hi there o/ frac requested me to mod this
[Collab Oni]
00:02:749 - the offset should be at 00:02:748 - bcs the barline is running faster than the note. if you apply this, it means you should resnap all greenlines and all notes -1ms
00:03:947 - i don't think this is good flow to play. try to move to 00:03:776 - and add a don at 00:04:119 -?
00:06:690 - ^
00:09:433 - ^
00:16:205 - i know on this you're following the faint sound, but this seems would be better to follow the strong piano. keep your consistent to following the piano, not mixing the other sound.
00:19:290 - ^
00:21:519 - ^
00:51:776 - change to kkd instead of ddk? this snares is so strong.
00:54:519 - ^
00:54:862 - from here, would be better keep to follow the melody instead of giving 1/1 here. feel odd after hitting some triplets then hit only 1/1 suddenly
01:09:948 - try longstream instead of triplets in a row?
01:15:433 - this sounds empty so why did you put a triplet here? delete the triplet or move that don to 01:15:348
02:23:148 - this is uncommon pattern, try simpler pattern to more fit to the vocal
02:34:119 - ^
03:52:290 - ^
04:03:433 - ^
02:45:948 - try change big don here? to emphasize contrast sound with (558)
02:50:405 - change to kat? would be interesting to avoid boring of monocolor
02:51:433 - finish?
02:56:919 - similar issue with 00:54:862 - change to 1/1 pattern
04:31:548 - forget to add finish?
hope my mod helps you, good luck
[Collab Oni]
00:02:749 - the offset should be at 00:02:748 - bcs the barline is running faster than the note. if you apply this, it means you should resnap all greenlines and all notes -1ms
00:03:947 - i don't think this is good flow to play. try to move to 00:03:776 - and add a don at 00:04:119 -?
00:06:690 - ^
00:09:433 - ^
00:16:205 - i know on this you're following the faint sound, but this seems would be better to follow the strong piano. keep your consistent to following the piano, not mixing the other sound.
00:19:290 - ^
00:21:519 - ^
00:51:776 - change to kkd instead of ddk? this snares is so strong.
00:54:519 - ^
00:54:862 - from here, would be better keep to follow the melody instead of giving 1/1 here. feel odd after hitting some triplets then hit only 1/1 suddenly
01:09:948 - try longstream instead of triplets in a row?
01:15:433 - this sounds empty so why did you put a triplet here? delete the triplet or move that don to 01:15:348
02:23:148 - this is uncommon pattern, try simpler pattern to more fit to the vocal
02:34:119 - ^
03:52:290 - ^
04:03:433 - ^
02:45:948 - try change big don here? to emphasize contrast sound with (558)
02:50:405 - change to kat? would be interesting to avoid boring of monocolor
02:51:433 - finish?
02:56:919 - similar issue with 00:54:862 - change to 1/1 pattern
04:31:548 - forget to add finish?
hope my mod helps you, good luck