Hello~
sorry for late;;
good luck for approval!
sorry for late;;
mod
[Collab Oni]
- 00:02:749 - Please fix this inherited point. (move to 00:02:748 - )
- 00:06:691 (5) - move to 00:06:863 - ? There is the storong piano sound. For me this part sounds like following piano sounds.
- 00:27:949 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - 00:33:434 (14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24) - remove these finisher? I think that it's not necessary to place many finishers as it's a calmer part.
- 01:22:291 (1) - add finisher? It would be consistent with 01:00:349 (123) - etc. Consistency with 01:25:034 (22) - etc are lost but since those are 1/4, it makes sense to not to place finishers here.
- 02:01:720 (236,237) - ctrl+g? Since 01:55:549 (196,201,204,207) - etc are following drum sounds, it would make a natural flow to follow the drum sound here.
- 02:23:234 (366) - change to d? The bass drum would be shown.
- 02:34:205 (461) - 03:33:777 (70,71) - 04:47:577 (590) -^
- 02:53:920 - 02:53:920 - add circles + 02:54:262 (621) - delete? It would be emphasized the guitar.
- 03:52:463 (187) - 04:03:691 (279) - 04:06:949 (309) - 04:07:120 (311) - ^
- 04:14:834 - add k? The snare sounds here.
good luck for approval!