
00:01:771 (4) - add clap at end of it
00:03:486 (8) - add clap
00:05:200 (4) - ^
00:05:843 (6) - add whistle at start of it
00:06:700 (8) - add finish
00:07:343 (3) - add clap at repeat
00:08:843 (5) - add clap
00:09:700 (7) - add whistle
00:10:771 (2) - add whistle at start , add clap at end
00:11:843 (4) - add clap
00:12:700 (1) - add finish
00:13:128 (2) - add whistle
00:13:771 (4) - add finish at end of it
00:15:914 (4) - add whistle
00:19:986 (6) - ^
00:20:628 (1) - add finish at end
00:22:128 (3) - add whistle
00:22:771 (4) - add finish at start
00:23:414 (6) - add whistle
00:25:343 (2,3) - add (2)whistle and (3)clap
00:26:200 (1) - add finish
00:27:914 (1) - ^ at start
00:28:986 (3) - add whistle
00:29:414 (4) - add clap
00:30:914 (3) - ^
00:31:128 (4) - add finish at end
00:32:414 (2) - add clap
00:32:843 (3) - add whistle
00:33:914 (1) - add clap
00:34:343 (2) - add finish at end
00:35:628 (2) - add whistle at end
00:36:700 (4) - add clap
00:37:986 (2) - ^ at end
00:39:271 (3) - ^ ^
00:39:700 (4) - ^ ^
00:42:700 (1) - add whistle at end
00:43:343 (1) - add finish
00:45:057 (1) - add clap
00:45:486 (3) - add whistle
00:47:200 (3) - add clap at end
00:47:843 (4) - ^ at repeat
00:48:914 (2) - add clap
00:49:771 (5) - ^ at start
00:50:200 (1) - ^ at end
00:50:843 (2) - add finish
00:51:700 (4) - ^
00:52:557 (7) - add clap at end
00:54:271 (4) - add finish
00:54:700 (5) - add clap at repeat , add whistle at the other points
00:55:557 (1) - add clap at end
00:56:200 (3) - add clap at end
00:57:486 (2) - add clap
00:58:128 (4) - add finish
00:58:771 (1) - add clap at end
01:00:057 (4) - add finish at end
01:01:128 (2) - add clap
01:01:557 (3) - add whistle at end
01:02:628 (2) - add clap
01:03:057 (1) - ^ at end
01:04:343 (3) - add clap
01:04:986 (5) - add clap at repeat
01:06:271 (7) - add clap at end
01:07:986 (2) - add finish
01:08:414 (3) - add clap at repeat
01:09:486 (5) - add clap
01:10:343 (8) - ^
01:10:771 (1) - add clap at end
01:12:271 (4) - add whistle at start, add clap at end
01:13:343 (1) - add clap at end
01:13:986 (2) - add finish
01:16:343 (1) - add clap
01:17:414 (4) - add finish
01:17:521 (1) - add whistle
01:19:771 (1) - add clap
01:20:843 (4) - add finish
01:20:950 (1) - add whistle
01:23:200 (1) - add clap
01:24:271 (4) - add finish
01:24:378 (1) - ^

This time section (01:14:200 - 01:23:628) should be 50% volume cuz the low-volume vocal
and add new time section at 01:23:628 till end of song to be 30% volume
its WIP for a reason... so i can't kudosu this :/
artpiggo
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Joined December 2009
artpiggo
its WIP for a reason... so i can't kudosu this :/
Don't mind, don't mind. I come here because my friend,Net, wants me to mod his. I don't care about kudosu much :3

When it's ready for mod, I'll come here for mod again.
Xo4y_CoCaTb
Xo4y_CoCaTb
cool) =3
Remilia--_old
Remilia--_old
Looking foward to failing this when its ranked o-o

So gonna fc this <3

Also Star
Shiirn
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Joined August 2010
Shiirn
General
Meh

Easy
Meh

Normal
01:07:343 (2) - move second node, slider looks like crap

Hard
01:06:271 (7) - Whistle on end

Taiko
1.4 fits this song better than 1.6

Insane
Meh

I disliked how none of the difficulties used the time after the last vocal line, despite it ending rather well.
Medi-chan_old
80 posts
Joined February 2011
Medi-chan_old
I like the faster scrolling better, but you're right it does, so changed.

Download: Rie Kugimiya, Eri Kitamura & Yui Horie - Orange (TV Size) (Weezy) [Medi's Minori-Taiko Oni].osu
akrolsmir
606 posts
Joined November 2010
akrolsmir
Yay, another Toradora map!

