M4M from my queue, I'll get my reply to your mod done soon
[Bright and Brilliant]
[Bright and Brilliant]
- 00:04:382 (5,6,7,8) - there's no sounds on the 1/4 beats on this stream, so it should instead be just 1/2 jumps
- 00:07:205 (5,6,7,8) - same here
- 00:17:970 (3) - make this slider curve more so it blankets the previous note
- 00:38:264 (5) - it feels like this should probably be a slider so that you can cover both the lyrics and the background drums like you were doing
- 00:45:499 (1,2) - space these two a little more, spacing seems low compared to the rest of the section
- 00:46:735 (1) - rhythm doesn't really support a 1/4 slider here
- 00:55:382 (1,2) - spacing should be increased a bit
- 01:14:617 (3,4,5) - either increase spacing here or reduce spacing to this note 01:15:323 (1) I know you are trying to emphasize the strong sound but it feels a little excessive compared the section right after it 01:15:852 (2,3,4,5,1)
- 01:25:205 (1,2,3) - maybe place like this to make the transition from circular flow to linear flow a bit easier, the way you have it almost feels like it's transitioning to CW circular flow and then going into linear flow
- 01:29:440 (1,2) - try blanketing these two
- 01:33:676 (1,2,3) - this wider angle isn't really emphasizing anything, wide angles are fine as long as they have a reason to be there but this doesn't seem like it should be there
- 02:03:676 (2,3,4) - all of these sliders look slightly different, you should copy paste one of them instead of free handing it
- 02:19:911 (7,8,9,10) - maybe extend this stream to here 02:19:558 (5) to compliment the piano sound
- 02:23:440 (2,3,4,5) - maybe place like this for better flow, and to emphasize this 02:24:323 (1) sound better by breaking the flow
- 02:27:146 (4) - NC here
- 02:30:146 (6) - ^
- 02:30:323 (7) - there's an unused anchor in this slider
- 02:44:617 (2) - place more like this for better flow
- 02:46:029 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - you should continually increase the spacing kinda like this to emphasize the sound getting louder http://puu.sh/vdT9n.jpg
- 02:52:558 (1,1,1,1) - don't really understand why NC spam is here
- 03:02:793 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - triples here feel a tad overmapped
- 03:09:499 (6,1) - space a bit more