M4M or NM (whatever :u)
FALL IN TRANCE
Nice map tho ^-^ gl00:16:799 (1,1) - Overlap, you can fix this by stacking 00:17:731 (1) - with 00:16:177 (1) -
00:18:975 (5,6,7) - Straight line triplet, this should be better if you make a curve pointing to 00:19:286 (8) - (better entrance)
00:19:286 (8) - New combo here, and move this slider a little bit up, or stack it with 00:18:353 (1) -
00:18:664 (4,9) - Overlap, move the slider to x:296 y:200 (in other words, stack it with 00:16:799 (1) - )
00:21:151 (8,1) - Those sliders can be a curved ones like this
00:22:550 (7,1) - Overlap, unintentional?
00:24:881 (2,7) - Just a suggestion but maybe you should do a blanket here
00:26:591 (2,3,6) - Overlap, unintentional?
00:32:032 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The idea is good, but the sliders have a very uncomfortable movement, to fix this maybe if you start from 00:35:296 (8) -
to 00:32:187 (2) - should be fine, or making the rotation on clockwise instead of anti clockwise.
00:35:918 (2,3,4) - The same, the entrance and the movement of the sliders are uncomfortable
00:38:560 (1,2) - Increase the spacing of the slider for something like this
00:46:954 (6) - Fix the orientation of the slider to align it with 00:46:799 (5) -
00:50:995 (3) - Now here i got a suggestion to make this pattern like this
00:51:618 (2,3,4) - And here this triplet should be curved and just change the order of these sliders 00:51:928 (1,2) - and you will get a pattern
like this (also move 00:51:928 (1) - a little bit up to avoid overlaps)
00:57:628 (1) - The orientation of this slider is weird, you should change it to a better entrance from 00:57:524 (5) -
01:22:399 (4,2) - Overlap
01:39:808 (6,2,4) - Messy overlaps
01:52:554 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Same as before, the sliders have a very uncomfortable movement.
02:04:368 (1) - Here you can use x1,20 Slider velocity
02:10:041 (6) - Increase the spacing a little bit and make it a New Combo
02:14:005 (1) - This should start on 02:13:694 -
02:18:047 (4) - Inconsistency on the shape of this slider compared to 02:17:114 (1,2) -
02:38:254 (1) - Replace this slider for a normal curved one, you didn't use any other slider with different or similar shape on the whole part, so this will feel like a random placed slider during gameplay.
02:51:855 (6) - New combo
02:51:932 (1) - Remove new combo
03:03:901 (5) - Stack it with the head of 03:03:124 (2) - to maintain the movement and get a better entrance with 03:04:057 (6) -
03:04:834 (2,6,7) - Stack them
03:07:787 (6) - New combo
03:09:497 (3) - A good suggestion is to stack it with 03:09:031 (1) - for a back and forth
03:14:004 (9,10) - Remove them, and put the slider on 03:14:005 - then add a circle here 03:14:315 -
03:19:445 (2) - This slider could have more spacing
04:10:895 (4) - Put a curved slider here to mantain the pattern 04:09:652 (1,2,5,1,2,3) -
04:19:134 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Overlap
04:37:009 (10,4) - Overlap
04:36:387 (6) - New combo
04:59:703 (1,2,3) - Fix this blanket
05:01:568 (1,1) - Overlap here
05:06:076 (7,4) - Overlap here too, increase the spacing of 05:06:697 (4) -
05:10:894 (1) - Stack this slider with 05:10:117 (8) - and just move the stream 05:11:127 (2,3,4,5) - a little bit to the left.
05:13:537 (7,5) - Overlap (yes :u)
05:19:599 (5) - New combo
05:18:511 (1) - Well, it would be perfect if you can stack this slider tail with 05:19:521 (4) - and maintain the blanket with 05:18:045 (4,1) -
05:29:238 (1,3) - Stack them properly
05:32:501 (2,1) - ^
05:39:495 (1,2,3) - Messy triplet, make it similar to 05:39:806 (4,5,6) -
05:39:806 (4) - New combo
05:53:018 (7) - Increase the spacing
05:59:858 (1,2,3,4,1) - And for the end just make this pattern like this
Also, i have to say that i can feel something wrong with the timing.
