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[General]
* maybe silence slider-slide?
[Light]
* 00:21:299 (3) - Just a suggestion, considering how you handled other parts, you might wanna remove this and add another object at 00:22:954 -
* 00:43:230 (5,7) - loosening this a bit could improve flow with 00:44:471 (6) - http://puu.sh/y420V/eee353c642.jpg
* 00:56:471 (4) - could polish this slider's tail portion to be parallel with head portion, so it has better flow with 00:57:713 (5) -
head portion
tail portion
so polishing this will look like this
* 01:32:885 (7) - maybe shorten this then add a circle at 01:34:540 - ?
Having only three circles at 01:35:368 (1,2,3) - feels a bit awkward since 4-symmetry-circles patterns were used continuosly before.
00:33:299 (1,2,3,4) - 00:39:920 (1,2,3,4) - 01:27:920 (1,2,3,4) -
* 02:12:609 (7) - ^
* 01:55:230 (2,4) - I don't think this much twisted slider is really necessary, imo this is more like hurting consistency rather than adding diversity.
I would recommend simplifying the shape (possibly like this ? http://puu.sh/y42Y5/b88d436f15.jpg)
* 02:03:506 (3) - I think you should prioritize the vocals (these four ticks 02:04:333 - 02:05:161 - 02:05:989 - 02:06:816 - ) since they're very unique part of the whole song.
So my suggestion is to change (3) into a 1/1 slider or just a circle, then start 2/1 sliders from 02:04:333 - and 02:05:989 - .
[Advanced]
I doubt that the sv is a bit high for this difficulty? just my thought.
looks good beside that.
[Alone]
* 00:09:092 (3) - how about x:224 y:97 ? snapping here would be nice imo.
* 00:18:816 (6,7,8,9) - why whistle on red ticks? seems weird to me
* 00:42:402 (5,6,7) - imo using a 1/1 slider would be better, so that it could be a contrast to 00:43:230 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - , like you did at 00:35:782 (7) -
* 00:55:644 (5,6,7) - ^
* 01:02:264 (4) - imo rather than using a reverse slider here, it would be better to have a circle at 01:02:885 - , considering how you mapped Advanced.
this applies to other reverse 3/4s (01:08:885 (3) - 01:17:161 (7) - and etc..)
* 01:32:885 (7,8,9) - maybe nerf the distance somehow? it's even harder than this part 01:39:506 (7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - , seems a bit unfitting.
* 02:12:609 (7,8,9) - ^
* 02:05:161 (5,6) - this could be really confusing as a 1/2 gap, since you used filler rhythm so many times.
maybe move (5) to x:256 y:350 ?
That's all. Good luck!
[General]
* maybe silence slider-slide?
[Light]
* 00:21:299 (3) - Just a suggestion, considering how you handled other parts, you might wanna remove this and add another object at 00:22:954 -
* 00:43:230 (5,7) - loosening this a bit could improve flow with 00:44:471 (6) - http://puu.sh/y420V/eee353c642.jpg
* 00:56:471 (4) - could polish this slider's tail portion to be parallel with head portion, so it has better flow with 00:57:713 (5) -
head portion
tail portion
so polishing this will look like this
* 01:32:885 (7) - maybe shorten this then add a circle at 01:34:540 - ?
Having only three circles at 01:35:368 (1,2,3) - feels a bit awkward since 4-symmetry-circles patterns were used continuosly before.
00:33:299 (1,2,3,4) - 00:39:920 (1,2,3,4) - 01:27:920 (1,2,3,4) -
* 02:12:609 (7) - ^
* 01:55:230 (2,4) - I don't think this much twisted slider is really necessary, imo this is more like hurting consistency rather than adding diversity.
I would recommend simplifying the shape (possibly like this ? http://puu.sh/y42Y5/b88d436f15.jpg)
* 02:03:506 (3) - I think you should prioritize the vocals (these four ticks 02:04:333 - 02:05:161 - 02:05:989 - 02:06:816 - ) since they're very unique part of the whole song.
So my suggestion is to change (3) into a 1/1 slider or just a circle, then start 2/1 sliders from 02:04:333 - and 02:05:989 - .
[Advanced]
I doubt that the sv is a bit high for this difficulty? just my thought.
looks good beside that.
[Alone]
* 00:09:092 (3) - how about x:224 y:97 ? snapping here would be nice imo.
* 00:18:816 (6,7,8,9) - why whistle on red ticks? seems weird to me
* 00:42:402 (5,6,7) - imo using a 1/1 slider would be better, so that it could be a contrast to 00:43:230 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - , like you did at 00:35:782 (7) -
* 00:55:644 (5,6,7) - ^
* 01:02:264 (4) - imo rather than using a reverse slider here, it would be better to have a circle at 01:02:885 - , considering how you mapped Advanced.
this applies to other reverse 3/4s (01:08:885 (3) - 01:17:161 (7) - and etc..)
* 01:32:885 (7,8,9) - maybe nerf the distance somehow? it's even harder than this part 01:39:506 (7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - , seems a bit unfitting.
* 02:12:609 (7,8,9) - ^
* 02:05:161 (5,6) - this could be really confusing as a 1/2 gap, since you used filler rhythm so many times.
maybe move (5) to x:256 y:350 ?
That's all. Good luck!