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Rie Kugimiya, Eri Kitamura & Yui Horie - Orange (TV Size)

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Weez
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on July-06-11 at 12:08:40 PM

Artist: Rie Kugimiya, Eri Kitamura & Yui Horie
Title: Orange (TV Size)
Source: Toradora!
Tags: medi-chan net45291 Saten-san
BPM: 140
Filesize: 7407kb
Play Time: 01:24
Difficulties Available:
  1. Ami-Hard (4.62 stars, 185 notes)
  2. Medi's Minori-Taiko Oni (4.83 stars, 394 notes)
  3. Net's Kitamura-Normal (3.68 stars, 142 notes)
  4. Ryuji-Easy (2.27 stars, 93 notes)
  5. Saten's Taiga-Insane (4.97 stars, 231 notes)
Download: Rie Kugimiya, Eri Kitamura & Yui Horie - Orange (TV Size)
Download: Rie Kugimiya, Eri Kitamura & Yui Horie - Orange (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Suki dayo~~<3 ORANGES!
My 7th beatmap!
OP-1 | OP-2 | ED-1 | ED-2 | ED-Holy Night

Taiga-Insane done by Saten-san
Kitamura-Normal done by net45291
Minori-Taiko Oni done by Medi-chan

Redownload if you got this before July 1. Added a new skin Added new hitcircles and a brand new orange spinner-circle!!!
Parts of the Toradora skin by xxheroxx, ziin, and GonzvloThanks :D
Thanks to everyone that helps with this map :D
Saten
Suki dayo~~
net45291
Medi-chan_old
Done~

I bookmarked the only spot that I can tell mods might say something about.

Download: Rie Kugimiya, Eri Kitamura & Yui Horie - Orange (TV Size) (Weezy) [Medi's Taiko].osu
Frostmourne
[net45291's Kitamura-Normal]
try my .osu

if it's work :(
Suimya
;)
Backstep
Star ~ ;)
net45291
Topic Starter
Weez

net45291 wrote:

add sound and change little things , pls add my BG to my Diff :|
I'm keeping the one BG, I'm not a fan of multiple BG images for my maps :/
net45291

Weezy wrote:

net45291 wrote:

add sound and change little things , pls add my BG to my Diff :|
I'm keeping the one BG, I'm not a fan of multiple BG images for my maps :/
Ok weezy X3
Saten
Kamure
Ha, I didn't get to ask for a guest diff so I really should mod this... Or shoulod I take the Easy diff off of your hands....

General
  1. The video offsets aren't the same. Make them in the proper time. Or is it just net's?
  2. Fade out in the end?
[Ryuji-Easy] so far
  1. 00:03:271 (5,1) - a jump in an easy mode? Don't even reconsider this. Remove the repeat.
[net's Kitamura-Normal]
  1. 00:28:343 (6) - new combo
  2. 00:30:700 (1) - remove combo
  3. 00:31:771 (3) - new combo
  4. 00:37:771 (8) - ^
[Ami-Hard]
  1. 00:37:986 (2,4) - I think it's more preferable to have it end on the white tick
  2. 00:50:843 (2) - You can either place like this or remove the note and add a repeat
  3. 01:03:914 (3) - add combo
  4. 01:04:343 (1) - remove combo
[Saten's Taiga Insane
  1. 00:08:843 (1) - set it parallel to the combo before and change the (2) as well
  2. 00:57:271 (2,5) - hmmm, spread it more farther?
Go go!!
Saten
Changed the second one you mentioned, I didn't really get the first :P

Edit: Look below~~ Next page
Kamure

Saten-san wrote:

Changed the second one you mentioned, I didn't really get the first :P

Like this I guess, but it's a suggestion.

net45291
Saten

chamelepeace710 wrote:

Saten-san wrote:

Changed the second one you mentioned, I didn't really get the first :P

Like this I guess, but it's a suggestion.

