yo
[Collab Oni]
00:12:177 - delete, sound will more clear
00:18:349 - change kat and 00:18:691 - move 00:18:520 - sounds better
00:19:034 - can delete if mod above applied
01:09:177 - move 01:09:349 - and change kat, there too much ddk
01:30:863 - maybe change don, to give a variety
01:31:549 - ^
01:33:263 - remove finisher, sounds not really loud here
01:33:177 - add note if mod above applied
02:00:263 - move 02:00:091 - and change kat, too much ddk here
02:56:749 - change don, pitchs is different with other kat
03:43:891 - and 03:44:577 - can change don
well maybe just that from me
good luck
[Collab Oni]
00:12:177 - delete, sound will more clear
00:18:349 - change kat and 00:18:691 - move 00:18:520 - sounds better
00:19:034 - can delete if mod above applied
01:09:177 - move 01:09:349 - and change kat, there too much ddk
01:30:863 - maybe change don, to give a variety
01:31:549 - ^
01:33:263 - remove finisher, sounds not really loud here
01:33:177 - add note if mod above applied
02:00:263 - move 02:00:091 - and change kat, too much ddk here
02:56:749 - change don, pitchs is different with other kat
03:43:891 - and 03:44:577 - can change don
well maybe just that from me
good luck