hii m4m request from your queue
song is so nice, thanks for introducing me to it c':
good luck !
song is so nice, thanks for introducing me to it c':
Alone
00:05:989 (1,2) - blanket can be made more pretty here if you want
00:12:816 (8) - maybe use a 1/2 slider here since all the previous white ticks have objects on them? if you agree then here 00:07:851 (5) - would need one as well for consistency
00:42:402 (5,6,7) - i think it would be better here to map the held vocal in a different way than the 3 fast vocal beats here 00:43:230 (1,2,3) - . it would also be more consistent with how you map these vocals later on in the map
00:55:644 (5,6,7) - same again here
01:01:437 (1) - there's a such a strong sound on the red tick after this not, maybe use a 1/2 slider?
01:04:747 (1) - same here, feels odd to ignore that sound imo
01:24:609 (1) - i don't think the sounds here deserve a 1/1 slider? especially since you previously mapped these sounds using this pattern 01:17:989 (1,2,3) -
01:32:058 (4,5,6) - maybe stack them on the sliderends of 01:32:885 (7,8,9) - like
02:11:782 (4,5,6) - same thing here as well
02:44:058 (1) - you could make this just a 1/4 slider without the reverse which would allow for clickable object on red tick to match other patterns throughout the map
00:12:816 (8) - maybe use a 1/2 slider here since all the previous white ticks have objects on them? if you agree then here 00:07:851 (5) - would need one as well for consistency
00:42:402 (5,6,7) - i think it would be better here to map the held vocal in a different way than the 3 fast vocal beats here 00:43:230 (1,2,3) - . it would also be more consistent with how you map these vocals later on in the map
00:55:644 (5,6,7) - same again here
01:01:437 (1) - there's a such a strong sound on the red tick after this not, maybe use a 1/2 slider?
01:04:747 (1) - same here, feels odd to ignore that sound imo
01:24:609 (1) - i don't think the sounds here deserve a 1/1 slider? especially since you previously mapped these sounds using this pattern 01:17:989 (1,2,3) -
01:32:058 (4,5,6) - maybe stack them on the sliderends of 01:32:885 (7,8,9) - like
02:11:782 (4,5,6) - same thing here as well
02:44:058 (1) - you could make this just a 1/4 slider without the reverse which would allow for clickable object on red tick to match other patterns throughout the map
Advanced
00:05:989 (1) - i think the sound on this sliderend should actually be start of a slider. Such a strong sound and held vocal sounds like it should be start of a slider rather than the end. Like you have done here 00:13:437 (1) -
00:18:402 (3) - you could move the 2nd white node down a little to be half way between the first node and the red anchor to make this slider more beautiful
00:48:609 (4) - i think maybe two 1/2 slider would be better here to match the vocals, it also avoids that loud drum being mapped to a sliderend
00:51:920 (4) - same again here
01:43:230 (4) - and also in this chorus too
02:27:506 (1,3) - any reason these aren't the same shape?
00:18:402 (3) - you could move the 2nd white node down a little to be half way between the first node and the red anchor to make this slider more beautiful
00:48:609 (4) - i think maybe two 1/2 slider would be better here to match the vocals, it also avoids that loud drum being mapped to a sliderend
00:51:920 (4) - same again here
01:43:230 (4) - and also in this chorus too
02:27:506 (1,3) - any reason these aren't the same shape?
Light
00:24:196 (6,1) - maybe place a circle between these?
00:57:713 (5,6) - maybe move these to x:483 y:211 so they flow straight off of the slider?
01:10:540 (3,4) - i think there should be circle between these to match 01:04:747 (3,4,5) -
01:30:402 (4) - you can maybe highlight strong vocal here with a 1/1 slider?
01:37:023 (3) - same again here
01:47:782 (1) - i think two 1/1 sliders may be better here, since this slider ends on such a strong vocal
02:02:678 (2,3,4,5) - if you move these down just a little then you can vertically straighten 02:06:816 (6,7,1) - and stack on 02:04:747 (4) - which i think makes it much more pretty, since the current placement with the slight angle looks out of place compared to the nice structure in the rest of the map
00:57:713 (5,6) - maybe move these to x:483 y:211 so they flow straight off of the slider?
01:10:540 (3,4) - i think there should be circle between these to match 01:04:747 (3,4,5) -
01:30:402 (4) - you can maybe highlight strong vocal here with a 1/1 slider?
01:37:023 (3) - same again here
01:47:782 (1) - i think two 1/1 sliders may be better here, since this slider ends on such a strong vocal
02:02:678 (2,3,4,5) - if you move these down just a little then you can vertically straighten 02:06:816 (6,7,1) - and stack on 02:04:747 (4) - which i think makes it much more pretty, since the current placement with the slight angle looks out of place compared to the nice structure in the rest of the map
good luck !