Hiya! From the M4M request
Fun map! However, you really need to listen to the song closely and sometimes on slower speeds to figure out the correct rhythm
Insane
00:03:146 (1) - The slider ends on a sound equally loud and important as the the start. I disallows clicking on an important beat. Maybe try a 1/2 slider and a note on the white tick?
00:03:146 (1,2,3) - The circle in the centre isn't centred
00:03:852 (3) - Again, these's an important clapping noise on the tail of the slider
00:04:382 (4) - NC?
00:05:970 (1,2,3) - Why are these sliders moving closer when the rhythm is building up in intensity?
00:07:205 (5,6,7,8,1) - These's no sounds on the blue ticks to support a stream. Slow down to 25% and listen
00:08:793 (1) - Maybe redo this slider? It looks slightly ugly as is
00:26:970 (7,1) - This overlap looks kind of ugly, I would recommend moving one of the notes
00:34:382 (1) - The sound that the tail is on is just as important as the head.
00:34:911 (3,4,5) - Why the triplet here? I don't think there's a sound on blue tick. slow down to 25% and check
00:37:029 (4) - The sound on the head is quieter than the tail. I'd recommend changing it to slider and then a note.
00:37:558 (5,6) - Change to 1/2 circles to emphasize and follow the drums
00:41:264 (9,10,1) - Again, no sound on blue tick
00:43:911 (5,6,7,8) - Same^
00:46:558 (3,5) - Have three on the tail of 5 to improve aesthetics
00:48:323 (2) - Both red ticks are equally important, change to two 1/2 sliders on the red ticks?
00:51:676 (2,3,1,2) - Change this pattern. Move the 1/1 beat notes further away, I misread when I was playing it.
00:55:029 (4) - Head and tail sounds are equally important. Maybe change to circles to emphasize the clap?
00:55:382 (1,1,2) - I'd change this and not have it overlapping
01:00:499 (1,2) - Offscreen
01:02:970 (2,3,1,2) - Same issue with this pattern as 00:51:676 (2,3,1,2)
01:36:323 (4,1) - There's a strong sounds on the blue tick between 4 and 1. Triplet?
01:41:970 (4) - Strong sound on the tail that should be clicked
01:51:676 (4,1) - Fix overlap
01:56:616 (2,3,1,2) - Hard to read again
01:59:970 (4) - These a equally strong clapping sound on both head and tail that should be equally emphasized
02:22:382 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - Where does this stream come from? There's little to no sounds that would support this
02:31:559 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Incredibly hard to read. Please change this pattern
03:03:851 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - These are unsupported by the rhythm
03:05:264 (1) - Strong sound on the white that isn't emphasized because of the slider
03:05:970 (3) - Same^
03:16:558 (1) - Same^
03:17:264 (3) - ^
Glitter
- 00:16:029 (1) - Why the funky slider shape? A curved slider would fit the smoother sound of the bass better
00:23:617 (3,5) - Increase the distance between these so they don't overlap, this will improve aesthetics
Make 00:23:440 (2,3) - and 00:23:970 (5,6) - the same lengths to improve visual quality
00:28:558 (4,1) - Triplet should go here as there is a strong sound on blue
00:28:911 (2,3,4) - No sound to support triplets
00:34:558 (2,3) - Too bit spacing for such a soft sound
00:37:205 (1) - Tail sound is stronger than head. This should be so that the stronger sounds is clicked instead
00:40:735 (6) - NC
00:40:735 (6,7,8) - 6 should be closer to 7. 7 and 8 should be more spaced
00:41:264 (9,10,1) - No sound on blue tick
00:43:911 (5,6,7,8,1) - Same^
01:28:911 (6) - NC
02:22:382 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - Again, the sound lacks the rhythm to support this
02:46:735 (6,7,1,2) - Wayyy too big of a change in spacing that isn't intuitive to play
02:48:146 - There should be a 5 note stream here
03:07:205 (1,2,3) - I think these are unrankable :/
03:12:852 (1,2,3) - These too
Fun map! However, you really need to listen to the song closely and sometimes on slower speeds to figure out the correct rhythm