Heyo! From queue
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Might wanna get a check on the metadata since there are several ranked maps with different metadata out there like https://osu.ppy.sh/s/45326 for example
The metadata is prob that minus the 'TV size' in the title and instead you have to add something like 'cut version' into the tags iirc with the latest metadata updates (t/531526/start=0 sums up a bit)
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General
Might wanna get a check on the metadata since there are several ranked maps with different metadata out there like https://osu.ppy.sh/s/45326 for example
The metadata is prob that minus the 'TV size' in the title and instead you have to add something like 'cut version' into the tags iirc with the latest metadata updates (t/531526/start=0 sums up a bit)
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- 00:02:594 (1) - control+h this on the spot would be nice for some better circular flow
- 00:21:234 (1) - bit hard flow here since its going really linear into (2) maybe try something like this for some easier flow
- you can delete both green lines since they have no purpose atm
- 00:11:623 (1) - midde downbeat here is pretty strong since its also the start of a new vocal sentence so it'd be best to have the clickalbe, the 00:11:623 (1,2) - Na-Ni-Mu here could actually make a good return since its one word tho but might be a bit too much to change afterwards so something like circle + sliders also works
00:30:263 (1) - ^ - 00:35:797 (2,1) - bit too hard for this diff since newbies tend to hold the return longer then necessary you really want atleast a 1/1 gap after this not a 1/2, I'd just change 2 into a 1/2 slider instead so you go full vocal and drum here
- can delelte the green lines here aswell
- Up the OD to 6 for a better spread here (normal uses 5 aswell and it jumps to 7.5 on insane)
- 00:09:001 (4,5,6) - make your stacking consistent with the rest (stack 4 and 5) like the similar sections at 00:18:030 (6,7,8) - 00:22:690 (5,6,7) - 00:27:641 (4,5,6) -
- 00:12:497 (2,3,4) - move (3) a bit down here so this becomes less linear and you get a better leadin towards (4)
- 00:21:234 (1) - move a bit more down here for better leadin to (2)
- green lines again, also might wanna adjust the NCing a bit after since it seems like you based it off these lines
- ny reason why you only decided to silence a few extended sliders? might aswell do it for the rest too in the diff
- 00:14:535 (2,3,4) - bit bad flow here with the stop and go linear flow, could use some angles here, maybe something like blanketing (4) with 00:14:244 (1) -
- 00:18:904 (1,2,3) - why not stack these on the prev white combo? you did it here too 00:11:186 (8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5) -
- 00:20:142 - green line does nothing here but maybe meant to silence it instead?
- 00:19:924 (5,6) - this is a really random point to suddenly change the sv, theres nothing in the song to why it would be here, 00:18:904 (1) - starting the sv here for example would be a much better point since this is the start of your second verse
- 00:20:943 (1,2) - start NC on (2) instead
- can delete those 2 green lines at 00:34:487 (1) - and 00:36:234 (1) - too
- good diff but the insane is denser and feels kinda harder to play tho so you could maybe add some notes here and there if it gets brought up again like at 00:27:642 (8,9,10) - for example is a pretty noticalbe drumroll without any vocals and stuff like 00:04:487 (8,9,10) - 00:10:166 (3,4,5) - aren't in the second verse either tho bc of the sv increase I assumed you wanted to emphasize the second verse more so having the second verse less dense mapped seems a bit weird to me