Hey, sorry for being late :/
[Easy]
I hate to be that guy but some of these blankets could honestly be better, stuff like 00:16:959 (1,2), 00:36:396 (4,1), 00:45:269 (2,3), etc. Pretty fine overall though.
01:16:959 (1) - dont think this NC was intentional
pretty solid easy diff, just be sure to clean up your blankets and stuff
[Normal]
00:26:255 (3,4,1) - Stuff like this doesnt look so good in practice because the gaps between objects aren't the same. this image should help visualize - http://imgur.com/a/p4hPz
01:16:114 (1) - might be nice if this shape is symmetrical just like the previous few patterns were
01:34:705 (1) - starting here until the end of the second kiai there's just a continuous stream of objects, would be nice if you could put a gap in there so the player has at least some downtime
01:51:607 (1) - Think it's better if this is split into two circles, both the head and tail of this slider have an equal "finish" impact to them, so it would fit better as 2 circles.
01:54:987 (1) - ^ and the other 2 of these
02:03:860 (3,4) - work on this a bit more, the blanket's off and the shape itself isn't that good looking either
[Hard]
00:08:086 (5,6,1,2) - dont like this pattern, the spacing is pretty big and 00:08:297 (6,1,2) - makes a very uncomfortable wide angle which I don't really fits this part of the music.
00:09:353 (1) - this NC isnt needed
00:17:276 (2) - I dont think the sound here is prominent enough to be worth mapping, triplets in hards should be reserved for obvious sounds imo
00:47:593 (2,3) - recommend keeping this look of having the reverse slider point at the circle for 00:48:227 (4,5) - too
01:06:818 - should be clickable, along with 01:07:240. Maybe you could do 1/4 slider into circle?
02:01:747 (8) - NC should be here
[Savage]
00:08:086 (6,7,3) - equal distance between these 3 objects perhaps? for a neater pattern
00:13:579 (1,2,3) - Eh, just comparing the music here to 00:00:058 (1,2,3,4,5) - i'm not a big fan of you spacing out these. It just...doesn't really fit the intensity of the music.
00:14:318 (6,7,9) - if you wont change, you could make this an equaliteral triangle for neatness
00:21:818 (1) - NC should be on 00:22:241 (2) - righT?
00:23:191 (6,7,8,9,10) - Same here, this doesn't really need to be spaced. I guess you can justify 00:23:719 (1,2,3) - but the stream leading into it not really.
00:26:043 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - What's the difference between this and the other triplets you were spacing out in terms of the music? Trust me, I enjoy playing spaced triplets/streams/whathaveyou, but they should be justified by the music's intensity.
00:29:424 (3,1) - you can afford having a larger spacing between these two, having the head of 1 be so close to the tail of 3 is a bit jarring considering the SV.
00:44:635 (4,5) - could flow better, atm it feels like you're hitting 5 from behind
00:49:917 (1,2,3) - i like these spaced triplets because the trumpet contrasts with the rest of the section, and thus the triplets do as well.
01:37:241 (1) - Buffer these sliders, as remove a reverse from each one so that the gap to the next object is 1/4
Overall its a nice diff, I just feel like you should make the spaced 1/4 match the intensity of the music instead of just kind of doing it whenever, which is what it feels like now.
Good luck!
[Easy]
I hate to be that guy but some of these blankets could honestly be better, stuff like 00:16:959 (1,2), 00:36:396 (4,1), 00:45:269 (2,3), etc. Pretty fine overall though.
01:16:959 (1) - dont think this NC was intentional
pretty solid easy diff, just be sure to clean up your blankets and stuff
[Normal]
00:26:255 (3,4,1) - Stuff like this doesnt look so good in practice because the gaps between objects aren't the same. this image should help visualize - http://imgur.com/a/p4hPz
01:16:114 (1) - might be nice if this shape is symmetrical just like the previous few patterns were
01:34:705 (1) - starting here until the end of the second kiai there's just a continuous stream of objects, would be nice if you could put a gap in there so the player has at least some downtime
01:51:607 (1) - Think it's better if this is split into two circles, both the head and tail of this slider have an equal "finish" impact to them, so it would fit better as 2 circles.
01:54:987 (1) - ^ and the other 2 of these
02:03:860 (3,4) - work on this a bit more, the blanket's off and the shape itself isn't that good looking either
[Hard]
00:08:086 (5,6,1,2) - dont like this pattern, the spacing is pretty big and 00:08:297 (6,1,2) - makes a very uncomfortable wide angle which I don't really fits this part of the music.
00:09:353 (1) - this NC isnt needed
00:17:276 (2) - I dont think the sound here is prominent enough to be worth mapping, triplets in hards should be reserved for obvious sounds imo
00:47:593 (2,3) - recommend keeping this look of having the reverse slider point at the circle for 00:48:227 (4,5) - too
01:06:818 - should be clickable, along with 01:07:240. Maybe you could do 1/4 slider into circle?
02:01:747 (8) - NC should be here
[Savage]
00:08:086 (6,7,3) - equal distance between these 3 objects perhaps? for a neater pattern
00:13:579 (1,2,3) - Eh, just comparing the music here to 00:00:058 (1,2,3,4,5) - i'm not a big fan of you spacing out these. It just...doesn't really fit the intensity of the music.
00:14:318 (6,7,9) - if you wont change, you could make this an equaliteral triangle for neatness
00:21:818 (1) - NC should be on 00:22:241 (2) - righT?
00:23:191 (6,7,8,9,10) - Same here, this doesn't really need to be spaced. I guess you can justify 00:23:719 (1,2,3) - but the stream leading into it not really.
00:26:043 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - What's the difference between this and the other triplets you were spacing out in terms of the music? Trust me, I enjoy playing spaced triplets/streams/whathaveyou, but they should be justified by the music's intensity.
00:29:424 (3,1) - you can afford having a larger spacing between these two, having the head of 1 be so close to the tail of 3 is a bit jarring considering the SV.
00:44:635 (4,5) - could flow better, atm it feels like you're hitting 5 from behind
00:49:917 (1,2,3) - i like these spaced triplets because the trumpet contrasts with the rest of the section, and thus the triplets do as well.
01:37:241 (1) - Buffer these sliders, as remove a reverse from each one so that the gap to the next object is 1/4
Overall its a nice diff, I just feel like you should make the spaced 1/4 match the intensity of the music instead of just kind of doing it whenever, which is what it feels like now.
Good luck!