Thanks~ Fixed, looks better like this :3

Download: Rie Kugimiya, Eri Kitamura & Yui Horie - Orange (TV Size) (Weezy) [Saten's Taiga-Insane].osu
bufo
Star~~~ *0*
pieguyn
net's Kitamura-Normal:

-I think you should change the normal hitsounds to soft ones

00:31:771 (6) - New combo
00:34:343 (1) - Spacing is too far, but it should be fine since the note is far away on the timeline
01:09:271 (7) - New combo?

Ami-Hard:

-The first part doesn't have any hitsounds, I think some whistles would fit

00:12:271 (6) - Move two level 4 grids up and one level 4 grid right
00:20:628 (1) - Make it symmetrical
00:33:271 (4) - ^
00:34:343 (2) - ^
00:35:200 (1) - Align with 2
00:41:200 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:52:557 (7) - Make it symmetrical?
01:23:628 (1,2,3,4) - Center this and move 4 1 level 4 grid right

Medi's Taiko Oni: Fine

Saten's Taiga-Insane: Interesting map :)

-The claps don't fit with the song, I recommend changing them
-Those long sliders at the end cause a bit of a problem due to the HP drain. It's not major though, so feel free to keep it.

Nice map :) *stars*
net45291

pieguy1372 wrote:

net's Kitamura-Normal:

-I think you should change the normal hitsounds to soft ones No :o

00:31:771 (6) - New combo Fixed
00:34:343 (1) - Spacing is too far, but it should be fine since the note is far away on the timeline No
01:09:271 (7) - New combo? Fixed
Download: Rie Kugimiya, Eri Kitamura & Yui Horie - Orange (TV Size) (Weezy) [net's Kitamura-Normal].osu
artpiggo
Ami-Hard
00:00:486 (1) - add whistle
00:01:771 (4) - add clap at end of it
00:03:486 (8) - add clap
00:05:200 (4) - ^
00:05:843 (6) - add whistle at start of it
00:06:700 (8) - add finish
00:07:343 (3) - add clap at repeat
00:08:843 (5) - add clap
00:09:700 (7) - add whistle
00:10:771 (2) - add whistle at start , add clap at end
00:11:843 (4) - add clap
00:12:700 (1) - add finish
00:13:128 (2) - add whistle
00:13:771 (4) - add finish at end of it
00:15:914 (4) - add whistle
00:19:986 (6) - ^
00:20:628 (1) - add finish at end
00:22:128 (3) - add whistle
00:22:771 (4) - add finish at start
00:23:414 (6) - add whistle
00:25:343 (2,3) - add (2)whistle and (3)clap
00:26:200 (1) - add finish
00:27:914 (1) - ^ at start
00:28:986 (3) - add whistle
00:29:414 (4) - add clap
00:30:914 (3) - ^
00:31:128 (4) - add finish at end
00:32:414 (2) - add clap
00:32:843 (3) - add whistle
00:33:914 (1) - add clap
00:34:343 (2) - add finish at end
00:35:628 (2) - add whistle at end
00:36:700 (4) - add clap
00:37:986 (2) - ^ at end
00:39:271 (3) - ^ ^
00:39:700 (4) - ^ ^
00:42:700 (1) - add whistle at end
00:43:343 (1) - add finish
00:45:057 (1) - add clap
00:45:486 (3) - add whistle
00:47:200 (3) - add clap at end
00:47:843 (4) - ^ at repeat
00:48:914 (2) - add clap
00:49:771 (5) - ^ at start
00:50:200 (1) - ^ at end
00:50:843 (2) - add finish
00:51:700 (4) - ^
00:52:557 (7) - add clap at end
00:54:271 (4) - add finish
00:54:700 (5) - add clap at repeat , add whistle at the other points
00:55:557 (1) - add clap at end
00:56:200 (3) - add clap at end
00:57:486 (2) - add clap
00:58:128 (4) - add finish
00:58:771 (1) - add clap at end
01:00:057 (4) - add finish at end
01:01:128 (2) - add clap
01:01:557 (3) - add whistle at end
01:02:628 (2) - add clap
01:03:057 (1) - ^ at end
01:04:343 (3) - add clap
01:04:986 (5) - add clap at repeat
01:06:271 (7) - add clap at end
01:07:986 (2) - add finish
01:08:414 (3) - add clap at repeat
01:09:486 (5) - add clap
01:10:343 (8) - ^
01:10:771 (1) - add clap at end
01:12:271 (4) - add whistle at start, add clap at end
01:13:343 (1) - add clap at end
01:13:986 (2) - add finish
01:16:343 (1) - add clap
01:17:414 (4) - add finish
01:17:521 (1) - add whistle
01:19:771 (1) - add clap
01:20:843 (4) - add finish
01:20:950 (1) - add whistle
01:23:200 (1) - add clap
01:24:271 (4) - add finish
01:24:378 (1) - ^

