Sorry for my late reply but I had a different map to map in which i had more motivation to it than in this map. It was a really helpful mod, thank you soooo much, many things got applied and make the map way better tzhan before.. ty ty (:LeeSinOrAfk wrote:
Hello, NM from my queueBox because it's kinda long[General][Unbound by Fate]
- Really personal here but to me AR and OD are a bit high for the bpm, i mean it is a stream fest, pretty dense and at times with a decently high spacing on the stream but to me AR9 would fit better, about the OD idk it's just in general something lower could feel better as the bpm is pretty low gonna need some opinions on the AR, put it down to 9 for now. the OD i decreased to 8.4
- 00:15:794 (1) - This slider creates a polarity change which here is unnecessary, right now the gap between 00:15:794 (1,2) - is 3/4 while the gap between 00:16:367 (2,3) - is 1/2 which is a bit unintuitive to read and since it's a slow part a passive rhythm would feel better, i'd delete 2 and reverse 1 instead so it fits the calm atmosphere better its basically same thing as 00:14:265 (1,2,3) - therefore emphasizing the fast vocal at 00:16:367 (2,3) - with circle + slider is better than sliderend + slider
- 00:19:043 (2) - The vocals here are on the blue tick again and i'll take it that's what you've been following the whole intro, the triple at 00:19:425 (3,4,5) - makes the rhythm a bit weird but i think something like this fits vocals better, you can also use just a single circle for 1 and 2 but sliders fit the song better at this moment change
- 00:20:380 (1,2) - Vocals on blue tick again, a 3/4 reverse slider would fit better change
- 00:23:915 (4) - This isn't snapped to anything in the song, 00:23:437 (3) - reverse this one instead same as first note, i made it circle + slider now
- 00:24:966 (1,2) - Polarity change again, for this one i feel like 2 circles 00:24:966 - 00:25:253 - would fit the song best as it emphasizes the 2 vocals beats more, making it 2 circles is more intuitive than just a 3/4 slider change
- 00:29:552 (1) - The second part of the curve isn't very neat because the white node between the red anchor and the slider end isn't exactly balanced, if you place the white node at x:380 y:292 it looks cleaner and makes the blanket with 00:30:125 (2) - more perfect (k this is really nazi) " (k this is really nazi) " yes
- 00:34:807 - You could add a note here to fit with vocals vocals isnt emphasized in first place after 00:26:495 -
- 00:37:195 (5) - NC here to make it consistent with the rest of the stream, also emphasizes the stop better ok
- 00:43:310 (3) - Since you used only circles for this part you should turn this into 2 circles too, also i'd NC to make the rhythm change more obvious ok
- 00:51:336 (5) - Not sure of what you're trying to follow here, there are sounds on the blue ticks so you should turn this into anything that's 1/4
- 00:57:641 (3) - The end isn't snapped correctly, extend it to the red tick since there's a drumbeat there fix
- 01:01:272 (6) - The end here should be snapped on the 1/3 tick not the 3/4 one fix
- 01:02:418 (4) - I believe this is fine as it is but it feels a bit weird to skip the beats at 01:02:609 - 01:02:705 - 01:02:800 - I understand that you use the extended slider to emphasize the hold but i'd suggest this to map the background sounds since they're kinda noticeable not as noticeable as the long sound, its fine how it is imo
- 01:03:947 (7,8) - Wrong rhythm here, there is vocals 01:04:234 - here and drums 01:04:425 - here so the only logical rhythm to me here would be this change
- 01:06:240 (1,2,3,4) - Not a fan of the rhythm here either, following drums with a reverse slider is a bit questionnable to me, also the vocals are asking to be followed here imo, 01:06:813 (2,4) - deleting these and making these 01:06:240 (1,3) - 3/4 would make more sense to me change
- 01:08:246 - Skipping a drum beat here fix
- 01:10:062 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Here the rhythm is a bit tricky since there's a constant 1/4 from the drums and i believe you intended to follow vocals with 01:10:444 (4,5) - but vocals are on 01:10:348 - if you want to follow drums, make it a stream, if you want to follow vocals do this instead changed, good suggestion
