Hello. Here I am with my mod from your q.
And here is my map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/682185
for m4m
Couldn't find much in aesthetics, maybe because of the symmetric style, however, rhythm could be improved.
Good luck
And here is my map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/682185
for m4m
General
The bit rate of mp3 you are using is too high.
Alone
00:42:402 (5,6,7) - why did you choose to map 3 circles instead of 1 slider when it's literally the same as 00:35:782 (7) -? It's better to change it to keep it consistent as possible.
00:44:058 (4,5,6) - could be the same as 00:42:402 (5,6,7) - if you agree with my suggestion I listed above ^
00:55:644 (5,6,7) - can't really tell anything about this. because it's like the third time and because the song progresses further starting from 00:55:644 (5,6,7) - , 00:55:644 (5,6,7) - could actually fit in there by adding more colors to the map
00:58:230 - you forgot to insert break time here?
01:01:437 - to 01:27:920 - as it's more intense section, i think, you should fill gaps and map red ticks because i can hear multiple instruments playing the same note, here's the rhythm:
01:11:161 (7,1) - blanket
01:20:264 (7) - what about replacing it with a circle, stack it on 01:20:058 (6) - and right after make a slider?
02:44:058 (1) - unnecessary, simple circle would fit
it's hard to suggest some rhythm changes because i see that it'll complicate things because of symmetric objects placement
00:44:058 (4,5,6) - could be the same as 00:42:402 (5,6,7) - if you agree with my suggestion I listed above ^
00:55:644 (5,6,7) - can't really tell anything about this. because it's like the third time and because the song progresses further starting from 00:55:644 (5,6,7) - , 00:55:644 (5,6,7) - could actually fit in there by adding more colors to the map
00:58:230 - you forgot to insert break time here?
01:01:437 - to 01:27:920 - as it's more intense section, i think, you should fill gaps and map red ticks because i can hear multiple instruments playing the same note, here's the rhythm:
01:11:161 (7,1) - blanket
01:20:264 (7) - what about replacing it with a circle, stack it on 01:20:058 (6) - and right after make a slider?
02:44:058 (1) - unnecessary, simple circle would fit
it's hard to suggest some rhythm changes because i see that it'll complicate things because of symmetric objects placement
Advanced
nothing wrong with the object placement, however, i want to spot out some rhythm ideas:
00:08:885 (5) -
and so on
00:28:333 - feels like 00:27:920 (3) - should be there
00:48:609 (4) - why not expanding this slider?
and so on ... 00:51:920 (4) - ...
00:58:333 - you forgot to insert break time here also?
01:07:644 (4,1) - and 01:14:264 (4,1) - quite similar, you change the pattern
01:43:230 (4) - expand, same as above ^
02:06:816 (5) - should be here 02:06:402 (4) - like 01:39:920 (4) - , 02:19:644 (4) - and then just add something that would play well
basically, i won't repeat myself, so these suggestions apply to the whole map
00:08:885 (5) -
and so on
00:28:333 - feels like 00:27:920 (3) - should be there
00:48:609 (4) - why not expanding this slider?
and so on ... 00:51:920 (4) - ...
00:58:333 - you forgot to insert break time here also?
01:07:644 (4,1) - and 01:14:264 (4,1) - quite similar, you change the pattern
01:43:230 (4) - expand, same as above ^
02:06:816 (5) - should be here 02:06:402 (4) - like 01:39:920 (4) - , 02:19:644 (4) - and then just add something that would play well
basically, i won't repeat myself, so these suggestions apply to the whole map
Light
00:58:333 - break?
02:04:333 - my suggestion would be:
feels like you should build more around vocals in kiai, make rhythm more intensive
02:04:333 - my suggestion would be:
feels like you should build more around vocals in kiai, make rhythm more intensive
Couldn't find much in aesthetics, maybe because of the symmetric style, however, rhythm could be improved.
Good luck