This time section (01:14:200 - 01:23:628) should be 50% volume cuz the low-volume vocal
and add new time section at 01:23:628 till end of song to be 30% volume

net's Kitamura-Normal
I think in all soft timing points(except in 5% volume, it's ok) should be 100% volume, but in normal ones are fine.
00:00:485 (1) - add whistle
00:17:628 (2) - add finish
00:19:343 (1) - add whistle
00:25:557 (4) - add clap
00:26:200 (1) - add whistle
00:37:986 (2) - ^ in slider body
00:39:700 (4) - ^ ^
00:41:628 (2) - ^ ^
00:45:485 (1) - ^
00:46:343 (3) - ^
00:58:128 (4) - add clap
01:09:271 (1) - add new combo
01:11:414 (3) - add clap
01:11:843 (4) - add clap at the repeat and add whistle at the start and end of it
01:13:986 (8) - add finish
01:17:414 (4) - ^
01:20:843 (4) - ^

By the way, it's just my suggestion about sound patterns. I'm not sure if you like it or not.
If you don't like the way I suggest, feel free to ignore mine.
PS, I'll star it when it's a pending beatmap.
Topic Starter
Weez

artpiggo wrote:

random
Ami-Hard
00:00:486 (1) - add whistle
00:01:771 (4) - add clap at end of it
00:03:486 (8) - add clap
00:05:200 (4) - ^
00:05:843 (6) - add whistle at start of it
00:06:700 (8) - add finish
00:07:343 (3) - add clap at repeat
00:08:843 (5) - add clap
00:09:700 (7) - add whistle
00:10:771 (2) - add whistle at start , add clap at end
00:11:843 (4) - add clap
00:12:700 (1) - add finish
00:13:128 (2) - add whistle
00:13:771 (4) - add finish at end of it
00:15:914 (4) - add whistle
00:19:986 (6) - ^
00:20:628 (1) - add finish at end
00:22:128 (3) - add whistle
00:22:771 (4) - add finish at start
00:23:414 (6) - add whistle
00:25:343 (2,3) - add (2)whistle and (3)clap
00:26:200 (1) - add finish
00:27:914 (1) - ^ at start
00:28:986 (3) - add whistle
00:29:414 (4) - add clap
00:30:914 (3) - ^
00:31:128 (4) - add finish at end
00:32:414 (2) - add clap
00:32:843 (3) - add whistle
00:33:914 (1) - add clap
00:34:343 (2) - add finish at end
00:35:628 (2) - add whistle at end
00:36:700 (4) - add clap
00:37:986 (2) - ^ at end
00:39:271 (3) - ^ ^
00:39:700 (4) - ^ ^
00:42:700 (1) - add whistle at end
00:43:343 (1) - add finish
00:45:057 (1) - add clap
00:45:486 (3) - add whistle
00:47:200 (3) - add clap at end
00:47:843 (4) - ^ at repeat
00:48:914 (2) - add clap
00:49:771 (5) - ^ at start
00:50:200 (1) - ^ at end
00:50:843 (2) - add finish
00:51:700 (4) - ^
00:52:557 (7) - add clap at end
00:54:271 (4) - add finish
00:54:700 (5) - add clap at repeat , add whistle at the other points
00:55:557 (1) - add clap at end
00:56:200 (3) - add clap at end
00:57:486 (2) - add clap
00:58:128 (4) - add finish
00:58:771 (1) - add clap at end
01:00:057 (4) - add finish at end
01:01:128 (2) - add clap
01:01:557 (3) - add whistle at end
01:02:628 (2) - add clap
01:03:057 (1) - ^ at end
01:04:343 (3) - add clap
01:04:986 (5) - add clap at repeat
01:06:271 (7) - add clap at end
01:07:986 (2) - add finish
01:08:414 (3) - add clap at repeat
01:09:486 (5) - add clap
01:10:343 (8) - ^
01:10:771 (1) - add clap at end
01:12:271 (4) - add whistle at start, add clap at end
01:13:343 (1) - add clap at end
01:13:986 (2) - add finish
01:16:343 (1) - add clap
01:17:414 (4) - add finish
01:17:521 (1) - add whistle
01:19:771 (1) - add clap
01:20:843 (4) - add finish
01:20:950 (1) - add whistle
01:23:200 (1) - add clap
01:24:271 (4) - add finish
01:24:378 (1) - ^

