[General]
- well, nothing wrong XD
- 00:08:086 (6,7) - these two could add finish, to follow the song.
- 00:19:494 (5,6) - I want to suggest you to stretch these two slider to 3/4 http://puu.sh/uxRhb/a5f643ddf6.jpg these rhythm is kinda unique so I think there need something different that is not normally 1/2, It's also give more feeling.
- 00:24:776 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - maybe less their spacing like 00:26:043 (3,4,5,6,7,8) ? I think it's not strong enough to be spaced like 00:23:719 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) and more. It even weaker than 00:26:043 (3,4,5,6,7,8) imo.
- 00:28:579 (1,2) - how fast of slider doesn't fit with spacing imo. fast slider but short spacing make it less flow so I think make them further is better. something like http://puu.sh/uxXTI/9a29a73527.jpg
- 00:40:198 (7) - replace with two circles fits better imo. sound on tail is pretty strong so change to circle and make some jump is more fun to play.
- 00:40:621 (1) - I think this slider is more fit with the song if it's slower and stretch to 3/4.
- 01:00:480 (6) - aaa ctrl+g is more flow I think but I don't force your style XD
- 01:05:339 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - same
- 01:09:142 (1,2,3,1) - same
- 02:08:297 (8) - 1.50x spacing is more fit imo, not overjumped.
- 00:19:917 (6) - sampleset-drum clap sounds better and will be consistency with 00:26:678 (8)
- 01:05:445 (2) - remove sampleset-drum for consistency?
- 01:11:043 (1,3) - whistle on tail?
- I think you still need to add many finish hitsound for example 01:48:227 (1) , 01:44:846 (1) and etc.
- 01:49:705 - http://puu.sh/uxZGr/6a44ccaa96.jpg is more fit with the song/hitsound you use imo, really strong on tail so it's more fit if it's circle and jump to next slider.
- 01:52:452 (1) - no need NC imo. it's just.... unnecessary.
- 01:53:297 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - will be perfect if the spacing is increase bit by bit per circle. more fit with the song and give more impact.
- 01:55:409 - strong beat at tail, kinda lacks of impact http://puu.sh/uxZVr/dd40f099ae.jpg this rhythm is more fit and plays better imo.
- 02:00:058 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - same
- 02:02:170 (1,1,2) - same
- 02:08:931 (1) - make it further? might confused player that it's 1/2 rhythm to (2)
- your diff still lacks of many finish hitsound, please check them o.o
- 00:14:212 (5,6,7) - make them liner with 4 like 00:13:579 (1,2,3,4) really plays better, unless you want to use force-flow pattern.
- 00:32:276 (5) - add NC
- I think many finish hitsound still missing such as 00:44:001 (1)
- 00:48:649 (5,6,1) - maybe make their spacing consistent like you did on 00:49:494 (2,3,4)?
- 00:08:508 (1,2,3) - aaa it looks more like spacing error tbh, because they are the only part that has spacing like this even the rhythm is not that different with other pattern. use the same spacing as other part?
- 00:28:156 (5) - looks like spacing error, move it further.
- 00:54:776 (1) - this kind of pattern no need NC imo.
- same hitsound suggestion as savage diff.
- 00:09:353 (1) - no need NC.
- you did very good on this diff, some note might off the playfield? such as 02:01:325 (4), otherwise it's perfect.
- 01:24:565 (1,2,3) - this rhythm is pretty weird for beginner tbh, they always got told that just follow the drum but this rhythm is vocal instead of drum. follow drum instead like you did on 01:38:086 (1,2,3) is better imo.
- 01:31:325 (1,2,3) - same here, beginner can't pay attention that much to the vocal imo. they focus on approach circle and drum. (I teach many beginner player here XD)