- 01:19:234 (7) - Shorten this to the red tick and add a note to create a triple, would emphasize the last note better ok
- 01:21:144 (5,1,2,3,4,5) - The distance here is kinda low considering the downbeat, i'd spread the stream more to make it more independent from the previous pattern more DS between downbeat and object before now
- 01:22:673 (9) - This is snapped to nothing, it's actually in the middle of two doubles, you can either do http://puu.sh/s1aXc/3e4edcc7a3.jpg or http://puu.sh/s1aYZ/143c2206da.jpg (Not a fan of this one because it's kinda boring) or http://puu.sh/s1b10/aa0ee4de71.jpg if you want something more passive took the last sugg. thank you
- 01:24:106 - Missing a sound here, triples emphasize the last note so it would sound cool here with vocals fixed
- 01:25:348 (7) - NC here to make it look more indenpendent from the previous part and consistent with 01:25:730 (1) - fix
- 01:26:399 - Missing vocals here, since there are drums at 01:26:304 - you could simply add a note here fix
- 01:27:641 (1) - I'd turn this into 2 circles to emphasize the vocals more here the focus is more on the sound than the vocal and imo a slider fits the sound better, for vocal id take 2 circles too i think
- 01:30:699 (1) - Not a fan of the rhythm here because it skips the kick on the white tick, i'd do this to fit with the drums more and a triple here feels more appropriate considering it's a build up good point
- 01:31:463 (5) - Personal opinion here, i think it looks nicer if you make it a straight line with 01:31:558 (6,7) - by moving it at x:348 y:132 i like the slight shapes a lot and you barely see it always with the straight lines
- 01:36:336 - I understand that you're following vocals here but i'd add a note here to make the kiai more dense and give more emphasis feels a lot better and smoother, thank you
- 01:42:928 (5) - NC here and remove it on 01:43:406 (1) - to make it consistent and avoid to NC on the blue tick changed
- 01:44:457 (1,3) - Turn these into circles to emphasize this hype part more good point, changed for all appropriate spots
- 01:48:565 - Same as before, i'd add a note here chnaged
- 01:59:743 (1) - Not sure about the snapping here, i don't think it's 1/12, i think making it 1/8 fits better ure right
- 02:02:800 (1) - I'd turn this one into two circles because the drums are really strong and they stand out a lot from the previous and next part and you did it for 02:08:915 (1,2,3) - which makes a lot more sense to me good catch
- 02:04:329 (1,2,3) - Instead of this rhythm, i'd suggest a 3/4 reverse slider because it's a much more quiet part makes sense
- 02:11:208 (1,2,3,4) - Doesn't make much sense to follow vocals with 1 only and going back to drums after, put a 1/2 slider at 02:11:495 - ok
- 02:15:030 (1) - I'd honestly suggest to use circles everytime there are drums to support it to give a better feedback when playing ok
- 02:37:482 - Same as first chorus, add a note, same reasonning
- 02:45:603 (1,3) - Same as before, makes more sense to use circles here because of the drums, also the second one's end is snapped on the 1/3 tick be careful
- 03:32:227 (5,6,7,8) - To make it look cleaner, i'd move this entire selection so 03:32:323 (6,3) - are stacked im worried about readability furthermore i never stacked things like that, keep it fow now
- 03:39:871 (4,5,6) - Doesn't make much sense that you didn't follow the guitar here since you did it for the entire pattern, turn this into a 1/2 slider yes 100% right
- 03:42:164 - Imo the kiai should start here instead, makes more sense because of the 1/2 snares and stuff people have 50/50 % opinion on this xd i like it currently because of DS increase in the streams, the "intense part" is already really emphasized with Hitsounds and DS, so yeah idk
- 03:45:221 (1,3) - Make these circles since this part is really hypey ok
- 04:02:036 (3,4,5) - I'd make this a 3/4 reverse slider because it's a calm part i havent got a good argument but i just like to have it fully clickable >.<
- 04:58:597 - That's personal but from here to 05:03:183 - could be kiai think so too
I loved the song, my mod questions your rhythm choice for the 3/4s a lot because to me in kinda lacked structure as in, passive rhythm for slow part and something more active for stronger parts but other than that the streams are really clean and play well and it's a really fun map