This time section (01:14:200 - 01:23:628) should be 50% volume cuz the low-volume vocal
and add new time section at 01:23:628 till end of song to be 30% volume
its WIP for a reason... so i can't kudosu this :/
artpiggo
its WIP for a reason... so i can't kudosu this :/
Don't mind, don't mind. I come here because my friend,Net, wants me to mod his. I don't care about kudosu much :3

When it's ready for mod, I'll come here for mod again.
Xo4y_CoCaTb
cool) =3
Remilia--_old
Looking foward to failing this when its ranked o-o

So gonna fc this <3

Also Star
Shiirn
General
Meh

Easy
Meh

Normal
01:07:343 (2) - move second node, slider looks like crap

Hard
01:06:271 (7) - Whistle on end

Taiko
1.4 fits this song better than 1.6

Insane
Meh

I disliked how none of the difficulties used the time after the last vocal line, despite it ending rather well.
Medi-chan_old
I like the faster scrolling better, but you're right it does, so changed.

Download: Rie Kugimiya, Eri Kitamura & Yui Horie - Orange (TV Size) (Weezy) [Medi's Minori-Taiko Oni].osu
akrolsmir
Yay, another Toradora map!

Ryuji-Easy:
I think Ryuji should be Ryuuji. Ryuji is when the u has a stress over it otherwise it looks like you double it. Of course, I don't actually know Japenese, this is based on a couple of google searches.

General note- Though sliders such as 00:00:486 (1) - , 00:10:771 (1) - are reasonably (but not perfectly) symmetric, they look too pointed. Try using more nodes than just 3 to get a better arc shape.

00:01:771 (2) - Align with end of (1)?
00:47:200 (2,3) - If they're meant to be identical... they're not.
00:52:128 (3) - Since this is an easy, maybe replace this slider with just a circle on the place it starts?
01:05:843 (4) - ^

net's Kitamura-Normal:
00:27:914 (5) - Move up 1 grid to complete the pattern
01:20:200 (1,2,3,4) - I felt that instead of a just a horizontal flip of 01:16:771 (1,2,3,4) - , this should have been that rotated 180 degrees kinda like to arms of a spiral, similar to the pattern in Easy.

Ami-Hard:
00:18:057 (1,2) - These two ought to be identical
00:21:700 - Place a circle here to cover "n" of "minawa". And to parallel the timing of 00:14:628 (1,2,3) - , 00:18:057 (1,2) - .
00:25:128- ^
00:52:557 (7) - See note about sliders under Easy
00:56:200 (3) - Asymmetrical, move center node down.
01:06:271 (7) - It's good you use many nodes here, but it's still not symmetric
01:07:343 (1,3) - Asymmetrical, move center node down.

Saten's Taiga-Insane:
I think a slider tick rate of 1 or even 2 would be good; it's a bit disconcerting to see long sliders with no ticks in them.
Other than that, I thought the patterns were really well done in this difficulty!

Generally, there were a few problems with slider shapes and symmetry. You might want to refer to this guide for nicer slider shapes. Mostly fine, though, and starred!
Haneii
~Ryuji-Easy~

00:45:486 (1) – too close to spinner. I suggested removing this and the next 2 notes and just have it start again at the beginning of the chorus

~net's Kitamura-Normal~

00:23:414 (6) – align with end of slider better. (tip: turn off grid snap, make DS 0.0 and it should fall right into place)
00:33:271 (10) - ^
00:42:914 (3) - ^
01:07:985 (3) - ^


~Twinkle twinkle little star~
Crimmi
Modding,CrimmiStyle!!