Ryuji-Easy:
I think Ryuji should be Ryuuji. Ryuji is when the u has a stress over it otherwise it looks like you double it. Of course, I don't actually know Japenese, this is based on a couple of google searches.

General note- Though sliders such as 00:00:486 (1) - , 00:10:771 (1) - are reasonably (but not perfectly) symmetric, they look too pointed. Try using more nodes than just 3 to get a better arc shape.

00:01:771 (2) - Align with end of (1)?
00:47:200 (2,3) - If they're meant to be identical... they're not.
00:52:128 (3) - Since this is an easy, maybe replace this slider with just a circle on the place it starts?
01:05:843 (4) - ^

net's Kitamura-Normal:
00:27:914 (5) - Move up 1 grid to complete the pattern
01:20:200 (1,2,3,4) - I felt that instead of a just a horizontal flip of 01:16:771 (1,2,3,4) - , this should have been that rotated 180 degrees kinda like to arms of a spiral, similar to the pattern in Easy.

Ami-Hard:
00:18:057 (1,2) - These two ought to be identical
00:21:700 - Place a circle here to cover "n" of "minawa". And to parallel the timing of 00:14:628 (1,2,3) - , 00:18:057 (1,2) - .
00:25:128- ^
00:52:557 (7) - See note about sliders under Easy
00:56:200 (3) - Asymmetrical, move center node down.
01:06:271 (7) - It's good you use many nodes here, but it's still not symmetric
01:07:343 (1,3) - Asymmetrical, move center node down.

Saten's Taiga-Insane:
I think a slider tick rate of 1 or even 2 would be good; it's a bit disconcerting to see long sliders with no ticks in them.
Other than that, I thought the patterns were really well done in this difficulty!

Generally, there were a few problems with slider shapes and symmetry. You might want to refer to this guide for nicer slider shapes. Mostly fine, though, and starred!
Haneii
1,203 posts
Joined November 2009
Haneii
~Ryuji-Easy~

00:45:486 (1) – too close to spinner. I suggested removing this and the next 2 notes and just have it start again at the beginning of the chorus

~net's Kitamura-Normal~

00:23:414 (6) – align with end of slider better. (tip: turn off grid snap, make DS 0.0 and it should fall right into place)
00:33:271 (10) - ^
00:42:914 (3) - ^
01:07:985 (3) - ^


~Twinkle twinkle little star~
Crimmi
1,947 posts
Joined June 2009
Crimmi
Modding,CrimmiStyle!!

[Ryuji-Easy]

Lead-in should be 2 seconds, imo.

The rest is fine~

[net's Kitamura Normal]

Lead-in should be 2 seconds, imo.

These new combos are just suggestional:
00:03:271 (1) - New combo.
00:03:914 (4) - New combo.
00:06:914 (1) - New combo.
00:07:343 (5) - New combo.
00:27:914 (5) - Align with (4).
00:46:771 (4) - New combo?
01:03:486 (1) - New combo.

[Ami-Hard]

Lead-in should be 2 seconds, imo.

[Medi's Minori-Taiko Oni]

Nothing.

[Saten's Taiga-Insane]

Lead-in should be 2 seconds, imo.

Nothing.
Saten
Global Moderator
3,871 posts
Joined August 2010
Saten
2 sec seems too long imo..
net45291
net45291

Saten-san wrote:

2 sec seems too long imo..
me too = ="

Download: Rie Kugimiya, Eri Kitamura & Yui Horie - Orange (TV Size) (Weezy) [net's Kitamura-Normal].osu
Weez
2,318 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
Weez

net45291 wrote:

Saten-san wrote:

2 sec seems too long imo..
me too = ="
me three :T
Colin Hou
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4,456 posts
Joined November 2009
Colin Hou
[General]:
  1. don't change the aspect ratio while resizing the image for BG, if you really care about this anime, try harder to find a better choice.
  2. find a Taiko BG for Taiko diff?
  3. about lean-in, 2s~2.5s from start to the first note is fine :3
[Insane]:
  1. 01:13:986 (1) - not a fan about this slow slider, spinner with a starting note is better imo. or at least make a better shape for them? there are only 3 way point and seems randomly placed.
  2. 01:17:414 (1) - ^
  3. 01:20:843 (1) - ^
[Hard]:
  1. I think I said in the earlier modding (but I forget which map), the spacing is too light for the sliver velocity.
[Normal]:
  1. 00:33:700 (11,1) - this is a jump in normal, and obviously too hard.
  2. 01:00:486 (T) - make the re-KIAI happen here.
  3. 00:46:771 ~ 00:53:200 (T) - this part is following the vocal, but for the next part, suddenly the style changed. a bit confusing and a long 1/2 combo is not so friendly in a normal diff. try to make your diff more like 1 diff, it will make it more balanced.
[Easy]:
  1. 01:26:843 (1,2,3,4) - suggest changing them into slider(s), they're right after the spinner and the location makes the approaching circle not easy enough to tell, this would lead to an early click.
not bad, so have a star~ :3
Kiddo-Kun
1,014 posts
Joined May 2009
Kiddo-Kun
[General]
All good

[Ryuji-Easy]
00:43:343 (1) - Add a finish to the end of this note.
01:09:486 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:26:843 (1,2,3,4) - You should move these inheriting point 1/4 tick behind the note.

