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I hope this mod helps! this is a really fun map to play uwu, good luck with ranking this
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00:19:286 (4,5,6,1) - spacing here is a bit large compared to the spacing you've used throughout this section
00:20:840 (5,6,7) - i suggest making this look like this to flow better:
00:24:104 (5,7) - 00:25:192 (3) - your mixing use of overlaps and stacks, sticking to one or the other would show a better structure
00:34:674 (2,3) - these overlaps dont look so good, maybe stack them instead:
00:41:669 (6,7,8) - these aren't properly stacked for a triple
00:51:151 (2,3,4) - and 00:51:617 (2,3,4) - would play alot better with a sharp angle, so maybe do something like this:
00:52:550 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - same here, having the triple path the same angle as the jump here 00:52:550 (1,2) - plays awkwardly
00:54:104 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this doesnt look good, keeping the 1/3 spaced apart with no overlaps would help, maybe like this:
00:57:006 (1,2,3,4) - same here, changing the spacing and making the repeat slider an NC would help, maybe something like this:
01:07:788 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - keeping spacing consistent in this section would really improve the structure, with only slight variations for intensity
01:22:399 (1) - because this is a different sound to the first 3 sliders i think changing direction would help emphasise that better along with the straight slider like this:
01:22:710 (1) - this slight overlap here looks messy:
01:32:036 (3,4,5,1) - having these 4 notes without a direction change feels uncomfortable to play, im not entirely sure about this one but something like this maybe:
01:41:829 (4) - overlap looks bad here
03:14:161 (1) - this slider isnt in shape with the previous stream and the jump section should start on the white tick where this slider ends
03:19:990 (1,2,3) - distance snap these ore something
03:28:150 (5) - move this like this:
03:46:958 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - use slider to stream for a perfect curve here, also they arent distance snapped
03:48:746 (12,1) - if you want to do a stream jump i suggest making it a bigger jump like this 04:47:502 (12,1) - , this jump here is too small to really emphasise the music but too big to be ignored
04:19:134 (1) - small thing but this slidershape could be improved
05:11:982 (3,4,5,6,7) - this jump section feels really weird, try making the angles sharper
05:53:329 (2,3,4) - same thing as before, this would play better:
05:57:993 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - decreasing spacing while the intensity increases doesn't work that well, maybe make the triples here gradually space out 05:58:614 (2,3,4) - 05:59:081 (2,3,4) - 05:59:547 (2,3,4) -
like this:
00:20:840 (5,6,7) - i suggest making this look like this to flow better:
00:24:104 (5,7) - 00:25:192 (3) - your mixing use of overlaps and stacks, sticking to one or the other would show a better structure
00:34:674 (2,3) - these overlaps dont look so good, maybe stack them instead:
00:41:669 (6,7,8) - these aren't properly stacked for a triple
00:51:151 (2,3,4) - and 00:51:617 (2,3,4) - would play alot better with a sharp angle, so maybe do something like this:
00:52:550 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - same here, having the triple path the same angle as the jump here 00:52:550 (1,2) - plays awkwardly
00:54:104 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this doesnt look good, keeping the 1/3 spaced apart with no overlaps would help, maybe like this:
00:57:006 (1,2,3,4) - same here, changing the spacing and making the repeat slider an NC would help, maybe something like this:
01:07:788 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - keeping spacing consistent in this section would really improve the structure, with only slight variations for intensity
01:22:399 (1) - because this is a different sound to the first 3 sliders i think changing direction would help emphasise that better along with the straight slider like this:
01:22:710 (1) - this slight overlap here looks messy:
01:32:036 (3,4,5,1) - having these 4 notes without a direction change feels uncomfortable to play, im not entirely sure about this one but something like this maybe:
01:41:829 (4) - overlap looks bad here
03:14:161 (1) - this slider isnt in shape with the previous stream and the jump section should start on the white tick where this slider ends
03:19:990 (1,2,3) - distance snap these ore something
03:28:150 (5) - move this like this:
03:46:958 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - use slider to stream for a perfect curve here, also they arent distance snapped
03:48:746 (12,1) - if you want to do a stream jump i suggest making it a bigger jump like this 04:47:502 (12,1) - , this jump here is too small to really emphasise the music but too big to be ignored
04:19:134 (1) - small thing but this slidershape could be improved
05:11:982 (3,4,5,6,7) - this jump section feels really weird, try making the angles sharper
05:53:329 (2,3,4) - same thing as before, this would play better:
05:57:993 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - decreasing spacing while the intensity increases doesn't work that well, maybe make the triples here gradually space out 05:58:614 (2,3,4) - 05:59:081 (2,3,4) - 05:59:547 (2,3,4) -
like this:
I hope this mod helps! this is a really fun map to play uwu, good luck with ranking this