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"xfrac"
[Oni]
- 00:38:234 - remove? feels not good emphasized for next finish.
- 00:41:149 - remove finish? there're not appearance as a big accent following the instrumental.
- 00:57:263 (113,114,115) - kkd?
- 00:54:863 (101,102,103,104,105,106,107,108) - →kdkdk-dkd , 00:56:577 (110,111,112,113,114,115) - ddk-kkd
- 01:01:549 (136,137) - kd? to following the synthesizer pitch.(*-1)
- 01:02:663 - recommend to remove, I think using the 5plet is early(*-2)
- 01:07:891 (180,181,182,183,184) - change to (k-ddk)?
- *-2 5plet seems early, over power imo.
* pitch seems up, kat-begining flow seems not well followed the instrumental. """ Try to use don-begining flow *-3 """ .
- *-2 5plet seems early, over power imo.
- 01:12:691 - d? kat seems too over.
- about01:15:263 (235,236,237,238,239,240,241,242,243,244,245,246) - ddk-k-kdddk-kkk
- 01:15:263 (235,236,237,238) - change to(k-ddk), to refer there 01:15:091 (234,235) - (*-1) and, to make a consistent with 01:11:663 (207,208,209,210,211,212,213,214,215,216) - 3-1-5 plet flow.
- 01:16:292 (244,245,246) - change to (d-k or k-k)? seems over plet 1/4 triple.
- 01:17:491 - d, kat seems too over.
- 01:17:749 - same.
- 01:18:177 - same.
- 02:21:777 - d, kat seems too over.
- 02:22:463 (361,362) - k-d? refer to there *-3
- 02:33:691 - move to 02:33:520 - ? it seems better for variation.
- 02:26:235 (393) - d? linked with before kdddk (and, make a conistenc. 02:18:863 - 1st kiai flow kdkkd-kdkkddk)
- 02:28:206 - remove, 02:28:463 (409,410) - change to k-d?
- * 02:28:463 - seems better to same color for drums with 02:28:120 - , 02:28:291 - ,and seems better to different color for vocal with 02:28:634 - .
*02:28:206 -feels over *-2
- * 02:28:463 - seems better to same color for drums with 02:28:120 - , 02:28:291 - ,and seems better to different color for vocal with 02:28:634 - .
- 02:35:406 - not d?
- 02:39:177 - remove , same as 2:28:206.
- 02:40:034 - k? to follow the vocal slar.
- 02:40:377 - add, drums still sounds.
- 02:40:634 - , 02:40:891 - , 02:43:291 (535,536) - , 02:43:806 - , should remove. Its too long as after kiai ._.
- 02:51:606 - , 02:51:863 - same.
- 02:55:377 - change to k? distortion guitar sounds cut up.
03:01:034 (659,660,661,662,663,664,665,666,667,668) - seems weird the decreasing SV, Should keep 1.0.- 1.0→0.9 from 03:02:406 - , 0.9→0.8 from 03:04:463 - seems better.
- About 04:30:863 - , 04:41:834 - , 04:42:520 - ,and 04:52:806 - , k plays better as personal opinion.
"Dark"
That's all for now![Oni]
- About 01:41:491 (107,108,109,110,111,112) - k-d-k-kk-k.Suddenly vocal lost... ._.
- 01:42:177 - move to 1/2 left, and change to k-d.It should make a consistency (with 01:35:149 (85,86) - , 01:37:891 (93,94) - , 01:40:634 (104,105) - ).
- 01:42:349 - , 01:42:863 - add d to follow the vocal.
- 01:52:463 - remove finish? to make a conistent with 01:46:977 - ,and 01:49:720 - .
- 02:10:634 (281,282) - change to k-d or k-k?
- * Its not same 1st vocal pitch(02:06:177 - ,02:07:549 - ,02:08:920 - ) with 3rd vocal pitch(02:06:863 - , 02:08:234 - , 02:09:606 - ). It seems better to make a variation imo.
- 03:39:777 (98,99) - k-k or k-d? same.
- 02:12:863 (292,293) - kd? to follow the snare.
- 03:41:834 (107,108,109,110,111,112,113,114,115,116) - dkddkdk-kkd? same as above.
- 03:44:749 (126,127,128,129,130,131,132,133,134,135) - change to kkd-k-k-ddkkd?
- * About 03:44:749 (126,127,128) - , snare sounds, and bass sounds variated.
* About 03:45:263 - , snare sounds,
* About 03:45:434 (131,132,133,134,135) - , it seems much better than use kat-begining flow.
- * About 03:44:749 (126,127,128) - , snare sounds, and bass sounds variated.
- 04:09:263 (323,324) - remove the green, 04:09:263 (323,324) - change SV[1.1], 04:09:949 - add green SV[1.0] ? seems weird the decreasing SV.
- 04:12:263 - , 04:14:063 - ,04:14:320 - , 04:17:749 - removing seems better to emphasize for calm.
- 04:28:120 - change to k? pitch up :3
04:59:149 (677,678) - remove, 04:58:634 (672,673,674,675) - remove the green, 04:58:977 - change SV [1.1], 04:59:149 - add SV [1.0] .- *seems very weird decreasing sv... ._.
- 05:04:463 - cymbal sounds, should add k.
Try to collect more +2~3mods. I'll be back after that.
Good luck~(¦3[___]