[net's Kitamura-Normal]
00:05:200 (5) - Move this note down one grid. (Grid Level 3)
00:34:343 (1) - You should move this inheriting point 1/4 tick behind the note.
00:31:771 (6) - It would be better if you make a new combo here.

-I think the combos are poorly placed in this difficulty. If I were you I'd go over them and make sure they are consistent and follow the song-

[Ami-Hard]
All is well, but...
01:26:843 (1,2,3,4) - Same as easy.

[Saten's Taiga-Insane]
Fine IMO.

Have a star.
wmfchris
osu! Alumni
5,072 posts
Joined March 2008
wmfchris
here's a taiko mod >_<

00:01:557 - try d k d d d k d?
00:!6:557 - d
00:27:057 - d---d-k-D....
00:34:128 - kkdkddd
00:38:200 - dkddd ddkkddd dddkddk [but these stream don't fit the vocal very well, try to break them down.]
00:44:414 - ddkdddk?
00:56:200 - kkkkd d
01:10:771 - kdkdkdk / kkddddk

Rating: 6.5/10

Except for some messy streams they looked good
star~
Crimmi
1,947 posts
Joined June 2009
Crimmi

Saten-san wrote:

2 sec seems too long imo..
I say that because from the beginning till the first note is a bit short especially for the ones who use Double Time.

but like i say it's a suggestion :|
FireballFlame
280 posts
Joined May 2010
FireballFlame
These three-part difficulty names are quite bulky, maybe you should remove one of the parts.
On every diff: 2 seconds lead-in is too long imo. 1 is enough.
Also, what are taiko.png and taikobg.png there for? They do not seem to be used by anything.

[Saten's Taiga-Insane]
Nice map! But tick rate 0,5? :o At least raise it to 1. It even sounds better.

[Ami-Hard]
00:04:771 (2,3,4) - Make them symmetric to the y-axis.
00:07:128 (1,2,3) - The music doesn't really justify a triple here. I'd remove that (2).
00:10:128 (1) - Again, symmetry.
00:41:628 (1,1) - This looks kinda weird, as the slider appears almost at the same time as the spinner. Maybe remove it, put the whistle on the spinner and make that 1 beat longer?
01:16:771 (1,2,3,4) - Symmetry.
01:23:628 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:26:843 (1,2,3,4) - I don't think this is a very good idea. I'd remove that combo altogether, as it comes quite unexpected, but if you want to keep it: Move it 1 beat earlier in time. It becomes more readable (can be observed while still spinning), less confusing (every note of the melody ist mapped instead of the 1st one skipped) and closer to the music (the current (4) sounds like it's just an echo) that way. Oh, and 1 grid up to match the axis.

[net's Kitamura-Normal]
00:33:271 (10) - Stack this with (11). It's the only note behind a slider end that doesn't come 1/2 beat after the slider.
00:31:771 (6) - New combo.
01:16:771 (1,2,3,4) - Stack them, to make it different from the Hard diff?
01:20:200 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:23:628 - Why no notes?

[Ryuji-Easy]
00:41:628 (1,2) - 1 and 2 grids right respectively to match the axis.
00:51:486 (2) - 3 grids down, 2 right, so it doesnt overlap with (1). Then adjust (3,4) to restore spacing.
00:54:914 (2) - A bit too far from (1).
01:26:843 (1,2) - Remove them. Not fitting for the Easy diff imo.

