Continuation mod
- 00:15:244 - You follow the bg drums here but not after 00:19:907 - why?
- 00:16:177 (1,1) - Overlaps like this can be avoided quite easily.
- 00:26:125 (1) - Could use a lot more emphasis than it has, space it more?
- 00:32:187 (2,4,2) - I feel like centering these would have been cooler. Like this: https://puu.sh/xJh9z/9034d0495b.mp4
- 01:37:632 (1,2) - Such strong beats like this that you hitsounded would be better as circles imo.
- 01:52:554 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Seems really out of place since the song isn't increasing in intensity nor does it drop so much in the beginning of the pattern. It just doesn't fit the map or song.
- 02:02:503 - You can get rid of these breaks lol they're so short
- 02:07:477 (2,3,4) - Blankets and stacks off :/
Stuff we talked about in IRC can apply to most of the map. Work on consistency and making noticeable sounds more clickable.
Also the latter part of the map seems a lot more polished than the beginning lol.
SPOILER
13:47 bezbashn: Hi-hi! Have you checked the map or you are still busy with other stuff ?
13:48 Mir: wait link it again
13:48 Mir: i can actually check it now
13:48 *bezbashn is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1387582 Yooh - Dignity -alzando-]
13:48 bezbashn: с_с
13:48 bezbashn: just look if you even would take it
13:51 Mir: theres a lot of rhythm stuff that seems like i wouldn't agree with it
13:51 Mir: some easily fixable
13:51 Mir: some are a structural flaw
13:52 bezbashn: are you able to mod em ?
13:52 bezbashn: or i just need to rethink my life, get a book of mapping and do it myself for a long-long time
13:53 Mir: well its nothing like that its just
13:53 Mir: idk if you would go through and change all of it lol
13:53 Mir: like 05:06:076 - most of these should be clickable
13:53 bezbashn: but yeah
13:53 Mir: cuz 05:05:920 (6,1,2) - 1 gets no emphasis with 6 being a slider
13:53 bezbashn: that's the thing
13:53 bezbashn: I need other people vision
13:53 bezbashn: to fix stuff
13:53 Mir: 05:07:786 (6) - so on
13:54 Mir: 05:18:356 - and idk why this isn't clickable
13:54 bezbashn: oh, i think i got it
13:54 bezbashn: stronger beats, right ?
13:54 Mir: 05:36:231 (4,5) - is kinda weird cuz 05:36:076 (3) - is really weak but has the same emphasis as 4
13:54 Mir: yeah stuff like that
13:55 Mir: 05:46:024 - doesnt the 1/4 start here
13:55 Mir: 05:46:956 - not here
13:55 Mir: 05:48:200 - these should tottaallyy be clickable
13:55 Mir: 05:49:754 - would suggest a nice long slider for the synth
13:55 Mir: 05:50:065 - leads into this a bit nicer than just a break
13:56 Mir: 05:52:785 - a lot of these triples are skipped too which is a bit odd
13:56 Mir: 05:56:904 - and the 1/8 you mapped at 05:48:045 (2) - isn't mapped here
13:56 Mir: i could go on and on pointing out things cuz as i said it's a structural thing
13:57 bezbashn: yee
13:57 bezbashn: my bad mostly
13:57 Mir: it's not a bad start but i don't think it's ready yet
13:57 Mir: mainly lacking in consistency and rhythm i think
13:57 bezbashn: i think, that i can fix these and other like them later in the day
13:58 bezbashn: cos soon i'm gonna leave for study
13:58 Mir: okay
13:58 Mir: i also suggest
13:58 Mir: you should look for mods from more experienced mappers
13:59 bezbashn: yeah
13:59 bezbashn: i tried
13:59 bezbashn: they are mostly closed
13:59 Mir: yah.. you kinda have to camp them lo
13:59 bezbashn: would be nice if you can look up some more and post this irc to thread for me to check later
14:00 Mir: kk
13:48 Mir: wait link it again
13:48 Mir: i can actually check it now
13:48 *bezbashn is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1387582 Yooh - Dignity -alzando-]
13:48 bezbashn: с_с
13:48 bezbashn: just look if you even would take it
13:51 Mir: theres a lot of rhythm stuff that seems like i wouldn't agree with it
13:51 Mir: some easily fixable
13:51 Mir: some are a structural flaw
13:52 bezbashn: are you able to mod em ?
13:52 bezbashn: or i just need to rethink my life, get a book of mapping and do it myself for a long-long time
13:53 Mir: well its nothing like that its just
13:53 Mir: idk if you would go through and change all of it lol
13:53 Mir: like 05:06:076 - most of these should be clickable
13:53 bezbashn: but yeah
13:53 Mir: cuz 05:05:920 (6,1,2) - 1 gets no emphasis with 6 being a slider
13:53 bezbashn: that's the thing
13:53 bezbashn: I need other people vision
13:53 bezbashn: to fix stuff
13:53 Mir: 05:07:786 (6) - so on
13:54 Mir: 05:18:356 - and idk why this isn't clickable
13:54 bezbashn: oh, i think i got it
13:54 bezbashn: stronger beats, right ?
13:54 Mir: 05:36:231 (4,5) - is kinda weird cuz 05:36:076 (3) - is really weak but has the same emphasis as 4
13:54 Mir: yeah stuff like that
13:55 Mir: 05:46:024 - doesnt the 1/4 start here
13:55 Mir: 05:46:956 - not here
13:55 Mir: 05:48:200 - these should tottaallyy be clickable
13:55 Mir: 05:49:754 - would suggest a nice long slider for the synth
13:55 Mir: 05:50:065 - leads into this a bit nicer than just a break
13:56 Mir: 05:52:785 - a lot of these triples are skipped too which is a bit odd
13:56 Mir: 05:56:904 - and the 1/8 you mapped at 05:48:045 (2) - isn't mapped here
13:56 Mir: i could go on and on pointing out things cuz as i said it's a structural thing
13:57 bezbashn: yee
13:57 bezbashn: my bad mostly
13:57 Mir: it's not a bad start but i don't think it's ready yet
13:57 Mir: mainly lacking in consistency and rhythm i think
13:57 bezbashn: i think, that i can fix these and other like them later in the day
13:58 bezbashn: cos soon i'm gonna leave for study
13:58 Mir: okay
13:58 Mir: i also suggest
13:58 Mir: you should look for mods from more experienced mappers
13:59 bezbashn: yeah
13:59 bezbashn: i tried
13:59 bezbashn: they are mostly closed
13:59 Mir: yah.. you kinda have to camp them lo
13:59 bezbashn: would be nice if you can look up some more and post this irc to thread for me to check later
14:00 Mir: kk
- 00:15:244 - You follow the bg drums here but not after 00:19:907 - why?
- 00:16:177 (1,1) - Overlaps like this can be avoided quite easily.
- 00:26:125 (1) - Could use a lot more emphasis than it has, space it more?
- 00:32:187 (2,4,2) - I feel like centering these would have been cooler. Like this: https://puu.sh/xJh9z/9034d0495b.mp4
- 01:37:632 (1,2) - Such strong beats like this that you hitsounded would be better as circles imo.
- 01:52:554 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Seems really out of place since the song isn't increasing in intensity nor does it drop so much in the beginning of the pattern. It just doesn't fit the map or song.
- 02:02:503 - You can get rid of these breaks lol they're so short
- 02:07:477 (2,3,4) - Blankets and stacks off :/
Stuff we talked about in IRC can apply to most of the map. Work on consistency and making noticeable sounds more clickable.
Also the latter part of the map seems a lot more polished than the beginning lol.