00:16:177 (1,2) - I'd increase spacing here a bit because the sound here 00:14:001 (2,3) - is similar in tone and volume and it's spaced higher here.
00:18:042 (2,1) - Emphasis issue, because 00:18:353 (1) - definitely has a more impactful sound. You should reconsider this
^ Those two issues appear quite a lot in the first part. Please check out for them yourself!
00:22:705 (1,2,3) - Why is this forming one pattern? The sounds here are pretty different all the time, so having them forming a pattern doesn't make too much sense.
00:24:260 (9) - That hitsound seemed a bit out of place haah
00:33:275 (5,6,7,8,9) - Hmm, I like the patterns before but here you somehow drifted away from cleanliness into some pretty random things imo. Could you put some more logic behind those?
00:36:539 (10,2,4) - This is a cool idea, but I'm sure you can do it better (overlaps, etc.00:32:187 (2,4,10) - looked cleaner)
00:38:560 (1) - this part is very well done (until 00:58:146 (1) - ) just some few things:
00:50:995 (3) - NC
00:54:104 (1) - Spacing here should be bigger. Maybe work with CTRL + G and 00:54:415 (2) -
01:12:761 (1) - The hitsounds in this part are pretty overused. Better to use a less amount of finishes, but some that really emphasize stuff well.
01:21:777 (1,1) - unsnapped
01:22:710 (1) - Hmm in this part you should definitely add some drum hitsound maybe, or some custom ones for the constant boom-sound..
If I'm honest, from 01:22:710 (1) - to 01:52:399 (4) - you should simply redo it. It will end up way better than it is now and way better than if everyone just gives input about it. You should keep in mind to keep things consistent in such a consistent songpart. If you do this, I'm sure that you will have way more benefits than from me pointing up things here. (Example: 01:39:497 (5) - why suddenly high spacing. 01:27:684 (1,2,3,4) - 01:30:171 (1,2,3,4) - Could be spaced a bit higher, and more neatly).
02:08:098 (3) - blanket
02:37:010 (1,2,3,4) - Lacks emphasis imo, you should space it more!
02:41:673 (1,2,3,4) - Same, it just seems underwhelming for what the song offers.
02:45:403 (1,2,3) - Those could perfectly form a pattern.
03:05:767 (6,7) - Why do you have a stack here? You could form some beautiful pattern following the bell sound 03:05:611 (5,6,7) - .
I'll leave it at that for now, because as you've seen, mostly it's about empahsis or pattern forming. I think if you keep this in mind and question some pattern of yours, you will definitely be able to improve this map. I'll glady give you another mod, once you've worked on it. I hope that input is enough for now, if you don't understand something just ask.
:3
00:18:042 (2,1) - Emphasis issue, because 00:18:353 (1) - definitely has a more impactful sound. You should reconsider this
^ Those two issues appear quite a lot in the first part. Please check out for them yourself!
00:22:705 (1,2,3) - Why is this forming one pattern? The sounds here are pretty different all the time, so having them forming a pattern doesn't make too much sense.
00:24:260 (9) - That hitsound seemed a bit out of place haah
00:33:275 (5,6,7,8,9) - Hmm, I like the patterns before but here you somehow drifted away from cleanliness into some pretty random things imo. Could you put some more logic behind those?
00:36:539 (10,2,4) - This is a cool idea, but I'm sure you can do it better (overlaps, etc.00:32:187 (2,4,10) - looked cleaner)
00:38:560 (1) - this part is very well done (until 00:58:146 (1) - ) just some few things:
00:50:995 (3) - NC
00:54:104 (1) - Spacing here should be bigger. Maybe work with CTRL + G and 00:54:415 (2) -
01:12:761 (1) - The hitsounds in this part are pretty overused. Better to use a less amount of finishes, but some that really emphasize stuff well.
01:21:777 (1,1) - unsnapped
01:22:710 (1) - Hmm in this part you should definitely add some drum hitsound maybe, or some custom ones for the constant boom-sound..
If I'm honest, from 01:22:710 (1) - to 01:52:399 (4) - you should simply redo it. It will end up way better than it is now and way better than if everyone just gives input about it. You should keep in mind to keep things consistent in such a consistent songpart. If you do this, I'm sure that you will have way more benefits than from me pointing up things here. (Example: 01:39:497 (5) - why suddenly high spacing. 01:27:684 (1,2,3,4) - 01:30:171 (1,2,3,4) - Could be spaced a bit higher, and more neatly).
02:08:098 (3) - blanket
02:37:010 (1,2,3,4) - Lacks emphasis imo, you should space it more!
02:41:673 (1,2,3,4) - Same, it just seems underwhelming for what the song offers.
02:45:403 (1,2,3) - Those could perfectly form a pattern.
03:05:767 (6,7) - Why do you have a stack here? You could form some beautiful pattern following the bell sound 03:05:611 (5,6,7) - .
I'll leave it at that for now, because as you've seen, mostly it's about empahsis or pattern forming. I think if you keep this in mind and question some pattern of yours, you will definitely be able to improve this map. I'll glady give you another mod, once you've worked on it. I hope that input is enough for now, if you don't understand something just ask.
:3