Star!
Weez
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Topic Starter
Weez

Crimmi wrote:

Saten-san wrote:

2 sec seems too long imo..
I say that because from the beginning till the first note is a bit short especially for the ones who use Double Time.

but like i say it's a suggestion :|
I changed it to 2 now :T

FireballFlame wrote:

These three-part difficulty names are quite bulky, maybe you should remove one of the parts. nooooo, I've done it for this http://osu.ppy.sh/s/24135 and this http://osu.ppy.sh/s/27523 and there were no problems!
On every diff: 2 seconds lead-in is too long imo. 1 is enough. Nope
Also, what are taiko.png and taikobg.png there for? They do not seem to be used by anything. Been fixed before this mod

[Ami-Hard]
00:04:771 (2,3,4) - Make them symmetric to the y-axis.
00:07:128 (1,2,3) - The music doesn't really justify a triple here. I'd remove that (2). Nope
00:10:128 (1) - Again, symmetry.
00:41:628 (1,1) - This looks kinda weird, as the slider appears almost at the same time as the spinner. Maybe remove it, put the whistle on the spinner and make that 1 beat longer? Nope
01:16:771 (1,2,3,4) - Symmetry.
01:23:628 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:26:843 (1,2,3,4) - I don't think this is a very good idea. I'd remove that combo altogether, as it comes quite unexpected, but if you want to keep it: Move it 1 beat earlier in time. It becomes more readable (can be observed while still spinning), less confusing (every note of the melody ist mapped instead of the 1st one skipped) and closer to the music (the current (4) sounds like it's just an echo) that way. Oh, and 1 grid up to match the axis. I'm keeping it the way it is. it's not confusing, this is a hard!

[Ryuji-Easy]
00:41:628 (1,2) - 1 and 2 grids right respectively to match the axis. Nope
00:51:486 (2) - 3 grids down, 2 right, so it doesnt overlap with (1). Then adjust (3,4) to restore spacing. Soemthing different
00:54:914 (2) - A bit too far from (1). No it isn't >_>
01:26:843 (1,2) - Remove them. Not fitting for the Easy diff imo. Yes it does

Star!
Did a few, holding back from kudosu for now since it seems too nazi :T
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Saten
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Saten
Whyyyy~~ 1.5 lead-in was so nice D:

Colin Hou wrote:

[Insane]:
  1. 01:13:986 (1) - not a fan about this slow slider, spinner with a starting note is better imo. or at least make a better shape for them? there are only 3 way point and seems randomly placed.
  2. 01:17:414 (1) - ^
  3. 01:20:843 (1) - ^
I'm not a fan of multiple spinners, and the points are not randomly placed :o

FireballFlame wrote:

[Saten's Taiga-Insane]
Nice map! But tick rate 0,5? :o At least raise it to 1. It even sounds better.

akrolsmir wrote:

Saten's Taiga-Insane:
I think a slider tick rate of 1 or even 2 would be good; it's a bit disconcerting to see long sliders with no ticks in them.
Other than that, I thought the patterns were really well done in this difficulty!
There's a reason why 0,5 exist.
and tick rate 1 plays bad in taiko
And 2 would be drum roll spam lol nvm I'll use 2

Download: Rie Kugimiya, Eri Kitamura & Yui Horie - Orange (TV Size) (Weezy) [Saten's Taiga-Insane].osu
Medi-chan_old
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Medi-chan_old
6.5/10 ;_____;

I still need practice ;)

updated~

Download: Rie Kugimiya, Eri Kitamura & Yui Horie - Orange (TV Size) (Weezy) [Medi's Minori-Taiko Oni].osu
FireballFlame
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FireballFlame

Weezy wrote:

@ I'm keeping it the way it is. it's not confusing, this is a hard! Well, Hard =/= confusing. I don't like to have at 100% and then get misses on the last 4 notes (which I did)
@ No it isn't >_> Yes it is. Try distance snapping it and you'll see.
@ every Nope Why not?
Weez
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Topic Starter
Weez

FireballFlame wrote:

Weezy wrote:

@ I'm keeping it the way it is. it's not confusing, this is a hard! Well, Hard =/= confusing. I don't like to have at 100% and then get misses on the last 4 notes (which I did) To simply put it, you missed. I don't find anything wrong with it and find it simply to get it.
@ No it isn't >_> Yes it is. Try distance snapping it and you'll see. how is this far http://puu.sh/2ckR -.-
@ every Nope Why not?found them to be nazi mods :/
/discussion
Zelos
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Joined May 2010
Zelos
i decided to take your request in #modreqs

Folder:

all good here!

Please note, all my mods are suggestions unless otherwise stated.

Ryuji-Easy:

00:15:914 (2,3) - try making slider 3 like slider 2. (copy slider 2, paste in 3's timing position, horizontally and vertically flipped, remove the bounce back part of the slider, and reverse selection) it would be a bit neater than the way it was before.


01:27:700 (2) - this is waaaaay to inaudible. please raise the volume at least a little.

Net-kitamura's Normal:

01:14:093 (1) - for a Normal, don't start this spinner on a 1/4th.