[Ryuji-Easy]

Lead-in should be 2 seconds, imo.

The rest is fine~

[net's Kitamura Normal]

Lead-in should be 2 seconds, imo.

These new combos are just suggestional:
00:03:271 (1) - New combo.
00:03:914 (4) - New combo.
00:06:914 (1) - New combo.
00:07:343 (5) - New combo.
00:27:914 (5) - Align with (4).
00:46:771 (4) - New combo?
01:03:486 (1) - New combo.

[Ami-Hard]

Lead-in should be 2 seconds, imo.

[Medi's Minori-Taiko Oni]

Nothing.

[Saten's Taiga-Insane]

Lead-in should be 2 seconds, imo.

Nothing.
Saten
2 sec seems too long imo..
net45291

Saten-san wrote:

2 sec seems too long imo..
me too = ="

Download: Rie Kugimiya, Eri Kitamura & Yui Horie - Orange (TV Size) (Weezy) [net's Kitamura-Normal].osu
Topic Starter
Weez

net45291 wrote:

Saten-san wrote:

2 sec seems too long imo..
me too = ="
me three :T
Colin Hou
[General]:
  1. don't change the aspect ratio while resizing the image for BG, if you really care about this anime, try harder to find a better choice.
  2. find a Taiko BG for Taiko diff?
  3. about lean-in, 2s~2.5s from start to the first note is fine :3
[Insane]:
  1. 01:13:986 (1) - not a fan about this slow slider, spinner with a starting note is better imo. or at least make a better shape for them? there are only 3 way point and seems randomly placed.
  2. 01:17:414 (1) - ^
  3. 01:20:843 (1) - ^
[Hard]:
  1. I think I said in the earlier modding (but I forget which map), the spacing is too light for the sliver velocity.
[Normal]:
  1. 00:33:700 (11,1) - this is a jump in normal, and obviously too hard.
  2. 01:00:486 (T) - make the re-KIAI happen here.
  3. 00:46:771 ~ 00:53:200 (T) - this part is following the vocal, but for the next part, suddenly the style changed. a bit confusing and a long 1/2 combo is not so friendly in a normal diff. try to make your diff more like 1 diff, it will make it more balanced.
[Easy]:
  1. 01:26:843 (1,2,3,4) - suggest changing them into slider(s), they're right after the spinner and the location makes the approaching circle not easy enough to tell, this would lead to an early click.
not bad, so have a star~ :3
Kiddo-Kun
[General]
All good

[Ryuji-Easy]
00:43:343 (1) - Add a finish to the end of this note.
01:09:486 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:26:843 (1,2,3,4) - You should move these inheriting point 1/4 tick behind the note.

[net's Kitamura-Normal]
00:05:200 (5) - Move this note down one grid. (Grid Level 3)
00:34:343 (1) - You should move this inheriting point 1/4 tick behind the note.
00:31:771 (6) - It would be better if you make a new combo here.

-I think the combos are poorly placed in this difficulty. If I were you I'd go over them and make sure they are consistent and follow the song-

[Ami-Hard]

All is well, but...
01:26:843 (1,2,3,4) - Same as easy.

[Saten's Taiga-Insane]

Fine IMO.

Have a star.
wmfchris
here's a taiko mod >_<

00:01:557 - try d k d d d k d?
00:!6:557 - d
00:27:057 - d---d-k-D....
00:34:128 - kkdkddd
00:38:200 - dkddd ddkkddd dddkddk [but these stream don't fit the vocal very well, try to break them down.]
00:44:414 - ddkdddk?
00:56:200 - kkkkd d
01:10:771 - kdkdkdk / kkddddk

Rating: 6.5/10

Except for some messy streams they looked good
star~
Crimmi

Saten-san wrote:

2 sec seems too long imo..
I say that because from the beginning till the first note is a bit short especially for the ones who use Double Time.

but like i say it's a suggestion :|
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