Just try to move this object 04:52:552 (1) - in the time line to see that it moves a litle bit to the right.
00:18:975 (5,6,7) - Straight line triplet, this should be better if you make a curve pointing to 00:19:286 (8) - (better entrance)
00:19:286 (8) - New combo here, and move this slider a little bit up, or stack it with 00:18:353 (1) -
00:18:664 (4,9) - Overlap, move the slider to x:296 y:200 (in other words, stack it with 00:16:799 (1) - )
00:21:151 (8,1) - Those sliders can be a curved ones like this
00:22:550 (7,1) - Overlap, unintentional?
00:24:881 (2,7) - Just a suggestion but maybe you should do a blanket here
00:26:591 (2,3,6) - Overlap, unintentional?
00:32:032 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The idea is good, but the sliders have a very uncomfortable movement, to fix this maybe if you start from 00:35:296 (8) -
to 00:32:187 (2) - should be fine, or making the rotation on clockwise instead of anti clockwise.
00:35:918 (2,3,4) - The same, the entrance and the movement of the sliders are uncomfortable
00:38:560 (1,2) - Increase the spacing of the slider for something like this
00:46:954 (6) - Fix the orientation of the slider to align it with 00:46:799 (5) -
00:50:995 (3) - Now here i got a suggestion to make this pattern like this
00:51:618 (2,3,4) - And here this triplet should be curved and just change the order of these sliders 00:51:928 (1,2) - and you will get a pattern
like this (also move 00:51:928 (1) - a little bit up to avoid overlaps)
00:57:628 (1) - The orientation of this slider is weird, you should change it to a better entrance from 00:57:524 (5) -
01:22:399 (4,2) - Overlap
01:39:808 (6,2,4) - Messy overlaps
01:52:554 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Same as before, the sliders have a very uncomfortable movement.
02:04:368 (1) - Here you can use x1,20 Slider velocity
02:10:041 (6) - Increase the spacing a little bit and make it a New Combo
02:14:005 (1) - This should start on 02:13:694 -
02:18:047 (4) - Inconsistency on the shape of this slider compared to 02:17:114 (1,2) -
02:38:254 (1) - Replace this slider for a normal curved one, you didn't use any other slider with different or similar shape on the whole part, so this will feel like a random placed slider during gameplay.
02:51:855 (6) - New combo
02:51:932 (1) - Remove new combo
03:03:901 (5) - Stack it with the head of 03:03:124 (2) - to maintain the movement and get a better entrance with 03:04:057 (6) -
03:04:834 (2,6,7) - Stack them
03:07:787 (6) - New combo
03:09:497 (3) - A good suggestion is to stack it with 03:09:031 (1) - for a back and forth
03:14:004 (9,10) - Remove them, and put the slider on 03:14:005 - then add a circle here 03:14:315 -
03:19:445 (2) - This slider could have more spacing
04:10:895 (4) - Put a curved slider here to mantain the pattern 04:09:652 (1,2,5,1,2,3) -
04:19:134 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Overlap
04:37:009 (10,4) - Overlap
04:36:387 (6) - New combo
04:59:703 (1,2,3) - Fix this blanket
05:01:568 (1,1) - Overlap here
05:06:076 (7,4) - Overlap here too, increase the spacing of 05:06:697 (4) -
05:10:894 (1) - Stack this slider with 05:10:117 (8) - and just move the stream 05:11:127 (2,3,4,5) - a little bit to the left.
05:13:537 (7,5) - Overlap (yes :u)
05:19:599 (5) - New combo
05:18:511 (1) - Well, it would be perfect if you can stack this slider tail with 05:19:521 (4) - and maintain the blanket with 05:18:045 (4,1) -
05:29:238 (1,3) - Stack them properly
05:32:501 (2,1) - ^
05:39:495 (1,2,3) - Messy triplet, make it similar to 05:39:806 (4,5,6) -
05:39:806 (4) - New combo
05:53:018 (7) - Increase the spacing
05:59:858 (1,2,3,4,1) - And for the end just make this pattern like this
Also, i have to say that i can feel something wrong with the timing.
Just try to move this object 04:52:552 (1) - in the time line to see that it moves a litle bit to the right.