01:17:521 (1) - ^^

01:20:950 (1) - ^^

Overall this one is nice but I felt for normal players, only a few parts might be a bit hard for them.

Ami-Hard:

00:10:128 (1) - there is nothing wrong with breaking distance snap in this case, turn off ds and center with slider 2.

00:52:557 (7) - grab 2nd and 3rd white box point on the slider and move to the right 1, it makes it a bit more even.

Saten's Taiga Insane:

Nothing wrong here that I saw but the use of claps in this are a bit uguu.

You get a star Weezykins.
Weez
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Weez
Thanks Zelos ^_^
Did everything but this: 01:27:700 (2) - this is waaaaay to inaudible. please raise the volume at least a little.
I like it and suits imo
net45291
net45291
Sorry for a late Weezy , I can use a computer on sunday-monday only I can Fix my diff on Sunday and monday
Sorry :(
SPOILER
Shoot kudosu Star ~~!
P.S. RED = Edit
jericho2442
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jericho2442
00:41:628 (1,1) - This looks kinda weird,
i advise you to do this from FireballFlame's mod, just fast checked it myself and this does play horrid, extend the first spinner to 00:42:700 and add a note at 00:42:914

also please remember a modder is not modding to agitate you, even if they do a nazi mod they spent time to do it so they could help you with your map, do not take it offensive and please always atleast try the changes before you reject them

also FireballFlame's mod was not purely nazi, was also a lot of good suggestions even if you yourself did not apply them
Weez
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Topic Starter
Weez

jericho2442 wrote:

00:41:628 (1,1) - This looks kinda weird,
i advise you to do this from FireballFlame's mod, just fast checked it myself and this does play horrid, extend the first spinner to 00:42:700 and add a note at 00:42:914

also please remember a modder is not modding to agitate you, even if they do a nazi mod they spent time to do it so they could help you with your map, do not take it offensive and please always atleast try the changes before you reject them I always do D:

also FireballFlame's mod was not purely nazi, was also a lot of good suggestions even if you yourself did not apply them
I guess I did take this a bit over board :T My made was kinda having a bad day then >.< Changes have been made and firebalflame gets the kudosu he/she deserves.
Leorda
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Leorda
Hiiiiii, sorry for taking so long

General
* Since the title is "Orange", how about the combo color change into an Orange color? lol

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Ryuji-Easy
00:12:486 (1,2,3,4) - I think these stack is kinda confusing for noobs, but I'm not sure about this one....
00:23:200 (3) - ^ (maybe?)
00:58:771 (1) - Move 1 grid up, to make a same distance as 00:57:057 (1,2) (Nazi)
01:04:986 (2,3) - Can you move down a bit? It's kinda odd to see that this is overlapped by slider in gameplay (Nazi)

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net's Kitamura-Normal
00:14:628 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I'm pretty sure that 8 combos are too high for normal diff
00:22:128 (4) - Not stack perfectly with tail slider
00:25:557 (4) - ^
00:35:200 (3) - I don't like if this overlapped by previous object
00:45:485 (1) - Too far from spinner, you should make it close to spinner. Otherwise, noobs can't reach this object while gameplay
00:47:843 (5,6) - I am pretty not sure about this. It has weird stack during gameplay, but in editor it's just fine
01:00:485 (1) - Too far from spinner, you should make it close to spinner. Otherwise, noobs can't reach this object while gameplay
01:06:914 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 10 combos at normal diff are too high
01:10:771 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I'm pretty sure that 8 combos are too high for normal diff

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Ami's Hard
00:01:771 (4) - New combo?
00:34:343 (2) - Ugly slider (Nazi)
00:37:986 (2) - Not stack perfectly with 00:37:771 (1)

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Saten's Taiga-Insane
00:10:343 (3) - New combo?

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Don't hate me ok? :(
Weez
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Topic Starter
Weez

Leorda wrote:

Hiiiiii, sorry for taking so long

General
* Since the title is "Orange", how about the combo color change into an Orange color? lol The first combo colour is orange :S

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Ryuji-Easy
00:12:486 (1,2,3,4) - I think these stack is kinda confusing for noobs, but I'm not sure about this one....
00:23:200 (3) - ^ (maybe?)
00:58:771 (1) - Move 1 grid up, to make a same distance as 00:57:057 (1,2) (Nazi)
01:04:986 (2,3) - Can you move down a bit? It's kinda odd to see that this is overlapped by slider in gameplay (Nazi)

