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- 00:14:265 (1) - Shouldn't the slider end should be snapped to 3/4? From what i see there you're trying to map the vocals, Which doesn't land on white ticks
- 00:15:794 (1) - Same here, also, i am not sure which instrument you're mapping with this slider
- 00:31:845 (1) - Remove NC ? They're better If they stick apart, and make consistent with other
- 00:36:431 (5) - NC
- 00:48:851 (4,5,1) - I think having those stack fits the song better, from now it looks they're playing stronger notes which the music doesn't provides , yet also can make this pattern can be easier to read if unstacked with 00:48:660 (3) -
- 00:50:571 (3) - NC, it's better if they're split, also, It's better if have consistency on NC by 1 or 2 white ticks until 00:57:068 -
- 01:14:648 (3) - NC
- 01:34:138 (1) - Remove NC
- 01:34:520 (1) - NC
- 01:35:667 (1,4) - Swap NC ,And make consistency on NC by 2 white ticks until 01:56:686 - This applies to other 2 kiai parts
- 01:56:686 (3) - NC
- 03:01:941 (1) - Add a note here?
- 03:02:896 - You're missing a drum sound here, how about making 03:02:800 (7) - a kick slider, so it can also emphasizes the vocal at 03:02:992 (1) - ?
- 03:23:151 - You're missing a strong stream here :v
- 03:41:208 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think that you can improve the stream shape by using the
- 03:53:437 (1) - Remove NC
- 03:56:686 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe lower the DS? I think it can misread as 1/2
- 03:56:686 (1,4) - Swap NC
- 04:05:667 (1) - Remove NC
- 04:23:055 (1) - I think having a sharp turn here is better then 04:23:151 (2) - , Since this note has stronger notes "convert slider to stream" feature
- 04:43:310 (9) - NC
Other then NC inconsistency problems there's nothing more to say
Good luck~