Mod from my queue. First time I've modded for a BN; I would appreciate it if you offered some feedback when you are done looking at it.
For my mods, green text represents suggestions, yellow are concerns, and red are immediate action points.
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For my mods, green text represents suggestions, yellow are concerns, and red are immediate action points.
COLLAB
SPOILER
When I show you note selections, each character represents a quarter beat.
OVERALL: Adding onto the storyboard who mapped what part would be most helpful as a modder, to see who was responsible for what without having to boss out as frequently.
00:48:862 (71,72,73,74,75,76) - d-kkkkd flows better compared to k-dkkkd like you have
01:15:263 (238,239,240) - Following the last burst, ddk instead of kdk like you have.
01:18:349 (262,263,264,265,266) - ddkdd instead of dkkdd
01:21:263 (286,287,288) - Too many k's on the white and red ticks in a row for my taste. Would help to make this ddk instead of kdk like you have as well.
01:41:834 (108,109,110,111,112) - The object placement here ignores the lyrics entirely, which seems to betray your normal style here. Try d-k-----k-k-d-k instead of d---k---k-k---k like you have.
02:31:377 (436,437,438,439,440) - kdkkd instead of kdkkk like you have.
04:25:548 (417,418,419,420,421,422,423) - Try dkkddkd instead of dkkdkkd like you have.
04:27:434 (434,439) - Try turning these into k's
04:47:149 (583,584,585,586,587,588,589,590,591) - Try kdkkddkdk instead of kdkkdkkdk like you have.
Overall - Not a lot I could come up with. But, you being a BN I expected as much.
OVERALL: Adding onto the storyboard who mapped what part would be most helpful as a modder, to see who was responsible for what without having to boss out as frequently.
00:48:862 (71,72,73,74,75,76) - d-kkkkd flows better compared to k-dkkkd like you have
01:15:263 (238,239,240) - Following the last burst, ddk instead of kdk like you have.
01:18:349 (262,263,264,265,266) - ddkdd instead of dkkdd
01:21:263 (286,287,288) - Too many k's on the white and red ticks in a row for my taste. Would help to make this ddk instead of kdk like you have as well.
01:41:834 (108,109,110,111,112) - The object placement here ignores the lyrics entirely, which seems to betray your normal style here. Try d-k-----k-k-d-k instead of d---k---k-k---k like you have.
02:31:377 (436,437,438,439,440) - kdkkd instead of kdkkk like you have.
04:25:548 (417,418,419,420,421,422,423) - Try dkkddkd instead of dkkdkkd like you have.
04:27:434 (434,439) - Try turning these into k's
04:47:149 (583,584,585,586,587,588,589,590,591) - Try kdkkddkdk instead of kdkkdkkdk like you have.
Overall - Not a lot I could come up with. But, you being a BN I expected as much.