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net's Kitamura-Normal
00:14:628 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I'm pretty sure that 8 combos are too high for normal diff
00:22:128 (4) - Not stack perfectly with tail slider
00:25:557 (4) - ^
00:35:200 (3) - I don't like if this overlapped by previous object
00:45:485 (1) - Too far from spinner, you should make it close to spinner. Otherwise, noobs can't reach this object while gameplay Nope :/
00:47:843 (5,6) - I am pretty not sure about this. It has weird stack during gameplay, but in editor it's just fine
01:00:485 (1) - Too far from spinner, you should make it close to spinner. Otherwise, noobs can't reach this object while gameplay Nope :/
01:06:914 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 10 combos at normal diff are too high
01:10:771 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I'm pretty sure that 8 combos are too high for normal diff

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Ami's Hard
00:01:771 (4) - New combo?
00:34:343 (2) - Ugly slider (Nazi)
00:37:986 (2) - Not stack perfectly with 00:37:771 (1)


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Don't hate me ok? :( Why would I hate you D:
thanks :D
S o r d a
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S o r d a
#modreqs
hi>_<


[overall]:
Fine

[Saten's Taiga-Insane]:
  1. 00:22:541 (6) - Delete note?
  2. 00:22:755 (1) - slider beginning finish?
  3. 00:24:470 (1) - ^
  4. 00:39:255 - Add note
  5. 00:39:470 - ^
  6. 01:06:255 - http://puu.sh/2f3YSuggestion
  7. 01:24:469 (1) - Spinner end Silent?
[Ami-Hard]:
  1. OD,AR+1?
  2. 00:24:486 (5) - Finish?

[net's Kitamura-Normal]:
  • Normal must not change spacing...
  1. 00:03:700 (3) - Spacing
  2. 00:15:271 (4) - ^
  3. 00:18:271 (4) - ^
  4. 00:18:700 (6) - ^
  5. 00:27:914 (5) - soft finish?
    many Spacing miss Please check
[Ryuji-Easy]:
  1. 00:17:200 (3) - end Add finish
  2. 00:37:771 - http://puu.sh/2f4PSuggestion
star(ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉ☆
Norn_NNN
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Norn_NNN
:)
Roddie
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Roddie
Hi.

Ryuji's Easy
  1. 00:12:486 (1)-Remove new combo?
  2. 00:27:914 (x)-It feels like there should be a note here... And maybe add a finish here too.
  3. 00:41:628 (1)-Add a finish on the beginning?

net's Kitamura-Normal
  1. 00:00:486 (1)-Add a finish.
  2. 00:09:700 (6)-Add a whistle?
  3. 00:11:843 (2)-Add a whistle on that reverse arrow?
  4. 00:13:557 (3)-Add a whistle on the beginning?
  5. 00:19:986 (2)-Add a whistle.
  6. 00:46:771 (4)-Put a new combo here.
  7. 01:03:486 (1)-Remove new combo?
  8. 01:03:914 (7)-Put a new combo here?

Ami-Hard
  1. 00;10:771 (2)-Add a whistle on the beginning

Medi's Minori-Taiko Oni
  1. 00:09:057-kkd?
  2. 00:51:271-ddk

Saten's Taiga-Insane
  1. 00:07:343 (1)-Add a finish on the beginning.

And that's it. Good luck!

Star!
Weez
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Topic Starter
Weez
Done most of em
thanks :)
Regou
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Regou
Hi! :)

[Ryuji's Easy]
Nice.

[net's Kitamura-Normal]
00:49:128(1,2,3,4,5) all 1 grid left?

[Ami-Hard]
HP drain -1?
00:00:914(3)1 grid right?
00:03:914(1)1 grid up?
00:34:343(1) make it more beautiful?

[Medi's Minori-Taiko Oni]
Sorry that I don't know how to mod taiko map :(

[Satan's Taiga-Insane]
00:29:200(1)Cancel this New Combo?
00:29:843(2)Cancel this hitclap sound?
00:30:700(2)^
00:31:128(4)^
00:32:200(4)^
00:34:557(6)^
00:47:200(2)1 grid right?
01:13:128(5)^,and cancel the new combo also?

Good luck~ :D
net45291
net45291
Okayyy Fixed ! ,so I think I don't want to change some mod ; ~ ;

Download: Rie Kugimiya, Eri Kitamura & Yui Horie - Orange (TV Size) (Weezy) [Net's Kitamura-Normal].osu
eldnl
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eldnl
[Easy]

  1. HP Drain Rate 2

  1. 00:37:771 (1) Start the spinner here ?
  2. 00:41:200 (x) Add a note here
[Normal]

  1. 01:09:271 (1,2,3,4) Stacked notes? looks bad.
  2. 01:13:343 (1,2,3,4) ^. Would look much better without those notes and with more imagination :)
  3. 01:26:843 (x) Add notes, as that easy.

[Hard]

  1. HP Drain Rate 6
  1. 00:34:343 (2) loosk bad :|
  2. 00:41:200 (1) Move this note to the centre and remove new combo.
  3. 00:53:628 (1,2,3,4) Stacked notes? looks bad.
  4. 01:09:271 (4) New combo
  5. 01:16:343 (1) Remove new combo
  6. 01:19:771 (1) ^
  7. 01:20:200 (1,2,3,4) Stacked notes? looks bad. Please improve. creativitie (?)
  8. 01:23:200 (1) Remove new combo.
[Insane]

  1. 00:49:343 (1) Remove new combo ?
  2. 01:26:843 (x) Add notes, as that hard.
I don't like the mapset but is fine as. Star.
Weez
2,318 posts
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Topic Starter
Weez

eldnl wrote:

[Easy]

  1. HP Drain Rate 2
Nope :/


  1. 00:37:771 (1) Start the spinner here ?
  2. 00:41:200 (x) Add a note here
Nope, too close to the spinner



[Hard]

  1. HP Drain Rate 6 Nope
  1. 00:34:343 (2) loosk bad :| no it doesn't
  2. 00:41:200 (1) Move this note to the centre and remove new combo. Not removing the new combo
  3. 00:53:628 (1,2,3,4) Stacked notes? looks bad.
  4. 01:09:271 (4) New combo
  5. 01:16:343 (1) Remove new combo
  6. 01:19:771 (1) ^
  7. 01:20:200 (1,2,3,4) Stacked notes? looks bad. Please improve. creativitie (?) Nope I got a little pattern going :3
  8. 01:23:200 (1) Remove new combo.
thanks :)
Saten
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Saten
;w;
why u add finish here (00:07:343 - ) on mine? ;w;

if you say it fits, then I need to add finishes here as well:
00:53:628 -
01:07:343 -

updated, added finishes and change some new combos..

Download: Rie Kugimiya, Eri Kitamura & Yui Horie - Orange (TV Size) (Weezy) [Saten's Taiga-Insane].osu
Weez
2,318 posts
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Topic Starter
Weez

Saten-san wrote:

;w;
why u add finish here (00:07:343 - ) on mine? ;w;

if you say it fits, then I need to add finishes here as well:
00:53:628 -
01:07:343 -

updated, added finishes and change some new combos..
oh crap didnt mean to save it >.< was just checking it out :T
SapphireGhost
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SapphireGhost
Hi, I'm here from #modreqs, non-MAT/BATness included.

[General]
- Kiai time is inconsistent and unrankable. Make kiai time for all difficulties the same.

[Normal With A Long Name]
01:06:914 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Put a new combo here somewhere.
01:17:521 (1) - Move the spinner back one blue tick.
01:20:950 (1) - ^

[Ami-Hard]
00:39:700 (4,1) - *nazi* This could blanket better. Right now it looks like this:
1
It would be better like this:
2

Map is okay.
Weez
2,318 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
Weez

SapphireGhost wrote:

Hi, I'm here from #modreqs, non-MAT/BATness included.

[General]
- Kiai time is inconsistent and unrankable. Make kiai time for all difficulties the same.

[Normal With A Long Name]
01:06:914 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Put a new combo here somewhere.
01:17:521 (1) - Move the spinner back one blue tick.
01:20:950 (1) - ^

[Ami-Hard]
00:39:700 (4,1) - *nazi* This could blanket better. Right now it looks like this:
1
It would be better like this:
2

Map is okay.
[/color]
everything but the one i mention has been done
Guess I'm wasting my 1000th post on my own map :)
thanks :D
net45291
net45291
Fixed :)

Download: Rie Kugimiya, Eri Kitamura & Yui Horie - Orange (TV Size) (Weezy) [Net's Kitamura-Normal].osu
Saten
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Saten

Weezy wrote:

omg, Orange! kd star~
Yomeiro
91 posts
Joined August 2010
Yomeiro
Random mod~ :o

Ami-Hard

00:21:486 (1,2,3,4) - I kinda expected a "AaAa" pattern here for the whistles as well.... it's AAaa instead o.o (special reason for this? ><)
00:24:914 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:52:557 (7) - Is there a whistle missing at the end of this one? o.o (I guess there is, since you used one at the end of 01:06:271 (7) as well ><)


I guess I'm pretty much fine with all other diff's ~
Hitsounds on Easy felt a bit weird though, probably since I checked the other diffs first~
Oh well.... guess I just leave this here~
Weez
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Topic Starter
Weez

Yomeiro wrote:

Random mod~ :o

Ami-Hard

00:21:486 (1,2,3,4) - I kinda expected a "AaAa" pattern here for the whistles as well.... it's AAaa instead o.o (special reason for this? ><)
00:24:914 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:52:557 (7) - Is there a whistle missing at the end of this one? o.o (I guess there is, since you used one at the end of 01:06:271 (7) as well ><)


I guess I'm pretty much fine with all other diff's ~
Hitsounds on Easy felt a bit weird though, probably since I checked the other diffs first~
Oh well.... guess I just leave this here~
humm nice catch
fixed :)
Shiki
271 posts
Joined April 2010
Shiki
Hi~

[Easy]
00:52:128 (3,4) - imo this is a hard for inexperienced players, how about make it like
SPOILER

Since you have slienced soft-sliderslide.wav, it will hear no difference but much easier
01:05:843 (4,5) - ^

[Normal]
The lead-in is 1500 while others are 2000. Change it to 2000.
00:05:414 (6,1) - Move 1/2 forward. It fits to the music better.
00:07:128 - Add note.
01:03:914 (7,8) - a grid left
I don't like the part after 01:04:771. Players that play normal probably don't like 3-4 notes stacking together.
Why not seperate them?

[Hard]
00:00:486 (1,2,3) - It doesn't look good. Think about this?
SPOILER

[Insane]
It's OK :)

Nice map and nice song. Star~

vivere
752 posts
Joined April 2009
vivere
TORADORA!! *.*

[Ryuji-Easy]:
  1. 00:26:200 (2)- Maybe new combo?
[Net's Kitamura-Normal]:
  1. 00:09:271 (5)- Whistle?
  2. 00:15:057 (3)- ^
  3. 00:15:914 (5)- ^
  4. 00:18:486 (5)- ^
[Ami-Hard]:
  1. 00:00:914 (3)- Whistle at the end?
  2. 00:03:914 (1)- ^
  3. 00:27:914 (1)- Whistle in the beginning?
[Saten's Taiga-Insane]:
  1. 01:06:271 - May use this slider velocity in 0,50?
_________________

Star ^.~/
p3n
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p3n
#modreqs:

[easy]
00:28:343 (2) - this bugs me because it is not following the song in a place where it really should. shorten to red tick and add 2x repeat (end on red tick 00:28:986)
00:31:771 (1) - ^ (end on red tick 00:32:414)
00:35:200 (1) - ^ (end on red tick 00:35:843)
01:03:914 (1) - shorten to first red tick add 2x repeat (end just where it ended before)

[normal]
General: It could play a lot more dynamic without pushing the difficulty any further. The song makes it pretty easy to spot the parts that need a focus on lyrics/melody and the parts the need focus on rhythm.
00:10:343 (8) - It is weird changing from following the melody to following the rhythm mid-combo but it kinda works here imo.
00:11:843 (2) - keep the repeat and shorten whole slider to first red tick (00:12:271), add circle at 00:12:700 (red tick, former end of slider)
00:19:343 (1,2) - why follow guitar with (1) and suddenly lyrics with (2)? totally confusing. I suggest moving (1) to 00:19:128 (red tick) and use a slider from the following big white tick to the red tick (or two circles that is). The new combo you used for this parts would make more sense this way.
00:26:200 (1) - add finish
00:45:485 (1,2,3) - maybe add whistles here? It would fit but I hate whistles tbh...just sayin
00:57:057 (3,4) - this part is weird. What exactly does the slider follow? I suggest keeping the repeat but shortening the slider to end on 00:57:486 (white tick) and adding a circle at 00:57:700 (red tick). This way the (4) will not feel misplaced (it isn't but the weird slider will give the feeling of a completely misplaced note)
01:03:914 (7) - new combo (strict beat follow)
01:04:771 (1) - remove new combo
01:05:843 (4) - new combo (change to lyric follow)
01:06:914 (1) - remove new combo
01:07:343 (2) - shorten to red tick tick and add 1 repeat to match lyric follow
01:08:414 (3) - remove new combo

[Hard]
Some of the patterns could use a bit visual polishing. You sacrifice some spacings to grid-symmetry but let some patterns look like they just fell out of bed :P nothing major or gamebreaking though. I wont post them...you'll find them.
00:09:700 (4,1) - spacing?
00:46:343 (4) - not sure about this slider. Sounds and plays better as just a circle on the white tick.
01:24:378 (1) - spinner must end later on red tick (01:26:414)

[Insane]
:)

~star for toradora!
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